Card Captor Sakura Fan Fiction ❯ The Loyal and Loving Girl ❯ Chapter 6 ( Chapter 6 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

Kazeko: Hello minna-san!! I hope more people are reading, cause I didn't get a lot more reviews than I have last time………oh well………as long as people read it, it's fine by me, but I like reviews, though the flames are REALLY, REALLY ANNOYING!! But, oh well ^ - ^!!

I want to thank the people down below for reviewing ^ - ^!

Innocent-Chan, Sapphirecrystal, Sapphire Raven, Mini Sweety, AnimeObsessionFantasy, sally, Kerochan, Etherelemental, Winter Dreams, Cherrixwolf, SaFiRe Star, LitleAznGurl

I won't be updating the other two fanfics probably after I finish this whole fanfic or when I don't feel like typing the next chapters for this, but that doesn't mean that I'll stop writing, people need some energy for other stuff. For instance, I'm in summer school, taking math and English, and apparently I'm the helper to most people and they kind of ask too many questions for me to answer………-_-!

Some questions that are being answered:

To Innocent-chan: Just hang in there for a while………it will be S+S all the way, I assure you, so…………try not to jump to conclusions………I REALLY don't want you to strangle me……… *runs away from reviewers* Ja ne!

To Sapphirecrystal: okay, I'll continue to email you, all right? Good! That's about I can say really, and don't worry about your talking, I hang out with WAY too many talkative people, but they're my friends, so you're special too ^ - ^!!

To Sapphire Raven: I don't think I want to get to your bad side, so I'm keeping it safe from you. I had to put them flirting, except Eriol didn't really flirt, Qing-Ying did most of the flirting………okay? No harm done to Tomoyo-chan ^ - ^!!

To Mini Sweety: Don't worry!! Sakura isn't going to celebrate it herself really, it's a surprise ^ - ^!! Continue reading and that surprise should be somewhere in this chapter ^ - ^!!

To AnimeObsessionFantasy: Yeah, I know………so sad………but the end of the day isn't all that bad ^ - ^!!

To Sally: Oh my gosh!! You actually read my mind ^ - ^!! Scary!! Anyway ^ - ^!! I hate Qing-Ying too!! BUT, she will be bloody dead after I'm through with her in the fanfic, just hold on to your horses ^ - ^!!

To Kerochan: Yep………sad isn't it? Syaoran can be so dense like Sakura at most of the time………which is kinda bad in this fanfic, but he won't be so dense at the ending ^ - ^!!

To Cherrixwolf: Your wish is my command ^ - ^!! One happy night for Sakura, coming up ^ - ^!! If you have no idea what I'm saying, I'm just being weird -_- my weird old self ^ - ^!!

To SaFiRe Star: Don't worry about the coupling ^ - ^!! It will be the only one I like, and to give you a hint *I HATE QING-YING JUST LIKE EVERYONE ELSE* Okay, that may answer your question ^ - ^!! I'm not being harsh okay, just pretend I didn't say that out loud and I wrote on a board, there, all better ^ - ^!! So, by the way, there will be a lemon with our fave couple in chapter 8 when I get to there. You'll be surprise why there's a lemon there, I really don't want to say it right now………to disturbing just thinking about it.

LitleAznGurl: Thank you for being sooo supportive!! You've been a great reviewer!! You should register for fanfiction.net ^ - ^!! It doesn't cost money, so I can read some of your fanfics whenever I see them ^ - ^!! If you ever do!! I recommend that you do, but you don't have to………like one of your parents say, "NO YOU CANNOT REGISTER AND THAT'S FINAL!!" Then that will be an excuse ^ - ^!

Oh yeah, just for your and my entertainment, I'll include the next chapter of this fanfic soon and a special bashing story of my own character Qing-Ying!!

If you want to join, go ahead!! Include your pen name I'll be using, and tell me if you want to do it alone or with someone. Say one or few of your favorite anime, and I'll try to make a de-version of that anime with bashing of my character ^ - ^!! Don't feel afraid ^ - ^!! I hate my character sooo much, that I could say b**** to her forever! HAHAHA!!

If you want to, you can tell me your fave character(s) and I'll make them help you out or if you want, you can be them ^ - ^!!

Tell me your email address if you want to look at your part of the section of my plan for your! I won't give away everything ^ - ^!!

Anyway, please review and tell me, and I'll make a story with you in it to torture Qing-Ying!! This is for the Qing-Ying haters out there ^ - ^!! If you don't have to it's okay!! If I end up doing it myself, then so be it 6 - ^!!

Finally, stopping my rambling! Let's go to the next chapter!!

Chapter 6: Punishment #1

Sakura have awoken from the sun's ray, since it was early in the morning. She knew she was going to suffer, because of the punishment she's going to be in………

"I can't believe I'm receiving a punishment on my second week………it's not fair that I can't talk back at the prince!! He got a snobby fiancée too!! I wish I could strangle her REALLY hard, but I can't torture the prince's fiancée."

Sakura got up from her lovely bed and went to the bathroom to do the regular morning routine.

