InuYasha Fan Fiction / Sailor Moon Fan Fiction ❯ Moon In the Past Version 2 ❯ Chapter One: Meet the Senshi ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

Okay, here we go.... this is Moon in the Past Version 2. the first version was kinda poorly written so I decided to rewrite it, but I'll keep the original MITP up This was origanally posted on fanfiction.net, but I didn't want to delete the real one yet, so I'm going to post it here ^_^
Inuyasha (IY): I can't belive it! You're rewriting both of your fanfictions!!!! You are so.....
Asahi Minako (AM): Psychotic?
IY: Yes!!!!!!
AM: Thank you so much!!!!
IY: You're twisted
Tori-kun(TK) (an OC who won't be appearing in any of my stories here): That's her goal.... I mean.... she secretly plots to take over the world.... you'd think she'd enjoy being called twisted...
IY: You plot to take over the world?
AM: Of course not! (nervous laugh) Now let's get on with Version 2!!! Enjoy!

for you that watch the North American version of Sailor Moon I shall translate these:

Tsukino Usagi- Serena

Mizuno Ami- Amy

Aino Minako- Mina

Hino Rei- Raye

Kino Makoto- Lita

Tomoe Hotaru- Hotaru

Tenou Haruka- Amara

Kaiou Michiru- Michelle

Meioh Setsuna- Trista

Chibiusa- Rini

Chiba Mamoru- Darien

Dark Kingdom- Negaverse

Diamohn- Heart Snatcher

Sailor Senshi- Sailor Scouts

Tuxedo Kamen- Tuxedo Mask

I don't know any of the others..... sorry

And gomen nasai, but I’m not typing attacks or transformations… You can search Sailor Moon Attack translations on Google and It’ll come up. And so here’s my story. Oh and also I know Sailor Moon isn’t set in Tokyo, but Inuyasha is, so bear with me.

Hino Rei walked down the street on her way to meet the other Sailor Senshi at the Crown Arcade. They always called for meetings in that arcade, like it was sacred or something. Which was funny... if they wanted to meet someplace secret and sacred, couldn't they meet at her shrine? Strangely enough she passed a shrine right as she was deep in thought. ‘That must be the shrine Grandpa is complaining steals his business.’ She thought to herself. It was true, The Higurashi shrine had been stealing some of her grandfather's business for years, but just lately, strange unexplainable things started happening there, which brought more people to it. Some of her grandfather's usual customeres visited that shrine now instead of hers!

Just then, something caught her eye. It was a girl about 15 years old. She wore her green sailor uniform and carried a large yellow backpack. 'Wearing her Uniform? On a Sunday?' Rei asked herself. "Bye momma!" The girl called while struggling to get her shoes on, “ I’m leaving!” Rei looked even more confused, 'leaving, in a school uniform? On a Sunday?' the whole thing was quite strange.... and Rei had an urge to investigate, of course, she couldn't just go up to the shrine and announce 'I sense an evil presence coming from that well' and expect to be let right in. Wait! She had just said she sensed something strange coming from the well house that the girl just stepped into! There must be something about that girl. Maybe she was a miko too.

“Can I help you, Miss?” an elderly man, probably the owner of the shrine, asked her.

"Oh!" Rei cried snapping out of her thoughts, "No..." she replied, then looked at her watch, her eyes growing wide, "I'm late!!!!" She cried running the rest of the way to the arcade.

When she got there, everyone, and I mean everyone was there, Ami, Minako,Mamoru, Usagi, Chibi-usa, Makoto, Hotaru, Haruka, Michiru, and Setsuna. Oh dear, this had to be bad! All the Senshi were her, Saturn included (though Hotaru had been fully awoken during their last battle with Sailor Chaos). There had to be something serious going down! The all looked serious, Usagi included! (1) Though they could just be mad that Rei was late, and she'd better have some damn good excuse as to why too, because if not, they would all kill her!

"So, Rei," Haruka said in an authoritave voice, 'Ohhhhhh Shiiit!' Rei thought to herself, "Do you have an excuse for being late?" She asked.

