| "Flipped: A Different Inuyasha Story - Part One" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Title: Your still the best
Reviewed By: TowaNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 14:38 CST
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I love your idea and your fanfic. You may use someone elses characters but then you make it your own. If you could i'd say make an anime out of it.
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hate that my phone is screwing up...hate that I can't just write reviews off my phone thanks to that spam filter...lol.. yay he finally figured it out! Poor Inuyasha though. Let's see how he deals with it. Can't wait for the next chapter though I have to be patient so no pressure k? Loving it ^.^
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! Changed the ratings cause something got screwed up with this chapter. I didn't notice it on my cell cause the screen is small so there isn't much worry about spacing and stuff but when I checked out 19 again here the whole thing was one big paragraph...Not to sound mean but might wanna go back and edit that ^.^;;;;
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Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And she turns human now. Talk about identity crisis lol. JK. She didn't change much from hanyou to human though. No ears and eye color change but it wasn't a huge shock or anything...It would have been cool if she turned a golden blonde xD JK
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Am I missing a review...?) I like Inuyasha's list of "You're not..." sort of thing. But it just makes her feel guilty eep.
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Kikyou comes back to try and kill Kagome...Sesshoumaru from the series went after Naraku for tricking him (dang pride LOL) so will Kikyou do the same?
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. That dagger attempt was cruel. Inuyasha's jealous! Woo!
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"If he wanted the jewel, why did he not just not go after Sesshoumaru and take the jewel then?" You just asked the exact same question I had about Naraku in the original series...why didn't he just take the jewel? When he was Inuyasha and tricked Kikyou and had the jewel in his hand...why didn't he just leave with it? Why was it back in the temple for Inuyasha to steal. And why does he hate Inuyasha so much? Well that one is maybe cause of Onigumo's influence but the jewel totally confused me. Not only is Naraku a coward who chooses to hide from the group knowing he could easily be killed but he's also stupid. Lol.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so weird not having a perverted Miroku....lol
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also sorta confused on Naraku. It's awesome that you kept him the same but I still sorta feel that he'll change. Maybe Naraku is actually a girl? I have my suspicions.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sad....I hate it when characters are killed. Is that Kanna the one with the mirror Kanna? So I guess Kohaku is Kanna? But why isn't Kanna, Kohaku? Don't let her die!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Sango as the priest enters. That curse thing was clever. Sorta a good way to tell who had someone they were in love with already like how she noticed Inuyasha's crush/love on Kagome. But later when Miroku appears....
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And continuing along the lines of my last review. Was a very fun chapter to read about Sesshoumaru coming back to life. Much better than how Rumiko-san wrote Kikyou coming back to life.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy. Sesshoumaru comes back. I really like how you wrote out everything on this happening. I dunno it felt sorta cool and not annoying like having Kikyou come back.
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sniff* lol Having Kirara and Shippou switch was something that was a little hard to accept. I know since you were telling it in your own way it would need to happen but I still missed Shippou over Kirara lol. But it's still cute how Kagome and Kirara fight (and her crush on him...Shippou felt more like Kagome was his new mom I think than crushing after her).
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