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"Vegeta's Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
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 Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2008 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pure genius, A+++, refreshing!! So refreshing, what a nice little lemon. Absolutely one of my favorites. Are you still around? I can't believe I am the only one to rate this after almost four years! Caprice
 Reviewed By: Winged_Isis [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome aaaaaaaaaaawesome!!! I absolutely LOVED it! It is completely unusual me to do this (so feel honored!), but now I will toss my pride away for once (uhh, Vegeta has corrupted me...*lol*) and fall to my knees and plead to you desperately: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO A SEQUAL!!!! If you don't do it for us readers, then at least do it for Vegeta! That man definitely needs to get laid...*grins* Excellent fic anyway! Please do more! ^o^
 Title: o_O
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2003 04:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHAT ON EARTH?! One of my favourite fics from u and I didn't review? I COULD HAVE SWORN I DID!! X( Whatever.. GREAT FIC!! I love this ^^ Namek V/B fics are always soo interesting....especially this one ^^ *wink, nudge nudge* WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! YOU JUST DISSAPEARRED ONE DAY... We used to e-mail and talk and stuff... I even kept your e-mails o_O CONTINUE WRITING~!! TIHS WORLD NEEDS YOUR HENTAI STORIES!! :P
 Title: Ominous Prophecy
Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2003 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there! Gr8 fic... Being the weirdo that I am I was even brought to tears at few places :'-( Really cool, keep writing!
 Reviewed By: DevilDee101  On: May 06, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW! Well done! Awesome job! I loved every last bit of it! Please do consider making a sequel.

If I may perhaps make a suggestion for a sequel to this lovely story, why not do a V/B where everyone besides Goku and Frieza are wished to Earth. If I recall correctly, there *was* a forest next to where they were all just hangin' around. You take it from there! ^.~
 Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2003 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
you have to do a sequal...PLEASSSSE
 Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2003 06:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Eeee! That was gorgeous! Wonderfully IC too - I hate those fics where Vegeta goes all mushy after one fuck. Bulma's psychoanalysis was right on tack too. Lovely, lovely, lovely!
 Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2003 23:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*shuddering and shivering* Wow, that was an awesome lemon. Great descriptions and details. My cheeks were like 100 degrees when reading this. God you really know your stuff when it comes to lust and passion. great job! ^^ Espec
 Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2003 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write a part 2 for this story! I want to know if he'll come back for Bulma!
 Reviewed By: Princess Selene [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2002 01:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my God. That was a sweet story
 Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta does have lovely hair but Krillin as Vegeta love slave nooooooo. I love that Vegeta has standards when he told Bulma to "Keep those filthy away from me."
 Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good grief girl!! You nearly frightened the life out of me with the hint of V/K yaoi!!! Sooooo funny!!!! And the lemon!!! I'm still tingling from it!! Unbelievably erotic ... I want to seduce Veggie tooo!!! Excellent, excellent fic. Thank you : )
 Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 09:00 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL lemon! One of the best I've read lately! Your style of writing was wonderful, very descriptive and poetic. I enjoyed this fic very much! :o)
 Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 12, 2002 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
sequal sequal!!!!
 Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 11, 2002 21:25 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay ... let me clarify a few things because I realize that my last review was, well, nuts as Hell and that there's 2 of the same review in one. (WTF!?!?! I've LOST it!!!) Ooops. heh

1) Rape is WRONG and I was no implying that I thought it was cool that he could've done that-- EWW!!!
2) With Vegeta/Bulma it's NEVER supposed to be rape! SO there!! (Except in this one fic I read which is really dark called "Veil" but it's really good because of what happens later and I'm going to TRY and stop babbling again)
3) How many of us Vegeta--addicts would NOT like to seduce him!?!? *lol*
4)Those things about Krillin were the funniest EVER!! They were better than YAMCHA's reaction in "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" ... but BOTH are hilarious!!
5) Honestly, I have such a bad memory that I can't remember much of the Namek/Frieza sagas. Just one line, "Who's that cute girl??" *LMAO* So, I think that you did a good job tying the story in with the series. Hats off!
6) YES, I'm a hentai, so SUE me but I know a great lemon/story when I read one!?!?!
7) I don't USually reveiw like the last one! (I never have before)
8) YES, I'm crazy, whoopdeedoo!!
9) NEXT time (hinthintHINT!!) Bulma gives him a lesson on how not JUST men get to be on top!! *chuckles evilly*

and 10) ................I STILL need that damn shower because I obviously STILL haven't calmed down in the least. o.O
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