She got out of the bathroom after ten minutes of washing her hair, brushing her teeth, washing her face, getting dress, and brushing her hair.

Sakura is wearing an emerald green tank top with glitter on the straps and a picture of a cherry blossoms made out of many gems on the tank top. She wore jean shorts that were faded blue, and it was measured out to about 8 inches from top to bottom. She walked downstairs to the kitchen to make breakfast before she has to face Syaoran with her punishment.

Sakura took out the recipe book and looked something up to make for the entire Li family and the guests. She looked up at the book and found something delicious that will delight the entire house.

"This may be a dessert, but I think it's suitable to be a breakfast for me." Sakura smiled after she said that, and start taking out the food used to make this.

(For people who are dying to know what the food is, visit this link http://www.geocities.com/chocolate_paradyce/choccherrypie.html and then you'll find out what it is. I have never tried making it, but if you do, tell me how it taste like ^ - ^!!)

Sakura took out the food and began reading the whole recipe first. When she saw the time that needs to be done, she was surprised, but she looked at the clock, and saw that she have woken up indeed at 7:00 a.m.

"I'm lucky that no one wakes up until 9:00! Whew!! That's really close timing."

Sakura began by turning on the oven to heat up to 350 degrees. She took out a large bowl, filling in the bowl with flour, sugar, and salt. Then she stirred the mixture together, and added some butter into it until the mixture crumbs a little bit.

She firmly press the mixture on the pie plate, and then she bake the first part of the recipe until the whole pie is completely golden brown, which meant it will be crunchy. She continued the recipe throughout the whole two hours.

~~~Two hours later~~~

Sakura began garnishing the pie with whipped cream and cherries, and then she finished baking the whole pie. She sat on the table, waiting for the other people in the whole palace to come down and try out her new recipe out of the book.

Finally, after a few minutes, she saw someone coming through the kitchen door. It was Syaoran, with his mother following behind him.

"Sakura-chan, what have you made for breakfast dear?"

Sakura pointed to the big pie on the counter, saying, "Chocolate Cherry Pie. First time I have ever made it. I think it's suitable to be breakfast, so---"

The four sisters popped out of nowhere and saw a delicious pie waiting to be eaten.

"Ohh!! A pie!"

"Sakura must have made it!!"

"It has to be delicious!!"

"Let's dig in!!"

The four sisters jumped onto their chairs and started eating part of the chocolate cherry pie Sakura had made.

Meanwhile, two other people came in the kitchen and saw the four sisters eating something very viciously, since some of the food were flying.

"It taste fabulous Sakura-chan!!"

"I agree! Yum! Chocolate!!"

"You're such a great cook!!"

"Make one more!! It tastes so fabulous!!"

Sakura sweat-dropped and Yelan chuckled a little at the sisters' excitement on just one food. Syaoran, Eriol, and Tomoyo were watching aside, also sweat-dropped watching the Li sisters eat so hungrily!

"I guess I better take the one I made while I was making that one...……boy, I knew that I might need another one."

Sakura took out the pie from the fridge and set it next to the Li sisters' area. Yelan, Syaoran, Eriol, and Tomoyo sat down on the area of the new pie and started eating.

Sakura opened the fridge and took out an apple to eat first, since she knew it tasted good, since she took a little bite of the pie earlier before she gave it to everyone.

~~~After breakfast~~~

Sakura was caught in the comments of the Li sisters again, and they played with her cheeks, face, and her hair.

"You're such a cutie Sakura-chan!"

"You are so cute and you're such an excellent cook!"

"Wow!! I totally wish I could be you!!"

"You're just so adorable to be ignored!!"

After Sakura got out of the hardship with the sisters, everyone left except for Syaoran, who was waiting by the doorway.

"Sakura, upstairs in my room now." Syaoran didn't say it really mean, so he doesn't scare Sakura away from the world.

Sakura followed Syaoran up the stairs and into his room. Syaoran closed the door behind them, so no one will know what Sakura's punishment was.

Syaoran sat on the bed, patting on the spot next to him for Sakura to sit. Sakura sat down quickly, getting over the punishment that she's about to face.

"Your punishment isn't that bad right now. Your punishment is just answering some questions, and I have to do something to you after the questions, okay?"

Sakura nodded, so Syaoran carried on to his questions about yesterday.

"If you answer the question falsely, then you will have to get another punishment. So, about last night, how were you with the man? I remember recalling that Qing-Ying told me a different story that you just ran away with the man. Is that true?"

`I don't want Qing-Ying to hang all around my back, so I have to lie to keep them together. I don't deserve to be serving Syaoran or loving him. I'm developing unknown feelings for him………but why?' Sakura shook her head as soon as I finish thinking quickly.

"All right then Sakura. You still get another punishment still that you were with that guy, and you weren't being loyal with me. You got off easily, that was suppose to be two punishments………but I changed my mind, you are getting two punishments, first one is two days from now. Second punishment is next week on this exact day. Got that clear!"

Sakura nodded her head.

"Good, now I have to practice kissing you, since Qing-Ying thinks I'm not a suitable kisser for her."

Syaoran pressed his lips unexpectedly to Sakura's, and they were having a sweet moment.

