D. N. Angel Fan Fiction ❯ Angelic Chains ❯ Attention ( Chapter 11 )

Ok, so this is the eleventh chapter? Twelfth? I'm not quite sure, I've lost track. Well, on with this chapter. And I've yet to get my computer fixed -_-… I will eventually. I picked up I think four errors in the last chapter, all of them spelling errors, or I used the wrong word. Like one was, I meant “her” but instead I put “here”. Those kinds of errors are really annoying. I guess I'll just have to pick through this with a finer tooth comb then I have been doing. Ok..i'm rambling now.

 

Without further ado “Angelic Chains”.

Oh, and I would like more views. The story has over 630 hits, and I have only 5 reviews. I think the math on that is a bit off. Did I miss a post-it going around saying not to review, or what? REVIEW! It won't kill you to leave your opinion.

And to those FEW people who have reviewed, I thank you.

 

OH, and this is good news. It may take some time, but I've created characters for the story. They are digital, I used a doll maker to help me, it's just basic things such as what they all really look like. I have one for Naomi, four or five for Kaily, and five for Tae, maybe more. I have to create one for Jodie. But I have to go back through the chapters to see if I messed up on anything, like the length, or color of hair, and eye color. I don't think I did, but whatever…

 

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“You all are absolutely insane! Did that not show you just how much she is in need to medical care! She is making up these stories! She's obviously trying to hide something from us or herself.” Doctor Chase stood with his hands on the hood of the car. Tae reeled back like a cobra. More tears poured down her face.

“I'm not lying! Brandon was real, and Johnathan and everyone! My baby brother was real, stop telling me he's not when I helped him into life, then watched him die!” Kaily put his hand over her eyes then shot a dirty look at Doctor Chase.

“Move or I'm hitting you.” Jodie gave a strangled cry, and a defiant look crossed the Doctor's face.

“I bet this Brandon never existed. Can't you see she's making all of this up! You're not helping her by encouraging this! She's just going to get worse!” Tae then screamed. Loud and long. Bright red lights entered the jeep.

“Fuck!” Kaily turned to Doctor Chase.

“Move or you die.” He didn't move. “Mother fucker move!” The cop cars turned into the large parking lot. Some nurses came out. Kaily shifted into gear, Doctor Chase backed up, letting his fear and instincts take over. Just as Kaily pressed on the gas he jumped sideways out of the jeeps path.

“Daddy! You didn't hit him did you?!” Jodie balled out.

“No, just barely missed him. Let get out of this dump.” He took his hand from Tae's eyes and took her hand in his. Her skin had cooled down somewhat. She closed her eyes, leaned on the glass of the window, silently sobbing with large tears streaking down her face. He reached over and put his palm against her face, using his thumb to wipe away the reforming tears. She leaned into his hand, and new tears came to replace the ones swept away. They passed the sirens and shouts, swerving into traffic, taking the closes route out of town.

“Tae, get in the back and change. Naomi help her, Jodie come up here.” Kaily gave orders just as soon as the lights of the police were lost behind them. Naomi and Jodie helped Tae crawl into the back, and Jodie crawled into the front seat.

“We're so dead once this is all over. I bet our faces are going to be posted all over the T.V. How the hell are we going to get out of this? How's this going to affect our school life? Are we going to have police records? Are we going to…”

“Jodie shut the hell up! You're not helping!” Kaily lost his cool. The road was passing at 60 miles an hour, and Jodie whining was trying his patience. He looked up into the rearview mirror to see if they were being followed and got a sight of something that was far different. The gown that had been tied rather tightly, giving Naomi a hard time came undone and softly slipped of Tae's shoulders, sliding down revealing a curve of a supple breast, her protruding ribs, a flat stomach, a protruding hip bone and slender small thighs. Almost every bit of flesh and skin exposed was covered in small crisscrosses. All the larger scars covered her stomach and back. Naomi quickly slid the bra on and clipped it closed then threw her shirt over her head. He tore his eyes away from the sight to give her some dignity.

“Sorry Kaily, I guess I just lost it.” Jodie looked like a lost puppy. This was probably the first time she had ever done anything against her parents.

“Don't worry about it. Anyone could loss it under pressure.”

“We're good back here. Do you want her up in the front seat?” He thought for a moment. He then turned to Jodie. She was staring at him and nodded to the unasked question in his eyes. She slipped into the back and helped Tae to the front. Once in the front he pulled the seat belt buckle across her. She had stopped crying but looked helpless and defeated.

“Ah! We have some visitors! And not the good kind.” Naomi was spazzing. Red and blue lights made their way across the dashboard.

“Everyone buckled in?” He checked Tae's again before speeding up to 80 mph.

 

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The police boxed them, the drivers' side up against the divider. Slowly I pushed the red button that released the seatbelt and slide it to its holder, then un did the lock.

