D. N. Angel Fan Fiction ❯ Reverlations ❯ Vacation ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
Okay I got a positive response from the teaser so I've decided to write this story!!
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Summary: This is my rewrite of the To-To incident and Dark getting trapped in the mirror by sage of sleep!!! (Guess you wouldn't know what's going on in less you read the manga)
Disclaimer: Don't own them, but it'd be so cool if I did!
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“stuff ” talking
`stuff ' thinking
“Stuff” Dark talking
`Stuff 'Dark thinking or talking in Daisukes mind…um yeah
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“Daisuke LOOK!” Riku leaned over Daisuke, pointing to the beach, “Look, see that awesome hotel? That's where we're staying!!”
“Wow” `It really is big' Daisuke grinned as Riku started talking about how cool it was going to be. `Our field trip is five days and four nights, and the only thing I have to worry about is stealing the Towa-no-Shirube and then after that its pure vacation, that means five days and four nights with Riku. Thank you god!' `Daisuke!! Stop having those kind of thoughts aboutRiku' `HUH!!! I-I'm not thinking about Riku' `Ican see everythought you have,remember!'' “I'm not thinking that about Riku!” Daisuke said out loud blushing.
“Huh? What about me?” Riku said turning.
“WHA-Nothing!!”
“Come one I want to here it!”
“It was nothing honest!!!”
Just around the corner Risa stood listening to their conversation frowning. ----
“After you check in you're free to do what ever you want till 5 o'clock. If you want to come to the beach meet me in the lobby we'll go as a group. Oh and please stay out of the woods, there are wild bears back there.” The teacher said.
“No way do you really think bears are back there Daisuke.” Riku said laughing. “Daisuke? Daisuke!!”
“What? Bears? No…Of course not”
“What were you looking at? The light house?”
“Hmm…Yeah.” Daisuke said looking at the lighthouse still. Then he felt it, his eyes narrowing, `Dark?' `Yeah you felt it to?' `Yeah I keep feeling like we're being watched. Like someone knows my every single move…'
Not to far away, Hiwatari Satoshi, stood smirking looking into a small mirror where there was perfect picture of Daisuke walking along side Riku, `Soon Dark, Soon.'------
“This room is so..AWESOME!!! Did you see this view? Let's go down to the beach with everyone okay” Riku said looking at Risa, “Hey are you okay?”
“Yeah just a little sick.” Risa said forcing a grin.
“Okay I'll get you some medicine. Be back in a bit!”
Risa and flopped on to her bed, she sighed. `What's so great about boy friends? I'm not jealous of Riku. I rejected Daisuke over and over…What's wrong with me?'-------
Daisuke sat at the top of the lighthouse finishing his letter, “Tonight at 9:00 I will steal the Towa-no-Shirube. “The guide to eternity”-Dark
`Even on vacation a phantom thief has work to do. Mom wouldn't quite bugging me about it.' Daisuke thought looking at up at the statue of a bird.
`That raggedy looking statue at the topof the light house? Would anyone even knowif we tookit?'
“Well it belongs to the hotel's owner, so we have to send out a warning card. I feel sorry for it, all beaten up like that. I think it must be very valuable. We'll take better care of it.” Daisuke smiled, looking at it.
`THIS IS LAME! No one's even going to know that we stole from a place in the middle of nowhere like this! Boring jobs like this go against my policy.'
Daisuke sweat dropped as he handed the letter to Wiz so he could deliver it. “Policy? You know Dark, phantom thieves aren't supposed to care whether or not they get noticed.” Daisuke's eyes widened `There it is again. Do you feel it?'
`Is it Satoshi?'
`It doesn't feel exactly like him, like there's something different added. It's like the feeling I get when….' Daisuke trailed off as a dream he had been having flashed through his mind. “Captured” He shook his head vigorously, `Dark's not gonna get captured.'
`Daisuke?'
“It's nothing come on. Its 7:00, it will be dark in an hour and we have to get ready.”
As Daisuke climbed down the steps of the lighthouse, and headed across the beach he thought to himself, `It was a dream, just a dream. It's nothing to worry about, it's impossible that Dark would be captured. That he wouldn't be around anymore... What's starting to worry me is that sound… that weird echo I hear every time I feel whatever it is watching me… It seems like it gets louder each time. Hey!! I just thought about it, what happened to the earring we stole yesterday. The “Sage of Sleep.” That's weird the last thing I remember is Dark wearing it.' Daisuke was snapped out of his ravine, when he heard is name shouted, he turned around and saw one of Riku's friend, Ritsuko, running up to him.
“Hey Daisuke, are you going back up to the hotel?” She asked.
“Yeah. Why?”
“Could you bring these to Risa, Riku asked me to do it because they started playing a game she likes.” She said stretching out her hand which held a box of medicine.
“Why Me? I can't just go barging into a girls room!! I'm a man!!” Daisuke shouted, turning red.
“If you say so,” Ritsuko said giggling, “Just bring them to her it's perfectly fine.” She said over her shoulder as she jogged away. “THANKS!”
“If I say so? HEY!” He sighed and started walking up the beach to the hotel. --------
“Be right back guys! I have to get my bathing suit!” Riku yelled turning to go back to the hotel. ------
Daisuke knocked carefully on the door.
“Riku did you leave…” Risa stopped talking as she looked at who was at the door. “Daisuke!? Rikus not here she went to the beach”
“That's not why I- Here! This is for you. I heard you weren't feeling good.” Daisuke handed the box to her.
“For me?”
“Yeah from Riku, hope you feel better. Bye!” He started walking away.
“WAIT”
He turned back around,”Huh?”
“I need to talk to you. Not out here though, come in.”
“In your room, bu-but I can't it's not right!” He said taking a step back.
“Come on. There's no one around.” She pulled him into the room shutting the door. She placed the medicine on table.
“So Risa what did you want to talk about.” Daisuke said looking around like there were video cameras watching him.
“I need to know.” Risa said softly.
“Risa?” Daisuke stopped twitching and focused on her.
Risa turned around suddenly grabbing his shirt, “Do you really like Riku? It doesn't seem right to me!” All the sudden she heard the sound of the door unlocking, and quickly shoved herself and Daisuke into the closet in front of one of the beds.
Riku walked into the room. “Risa?” `That's weird I thought I heard her talking.'
Daisuke gulped, `What is Riku doing here,… at the WORST possible time?' He was currently plastered against the wall, with Risa in between his legs pressed against him.
“Maybe she's at the vending machine.” Riku said to herself. She opened up the door and leaned out, then looked down the hallway where the vending machines were.
“I think it's safe now Daisuke.” Risa whispered.
“Okay you go first.” Daisuke pushed the door open with his foot and Risa started to get up. “Whoa watch your feet!” Without thinking Daisuke shoved her lightly; she had almost stepped right on and in between his legs. He quickly saw his mistake and tried to catch her but they both fell out of the closest and onto the bed. Risa was pinned under him, his hands on either side of her face.
He heard a noise to his left, and turned his head, there was Riku, just staring at them. “What's going on?”
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Bwha ha ha ha ha!!!!! CLIFFIES What shall happen next???
An: Up till now the story has been virtually the same as the manga except with a few changes; next chapter is when everything goes in to my plot.
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