| "Shadow In Her Midst" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *cant sign in* On: December 03, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.....made me cry! Sooo sad. I feel for you Kagome...man...I think Yash WAS too mean! Ooh....yay! Sesshy is coming in soon, demo, im glad that he wont have a big part cuz he seems like hes mean in this ficcie, but thats ku, cuz heck, he always is ne? Heh...but, yes, i am trying hard to learn japanese, but only know a very few basic things...Thats col how you learned a lil jap. this is how is tarted off too! And i like when they have lil jap dictionaries on the end and i also hate when they have lil ans in the middle! it does riun the moment ne? hmm..well, this is good. demo i think Kagome is better than Kikyo, especially since she can hold it all in and stuff. And i like how you showed the birthday party and everything! ITs sooo wonderful! *sniff* this is a really lovely fic my dear. Watashi (I, mostly females use it) love it! i hope ya update soon, but please take your time. -Lani
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 03, 2003 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
how sad...i really want Inuyasha 2 kno about her being sad!!! she really needs 2 let all that sorrow off her chest! ur a really good writer! go on!
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Reviewed By: Kym On: November 29, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Its really good! One of my all time favorites and believe me, have read a lot of fanfics and this one must be in the top 3!! Keep writing and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:41 CST
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I'm very happy to say that I still like this fic.It's the best ever,better than my new one...erm...Happily Gone.I dunno about that one,cause it's kinda freaky deaky even for me.Lol,but I still think yours is better than mine,since i don't get much comments on any of mine anyways....anyways,Keep updating! :)
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 02:36 CST
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Finally......not a really really mushy happy fic for once.I lust love this fic so much :).Continue to write and ipdate please ^______^
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 22:47 CST
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ooh this is a good story very sad but very unique I love it alot and cant wait till you update love this fic..:-) huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!! KAWAII!!! aww....hun this is SOOOO sweet! and sad! T-T poor Kagome, but i for some STRANGE reason, LOVE angst! lol-i can't wait for Sesshy-sama to be in here! Hn...do ya take Japanese? I am studying it by myself! hehe-oh! And domo arigato gozaimasu for telling me what Mou meant! GOD*no offens*! I have been wondering for AGES about that! and was the Peacemaker girl the other series person? i dont know what series it is forom though...well, this is really good hun! i LOVE that you put Naraku and Kagura together with Sango, Hojo, and Kagome as childhood fwens! good job hun! this is a wonderful story so far, and i REALLY hope you update soooon!-Lani
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I still think that you could make the chapters a bit more lengthy but really it's fine I'm just a very picky person :P . It's sorta cute how you put Naraku and Kagura as Kagomes' childhood friends.(even though I can't picture that in the actual series. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kym On: November 22, 2003 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a really good story. I havent seen (or read) one like it!! In my opinion, very original!! PLz keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (to lazy to login) On: November 19, 2003 14:43 CST
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Poor Kagome ç_ç That's so sad.... PLease write Inu/Kag fluff! Update a.s.a.p., ok? ^_~
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooouuu good that's really good but UPDATE!!!!!!! here's a little thing i have to say: update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update! yup that about covers it! =) is this gonna be a inu/kag fic? please make it an inu/kag fic!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:22 CST
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oooooouuu good that's really good but UPDATE!!!!!!! here's a little thing i have to say: update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update! yup that about covers it! =)
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a sad story!!! YAY!!!!!!oh yeah, care to include Sess in there somewhere? lol. Im not a sess/kag fan for nothing! But this is a really good start, tell me if u need any ideas!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry typo. Don't not Don'y. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, The story is good so far. Don'y rush yourself into updating to quick because if you don't already have the story written down you lose alot of good ideas. I'm not saying do not update I'm just saying take your time. K? I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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