Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Appraisal ❯ Appraisal 1 ( Chapter 1 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

Appraisal

By SuperGirl

Love seemingly is a force in which we look for our whole lives without knowing it. We sometimes find lust and not love. This is a story about love, forgiveness and seeing the truth about your self. My friends and readers I am going to bring you to a parallel world than other stories like this. We will see the other round if you will, some `what ifs' and different perceptive.

This is a new view. Just on an old theme, just simply love.

It had been another hard summer. School, work then sadness. Her friend had decided to spend more time with her boyfriend than her. It always happened when she got a boyfriend she forget about her friends until her heart was broken. It was even harder on her because before summer started she had a hard break up with her ex-boyfriend. To top that off her best friend was dating his brother.

She had tried to date some guys over the summer, but she still found herself not interested in them and well… boring. The first guy was a young fire fighter. He was too tall and she became quickly paranoid where his eyes were. He towered over her by a foot and three inches. That and the guy gave her serious neck strain from trying to make eye contact with him.

She then latter dated a very blonde headed man. He was a bit easier to get along with. So on the first date they spent it at the theme park. Latter they had dinner and a movie at her house. In the middle of A few Good Men, he well… went down on her. She was very mad at him for ruining a good Tom Cruise movie for her. That and she had no idea latter where her bra ended up.

So after a horrid summer with summer school to get her finishing credits in college and other things going wrong at the home front in the labs. It wasn't her summer. She was still in love with the young man who stole her heart. She was his first girlfriend and he turned to a sex fiend. Yet, she still cared about the guy. When she seen him they do nothing, but argue. When he was away she missed him. She didn't know why either.

So she was off to find someone or anything to fill the gap in her heart.

He hated everything. He wanted to be cold, uncaring, he had lost everything. He wished he was dead, but that fantasy would only make the root that caused him to be this way happy. He hated happiness; he wanted the monster that took everything away from him to suffer.

He was powerful and the meaning of pride. He was sad though, deeply. He had no friends, no true friends. He had followers, but not friends. He was miserable and knew it. He hated being miserable, he dare never to tell anyone. He was jealous of other who found someone to call their own. He had even killed someone who was showing affection to another in public. He had to get away.

He had finally decided to escape and head to earth. He didn't know why, but he had herd the closes thing to his race was the humanoid earthlings. He had even heard a rumor there was a half-sayain half earthling child there. Perhaps he fines his happiness here.

After a long trip his craft landed in a desert and a group of men had landed shortly after his landing as if they knew he was going to be there. He opened the hatch to the small craft and got out. The men braced themselves. He ignored them and stretched out cramped from his trip there.

"We knew you were coming sayain so give up!" shouted an annoying one in orange. Well, correction they were all in orange but one. He looked at the men and arched an eyebrow. "I don't have time for you earthlings, do tell me though. None of you are female correct. If so I will leave in regard to ugly inhabits on this rock."

The men looked a bit shock at this statement. A short amount of quietness passed then one spoke up. "How dare you say I am ugly Troll man!" The statement confused the man. "I could careless about your opinion of your self woman." He was upset the planets people were hideous. "I am a man!" the person shouted back. "The I suggest you cut your hair off and act like one." The man was furious at the alien and shot off in air at him.

The alien ignored him and moved out of the way of the man who then plummeted into his spacecraft and knocked himself unconscious. "Idiot, I swear I hope the rest of the inhabitance have some brains." The men who were still yards away were a bit shocked at the actions of this so called dangerous man. One of the men floated down to face the alien.

"Who are you?" he asked the alien before him. "I am the sayain known as Vejita" The man raised a brow. "I thought you were here to destroy our planet. He look up at the strange guy with even stranger hair. "I am not here for world domination, that is more boring than you think. I am here for other reasons. I assure you It has nothing to do with death." Vejita noticed the man was calmed from this.

"What are you here for then?" He asked the alien. "I am simply here to find someone." The warrior blinked. "Who?" he asked. "A female." He stated. "What is her name, maybe we can help you find her." The man suggested. "I do not know her name, but when I See her I will know her."

A few weeks had passed and Bulma had received a call from a friend of hers. "I don't understand these guys. They brought the alien into my home; he eats as much as Goku. I can not afford to feed them both, there are not enough coupons in the eastern hemisphere!" She couldn't help but laugh at her friend. "I will be over to see what is going on in person. I still cannot believe Goku is an alien. Is that guy as nice as Goku?" There was a pause. "Just come over and see for your self Bulma."

The ride from her home to Goku's house was almost an hour long. She landed her plane far from the house. When she got out Chichi her friends wife who she was earlier speaking with, was standing there. She was waiting for Bulma.

"You have no idea how it's been!" She yelled walking to Bulma. "Two Goku's almost, this one though has an attitude and keeps having Goku take him to bars and clubs. He even took our son with him to a dance club!" Bulma's eyes widen. "I will not have my husband showing this man to bar and other place and my son with him. To top all of that off they fight all day, EAT and then go out all night! I will not have this!"

Bulma was a bit shocked at this. "Goku has been going to clubs with the alien invader?" Her friend's wife was hysterical. "Where are they now?" The woman before her pointed to the mountains behind her. "I will go see what is going on okay, and take something to calm yourself down."

She walked up the small hill to a larger on then up some more on the small part of the mountain. She could see down into the valley in the middle two men fighting faster than see could see. She stepped closer to the edge where she slipped and let out a screech. She never fell onto the rocks a few feet below. Her friend Goku had caught her instantly. He sat her down on the low plain area in the mountain where they fought.

She was a bit scared still from the incident. " Thank you Goku. You saved me." She was trying to catch her breath and noticed the man who she seen fighting her friend was floating a bit in the air above them. He stared at her a bit interested. "Who is this Kakarott?" He asked Goku. "Cake er rott?" she asked looking at Goku bewildered. "Just don't ask it's a long story, but this is my friend Vejita, he is an alien from space."

Vejita landed behind Goku and looked closer to the female. "You're an alien to Kakarott." She then noticed the tail on the man behind Goku. "He… has a tail!!!" she shrieked. "Yeah so, I had one Bulma, you didn't freak out about mine." She appeared in front of the sweaty Goku and grabbed his collar and pulled him down to her level. "TONIGHT IS A FULL MOON!" Goku gulped at this remembering Gohan's first time seeing the moon at the fullness.

"We have to cut it off!" Vejita was shocked at this. "No we do not have to cut anything off!" She looked at the man now noticing his appearance, he was wearing some of Goku's sweats and they were huge on the man. "Bulma, I have a question for you." She turned her attention back to Goku. "I need help, Chichi and I can not afford to have three sayains in the same house, can he stay at Capsule corp. with you?" She thought for a second. "Alright, but what is a `say ins'?"

{A/N: please review or e-mail me at my new e-mail at Purestloveever@hotmail.com- SG - and tell me what you think}