Beyblade Fan Fiction ❯ Love ❯ chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

This is Kai/Hilary story, so who dont like it don't read.
 
Hilary is sitting outside of the dojo and looking at the boys. But she like just one of them. Kai Hiwatari, she didn't know why him but she has a crush on him for a very long time now.
 
Hilary's Pov
'Why can't he see me?' I asked myself. I am in love with him, but he doesn't see nothing in me. The tears slowly started to fall from my eyes, I tried to hold them but I couldnt.
Soon the vocie call my name:"Hey Hill are you okay?" Kai asked me, my ansver is:"Yea I am but I am going home nov couse I am really tierd." I started to run home. When I came to my room I colapsed on my bed and fell asleep.
 
Evening
Kai's Pov
Hilary was acting strange today, she wasn't happy like before, but why I care anyvay like I like her, Yea right!?... But I think about her all the time and I can't even stop. She just won't get out of my head. I know it's strange for me..... but i wanna see her right now!
I walk out of the dojo on the street, it was cold tonight but it didn't bother me, only thing I want is to see her. I looked at the clock and it was already 21:00.
I was thinking about her almost every day now, i don't even know when did she came in my head. But withouth her I feel lost, like I don't know where to go.
I am almost at hers house. Just when i wanted to ring my fore-finger stoped before the door-bell. 'I don't know if this what I really want' i thought. But then the door opened in front of me and some woman came out and look at me in my eyes :«Why hello there, are you here to see Miss Hilary 'I nodded' well then you may go in.« She was strange and a little well I don't know how can I tell you.
Well anyway i went up stairs to Hilarys room. I knew witch room was hers, beacuse hers name was on the door.
I knocked on the door but no voice didn't come from the other side. I enter in the room and there was she, she was on bed sleeping withouth concern what would happend. I slowly walk to her bed and sat on the edge , my arm take the way to hers face, my fingers to her lips, my heart is beatting faster and faster. Then my body started to bent down so ours bodys where touching and then my lips ….My wanted to touch those soft pink lips….and I bent down, down and a soft touch on them …i feel….I feel like i was in haven. But them i wanted more more then just a kiss. I would countine if there wouldnt be a knife on my neck.
 
»What are you duing with my fiance? Speak ! and quikly I don't have much time!« he said in a harsh but low voice. »It's none of your concern« he looked at me with cold eyes but idt didn't scare me »Now please put that knife away so I can leave » he did as i told him.
When I came out of this house I was even more worried about Hilara, this guy is very familiar to me.
 
 
 
Was it good or bad? Please tell me….Mistakes?