| "Til Death Do Us Part" Reviews/Comments [ 336 ] |
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Title: ChickensEveryWhere
Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been doing alot of reading and no reviewing, but i thought that this deserved a review. I liked the way you portrayed Ayame in this chapter. It was so realistic. You know, the one who blamed the one at fault and then the one who was at fault then forgave. I'f i'm not making sense then i'm like...really sorry. i desperately need my sleep i haven't slept for almost 2 days. But I thought that this chapter was expertly written and that i look forward to more updates soon. My login isn't working so this is: ~ChickensEveryWhere P.S. Looking forward to more fluff between all couples! Yes Sirei I am!
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:46 CDT
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*jumps up and down for joy* I thought it was going to take for ever for them to work things out and become happy again. I really like your story please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Ooh happiness! I'm glad that Inu-Kag are safe and back with their families...but will you please let them consummate their love soon?!?!/ HEHE...demands of a hentai! As usual, you're doing a great job of telling the story..the characters are nice and deep and have all sorts of things going on underneath the surface. I just want poor Inu and Kag to fully become mates...before something nutty happens :)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Wow. Great chapter. Love the story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: 2 lazy to login On: July 19, 2004 17:36 CDT
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aw that was sweet! and tense. the parents had better fess up soon hehe. and Miroku had better get it together if he doesnt want Sango made at him, and its funny as can be. i love how inuyasha was when the doctor was taking care of Kagome. and Shippo was just too cute! im glad Ayame is finally pulling it together as well. here's to the grat story so far and the waiting for the next chapter! Miko no Tears and Aya
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 19, 2004 17:19 CDT
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First of all allow me to express my condolances regarding your great uncle. Second allow me to say congratulations on the nomination, although I admit I have not heard of the award. That was a beautiful chapter, I look forwards to seeing what comes next even if it will be disturbing. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:56 CDT
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Good update! I'm excited to see what transpires in the later chapters. As always, no need to rush an update; the wait is worth it.
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Reviewed By: snake20008 On: July 19, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy love this story. I hope you update soon. I can't waite to see what happenes when Koga gets back. Babygirl
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 19, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting, a bit mushy for me though...but then again after reading so many romance fics you get kinda jaded. but otherwise it was a great update and i wanna find out about the twist! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:09 CDT
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Yay! I need more!!! I hope you update soon! I have been reading a multitude of stories lately and the authors have left most of them dead. They just stopped posting! I hope you never do that to us! Please update soon!!!
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Title: You are the BEST
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. ^_^ It makes me all giggliy each time I read it. I can't wait to see what happens. Cuz i can't even guess what is next. Continue the great work! Update soon. I'm really sorry about what happened with your great uncle.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 19, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ouuuu this chapter was really good too! I didn't think it moved too slow! =P I love how sweet and caring Inuyasha is, awwwwwwwwww! hehe Sorry to hear about the funeral, but sometimes I guess it is the best thing that could have happened. My condolences go out to you. And congrats on the nomination! This story completely deserves it; you've worked hard and it shows! I'm very curious to see the 'sickning twist.' Well once again I'd just like to remind you how much I enjoy your story so keep up the amazingly good work and I hope to read more chapters soon. Bye! --Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow. this story is amazing! I absolutly love it!!!! hehehe. I like the way that it was organized; how you have to try and piece things together on your own. Very well done my friend! So far you've kept me guessing with anticipation, hehe. I just started reading this story today and finally finished all the completed chaters and,WOW! hehehe, please make more chapters soon. I was sooo happy now that Inuyasha and Kagome have reached an understanding and are together again. Made me so happy. This story is headed towards to good ole' trusty favorites list. Keep up the good work, it's so fun and enjoyable to read. Thanks for writing it! te he he. Bye Bye now---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: July 12, 2004 20:47 CDT
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Hi! Love the story, still!! hehe I hope you update soon! *But take your time... great things are worth waiting for I've heard!*
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Reviewed By: akki_minx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!Hurry up. I LOVEEEEEE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!
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