| "Ichigo at 17" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 14:46
Comment/Review:
The line art is nice and the coloring is good. I'd have liked to seen more contrast in the colors. The pink of her hair is the same as that of her dress. There is no depth to her hair. No darks to off set the color so it looks rather flat. My biggest concern though is not the image but the lack of artists comments. Half the pleasure of viewing art is the glimpses into the inspiration of the artist. Knowing a little bit about why they chose to create the image and how they did it.~Fanilia
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Title: Arg!
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 06:06
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Drawing Skill: 6 of 10
Use of Medium: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Somehow her neck seems as if it's outstretched forward. Maybe it's the choker or her pointed chin or the shades...Anyway, I think this is an adorable picture, though you probably could have made the coloring a bit smoother. You may also want to re-think her collarbone (?) it seems like it's some strange squizzy line on her upper chest.
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Title: Avast! ARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 21:27
Comment/Review:
Personally, I think it just needs some darker and lighter highlights, along with smoothing out the line art a little. And maybe a couple more shades of pink or red. It's a very cute character. Nice, very nice. :D
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Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 04:32
Comment/Review:
Nice…. She's looking cute enough, line-works looking O.K. though I'm slightly destructed by the pointy-ness of her chin and its position when considering the overall angle of her head. Might be worth checking your facial feature set-out-lines to ensure smooth three-dimensional flow of the face. But really its more of a gut feeling then an actual gripe. Only other tip is heavier shading and contrast to give her face and body more form, shes looking a bit flat considering the good linework. ;) keep it up. :)
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Title: ARG
Reviewed By: veinglory [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 08:10
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Drawing Skill: 6 of 10
Use of Medium: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi I like the clear way you have shown the character and costume, however the 'fade-out on the arms seems odd as it doesn't occur at the edge of the picture but just in mid-air. You might want to increase the contrast a little also.
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