Captain Tsubasa Fan Fiction ❯ Comparing ❯ Comparing ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Captain Tsubasa: Comparing

By Persona Ohnlyne

Disclaimer: I do not own Captain Tsubasa, I'm just borrowing the characters. I'm not writing this for profit, just for fun.

This is a Lemon, a Henati fic. If you're too young to be reading this kind of things, then go back now. You have been warned.

Note: This story is based more on the manga. That is because there has been so many anime versions, and all of them telling the story in a different way, that it would get too confusing if I based the story in one of the anime versions.

Now, on with the story.

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Tokyo, Japan.

Many fans with their faces painted white and red and wearing blue soccer shirts were making their way to the National Stadium.

Today Japan's national team was going to play a friendy match against Palestine in preparation for the next Olimpic Games. The game wasn't going to start till a couple of hours, but everyone wanted to get to the stadium early and get good seats.

A few blocks down the street, right outside a fancy cafZË‡, there were five girls in their late teens/early twenties, all of them drinking different types of coffes, and chatting with each other. All of them were sitting at a round wooden table outside the cafZË‡, enjoying the shade of a nearby tall tree.

They were also going to the game in a few hours, but they didn't need to get good seats early. Since they were Japan's player's girlfriends, or wives, they had special separated seats set up for them when they get there. And so, they took this time before the game to chat with each other, since they rarely got together like this.

Maki Ayamine was originally from Okinawa, she was considered Kojiro Hyuga's girlfriend, even if they never made it 'official'. Of the four girls, she was the one in better shape and it showed. Her arms were muscular but in a feminine way, as they could be clearly seen since she was wearing a sleeveless peach colored shirt. She was also wearing jean shorts and tennis shoes. She was also wearing a blue Softball hat on her head.

Yayoi Aoba was sitting to her right. Yayoi was Jun Misugi's girlfriend, and it was no secret. They had been going out since middle school after all. She was dressed as conservatively as she could, considering the heat of summer. A white blouse with puffy short sleeves, a plain pink skirt that reached to her knees, and slippers.

Next to her was Yoshiko Fujisawa was Hikaru Matsuyama's girlfriend. Both of them were originally from Hokkaido, and were very close back then. However, since Yoshiko had to move to France when they were young, they didn't start to go out till a few years back. She was wearing a green summer dress, and a pair of green slippers.

To her right was Yukari Jito was Ryo Ishizaki's girlfriend, but like Kojiro and Maki, haven't made it official yet. She was wearing a T-shirt and skirt, light summer tennis shoes and had her long hair tied up in a poytail.

Finally, there was Sanae Nakazawa, now known as Sanae Ozora since she married Tsubasa Ozora about a year ago. Of all the girls, she was the only one that lived outside of Japan; she lived in Barcelona with her husband. Of all of them, she seemed the most fanatic about the game. She was wearing an Official National Japanese Soccer team uniform, and she completed it with a bandana with the words "Japan" written in Kanjis.

Everyone was talking about different everyday things... except for Maki that just seemed bored.

It was Maki the one that pointed out that they always talked about those things every time they got together like this before a game, and suggested to talk about something more... daring. Like comparing notes about their respective lovers.

Everyone blushed, Sanae seemed especially embarrassed, she was almost as red as a tomato... but everyone finally agreed that it would be kind of interesting. Besides, they were all women, and of course enjoyed the prospect of making the others feel envy about their respective boyfriend/husband.

"Well," Maki started, "since I was the one that suggested it, I think its only fair for me to go first."

She leaned over the table and looked at the other four girls around her, "You know how Kojiro's nickname is 'Tiger'? Well, let me tell you, it's not just because the way he plays soccer..."

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Maki was on all fours on the large double futton in the bedroom. she was completely naked and covered in sweat.

Behind her, Kojiro was holding Maki's hips in a strong grip, grunting as he moved his hard cock in and out of Maki's wet pussy very fast and very hard.

Maki moaned in pleasure, enjoying Kojiro's rough lovemaking. He was fucking her so hard that every time he pushed into her pussy, it moved her whole body forwards. Finally, Maki's arms gave way and she dropped her face on the soft surface of the futton.

Koiro quickly noticed this. He reached forwards, grabbing Maki's breasts in each hand, and gripping them firmly, pulled Maki over him, falling on his back, and with Maki on top.

Maki, never stopping her up and down motion with her hips, lifted one shapely leg over and turned around so she was facing Kojiro as they fucked.

Maki moved downwards, to kiss Kojiro in the mouth. Kojiro took the opportunity to wrap his strong arms around Maki. They he turned, rolling them over so Maki was now on her back with Kojiro on top of her.

Kojiro grabbed each of Maki's wrists with both of his hands, and pressed them against the futton at her sides, leaving Maki immobile.

Maki really enjoyed this. She wrapped her legs around Kojiro's waist, helping him go faster and harder, in and out her pussy.

They both started to moan louder and louder as they could feel they orgasms coming closer and closer.