`I wish that this kiss means something else then practicing. I love kissing Syaoran, but he's not my fiancé. Mm………I am never going to get a lover ever. My heart stays with Syaoran forever, and no one can take that away from me.'

After Syaoran broke up the kiss, he felt a different feeling with Sakura then with Qing-Ying.

`Her lips are more warm them Qing-Ying's, but that's impossible! I only known Sakura for about one week, and I start to feel different feelings for both of them. I'm lucky that they are okay with Qing-Ying being my fiancée. I could have Sakura as a concubine too, so I can have many children!!'

Syaoran kissed Sakura again and they filled the kiss with more passion and more feelings, though both of them didn't know that they are feeling deep into each other.

~~~After dinner~~~ (Sorry for the long jump, but something special is going to happen.)

Sakura walked into the gardens, and again, Syaoran was following Sakura behind the whole time. Sakura walked all the way to the Sakura tree, and again, whenever Sakura appears near it, it began raining cherry blossoms again.

"Hello Sakura tree. I wish I were like you. Today's my eighteenth birthday, and unluckily, I didn't feel special like most people who are turning eighteen. I guess it is fate that my birthday's like this."

A few cherry blossoms fell on top of her head, making her laugh.

"Thanks for cheering me up Sakura tree. I guess I'm not lonely now since I have you and the rest of the Li family. Though they order me around, I like being around people."

The wind blew softly, letting Sakura's hair became unloose and her hair flying with the wind.

"I'm glad you are planted here, you give me a piece of quiet moments at night time. I'll never let you fall from this garden. I promise you that Sakura tree."

What Sakura didn't know what that Syaoran heard her whole conversation with the tree and her birthday.

`Why didn't she tell me today is her birthday? I gave her a punishment too, but it was lucky it wasn't severe. I got to talk to her now.'

Syaoran walked closer to Sakura, standing behind her.

Sakura felt a hand turned her around and saw amber eyes staring at her.

"Hi Syao---"

"What didn't you tell me today was your birthday?"

Sakura lowered her head and mumbled, "I didn't want to ruin your day, so I didn't tell anyone. Even Tomoyo probably forgot my birthday is today………I don't want to trouble anyone………"

"But still Sakura, I have to give you a present!"

Sakura raised her head and smiled, "You have all ready given me one Syaoran."

Syaoran got really confused, and wondered why? "When did I give you one?"

Sakura chuckled a little at Syaoran's face, but afterwards, smiled. "You gave me a reason to live now. Before, I was planning suicide, but after you picked me for the contest, I have a reason now. To serve you and have your family is happy forever, even if I have to give my life away."

Syaoran never thought of that as a present, but it does surprise him.

"Come on inside, I'll let you in my room to sleep tonight. I heard there's thunder tonight at around midnight."

Sakura winced at hearing the word "thunder" in her mind now.

"Sakura, please don't wince especially at a time like this. You want to go in my room tonight?"

Sakura nodded and they walked back inside the palace and to Syaoran's room.

~~~2 a.m. in the morning~~~

Sakura opened her eyes, since she had a nightmare and the thunders weren't making Sakura any better………she accidentally hit Syaoran when she woke up, and Syaoran was awake by Sakura.

"Why did you have to hit me Sakura?"

Sakura sat up and breathe evenly. "I had a nightmare and the thunder made it even worse. I was about to hit something, and that something turned out to you. Gomen!"

The thunder crashed and Sakura jumped off the bed and onto her butt.

"Ow! Why does thunder frighten me? I thought my fears of thunder were gone, but they came back."

Syaoran wrapped his arms around Sakura's neck and they both lay on the bed.

"Come on closer, I don't mind. Just don't strangle me when you're grasping me, okay?"

Sakura nodded and she shut her eyes, feeling the comfort of being in Syaoran's arms and with Syaoran on the same bed.

~~~To Be Continued~~~

Kazeko: Whew!! That took about two hours and 30 minutes just to do this chapter!! Yay!! I'm finally done with this chapter!!

Please review and tell me if you want to be in the "Qing-Ying's Bashing Fun," where anyone who wants to bash my character, Qing-Ying!! She's so evil, so let's be evil and torture her!!

If you're in, the information is on top where the chapter begins. If you're kind of lazy to do it, here's the info here:

Pen name:

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Don't worry about which anime to pick from; I can always research the characters and anime when I don't know it so well. I will make my own too!! Here's an example of mine:

Pen name: Kazeko

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Fave anime(s) *max are 6*: Cardcaptor Sakura, Chicchana Yukitsukai Sugar, Yu Yu Hakusho, Chobits, Rurouni Kenshin, and Sister Princess.

Fave characters: Syaoran, Sakura, Eriol, Tomoyo, Saga, Sugar, Salt, Ginger, Hiei, Kurama, Jin, Touya (YYH), Chii, Minoru (sp.) guy who helps Hideki that's 12, guy that's Hideki's neighbor, Kenshin, Kaoru, Yahiko, Sanosuke, Karen, Wataru, Chikage, Aria, and Marie.

Be sure the characters list isn't too long 6 - ^!!!

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