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| "My Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 01:27 CST
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yaaay.. you finnally updated!!! now I'm so happy! btw sorry for whining and stuff! I love it I love it! geez.. I'm getting annoying now.. sorry for that! It's a great chapter by the way! but why is ryou thinking so negative about himself? ah well never mind. hum hum hum.. sorry humming again! well... I don't know anything good to review so sorry for that! see you at msn ^_^ and please update REAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLY soon! I wanna read further!! bye bye
| Title: goob
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 03:14 CST
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goood, sorry for not reviewing your latest chap, I just read it, school's being a bugger and all soooooo, well you fill in the rest. Don't forget, last time I reviewed I had only read up too chapter 4, but I'm finished now and I'm totally in love with this story. Bakura should take Ryou back in time in his mind or something, than he'll remember everything again, right on!!!! Anyhooble, I'll keep on reviewing you're story, I like it, plz update very very very soon
| Reviewed By: forever broken/eve On: March 15, 2005 11:24 CST
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Great story, just great, and by the way... I'm not that good but don't you write jami with a Y? just asking... btw your story is great! though paniwi's are better *no offence* (I had to say that, she made me *pouts*) nah just kidding. and please write fast ^_^I want another chappie!! bye and see ya!
| Title: paniwi
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 10:29 CST
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alright I just read the first 4 chapters, and I think it's a cool story, just a couple of things. 1. Authors notes in the middle of the story are alright, but you don't have to explain every single thing. 2. All those Japanese words are kinda annoying, most ppl here are aware of words like kawaii, bishounen aso, but not entire sentences please. 3. you're final and worsts mistake (not to be taken seriously, it's just me and my phobia) GOUDKUST *starts gagging* ONDERWEG NAAR MORGEN!!!! *starts gagging even more* and worst of all!!! 'GOEDE TIJDEN SLECHTE TIJDEN'!!! *pukes mmmh, as you might have noticed by now, yes, I'm dutch *cheers* *chants* wilhelmus van nassauwe heeft even voor mij...omfg, I did not just did...right!?!? oh en, mazzel, en groetjes aan Daphna (ik MOEST gewoon wat in het nederlands zeggen, dat moest gewoon)
| Reviewed By: paniwi (from the netherlands wheew) On: March 11, 2005 10:26 CST
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alright I just read the first 4 chapters, and I think it's a cool story, just a couple of things. 1. Authors notes in the middle of the story are alright, but you don't have to explain every single thing. 2. All those Japanese words are kinda annoying, most ppl here are aware of words like kawaii, bishounen aso, but not entire sentences please. 3. you're final and worsts mistake (not to be taken seriously, it's just me and my phobia) GOUDKUST *starts gagging* ONDERWEG NAAR MORGEN!!!! *starts gagging even more* and worst of all!!! 'GOEDE TIJDEN SLECHTE TIJDEN'!!! *pukes mmmh, as you might have noticed by now, yes, I'm dutch *cheers* *chants* wilhelmus van nassauwe heeft even voor mij...omfg, I did not just did...right!?!? oh en, mazzel, en groetjes aan Daphna (ik MOEST gewoon wat in het nederlands zeggen, dat moest gewoon)
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