| "High-Tech Elf" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Avast! ARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 02:30
Comment/Review:
Cool, you definitely have the knack for CG. Not that I don't love your pencil drawings. Your style still shines through this one, the metal work that's all twisty and very unique of you. I'd say just fix up some the proportions and tilt the character forward a little. Like Fan said, they look like they're gonna land on their back side. Love the colours and the way you applied them. I'd love to see more of your CG stuff.
| Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:31
Comment/Review:
Nice work. The character is well drawn, but i do agree with Bizmarck on the nose in relationship with the eyes. The pose looks like hes leaning back with with no back ground he looks almost like he is about to fall backwards. I would suggest you cut down on using rendering in the filters to shadow/ hilight your work, it tends to make the middle look puffy and the sides drawn in like a quilt. I think your work would look great using cel shading.~Fanilia
| Title: ARG har
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 14:56
Comment/Review:
Wow, I love your CG coloring skills. It's fantasatic, the colors are well chosen for this. However, I think you have drawn the hands a bit too small, because the hands seems a bit weak. Other than that, your skills are awesome. Keep the work up! ^^
| Title: ARG :)
Reviewed By: Bizmarck (not loged in) On: February 07, 2004 02:15
Comment/Review:
Looking good!! :) now the eye preportions are better. :) I'll make one more comment though. The way you have drawn the nose looks relatively dead-on so you assume the centre of the face is relatively close to the centre of the nose, if this is the case then the eyes should be symetricaly spaced around the veritical center line of the face. So it looks to me like her left eye is too close to her left ear. But even with that this pictures looking real good. :) :) Keep it up, and watch out for face symetry. I cant wait for the next one. :) :)
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