Finally, Maki yelled as a powerful orgasm washed over her, and she could feel Kojiro's thick warm seed inside her pussy.

The orgasm was so hard that it seemed to last forever. Finally, Both of them collapsed, panting hardly, over the futton.

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"And that was one of the small ones." Maki finished her little story.

"Wow!" Yoshiko exclaimed, stating what the rest of the girls felt, except one...

Of the four of them, Yayoi seemed the most unimpressed of them. "Well, I guess it was nice. If you like it hard and fast."

Maki raised an eyebrow as she turned her head to look at Yayoi. "Oh really? Then I think I have a right to know what is Jun like on the bed."

Yayoi took a small sip of her coffee, "Well... as you all must know. Jun is still recovering of his heart condition. His doctor told him to take it slow in any physical activity. And I mean everything."

Maki smiled knowingly, "Everything?"

Yayoi smiled back, "Oh yeah, EVERYTHING..."

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Yayoi and Jun were on the narrow bed in the bedroom. They were in the sixty-nine position. Yayoi slowly sucked on Jun's long cock while Jun used his skilled tongue all over her pussy without ever touching the most sensitive parts in a teasing hot dance.

Yayoi stopped her slow sucking for just a second to look at the alarm clock at the night table next to the bed.

According to that, they had been doing this for almost an hour... and neither of them had cum even once since they started.

The incredible slow pace was maddening for both of them in a sexual way, both were doing everything in their power to keep the other very aroused, but far away from orgasm.

It was too much for Yayoi, if things stayed as they were she was going to go crazy!

"Jun, I... ohhh... I can't take it anymore." said Yayoi pleadingly between moans.

Jun nodded since he felt the same way. Slowly, but with a sense of urgency, Yayoi turned around and sat on her knees, with her VERY aroused pussy just in front of Jun's rock hard cock.

Yayoi raised her hips, and then impaled herself hardly on Jun's cock, letting out a loud and longing moan. Then she started to move up and down his length, while Jun grabbed her by the hips and moved his hips in sync with Yayoi's movements.

Both of them were very aroused, and it only took half a dozen strokes for them to cum.

They took a long time, but it had been worth it since the orgasm was more than intense.

Yayoi let out a high pitched yell as she came, spurting her love juice all over Jun's crotch, while she felt his cock spurt gallons of hot liquid into her pussy.

Finally, both lovers collapsed on the bed, hugging each other closely.

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"That's incredible..." said a surprised Maki.

"Yeah, I mean, what is your record?" asked Yoshiko.

Yayoi gave the question some thinking, then answered. "I think its around two hours, give or take."

"Two hours!" said the others in unison.

"Yeah, two hours." confirmed Yayoi.

Yukari didn't seem as impressed as the others. "You know, I think I can beat that." she said casually.

The rest of the girls turned to look at her. "You do? And how?" asked Yayoi, taking Yukari's statement as a challenge.

Yukari took a small sip of her cappuccino, then answered. "Well, have you ever noticed that Ishizaki NEVER seems to get tired during a game?"

Yayoi's eyes opened wide as saucers. "You don't mean..."

Yukari smiled in triumph, "Oh, yes I do."

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Yukari screamed, throwing her head backwards as she was on all fours on the bed. Her entire body was shining with sweat as her body was engulfed with an intense orgasm... for the fourth time that night.

Yukari collapsed on the bed, panting from the intense lovemaking. It was always like this with Ishizaki, he never seemed to get tired... ever.

As Yukari rested, face down on the bed, she could feel Ishisaki's hand turned her over so she was now laying face up on the bed.

She looked up tiredly between her heaving breasts and could see that Ishisaki was still hard and ready for more. This night wasn't over yet.

Ishisaki opened Yukari's legs as far as they would go, Yukari was too tired to move or say anything.

She gave out a very small yelp as she felt Ishisaki's iron hard cock push into her flooded vagina for the fifth time that night, as he started to make love to her yet again.

Yukari panted and groaned, and did it even louder when Ishisaki's head moved downwards to her overly stimulated breasts and started to suck on her nipples, first one then the other and then back.

Yukari wanted to hold Ishisaki's head closer to her breasts, to mover her hips in sync with his hips, but she couldn't she was just too tired.

Ishisaki on the other hand seemed like this was the first time they screwed this night, where did he get the energy!?

Again, Yukari yelled loudly as her body was enveloped in a gigantic orgasm. She could feel her love juices squirting out of her pussy, covering Ishisaki's crotch, and she could feel how Ishisaki came inside her. Even after five orgasms, Ishisaki was still shooting load after creamy load inside Yukari's vessel.

This fifth orgasm took a lot out of an already tired Yukari, and she drifted off to sleep. The last thing she saw before she closed her eyes was that Ishisaki's cock was still hard.

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"... our record is ten times in a row." finished Yukari.

"You HAVE to be kidding." exclaimed Maki.

"I'm honest about it, ten times nonstop." replied Yukari.