Rei squeaked as Haruka patted her on the shoulder, Haruka had always been strict, very strict. "Ah.... ummm... a particularly good reason?" Rei asked somwhat stupidly, and Haruka nodded in response. "Well.... I was passing by a shrine and....." she gulped, she rather valued her life... and she'd rather it not be taken by a crossdresser with a short temper (2) "This place was strange.... and....." Gawd she was scared of Haruka's smile! It looked like Haruka wanted to kill her then and there 'please let her have a mood swing wtihin the next ten seconds!' she prayed to whatever God was up there. Haruka nodded again signaling Rei to go on. "There was this girl wearing a school uniform on a Sunday....." Rei gulped again ' a moodswing would be great right now!' "She went into this well house that I sensed something from.... and I got distracted, then I realized I was late and ran all the way here!" She finished, praying Haruka wouldn't kill her right then and there.

The explaination seemed good enough for Haruka, who nodded, "That was what the meeting was about." She stated. 'Oh thank you soooooo much whoever is up there!'

"R-really?" Rei asked trying to get her heart rate to go back down.

Haruka nodded, "Setsuna-san said she sensed a disturbance in the space-time zone coming from that shine" (3)

Setsuna nodded, "There is deffinatly a break in the time stream in that well, and we should probably go close it up before someone does some serious meddling in the past with it." She nodded again for emphasis.

"But we need to come up with a plan." Ami announced, "We can't just go up to a shrine owner and say, 'We sense a disturbance in the space-time zone coming from your well house'"

"Especailly since that girl seemed to know about it" Rei added.

Mamoru nodded this time, "She could be interacting with people from the past."

"If that's true, then we don't know how much of the future she's already changed." Setsuna said looking very worried.

"We should get going!" Hotaru cut it, "We don't have time to think of a plan!!! We can't let her mess with the future or the past anymore!"

The rest agreed, this had to stop, whether the girl surrenderd the well, or they had to take it forcefully. This was their new enemy, a teenage girl.... or so they thought, this was only the beginning though, to one of the longest and most dificult journeys of their life.

Without hesitation the made their way to the Higurashi shrine, nobody expected what they saw next.
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(I'm no longer interrupting the story with my stupid conversations, though I'm still going to interrupt the story ^_^ I know, you hate me)
(1) I know, I had to take advantage of Usagi's stupidity
(2) Sorry for the slight Haruka bashing, and sorry if she seems a bit OOC, I just like her this way.... plus she needs to be this way
(3) If I'm not mistaken, the "time-space" zone is actally the 4th demension..... but maybe I'm wrong....
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When they arrived, they could all sense strange vibes coming from the well, they were so strong that normal people could feel them! This was worse than Pluto had expected, the tear had been put to use, and was used quite often. She could tell that not only had the girl been traveling back 500 years in the past, but that sometimes people from the past came back with her. "We have to stop this now." Setsuna commanded, "Before someone else comes from the past to the future." Setsuna, however had spoken too late, for at that moment the schoolgirl ran out of the well followed by a white haired boy wearing traditional clothes from the feudal era. (4) Her eyes widened with horror as a huge monster burst from the well house! "I-it cant be" She stammered.

“NO! That’s not possible!” Rei cried, though she had never seen a real demon, she could tell just from what she was sensing that that was what it was. "They all died in the feudal era!" she insisted.

Setsuna looked quite pale, "that's where it came from." She said.

The girl in the uniform stood posed with a bow and arrow as the boy slashed at the creature with what seemed to be claws. "So he's a demon too, then" Rei concluded, though his aura wasn't as strong as the monster.

"Now, Kagome!" The small demon cried as the uniformed girl let go of the arrow in her hands as it hit it's mark, between the eyes of the monster. The thing writhed in pain for a moment before falling. And Rei ran to the beast picking up something pink from inside it.

"How did you get in here?!" The girl asked in alarm. Rei said nothing but studied the pink for a moment before deciding it looked like a shard of something or other.

