Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Curse of Bloody Mary ❯ Curse of Bloody Mary ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
I love ghosts!
I DO NOT OWN DBZ AND THE STORY THIS IS MADE FROM IS A LEAGEND SO IT BELONGS TO NO ONE!
Believe it or not I’m a big fan of ghost legends and other paranormal things, in this story I’m using my favorite that a lot of teens and kids might have heard of. I wanted to put this up on Halloween but I never got to finish my last Halloween fiction School Spook Out, so I’ll repost the that fiction next Halloween and get it completed. As for now think of this as a make up for it.
This fiction is rated for Vegeta’s dirty mouth, and also for any little children who might get scared of this kind of thing. Trust me I heard of a few people who are scared to go near mirrors because they heard the story of Bloody Mary.
Also I never get to share my wide knowledge of Urban legends and ghost stories with anyone, At the end of each chapter I’ll give you some information on some of the well known Urban legends and even superstitions.
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Curse of Bloody Mary
Chapter 1: Sleepover and an old Legend
&n bsp; The lights of the little bedroom were off, the light blue painted walls now look a gray blue from the dark. Outside a thunder storm was raging making everyone glad that they were inside the warm Saiyan Royal Palace, the pouring rain could be seen slightly through the large window that’s outside was coated with a layer of rain water. In the middle of the room sitting on the black carpet were four figures hidden by the shadows, the thunder lit suddenly casing shadows about the room giving off details of the figures sitting. Around them obects like crinkled up bags and cans were littered on the floor, beside each of them was a different color sleeping bag. Finally movment was seen among one of the figures going to grab something next to them, a click was heard and a beam of light cut through the darkness of the room. In the lights beam showed its holder to the other three, a young girl in light purple pajamas with long shoulder length hair and wearing purple slippers was the one holding the flashlight. Her bright blue eyes full of child like amusement as she scanned her three friends sitting in a circle near her; she gave a little smirk and began her story.
“Years ago there was a mother and daughter who lived in a little village, the daughters name was Mary and was a sweet and innocent young girl who everyone knew. One day however Mary was found laying on the ground, they took her to a doctor who found that she had fell into a coma. After weeks of her not even making a movement the doctor declared she was dead, a funeral was held and she was buried. However a few days after Mary’s mother could hear screams coming from the grave, nobody believed her. Finally Mary’s coffin was dug up and they looked inside the wooden box, what they saw was a sight to chill your bones. Mary lay with her eyes wide with terror and her finger nails torn off and bleeding as was her face and arms, the top of the coffin was marked up as if someone had been scratching it. Mary had been buried alive and she had been screaming from inside the coffin.”
“Now they say that if you stand in a dark bathroom with the door locked, and say her name three times she will appear in the mirror. She will appear walking down a flight of rotting wooden steps. Her face and arms still bleeding and her face as pale as power with the look of a dead person in her eyes, if she appears with a teddy bear or a rose you are safe. However if she appears holding a knife you must get out of the bathroom before she reaches the bottom of the steps she will kill you, she might also suck you into the mirror or terrify you to death. Many have done the ritual just to prove their bravery, however it is said that whether you see Mary depends on the strength of your sixth sense. The stronger your sense the more likely you are to see Mary and see her clearly, but the few of those that have seen Mary clearly…were never able to speak of it, either from being shocked mute…or found on the floor covered in bleeding cuts!”
Lighting again flashed in the room but was illuminated when the lights were finally turned on, seven year old Chi Chi in her red nightgown and bunny slippers, was shaking with fear and clinging to seven year old Kakarrot who was clothed in navy blue pajamas looked a little un nerved. Bulma was sitting with the flash light still on, glaring at a boy the same age as her who was clad in black pajamas and still had his finger on the light switch.
“Vegeta what did you do that for!? It was a great touch for the story!” Bulma wined turning the flash light off, a clash of thunder though not as loud or bright could be heard from outside lighting up the night sky. Vegeta snorted with annoyance while rolling his dark eyes at her, he looked with dry boredom at Kakarrot who was trying to calm a shaking Chi Chi down. Kakarrot himself still looked unnerved from the story, Bulma was just glaring at him for ruining the mood, what was with women and moods? Their parents had planned this stupid sleepover, Ranju was sick and couldn’t come and Kureenru was visiting a family member. That left Kakarrot who lived only one room from his own, Bulma who lived three blocks from the castle and Chi Chi who was on the other side of the naboorhood. Nappa was staying with Raditz Kakarrot’s older brother.
“Bulma that story was a load of bull and you know it” Vegeta said crossing his arms and gave her a deep scowl, he walked over to his black sleeping bag sat down on it and began eating a bag of barbeque potato chips at a alarming speed. Kakarrot who had finally calmed Chi Chi down was sitting on his own orange sleeping bag gobbling down cheese puffs; Chi Chi was just silently sipping her Coke. Bulma stood up her pajama shirt being a little long on her ruffed as she stood on her rose colored sleeping bag, her feet apart and her own arms crossed her blue eyes flashed with annoyance and anger. “I mean you’re into that science stuff your dad does right? My mom says people like that don’t believe in stuff like that, they say ghosts aren’t real” Vegeta said holding back the smirk that threatened to take over his face, “I mean have you ever MET anyone who ever did this ‘Bloody Mary’ thing Bulma?” he said now waiting for the screams or the thrown object that normally followed after he stuck his nose into things like this.