“I'm sorry everyone.”

“Kaily!” The door opened and I leaned out towards the speeding ground. Surely god would welcome me in this time, or was the fact that I killed myself going to keep me out again. Something heavy leaned onto my legs and stopped me from falling any further.

“No. please, let me go.” I pushed at the offending extremity, but it was too strong and I was pulled up and back into the jeep.

 

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“Kaily. What's she doing?” Naomi had watched the seat belt retract and the lock pulled up. Kaily watched out of the corner of his eye, not wanting to take his eyes off the road.

“I'm sorry everyone.” It was barely a whisper.

“Kaily!” The car door swung open.

“Shit! Take the wheel!” He lurched forward over her to grab the collar of her shirt. Jodie sprung up behind him to take the wheel. She feebly fought at his hands, but gave in when she tired from struggling.

“No. Please, let me go.” The small whimper was drowned out by the roar of passing traffic. The police car had swerved away at the last minute when the door opened. They backed off giving Kaily room to bring her back into the car.

“Kaily! Divider!” Jodie screamed. He pulled them up in time to see the door ripped clean off by the concrete divider.

“Holy shit that was close.” Naomi just stared at them as if she was waiting for their heads to suddenly fall off. He positioned Tae on his lap while he scooted over to the passengers' seat letting Jodie take the drivers seat.

“Jodie, next time. Please give me more of a warning, and more time.” Kaily leaned back into the seat.

“You're expecting a next time?' Was all Naomi said.

“Man, I'm so going to get my license revoked for this. I've only had it for two months!” She smiled suddenly though.

“You're telling me. This is the third vehicle I've damaged in some way. And this time it wasn't even my fault!” Jodie shot her a dirty look. Kaily turned his attention from the bickering girls to the one in his lap. She was looking longingly out at the road. He held her tighter, hugging her to his chest, then glared at the road as if it was its fault she wanted to kill herself.

With the passing of the divider the police were cut off from them. Traffic had forced the police to stay on the lower ramp, them on the higher ramp.

 

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Jodie slowed to a stop at the side of the road. She and Naomi got out and stretched. Kaily carried Tae out and sat her on in the medium, then stretched himself. They had been in the jeep for three hours. They had stopped for gas twenty minutes ago, and they knew the cops would be notified and would be after them again soon enough and it would be dark soon. Everyone got back in, but Kaily took the wheel with the three girls in the back. He pulled onto the rode and took off. He was headed for the only place he knew the police wouldn't search. They traveled for another hour before Kaily pulled off the wood into a wood area. Soon a small run down cottage came into view. From the looks of it, it had certainly seen better days.

Before the car even slowed to a stop, Kaily jumped out and opened the backdoor. Jodie stepped out and he lifted Tae up.

“Come with me. Hurry, if this is going to work.” He left them trailing after him.

Surprisingly the inside looked like it was currently being lived in. The floors had rugs, the kitchen had plates, cups and food, the bedroom had a king size bed filled with blankets. Kaily walked in as if he knew the place and set Tae on the bed, under the blankets. Just before they had gotten back on the road they gave her a sedative. An hour later she still slept soundlessly. The three of them sat at the small kitchen table.

“Ok. This solely depends on you two. Tae won't last if we keep her traveling, so she's going to stay here with me. One of you two will take the jeep and leave it stranded farther down the road, while the other will take the car from back and both of you will continue on. You must go find Dark. He's the only one who can help her now. Either he saves her or she's spending the rest of her days in a psychiatric ward. And if she even ends up there, Dark will be the only one to be able to get her out.” Kaily could tell both Jodie and Naomi were nervous, but that couldn't be helped.

“You two have to move fast! Find him as fast as possible!

 

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“Daisuke, honey. Would you turn that up?”

“Sure mom.”

“…has commissioned a red alert. Four high school students have fled the police after breaking their friend out of the hospital. Their names are as follows.

Jodie Chase, 18

Naomi Rith, 17

Kaily Williams, 18

TerraSistine Water, 18

The last of the four, we have been told, is mentally instable, and requires medical observation. When told that, the four exited the hospital, almost running over a Doctor. If anyone has any information, they are urged to come forward.”

A picture of each teenager flashed by stopping on the last one. Two tanned fingers reached forward to sit on the picture of the white haired girl. Suddenly the dark haired man stood.

“Well, Tae. You got my attention. Where are you now though?”

 

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Ok. This chapter took a whole different twist then I thought it would. But with the way it turned out. It just showed me there are only three or four more chapters left till the story complete. The lemon will most likely be in the next chapter. Also I need help. I don't know the name of the town Daisuke and Dark live in. I have the first three books, but I can't find it in there. So please help. Thank you. And review!