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| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] | | Pages (31): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 05:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. It's all your fault. When I saw you updated, I flew up from my computer with an exaggerated "YES!!!", exploding from my chest. The big 1993 fist to the air, and then pulled down followed. Lastly, I was eyed surreptitiously by my roomates. Thanks for the embarassment, but even more, thanks for the UD. I can't wait for the next one! I love your Rin/Sessh relationship. You're an inspiration to me in my story, which, sorry to say isn't half as engrossing as yours. I want to see Sessh kick some ass, and I know I can count on you for that. Real life sucks. I know how hard it is to get here to UD, but I'll be around, I'll be watching. *crosses fingers* oh please oh please oh please UD again! I'll do the Arseneo Whoot just for you... LOL... I'm putting Yash and Sessh in a band in a future chapter of my fic. I even wrote a song ((not a good one though, lol)) for them to have. I still have five hundred and sixty two characters but I think I've made my point. You Rock.;)
| Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) On: May 29, 2005 17:36 EDT
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Hey, I like the new chapter, but you made Inu sound like a... how should I say it? If he was a girl, he'd be considered a slut or whore. Get what I'm saying? It doesn't make it seem as special between him and Kagome. But it was so sweet with them in the rain. *sniff* How cute! Great job, and I like the stuff between Rin and the psychologist(psychiatrist?). *laughs at yamaoto* You only think you've won! Rin is going to beat your butt, if Fluffy-sama doesn't kill you first!! :-D
| Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I'm only on chapter 37, but I can't wait to finish it!! I think you're a great author and can't wait to read more of this story and alot others! I just posted my first fanfic and hope it reads as good as this one does! ~EN
| Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 12:46 EDT
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It's the snake preistess lady! you know, the one who is all absessed with beauty, isn't it? do i get cyber pocky? i really do love this story, it is definatly my favorite on mm. my apologies for your lack of door (the one you had to kick in to get inside your house). 'k well, see yah... Thank you come again (my trademark ending)...
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Amber- foxfire730 On: May 24, 2005 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter so much! the whole inuyasha and kagome deal was great! and you put the rain scene together so...WOW-like! i'm not even sure if that makes sense, but oh well... did inuyasha FINALLY sing? i loved who you paired his voice up with, and very good song, it definatley goes witht the whole scene. and you're right, Nicklebacks lead singer SO has a hot voice. whenever that song's on the radio, there is never a time i don't sing along. at the beginning of the chapter i was thinking 'oh shit! what's kagome gonna do to him'. then it turned out to be 'turn around kags!! whoah buddy and big mistake you're making'. then i was thinking 'wait. if he's free... inuyasha's MINE!' hopefully somebidy guesses who the doc is. you left great hints in this chapter. by comparing her to a snake was a big pluse. and now that you've introduced the 2 apprentinces, and the fact that the doc is a priestess... well, now it should be a no-brainer. overall, great chap! A+. Fantastic. Great Work... schools ending in 2 days, so i'm got up in school phrases... yeah...TTFN! Amber
| Reviewed By: sadsoul On: May 24, 2005 14:51 EDT
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Another awesome chapter!!!!!!! Believe it or not I'm not going to call you a sadist this time (but probably in another chapter I will). I do have a few questions.... wasn't Kagura suppose to meet with Sess about Rin's doctor and wasn't sess's uncle suppose to be checking up on this so-called doctor? What I'm trying to say is that it seems like a huge undergoing this doctor is trying to do and I just can't take it anymore, the doc is after Rin and everybody it seems. I'm happy that you haven't BROKEN Rin.... Yet. Knowing how much of a sadist you are you probably are going to break her soon though. (Yeah I did it I called you it again...but ain't I also a sadist because I continue reading your great story.) Rin being strong and not letting the doctor get to her makes her a real character. Don't make Rin an idiot and start doubting her friends, it was bad enough when she started having some doubts about Sess. Well the great sadsoul (aka ladyrinremix when I decide to login) has spoken once again and I look forward to another chapter in this on-going saga!
| Title: haha
Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) On: May 23, 2005 15:44 EDT
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I know who the psychiatrist is! I know who the psychiatrist is! *smiles big and eats pocky* Hahahahaha! I guessed, and I was right! *snickers* Now, I just have to figure out when Inuyasha is going to be killed by Kagome. >: )
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon On: May 22, 2005 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Really good story. I still can't believe that I've read all 59 chapters. I started about 2 weeks ago, looking for something good to read just to pass time, but this story made it to my fav list along side Movie House Hanyo!! Can't wait for the rest of the chaps. Keep it up!! You've got quite the imagination! See ya! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 07:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I read this story, it took me 3 days to read it all. I am dying to see what is next. I read your other fic, but it was incomplete as well. I certainly hope you did not get bored... This is a very compelling fic, and it prompted me to make an account and write my own. I hope you'll remember what I emailed you about Sesshomaru... maybe now you know who I am, lol... Anyway, please keep writing, you're awesome. ^_^ Don't feel bad. I'm not letting Rin get any ass in my fic either, lol... not yet anyway. ;)
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 07:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I read this story, it took me 3 days to read it all. I am dying to see what is next. I read your other fic, but it was incomplete as well. I certainly hope you did not get bored... This is a very compelling fic, and it prompted me to make an account and write my own. I hope you'll remember what I emailed you about Sesshomaru... maybe now you know who I am, lol... Anyway, please keep writing, you're awesome. ^_^ Don't feel bad. I'm not letting Rin get any ass in my fic either, lol... not yet anyway. ;)
| Reviewed By: Dragonman On: May 20, 2005 11:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) I'm glad that I got the analogy right. And glad to see that you updated again. Definitely seeing the increased breakdown in Rin, with the attacking Kikyo. (though I really enjoyed seeing Kikyo get the crap beaten out of her) Can't really say where you're going with it in the long run, but I really hope Rin get's a new pane in her window after this is all over. And it's nice to see Kagome's mom finally get that Inuyasha loves her. No more big fights there for a while... though it sounds like something's going to happen between Kags' mom and Ryen. :D I'd love to see where that ends up. And I can't wait to see how Inuyasha explains his absense to Kagome when she gets better - and how she reacts. (the Jak/Ryen confrontation was good :D definitely a good/funny idea lol)
| Reviewed By: rose anne navaltoi On: May 19, 2005 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is eunice baun friend i like u'r story very much please update soon very soon please
| Reviewed By: eunice baun On: May 19, 2005 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story really please update soon pretty please i really like u'r story r u goin to make kagome pregnant and make her mom end up wit inu's uncle just curios well it's a fabulous story no matter wat
| Title: woo-hoo!
Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 21:05 EDT
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Yeah! A new chapter! OMG, that was so sweet what Inuyasha said, about how he would die a thousand deaths to see her smile, a million to hear her laugh. I almost cryed. I showed that to all my friends, and now they all want to read your fanfic. Great job! But seriously, couldn't you have used another character for the part of Kikyo? I mean, she's not that bad. I like Kikyo. She's my favorite character. :-( But you're still my second favorite author!! (My absolute favorite is Inusaga. She's awesome!) And thank you thank you thank you for reviewing my fanfic, 'Moonbeams and Night Kisses'. I had a Reviewer Response chapter up, but obviously that's not allowed, and they deleted the entire fanfic. *steam coming out of ears* I was allowed to repost it, but with no Reviewer Response, so I'll have that at the end of the next chapter. :-/ Oh, and one more thing: YOU ROCK!
| Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: May 14, 2005 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is that i really LOVE this sory!! its fantastic!! i just love inuyasha ang kagome!! and i really hope that you will write more chapters soon!! UPDATE PLEASE!! : )
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