Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Emerald Flame ❯ The Legendary Super-Sayjin ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Emerald Flame

BY: Majin_Broly

R: Gore, Violence, Lemon will be later. ( This is NOT a Yaoi story! This is M/F)

This is told from Broly's point of view (3rd person mainly)

'....' Thinking / Mental communication. ( Big words)

"..." Talking.
Chapter 1
The Legenedary Super-Sayjin

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Thanks to a review I decided to change this story from first person. I do appreciate any critisim to make my storys better so thank you: Nova Otaku, your comments helped after I read through it again.

I know most people who read this story quit after the first two chapters but if you read on this will become a great story. It's your choice though I have no ill feelings if you quit because it sounds stupid at first through the first two chapters but if you do read through this will become a story worth reading. ( And if you don't like my story or don't find it intersting PLZ Tell me why!? it's only to make this story good and improve myself as a writer.

And no I am not just some fucking pervet or dude abossed with killing, just making a story thats completely mine. No one has ever used Broly full scale ( as the good guy) or having him paired with someone other than in a yaoi story (which in my opinion is completely disgusting. * Shakes head in disgust*) But some people like it no offense to any of those who write and read it. But in my opinion its gotta be M/F.

Well im gonna quit boring you but continue to read this story. You will enjoy it because alot of those who continue to read do enjoy it.

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In a hospital a unfortunate woman screams and rages as she attempts to bring her son into this world. Despite the cries of doctors and nurses trying to get her to push she is spent. " Push you must! The child is almost out!" The doctor says trying to rile some fire back into this woman.

" I.....can't I am.....spent.....the child is......far to big." She rasps out in short bursts trying to keep her self from passing out.

" Please you must or the child may die! You cannot stop now it's far to close to the end!" The doctor pleads with her but truly the woman is spent. " Alright prepare to remove the baby during surgery. We'll put you under and do a quick surgery to get the child out." The woman nods weakly her eyes are heavy and lidded.

They bring in a drug to knock her out but as they prepare to inject her she snaps. She lets out a blood curdeling scream as the child inside her gives her power she cannot control. ' I demand life! I demand to be set free!' A voice yells in her head and with a mighty scream that only a woman in labor can scream she pushes the child out. The power she felt is drained from her as the child's umbillicall cord is cut. ' Ha,ha,ha yes I am FREEE!!!!' The voice calls to her head and the baby smirks but no one notices.

" Congragulations my dear the boy is alive and healthy!" The doctor says holding up a rather large child. " He weighs 15 pounds no wonder he was so much trouble!" The doctor laughs as he sets the child on the scale reading the number. But the child is not a butter ball at all besides for a little stomach the child is cut like a man. He has a full head of hair that is black spikes that drape over his face a little and cascade down to his back. They give the child to the woman.

" Finally your out....You better be worth the effort!" She says in a motherly tone as she lets the child drink from her breast hungrily.

" May we check his power mam." The nurse says bringing up a little device. The woman nods and the nurse holds it up and presses the button on the device. After a few blips a number appears. " No...That can't be right?" The nurse says not believeing the number. " I'll check again." Once again she presses it but the number is the same. " Bring me another scouter this one must be off." She says as another nurse fetchs a scouter.

" Why what is wrong? Is my child to weak?" The woman's eyes fall saddened. She truly expected something from her son.

" Oh no mam! That's not it just a little problem with the scouter." She says and holds up another scouter and pushes the button. She watches the number flash but her eyes widen and the scouter falls to the floor with a clang. " No way! That can't be!" She says in shock.

" What!? What is wrong with my son's strength!? I demand you tell me!" She yells but her throat is still sore. The nurse shakily hands her the scouter and she presses it at her son. The screen blips and a number appears. Power level: 10,000.

" 10,000!" She screams in hysteria as the father busts in. He is young and slightly concered but not for his wife but for his son.

" What! What is wrong!?" He yells and his wife's eyes are bulging out of their sockets.

" His power level is 10,000!" She screams and the father stumbles back.

" 10,000! That's not possible! Hes ten times as strong as the prince when he was born!" He yells in shock and pride for having such a powerful son. But his glory is short lived as soldiers appear in the hospital swiftly to get the child. He is a threat to those in power and will not be allowed to remain such a threat.

