| "The Shinobi of Legends" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: My Opinion
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good, very original, though I would prefer the original Ranma 1/2 pairing with Ranma and Akane. Considering Akane's temper and brute strength, she'd be one of the few ideal candidates for Tsunade's training. Just thought I'd give my opinion.
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Title: A pleasure
Reviewed By: Mordre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
For me, it is a pleasure to see Ranma growing way stronger than in the canon (and at an earlier age) and also to see any kind of Ranma stories without Akane. 'twould be nice to see someone else out of the NWC pop out, either as a reborn ninja, or just plain lost (Ryouga). Oh well. I have noticed no obvious grammatical mistakes, or thought about plotholes, so I guess that part's a-ok. Keep 'em coming!
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Title: .......
Reviewed By: Blahhhhhhhhhhhhh On: March 01, 2006 16:01 CST
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lets see... 1. Ranma crossover w/ Naruto 2. Ranma's an Uzumaki 3. Ranma is probably more powerful than Itachi who is Kage level. 4. Naruto is probably going to be all powerful and get trained by Ranma and become a Genin at Kage level. Ranma will also 'probably' teach Naruto to manipulate Kyuubi and make him all-powerful and godlike Yep definetely a Mary Sue fic, if you'll excuse me now, I'll go to another fic that's actually worth my time.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 02:13 CST
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man ranma is going to have to remember the breaking point training and the chestnut fist during his training. without those he won't have as much of a chance as he should, if he was allowed to kill. well good chapter, hope for more soon.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 01:17 CST
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really good chapter man, well now naruto is in academy but he's still got big problems; well at least he'll build up a good deal of endurance from constantly getting hit by his own techniques.
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Reviewed By: ADShadowwalker On: February 14, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's coming along great. I look forward to the next chapter. Just one thing I'd like to point out when you were listing the ages at the end you aged Anko 4yrs. insted of 2.
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Reviewed By: smith119 On: February 06, 2006 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think you got something great in the works here. you should consider posting it at fanfiction.net as well.have ranma take naruto on a trainin trip or somethin.ranma and co. need their curses. i dunno how you would do it but if you do then you should give naruto one as well. also, im curious to know if ranma will be able to remember or recreate the techniques he used in his old life.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 21:41 CST
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great chapter, good thing you didn't kill off ranma and naruto's mom, i can just imagine what would have happened when ranma arrived at the meeting without his mother stopping him from beating everyone up. well hope for another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 23:19 CST
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a very good story, i really am starting to enjoy this, but what will naruto's life be like now that he has a big brother who can take care of him. how will that affect his growth, because with a strong brother he could get much better training. well hope for more.
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Reviewed By: FullMetal Fitz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 05:38 CST
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hehehe, Ranma/Naruto crossover... this should be interesting. I'm looking forward to this one.
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done, I enjoy the unique try at this mix.
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Reviewed By: Guyver111 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm, i like the story but i don't like the author, for holding back already finished chapters :´(
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