Before anyone could say anything, Yoshiko cut in. "You know, I must say that I'm kind of disappointed."

The rest turned to look at her, "And why is that, Yoshiko-san?" asked Yukari.

"I mean that all of you seem to have had sex only in the bedroom. How about weird places?" replied Yoshiko.

Maki smiled, "You mean like in the kitchen or in the bathroom? Kojiro and I did that you know."

Yoshiko returned Maki's smile knowingly, "No, I mean like in a REALLY weird place."

"Okay, now I just HAVE to know. HOW WEIRD are you talking about exactly?" asked Yukari.

Yoshiko smiled and leaned into the table, "Ever did it in the snow?"

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Yoshiko moaned lightly as the feelings were overwhelming her entire being.

She was feeling so many things at the same time... she could feel coldness, mostly on her face, from all the snow surrounding them. Even if she was wearing heavy clothing to protect herself from the cold. She could also feel Hikaru's strong gloved hand stroking her breasts as he slid his hand under her shirt and jacket. The wool of the gloves sending up sparks up her tiny, and very sensitive, nipples.

She could feel hotter and hotter as every stroke of Hikaru's hands on her breasts, and every kiss of Hikaru on her throat sent her loins ablaze.

Yoshiko and Hikaru were deep in the forest of Hokkaido, and since it was winter everything was covered in shining white snow, not only that but it was actually snowing lightly, the small snowflakes melting as soon as they touched the two teens.

Slowly, very slowly, Yoshiko reached downwards and stroked Hikaru's crotch with her hand. She could feel that Hikaru was getting hard trough the thick fabric of his winter pants. Slowly, she reached inside his pants to stroke him directly.

Pretty soon Hikaru was laying Yoshiko on the snow covered ground, and opened both their pants just enough so their sexual organs were free for intercourse.

This wasn't the first time that Yoshiko made love with Hikaru, but it was the first time that they did it outside, or with their clothes on... and it was for sure the first time that they did it on the snow!

Yoshiko moaned even louder, hugging Hikaru down close to her, as she felt Hikaru's hardness stroke the moistened insides of her sensitive pussy. In and out she could feel him moving, as sweat covered her forehead and her body, which she could clearly feel trough her clothes from her sexually enhanced senses.

Yoshiko felt how Hikaru was fastening his already quick pace, signaling that he was close to an orgasm, which was good because she was very close too. And she started pushing her hips upwards to meet his movements.

Finally, both of them were enveloped in a very intense orgasm, which lasted a few moments, and then they laid on the snow, panting from the intense sexual intercourse, small clouds of breath could be seen coming out of their panting mouths.

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The rest of the girls listened as Yoshiko finished her story.

"Wow... that is just... incredible. In the snow?" asked an amazed Yukari

"Yes. That was the first time we did it in the snow. We have done it in the snow a couple more times afterwards, and also in a cave, and once on the roof of the school while it was raining." said Yoshiko.

"I've just HAVE to try that one of this days." said Maki.

"Sanae, how about you?" asked Yayoi, looking at the girl in question.

"Yeah, you have been very quiet since we started talking." commented Maki.

"Yes, come on, tell us about you and Tsubasa." said Yukari.

Sanae blushed and looked down, "Well... it's just that... hum... Tsubasa and I never did it in any weir place, or anything like that..."

The rest of the girls looked at each other, then at Sanae. "Well, I guess you can't expect EVERYONE to have sex in an overly weird way or in a weird place." commented Maki.

"Yeah, and besides, at least you're married and living with Tsubasa. I'm sure you'll get lots of opportunities for that." said Yoshiko. The rest of the girls nodded.

Yayoi looked at her watch, "Hey, look at the time! We better get moving if we don't want to miss the game."

The rest of the girls looked at their respective watched and noticed that Yayoi was right. They all finished their respective drinks, paid for the check and started to walk in the general direction of the stadium.

As she walked, Sanae could feel how her exited nipples rubbed against the fabric of her bra, and how her damp panties were rubbing her exited pussy, and she could feel how more juices were coming out of her vagina and soaking her underwear even more.

Truth be told, Tsubasa was not very good in bed (They always did it in the missionary position, and never did much foreplay), he had terrible stamina (He always came before she did, if she came at all), and he wasn't very... hum, big.

In fact, Sanae was lucky if they did it once a month. No mater if she wore provocative clothes to bed, or what she did or how many 'hints' she threw at him...

Soccer came first to Tsubasa, for everything, and he was a believer that he shouldn't have sex before or after a game. He was celibate days before the game, and days after the game, and since he played at least two games a week, they never did it except during summer when there wasn't any games.

Sanae sighed... she guessed that Maki was right... she couldn't expect for EVERYONE to have a sex life as intense as her friends, but still...

Boy was she horny.

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Author's notes:

There aren't that many Captain Tsubasa lemon fics out there, and all of them are usually yaoi, so I decided to write this fic to compensate.

I really hate Tsubasa, and I think it showed on the story.

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