The child in her arms begins to cry slightly as he hears the wails of another baby down the hall. It is throwing a fit bawling and everyone on this floor can hear it. " Kakarot Quiet! Calm that child down!" A voice yells and the boy only begins to cry a little more as the wails grow.

" Quiet the boy!" His father yells as he sees his newborn son's weak crying. " I don't want him being weak by crying!" He says harshly and the baby only whimpers more. The father is about to yell at the mother to shut him up but two soilders arrive at the doorway.

" Take the child!" One soilder says entering the room.

" What! What do you want with my son!" He yells moving in front of them.

" This is order from Vegeta Ou! Your son is far to powerful and will be executed! We cannot let such a powerful sayjin live!" The one says but the father only yells. " Then die with your son!" The soldier says shooting an energy beam at him knocking him through the wall. He turns to the woman who is clutching her son tightly. " Give him up you can't win your far to exhuasted!" He tells her but she fights him anyway but she is thrown out of the building as well.

The soldier grabs the child by the foot and hoists into the air causing the child to wail. " By order of King Vegeta you are sentenced to death!" He tells the child as if he is reading his last rights. Then another soilder grabs a dagger from his side pocket. He draws the blade back and swiftly stabs the child through the chest. The child lets out a frantic scream but as the dagger is pushed deeper in the child's cries are snuffed out and he falls limp. " Trash!" The soilder grunts and tosses the bloody corpse out the hole he made, to join his parents.

The child falls down twoards the ground like garbage and hits a dumb pile outside with his father and mother. The father's body is twitching from muscle spasms and his mother is not moving. But as they lay there for hours the planet begins to shake and rumble. A explosive shockwave is felt around the whole planet waking the dead family. The mother's eyes open to her husbands whose arm moves slightly to her. As the explosion nears them the child lets out a scream. His eyes rolling back in his head as a barrier of his energy forms around himself. The father quickly grabs his sons leg and wifes arm as they are encompassed by their childs energy. The planet soon explodes but leaves them alive. They are libereated from the blast by their sons barrier of energy.

Though the universe does not know that within the child sleeps a power that will shake the very foundation of exsistance itself. The power within the child is something that will be feared throughout generations of people as the end of all life. The child's power is evil to the core with a burning need to kill for the rage he felt being stabbed and torn from his mother's arms.

As they float along in space twoards an unoccupied planet both of the childs parents see the twisted smirk forming on their one day old child. Then soon follows a cackle that only the bravest soul could stand to hear without shivering. The parents look at each other than to the child as his power manifests itself into him. The childlike body has changed from that of a boy to a monster.......

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( Years later something else evil has taken control...... This is one of the many planets where he has came for one thing. From bondage to the pinnacle of power he is free.)

" I AM THE LEGENDARY SUPER-SAYJIN!" Roared the mighty Legendary to the frightened enhabitants of the planet Trition. His golden aura shoots out surrounding his body, the air begins to swirl as if a hurricane was around him. Buildings are knocked to the ground, Trees are uprooted and splintered like toothpicks as the wind tears them apart. Then the planet itself shakes under the awesome power the ground cracks open and large chunks of dirt and stone are lifted into the ground by his ungodly power. The sky around him is a lightning storm of energy and electricty as it shoots from his body encircleing it it like a ring . The emerald flame around built around his heart is burning brightly kepping all of the emotions except rage, anger, and hatred from ever being placed in his heart. He can see the people run from him like a wildfire to the wind of the planet. His head is throw back laughing evilly his cackle causes their spines to shake with fright. His laugh dies down to a chuckle as his is mouth contorted into a sick grin. His eye's of pure white as the transformation to the form of legendary super-sayjin removes the coal black eyes into a pure white. The long black hair is now gold and sprays into every direction as it stands on edge. His already hulking form is now that of a giant. Standing with muscles bulging to the limit of his body stretching his pants which strangly grow with the transformation something he has yet to understand but he doesn't really care. "I am the God of Destruction Reborn!" His voice booms making the windows shatter as if a sonic boom passed through it. He has obliterated planets with a flick of the finger and not so much as an ounce of remource for any of it's unfortunate inhabitants. He was born to destroy! He was BORN TO KILL! Never has any emotion then the feeling of death and suffering touched his mind since being forced to kill and only killing more until it was all that he truly knew.

