| "The Story" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you still need to spell check but i do like your material you need to keep going and stop apologising for it being so long sience you have wrote it is their fault they are just too inpatient
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Title: spell checcccccccccccck
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
kilala not kiara kiara is fron the lion king 2 spell check but other that that i like it so far. nice job
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
That was cool. Hope ya update soon.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 18:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey you left out a K name: Kuronue. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please, I look forward to reading future chapters!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
NICE i liked this chapter:D it was AWESOME if he had only waited a bit more...just a bit more
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 19:22 CST
Comment/Review:
NICE il iked this chapter:D i can't wait to see who you are gonna pair w/whom and when will Kag meet Hiei...though I'm curious is Yusuke w/Keiko??
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
he never learns does he...GAH!! LOL
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:26 CST
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the infamous Iwamoto...massive grr...I don't likethat jerk...can't wait for ther to meet Yusuke and the Gang:D
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:20 CST
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man...LOL...I can't believe he fell for the oldest trick in the book...hehehehe:D
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
YIKES..that bad huh...
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness*gay computer wont let me sign in* On: December 10, 2004 11:55 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon. this would be a good oppurtunity to add some plot twists and announce what the pairings are going to be! I think it would be kinda cliche'd to do the usual, kagome sees Inu with Kikyou and shes leaves that time forever plot, so i vote for a Hiei/Kagome and a Sango/Kurama. Maybe you can give Kikyou a new soul and then pair her with Inu. Or you can go for some angst and have Inu killed somehow. (NOT THAT I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!!) again, update soon!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: December 09, 2004 15:15 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm, where is he? off with Kikyo?
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 09:10 CST
Comment/Review:
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Title: Update plaese and soon , thanks
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the inuyasha yu yu hakusho crossovers especially the school ones , how they find out she's a miko and bla bla bla , anyways i loved it , pleaseoon , good luck , much love to ya =)
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