| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice. I didn't know anyone could tell some scary story. But, Naruto's was weak. Sorry dude. Nice going keep more comming. And my story is going to be on hold a little longer. Sorry
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story. Your stories still rock!
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet the guys are embarriesed of doing that....but, I bet they don't care..hope you got more later.
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, love it, love it! Make mroe please
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. I didn't know they could sing. Nice one.
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only got one word to say to this one..... AWSOME!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super story!!! I didn't know they would do that. Keep this up. It's getting better than before.
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, it's me again! I read this one and wow, it's still super cool! Hope you continue your stories.
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, remember me? Sorry about that. Anyway, I read this one and it's still funny. Nice work on it.
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Title: hola
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
HII I LIKE THIS CHAPTER 2 IT WAS FUNNY INO IS ALWAYS PMSING ITS FUNNY I CANT WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THE NEW STORY YOU WERE TALKIN ABOUT WELL I HAVE TO GO SKOOL TOMARROW BYE :D
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was pretty good and all, but something was missing. It's nothing personal it's just that the story's starting to get a little predictable *cue uncomfortable shocking silence*. There where no plot twists that made laugh and say OMG in my seat like the other chapters did. Bottom line is you really need to think up some new material,I'm just being honest you. I do hope you understand, a wise television show once told me that if people don't tell us there's something wrong then we can never improve. And about the pairings for your new fic, I vote on Shikamaru and Temari.
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 22, 2008 15:06 CDT
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good chapter and you spelled nodded wrong the entire story how come no one noticed oh well good stories except inos *looks at ino* *ino looks back* *kicks ino in a pool* take that bitch anyway cant wait for the next story *shoots lee* stupid idiot
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Title: NO!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great as usua...hello sango...nice weather we're having. Sango: Die! Destenyne:Wait! Spare me and I will give you a cookie. Sango:Okay *poof* D: Shippo?! You tricked me! Return the... Sango: A little bird told me you...get back here! Hiraikotsu! D:No! Captain Ichimaru! HELP! Gin:Actually I really am a bad guy. D:Oh you say that but you don't mean ...wah! *clonk* Who...uses giant boomerangs anyway...*dies* *rub rub* Sango:What the hell?! Chizuru: Hi there *runs*
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really a good chapter! I am so sad that the story is almost over, but all good things come to an end sometime, right? Anyways, update soon and I can't wait for your next story!! :)
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter your really good at this stuff. can't wait for your next story sounds like its going to be really good....and by the way i think it should be Temari and shika but thats just me anyway keep up the great work. YOUR THE BEST!!!!!!
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