Bulma walked up to the boy and glared right into his black eyes; Kakarrot looked on to see if he would have to step in before anything broke, it was late after all, their parents had told them lights out hours ago but they had been quietly sitting in Vegeta’s room were they were to be sleeping, and pigging out on junk food for the passed three hours. Kakarrot looked at Vegeta’s digital alarm clock who’s red numbers blinked 3:00am; seeing that there was no way they would make a commotion at this hour and ruin the sleepover, Kakarrot grabbed a brownie from the tray that Vegeta’s mother had brought in and began eating while every so often gulping down can after can of Sprite.
“Vegeta that story was just for fun! Besides there are MILLIONS of theories of how that story is told” Bulma said waving her hand as she sipped her Coke, “I mean some stories say that she appears holding a baby, some say she was attacked in the street, some say she was a grown lady not a child” Bulma said counting off the stories she had read on the internet specially for the sleepover “Any the way the ritual is done is also widely different” she said as she noticed everyone looking at her.
“L…Like what?” Chi Chi asked trying to calm down; it was a sleepover after all and ghost stories were tradition at sleepovers, and she wanted it to be fun since it was her first. Bulma thought before speaking.
“Some say you have to say her name a hundred times or thirteen times, some say you have to say it with your eyes closed or holding a candle or knife. Another story says that whatever happened to her happened on Friday the thirteenth, and that summoning her on that day will leave you cursed with nightmares, or she’s kill you while your sleeping or the next time you enter a bathroom” Bulma said shrugging, “Some kids twist the story around to blend in with their situation to scare their friends, so I guess that one about Friday the thirteenth started up with some one adding that into the story” she said nibbling on a cookie she got from the pack next to her. Chi Chi just got more spooked by the many other stories, Vegeta just giving her a dry bored look.
“In other words this whole Bloody Mary thing is like that Candy Man story Kakarrot told before you?” Vegeta asked looking over at the younger Saiyan boy; Bulma just scratched her head
“You know that Candy Man thing came around when a movie with the same title came out? In the movie a person went into the bathroom and chanted Candy Man, and then he would come out of the mirror and kill the person with his hook hand. I think the whole Bloody Mary thing came from that movie” Bulma said shuttering “I saw that movie once when my mom told me not to, I have nightmares for a week” she said not even wanting to see the sequel to that creepy gory movie.
“Just as I thought its just a story created by someone who was a obsessed fan of that movie” Vegeta said walking right to Bulma and into her face while she was drinking her coke through a straw “That story is a load of bull as I said” he said looking her right in the eye; Bulma sipped her coke from the straw slowly, the removed her mouth from the straw looked Vegeta back in the eye and spat the soda in his face.
Vegeta reared back in surprise and tried to get the fizzy coke out of his eyes, Kakarrot just looked on with wide eyes and Chi Chi giggled now liking that the air in the room had more humor then the creepy feel it had due to the whole ghost talk. Little did they know that they were being watched outside, two figures shadowed from the darkened hallway looked on from the door which was opened a creak. They had been listening in the whole time of the younger kid’s talk of the Bloody Mary and were planning a bit of mischief already.
“Can you believe those four?” asked Nappa who was clothed in brown pajamas and standing bare foot outside the young prince’s door while Raditz looked in.
“Yah, everyone knows that story is an Urban Legend. Like that poisoned Halloween candy story about an old man with warts handing out candy with razor blades” Raditz said remembering last Halloween when his mother had told him and his little brother not to eat any candy until she looked at it.
Nappa could hear a new story starting up from Chi Chi; from what he could hear it was a story about some girl babysitting some kids, and getting a odd phone call from some guy saying “I’m coming to get you” every time he called.
“Hey Vegeta” Bulma voice could be heard a little muffed through the door “You keep going on about how Bloody Mary isn’t real even after it was dropped, how about you prove it mister tough guy?” Bulma said and Chi Chi gasping could be heard, a snort could be heard before Vegeta spoke,
“Alright you got yourself a deal Bulma, but if I’m right and nothing happens at all from then until morning tomorrow then I get to borrow that new game you got for your X Box” Vegeta said. Bulma sighed and spoke,
“Fine you can borrow it, but if something DOES happen then I get to borrow your new Manga book!” Bulma said.
“Since when do you like Gundam SEED?” Vegeta asked not knowing she liked that type of Manga, but then again it did have people in it created seeds so that is around the stuff she liked,
“I like a lot of Manga Vegeta, now you tell your story and then will head to the bathroom to summon Bloody Mary” Bulma said.
Nappa and Raditz looked at each other with grins on their lips and mischievous looks in their eyes, the little kids were going to try out the Bloody Mary legend. “Raditz my friend I hope you thinking what I’m thinking” Nappa said and the younger Saiyan grinned wider.
“Scare the hell out of Vegeta in front of his little girl friend? Wouldn’t even think about NOT doing it!” Raditz snickered, Nappa whispered something in Raditz and both boys took off into the dark hallway.
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Can anyone guess what Nappa and Raditz are up to?
Information on Urban Legends, and information about stories mentioned in this chapter:
Hey everyone, hope you liked chapter one of my story. Being a huge fan of Urban Legends I would like to state that all the stories the kids are telling are real stories told in campfires and sleepovers. Yes even the one about the Poison Halloween candy, but sadly since some crazy person might want to try doing it them selves people have to be careful since this story became wide spread on the internet and other sources.
And yes there is a movie titled Candy Man that most likely started the Bloody Mary story, there is even a sequel to that movie, and it’s really gory so no one with a fear of blood and disfigured bodies should watch it.
As for the Friday the Thirteenth thing that is yet another thing added to the myth. Actually the story of Friday the thirteen goes like this: They say in old times that on Friday twelve witches would get together, the thirteenth member would be the devil