| "Just a Joke, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: December 27, 2008 14:37 EST
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"I mean Shika doesn't care whats in your pants." ROFL that was funny this story is more funnier then your last story i cant wait until the next chapter is up!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I diddn't discover this sooner. I just finished the first chapter, and I like it. I must say you chose the right teacher for each subject. You'll be seeing more of ny reviews from now and on.
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Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 20:54 EST
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omg you finally updated *shocked face* i've been waiting forever so that you could update this fic.So far you are tied with volition cuz dang i like the that you are able to keep my attention on the fic instead of just the quotes. About my fic if its really messy sry but ya its the first one im writing without the help of my cousin which is really cool and but hey i need people to help out you know. So yah im planning on rewriting all the chapters to make it a we bit neater. The name of it is New Twins In Konoha, and it is definitely sasu/saku all the way, hence my name. As for the football thing i think you should still go for it, i mean you are the author of the story you can always just have them practice on diferent days so it won't interfere with her and volley ball. I mean just imagine the uchiha's face when he gets showed up by a girl that has got to hurt someones pride and ego, especially if its the girl that annoys you the most. *kinda laughs*. That would so be an audience grabber. Its almst as funny as naruto blackmailing sasuke an 'UCHIHA'. And dang i can't stop laughing over the temari thing i was just cracking up like sakura *inserts laughin hesterically* and if you make them swimmers during the spring that would also rock. Almost forgot when you read my fanfic don' forget to review. PLZ and THX and definitley THX for writing this fic its the bomb
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Title: Bwahahahaha!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do not let your youthful minds be tainted...heehee...DEAR SWEET AUNT PETUNIA...HAHAHA!!! PANTS...PANTS!!! *Falls over dead* Oh and sorry I didn't review sooner.
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Title: HII
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 16:42 EST
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THAT was funny! omg wen narits pants fell down lol it should of had like little frogs on them and he is dense W00t go sakura run girl :D nice chapt cant wait 4 the next 1
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Title: HELP!!!!
Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: December 08, 2008 18:57 EST
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Omochao: your dead author!! *pulls out chainsaw* im scared now anyways brilliant chapter i actually rofl thats how good it was Omochao: *sclices me with chainsaw* by the way you over used youthful just a bit too much *shoots gai AND lee with a flak 88* there they go see ya next chapter!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey read my fic mixture me and my cuz made it maybe you could review it and i bet you that text had to do with sakura i really hope that it will be a sasu/saku fica as well as nar/hin looking forward to your update and thx for includeing me in your fic hey maybe sakura should join the football team in disguise like were a helment at all time and show up sasuke and the hyuuga i mean she can end up taking it off when they win the playoffs now that would be awsome
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Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should have naruto blackmail him with the text message and tell him if he hurt him or did something to him he'll forward it to sakura what was the text message anyway
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Title: Holy pixi stix
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 20:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best line ever!!! Orochimaru's a pedophile HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! can't *gasp* breath *faint*
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: November 16, 2008 16:36 EST
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brilliant material as always but you could have written a bit more on that chapter because there was a HUGE gap in the page and- *gun shot* *i die* omochao: you dead now bitch hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: SORRY!!!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 16:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't get to this sooner I've been really busy. Great new fic. Can't wait for the next chap. HINATA AND NARUTO FOREVER!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 19:12 EST
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that was koo cant wait for more sai IS STUPID :p
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Reviewed By: Krystal17 On: November 04, 2008 17:19 EST
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it was pretty good n its a story i would enjoy reading so i hope u write the next chap very soon. get on it girl!! dont be lazy. n next time call me if u have trouble with the spelling.
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: November 02, 2008 11:12 EST
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this intro was good but needed some spaces but in retro spect it was good cant wait till next chapter
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapter was good a nice short start for the story and i saw you made Ino a crazy bitch again and Lee a freak again:) i think u got the peoples personalitys spot on the story looks like it is going to be as great as your last looking forward to the next chapter
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