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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
at the begining of the fic i thought that yotan was going to die, so i'm glad that he didn't. but thats still so sad that they're seperate! i'm gonna cry...overall it was a very very good fic, especially since it's your first up here. i can't wait to read more from you!! so you did say it was the last chapter, but i think a sequel to the story would be nice? *hinthint* it's good as it is though, but still sad. i sorta wished we'd get to see more of yoji's past, but oh well. the overall rating is a 9 coz' i'm sad now, but thats okay =^~= keep writing! =^^=
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Title: I'm not worried
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crying, but not worried. I would never bet against Aya accomplishing anything he set his mind to. Beautiful, Bly, well-written, perfectly executed, and heartbreaking yet hopeful.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 21:15 CST
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Ah, Bly, dear, this was lovely. Heartbreaking and utterly beautiful.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I just came over to see where we were, 'cause I didn't think we had this many chapters, and I just got sucked in! So I figured I'd tell you that. You rock, lady.
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 02:02 CST
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awwwwww! i love this story! *give u cookie* keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 08, 2005 23:24 CST
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hooray for aya not being a completely insensitive prick! though i find aya's thing with power to be a bit disturbing. seems kinda like a brad thing. at least he admitted to himself that if yohji belongs to him, he belongs to yohji. it's certainly not all champagne and roses, this relationship. lovely chapter. and thanks for your great reviews on mm.org; i really like reviews. :) --love, redqueen
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Title: Whaahooo!!!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG, if Aya had listened to Yohji and left I think I'd've died too...Bly, you're awesome, you are, and this is wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 21:36 CST
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Yay! I loved this. Love you. Thank you! It was a GREAT birthday present.
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Reviewed By: gothriav [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 02:52 CST
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*starts bawling* thats so sad!! o_o you must update!! you're not gonna leave yoji like that for too long are you??? *hugs him* it's really good so far, and i can't wait to see more! :)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:27 CST
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This was wonderful and so sad. Please tell me you're not going to leave poor Yohji tied up and miserable.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 22:00 CST
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oohh my heart's breaking for yotan! go fix it now...and thanks for the warm reaction to me harassing you ;)
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Reviewed By: KD not signed in On: December 02, 2005 21:55 CST
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GAAAHHHHHH!!!!! How could you stop it there?! I hope you like the sound of anguished screams, 'cause you're going to get a lot of them!
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Title: first!
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 02, 2005 21:43 CST
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okay i havent read it yet but i wanted to beat kd
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Title: ONE OF THE BEST!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!! OH I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! *SCREAMING* WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 25, 2005 22:03 CST
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what is it with KD and beating me? hmph...anyway before i ramble....update soon...on to the ramble...aya's so cute and caring and so not showing it to poor yotan who only thinks that he's being pitied...when's the redhead gonna give him what he really needs???? (sex) ;)
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