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| "Zanpaku-to?" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Hoody-Hoo!
Reviewed By: IceniQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2012 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! A new chapter! I was afraid there wouldn't be any more, and I'm *dying* to see Mayuri get his clock cleaned, and Kenny finally bond with his zanpaktu. Please write more soon! (big, sad, pleading puppy eyes) | Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 29, 2011 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh this is FUN!!!! I think that this one is probably SoiFon's as she would be the one who would be interested in what a person's possessions could tell us about the person. I love that you've made these challenges something that the reader can enjoy and try to work through themselves. I LOVE IT! Here is what I thought (and I actualy do have reasons for most of them) and I'm rather eager to see what you've decided on (and why) and how Kenpachi does. SouTaichou - coin, Soi Fong - swords, Kira - pebble, Retsu - cup, Momo - wand, Byakuya Kuchiki - scroll, Sajin Komamura - bonsai, Shunsui - fan, Shuhei Hisagi - swan, Toshiro Hitsugaya - lips pillow, and Jushiro Ukitake - book (given to him by Shunsui) | Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 29, 2011 17:47 EDT
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I was reading the "operation" challenge and I wanted to ask so badly which which section thought it up. Then I saw that there was a little author's note that said you weren't telling! ARGGGGHHHH. But it also means that I've been sitting here trying to think about which squad it could be and which one it wouldn't and generally obsessing about it.... Nice Job! | Reviewed By: Guest Reader On: July 17, 2011 23:21 EDT
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I'm really enjoying your story, but chapter 43, Rules are Meant..., is missing. It's just a repeated chapter 42, Floral Attributes. I hope that can be fixed soon, I'd really like to continue reading ^.^ | Reviewed By: Boadicea On: June 29, 2011 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYY!! A new chapter!! (pant, pant, slobber, drool) Great story - I really look forward to each new chapter. I'm terrible at mysteries (if *I* can figure it out, it's badly written), and I have no clue what's going to happen next! :D Keep writing! And soon (real life allowing)! | Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 03, 2011 09:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Chapter 42 Did you come up with each of the flowers, or are they from the manga? If you did, you did a really fun and interesting job, I'm looking forward to reading about the challenges and seeing how Kenpachi and Suri will react to them. I also wonder how Clown Boy will try to twist the challenges to his own purposes. Thanks for writing an interesting and intriguing story for us! | Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 02, 2011 10:00 EST
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Chapter 40- I made the mistake of reading this chapter at work and people definitely looked at me funny when I started giggling with Yachiru over Captain Frosty's bankai. Death by paper cuts doesn't seem like a very noble way to die, does it? And try explaining it to non-anime loving MD's..... Thanks for writing for us. I've really been really enjoying this piece more than I originally thought I would. | Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: IceniQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2010 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter! (dancing about happily) I LUV how you're handling the relationship between Yachiru and Zaraki. I can't wait to see what Yachiru has worked out about Atonomatsuri! Keep writing!! (waiting with bated breath)
| Title: IceniQueen
Reviewed By: IceniQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! A new chapter! I am really enjoying this story, and especially enjoy how you are handling the relationship between Zaraki and Atonomatsuri. Trust me, there's at least one person reading this story - ME! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
| Reviewed By: cirraxlankart On: April 30, 2010 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far its really really good...however, I'm afraid you just killed it. I read half way through chapter 24 and now I've stopped and wont reasd furthur...zaraki was once a hollow? sorry, I loved his zanpakuto, I wanted to see where this was going and you've disapointed me. good writing, and good to chapter 23. sorry, but making zarakji an ex hollow is too stupid.
| Title: Story's Awesomeness
Reviewed By: 3HierCiel On: April 10, 2010 06:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful, engaging story. I really enjoy it so far... I want to know what's going to happen with the two trials and especially the interactions between the Gotei 13. (My favorite is Toshiro!) But I've always like Madarame, Yachiru, and the 11th Division. I originally clicked on this story because I thought it was a comedy, crack-fic regarding Zaraki but I was surprised by the level of philosophy and psychology involved, especially during Zaraki's first trip to his mind. I learned lots of nice adages. May I suggest this adage? It's by George Washington, one of my favorites, and it can be found on the American passport. "Let us raise a standard to which the wise and honest can repair; the event is in the hand of God." Other versions say "the rest is in the hands of God." instead of event. Then, after I got sick of all the soliloquies Atonomasturi had, the story took a light-hearted turn. Yay! I really enjoyed the dolls, training, bets, Soi Fon, etc. And finally the action commences! Please update soon! I have to say, you're very good with surprises. Zaraki as a former Hollow, Piecrust as the former captain's son, the world being Zaraki's mind, and so on and so forth. I never see it coming! (I thought Piecrust was Yamamoto's incompetent relative.) I like your writing style too, with just enough description to go by on and very entertaining dialogue. Well, I hope to see another chapter soon. If you keep updating, more people will see your story. By reasons unknown to myself, I stumbled on a list of the most recently updated stories and yours caught my interest. I also support your no-romance approach. It tires things out and one can only take so much fluff. Your story is very captivating, which explains why I' typing this review at six in the morning (pulled an all-nighter). Plus there are plenty of romances out there--it's like the most common genre. PS. In the anime, they really piqued my interest in the Shinigami Women's Association. Now, however, I'm mostly interested in the Eleventh Division (and ten coughcough).Interesting how much is going on in the Bleach world besides Ichigo's life. Sorry for any typos; I'm exhausted. Good night!~
| Reviewed By: IceniQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! A new chapter! I love this story, and can't wait to see what you've got planned for Kurosutchi (who creeps me out, big time!). Hopefully, it's something awful, which he deserves just for what he's done to Nemu (creepiest line: 'Do you want to be disassembled... again?' Eeeeeeesh...). Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: bairdie On: April 05, 2010 07:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havent reviewed in ages; this is another decent chapter, im interested in how these new threads will turn out regarding the hearing and the renewed assasination attempts.
| Reviewed By: Boadicea On: March 22, 2010 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to continue this story! I check every day to see if you have updated it, and I immediately read it if you have. I love the way you are handling the characters, and how believable you're making the changes Zaraki (my favorite character) is undergoing. His zanpak-tu is perfect for him! Trust me, there is at least ONE person who is avidly following this story - ME! So please continue - I hate it when authors just drop a story because they think no one is reading it.
| Title: excellent...
Reviewed By: bairdie On: October 31, 2009 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havent reviewed in a while, had a lot of catch up to do lol. this chapter is very interesting for me; your adding a lot of depth to the characters that we only barely see glimpses of in the anime and manga, and what your doing with yamamoto has piqued my interest, i cant wait for more.
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