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| "Children of Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Title???
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! I never got to reviewing this chapter! Sorry! *Glompies* I love that evil cat-woman's name. It's soo unique! ^^ Anyway *cough* I like how you made Cassie so emotional. I makes her that more real and less mary-sue like. ^^ The fear paragraph was really good. It captured the emotion perfectly. Great action seens too! ^^ You're good at them. Descriptive, detailed ( is that the same thing? o.O), and exciting...Though it's still suspenseful. *whines* I'm glad you're not going to just sit the other Yu-Gi-Oh characters out while Cassie is battling the woman. Errrhhh. What else..Ooohh yyeeaaahhh... I LOVE YOUR FIC! *glompies it* *Cough* ^^;;; Anywayz, I still want to know what happens in the end so update whenever you can. ^^ Luvers you! *Glomps* And if you ever publish a book, sooo tell me so I can buy it. ^^
| Reviewed By: t recorder On: August 11, 2006 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
bakura/cassie thing going they make a lovely couple she could get a few pointers on fighting so plz reviw Iloved it t recorder
| Title: Woot woot!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the seventeenth chappie again. ^^ Yay for the revised version! I thought you did an excellant job on the scene with Bakura and Cassie. ( Though I thought you did a good job in the first place . . . ) But you made it more real. It was more realistic that Bakura didn't say what happened to him in the past, sooo yeah. But was it there before, or did you just add it?? A little Cassie/Bakura thing going. ;) I hope you keep it up. Anyway, I'm looking forward to chappie 19! Update as soon as you can! ^____^
| Title: URGH! O_O
Reviewed By: Tabby ( Wasn't able to log in ) On: April 08, 2005 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE SUSPENCE!!!! OMG! *Breaths in deeply* Get a hold of yourself . . . . BUT OMG! Can I say that anymore?? Okay, this chapter was - was so suspenceful! Even though the battle just started, it's making my heart race. You explained the mode, the darkness perfectly. Everything is just superb, like always. *Sighs dreamily* But - it's still alright! Once again, I don't mind that you didn't finish it. I'm actually kinda happy that I can wait for the next chappie. ^^ Sooo, update the next chapter when ever you can, alright? No stress, okay? Well, I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^ And take your time if you want. ^.~ Errrhhhh, 'till the next chappie!
| Reviewed By: FairyMage (who's obviously not logged in...) On: April 03, 2005 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
-hugs Cassie- Don't be afraid! Very nice chapter... ^^ Please don't shoot yourself in the head--I'd lose a reviewer, and a good story to read... all in all, it would suck. -Hearts- for Bakura. He's so cool! -squee!- I never thought I would like him so much... Anyway, I'm rambling, I'm going to shut up now and let you continue on your merry way knowing that I am reading... ^^ Pretty odd--I just hit the chapter in my story where my OC needs to figure out what the hell her powers can do. ^^
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 01:39 CST
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"Watashi wa nihongo wo naraimasu."/// -hugs Cassie- I love you darling... even if everyone else thinks you're insane and seems to be in love with Chrissy.../// I still don't blame Cassie for acting the way she did... I'm so glad Bakura at least told her that. I think it would suck if everyone were like Mai./// What the hell was Bakura on? He was nice to Cassie! And, if my overly-hopelessly-romantic mind does not deceive me, he was FLIRTING with her!!! -squee!-/// Oh dammit now what? It kind of annoys me that Cassie has to save Chrissy, except that Chrissy will inevitably have to help Cassie because, you know, that's just the way this crappy world works.
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 01:10 CST
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I hate to say this, but I'm in a bitchy mood right now and I really wish everyone would leave Cassie alone and let her explain what's going on in her own sweet time and in a more private and intimate setting. Hell, if I were in a hospital and all this were happening to me, I'd be kicking, screaming, biting, swearing, you name it. And I sure as all hell wouldn't just give in like that to Miss Crybaby and Mr Sensitive... Despite my let's-beat-the-crap-out-of-somebody mood I like your story and I love you as a reviewer and authoress. ^^
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:17 CST
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-glares EVIL GLARE OF DOOM- Can I just say that I'm only on Chapter 11, and all I want to do is punch Chrissy out? I love Cassie so much!!! ^^ I _hate_ Chrissy. You've done a very good job screwing with my mind for me to hate her so much, thanks very much.
| Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 17:48 CST
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Hey! Sorry, I haven't read your fic yet (I don't do too much reading... unfortunately) but I wanted to let you know that I lowered the rating on my fic back to PG13 for you. I hide Chapter 31 (the reason the rating went up) and left you a note on Chapter 32. Thanks so much for reading my fic and being so supportive! If you have any questions, you know what to do!
| Title: *GLOMP!*
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That has to be the best chapter ever! I love it to endless extent! I loved the talk Cassie had with Bakura. It was sooooo sweet! . . . Despite myself, I thin they should be together. ^^' They are just -um, good for eachothe? Well, ya know, they have the same amount of sarcsticness and everything. They were to cute together. Anyway, back to the story. You did a wonderful job on describing everything from emotion to - everything! OOohhhh, I just know it's going to end soon. #_# me very sad now . . *Sighs* Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chappie! Keep up the great work! ^_^
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh - me - goodness! That was sooo beautifully written! That was - that was - how can I put it? - top writer level. ( Sorry, I put writing's into different levels. ^^" )I loved how you did her feelings. How she felt, and everything! Though, it was sad about her past. That was the best chapter ever. I just loved every minute of it! I can't wait for the next chapter! OMG This is the best! ^-^
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shoulda listened to you. *Sighs* Well, anyway, I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Nooowww! For the review! ^_^ This time I'll try to not blabber on and on about how great the fic is and try to say how great the chapter is. ^-^ he he! Anyway, I luved how you portrayed the tension and everything. ( You're sooo good at it! ) And Cassie's feelings and - *Sighs* here I go again! I JUST LUV YOUR FIC! ^_^ It has to be the best! Oohhhhh. 1050 characters left. $_$ Is that a good thing??? Anyway, I luved this chapter just like all the rest and I hope you can get the next one up soon. Remember you have five months! Andddd, for being a such a wonderful writer - Hugs! (Hugs you) Sorry, I'm just in a hugging mode. ^^" Can't wait! la la la la!!
| Title: Hiiiii!!!!!!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderfully written chapter. ^_^ You always know how to make great chapters, great characters that aren't perfect, and keep the plot going with lots of cliff hangers!! ^___^ I luv your fic!!!! Though, I'm not to happy about the Cliff Hanger. Grrr. I wanna know what happens next!! WAHHHH!!!! Anywaym please update soon! ^___^ Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
| Title: Eheheh...
Reviewed By: Misaki Kaibutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, at first I was upset... I was like, 'you're talking about everyone but me... waah'... and then I realized that my penname was Misaki Kaibutsu... tee-hee. --;; I'm used to going by TRT. Ne, anyway, it's good! And nice! The plot continues to thicken! You know, when the liquid starts getting all thick, you should stir it... mou. Dunno what I'm talking about. As usual. Anyway, 'tis lovely and all that. You've answered some questions, but now... more appear. Oh, dear. --;; Update soon!
| Title: Mou!
Reviewed By: Misaki Kaibutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good grammar/spelling, writing-ness, and all that stuff. But what is the best is that... well, at first I didn't want to read this story because I thought it would be a Mary-Sue. But then I read it and realized it wasn't. You somehow managed to make a story focusing on an OC that wasn't perfect. For that I commend you. Yesh. Clap clap and all that jazz. Mou. Meanwhile... I have no idea where this story is going! Mouuuuuuuuuuuu.
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