"She asked ya a question!" The boy exclaimed grabbing Rei's wrist, the one holding the shard, "An' I'll be takin' that!" he exclaimed.

Rei frowned and pulled out a scroll. The boy only rolled his amber orbs, the old man had tried this on him before, and it never worked. "Rin, pyou, tou, sha, kai, jin, retsu, sai, zen! AKURYOU TAISAN!!!" She cried before shoving the scroll onto the boy's forehead, "Away from me demon!" Rei demanded. The boy immediately let go trying to get the scroll off while screaming in pain. In the end, though, the girl ended up taking it off and glared at Rei.

"What do you want?" She demanded, not so nicely (5)

"We're well aware of the break in the time stream in this spot." Setsuna answered, "It's not something to take lightly, this is dangerous, bringing people from the past here, and traveling to the past, it can all ruin the flow of time." She explained.

"I have a duty to fulfil." Kagome said, "Who gave you the authority to boss me around?"

The senshi decided that then would be a good time to transform, and they all pulled out their means of transformantion:
"Moon Eternal!"
"Mercury Crystal Power!"
"Venus Crystal Power!"
"Mars Crystal Power!"
"Jupiter Crystal Power!"
"Saturn Crystal Power!"
"Uranus Crystal Power!"
"Neptune Crystal Power!"
"Pluto Crystal Power!"
"Moon Crisis!"
"MAKE UP!"
The all called out undergoing an elaborite transformation sequence for each of them. Kagome's eyes grew to the size of dinner plates when she realized who they were.

"As we were saying" Sailor Uranus began, "We sensed a tear in the time stream, and can't allow you to come and go as you please, just jumping though time portals as if you were going in and out a door! This is a matter of preserving the past, and ensuring a good future! Guided by a new era , and garded by the planet of the wind! I'm Sailor Uranus, and If you won't surrender the well, we'll take it by force!" She said striking a pose to emphasize the point. (6)

"But...." Kagome said, "I have a duty to fulfil, as I said before." She tried to convince them, "I have to help a friend, to save his future."

Uranus huffed, "we can't help you with personal matters," she said coldly, "we're only here to return things to the way they should be. So put your little friend back into the well, and we'll go on with our business as if nothing had happened."

Kagome's eyes started to fill with tears, "But.... but!" She tried to argue, but couldn't come up with the words.

"Oh, Uranus, let her at least try to talk..." Sailor Neptune scolded.

"If you could just........ see what I have to do......" she tried.

Usagi was convinced, "Okay, lets go, I've always wanted to visit the past!" she exclaimed excitedly.

“Y-you can’t just… Kagome! What the hell are you doing!” the boy exclaimed.

“Don’t worry, Inuyasha, we can trust them.” Kagome reassured him.

“Trust them! I hardly trust you!” Inuyasha shot back.

“Inuyasha!” Kagome began as Inuyasha braced himself, “OSUWARI!” Inuyasha met concrete, and the concrete learned some new words. (7)

The Sailor Senshi turned around to see the hanyou implanted in the ground. Kagome only shook her head, “When will you learn? So then," She adressed the senshi, "Shall we go?" All the senshi agreed, to see Kagome's side of the story, (luckily Haruka was in a good mood today) so they graciously followed her to the well.

Hotaru hesitantly followed the rest of her freinds, but she couldn't help but feel as if something awful would happen there.
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Yup, how's that? Is it good? Is it better than the first chapter? I sure hope so! I hope it was longer, and better written than the first one. Oh right author comments for the second half:
(4) I forgot the Japanese name for this era, so I'll go with what they call it in the English dub and manga translation
(5) I wouldn't be very nice either if someone just tried to kill the man I was in love with!
(6) I tried my hardest to remember Sailor Uranus's speech from Sailor Moon S and Sailor Stars, I hope I got it pretty well
(7) In other words he swore into the concrete, but I thought the way I worded it was funnier.

Anyway, I hope it's better than the first chapter of the first story, please review and tell me if it was better or not!