| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: DeMoNMiKo192 On: June 06, 2005 09:56 PDT
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good lemon...i have a question though: is the shrine prostitute a real occupation? i was kinda confused cuz i thought that kind of stuff is frowned upon by holy people.
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: chibster5566985 On: June 02, 2005 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story. You should continue this story! it's sooooo goood!
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Reviewed By: ... i need a name? On: June 01, 2005 15:23 PDT
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You better be writing a series to this or else you'll have a mob with pitch forks after you!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuslilhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great one shot but i would really like you to continue this it would make an even greater story.
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Reviewed By: brittanyrose On: May 31, 2005 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! very good. hope you continue!!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 10:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is really a great one-shot, and should definatley be continued. it would make such a great fic. it's linda sad that kagome would hav to leave after 4 weeks, and probably not see inuyasha again, so you should definately continue. again, great one-shot! i hope there will be more chapters in this!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 09:08 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this, you MUST continue, please, you just MUST!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!! I would love to know what happens next so please continue!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 18:46 PDT
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i really think u shud continue this, its really interesting
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 22:57 PDT
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Interesante... this could go many different ways. Cool idea though. poor inuyasha. hentai people's boy toy. good luck with dream a little dream of me.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 21:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel of Death and Destruccion AKA dbad On: May 27, 2005 21:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
I belive that you have enough material here to make a fanfic that is worth the time spended in reading it. so hopefully you would make it. Onegai don't stop, I hope to read from you soon, and if you want to say something about my review you can contact me at no_tama@hotmail.com . Sorry if my grammar is not so good, but English is not my first language ~_^ ... take care Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish it please its really good.
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Reviewed By: nightlight On: May 27, 2005 12:13 PDT
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You should definitely continue this story, I just know it would be great.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: luna chick nsi On: May 26, 2005 18:38 PDT
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The conversation was a bit jumpy, but the lemon was great. Definitely should do the four weeks. It would be a nice progression lemon story
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