Beyblade Fan Fiction ❯ Deserving of More? ❯ Deserving of More? ( Chapter 1 )

Prologue

In this fic I'm going to start at the beginning and this going to be present tense

Rei Kon- 6 years currently

Rin Kon- 4 years currently

Mariah- 5 years

Lee- 6 years

Gary- 5 years

Kevin- 5 years

Kai- 7 years

Tala- 8 years

Bryan- 7 years

Ian- 6 years

Spencer- 6 years

Oh yeah to tell you guys now…Voltaire is a nice guy who is brainwashed by Boris to be an evil bastard…the rest of the Bladebreakers won't come in until the World Championships…this takes place before G-Revolution, V-Force, and the original Beyblade…the story isn't according to the Beyblade story-line…I haven't really had enough time to see G-Rev yet…so I don't know what the hell is gonna happen later on in the story…enough of this let me describe Rin and all the relationships between everyone…

Rin Kon

-green eyes

-long black hair

-beyblader

-unique gifts (you'll find out more about them later…if you keep reading)

-extremely smart

-graceful and athletic

-stealthy

-great with martial arts

In this fic Kai and Tala are brothers…no not biological brothers…stepbrothers…Kai and Tala actually get along…according to how you like Kai and Tala they might be a little OOC towards each other and Rin

Rei, the other White Tigers, and the other Demolition Boys aren't going to be a major part in the story yet…oh yeah Bryan might be a little OOC in the future…you know towards Rin…no not that way…like an older brother figure

Bladebreakers aren't going to be really stupid in the future…I'm not really a Tyson or Hilory fan…so Hilary is going to be a real bitch…although she can do that all by herself…no Tyson is not going to be a real idiot in this fic…he won't have those eating binges and stuff a lot…heck maybe not at all

I would like reviews on what you think of the prologue…thanks…baibai…^_^