He rockets through the town tearring up the ground in his wake. Busting down a building with a swift kick to a support column. It falls right over him but he only lets his energy encompass his body as the buidling falls around to the ground. 'I love destorying things no matter how many times I do it. The rush of crushing something by your own hand is invigorating.' He walks slowly enjoying every step as he causes destruction with each step twoard a nearby building. He knocks anything in his way to the side. he can see the terrified faces of those inside and a laugh comes deep from his throat as he walks through the glass shattering it but holds the broken shards in the air with his energy. He sees the fear and it makes him feel alive. He snickers and with a burst of energy send the shards into them relashing in the screams as they are ripped open. He watches as the blood sprays and splatter everywhere and the smell of blood sends him further into a rage of destruction. He throws his arms out to his sides so that they are level and open his palms. He lets out another evil laugh as green energy blasts form in his hands. He blast into the air turning the building he was in to nothing but rubble. As the energy in his palms grows big enough He lets out a roar and clench his fists breaking the blasts into smaller ones and begins spin in the same moment. The blasts spin in a cyclone of death with his body leaving nothing but destructioin and death in his death cyclone's wake as he travels across the planet as a whirlwind of death. He ignores the screams of those below him as he slaughters them. Soon his energy is spent but with the sight of his destruction in his eyes it returns quickly. " HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!" He bellows out laughing as he more than enjoys the sight. The planet is nothing more than a wasteland of debrie and the smell of death permiates the air with a thick blanket of smoke, but through it all he enjoys it.

Although for him the planet was fun to destroy he would love nothing more than the thrill of battle with a warrior in combat. That will be apart of him forever as being born a sayjin, a pure breed warrior who's purpose is to fight no matter who or what is your opponent. The thirst for battle has been in his blood but will never be satisfied for no one will ever be as strong as he and no one will ever be. Slowly he lets his Legendary power go down returning him to normal. The golden hair returns to black and falls down to his back. His coal black eyes slowly fade back into view. His muscles return to their normal size. He flys back to his space ship which has been his current home for the past 3 years. His father built it intending to use it to travel the galaxy with him at his side as his lackey but fate saw fit that he kill him and use the ship for his own reasons.

Bound and controlled like a weak pawn, who's only purpose was to serve those he obeyed. Yet how could anyone ever hope to keep his power bound was foolish. Born a god and was raised like a monster were destined to clash. He was a free man but with no control over himself there was no hope of ever finding the peace that so many planets held.

No one could ever understand him and none would ever try. He was a monster and he loved it! Not a day escaped his mind as he could feel the blood flow freely fromt he wounds from his victims. Dripping down his arms and pouring down onto the ground as he laughed in their faces enjoying every....single......moment. Broly bellowed out in his manic laugh that would haunt his victims even up in heaven for eternity.

Slowly he watched the view of the ship come into sight and he lands at the entrance. His gold plated boots touch the only spot of grass left on the planet and he walks up the ramp and into the ship's captains chair or his throne which he placed their after he killed his father. The throne is one of solid gold and jade and the place he sat for days on end as his father manipulated his every whim with that a controller. He growls in rage as he sits back in it his golden armbands clank the chair as he rests his arms on the armrests.

" Computer set course for the next inhabitited planet." He says resting his head back against the chair finally home.

" Right away lord Broly." The computer's voice responds and Broly watch sas the screen flips to a lush green jungle planet and a grin spreads across his face. He listens as the rockets slowly fire up and lift off into the air and twoards the next planet.

" Computer Auto. pilot and prep the shower room for me." Broly commands as he stands up and heads for the shower in the back of the ship. His clothes fall from him as he heads to the shower. Broly doesn't care about them because the computer will pick them up and wash them by the time he's done. He tosses the blood red sash from his waist and drop the armbands to the floor with a loud clang. He kicks off the boots and drop my pants. He tosses the golden necklace from his neck to the floor as well as he makes it to the door. He walks in naked and he upwraps a brown furry tail from his waist and let it freely swish about as he hears the shower turn on and the lights as well. He opens the door to the shower and steps inside letting the water pelt his body. 'It's lucky that I learned how to get out of the transformed state or I would never fit in the shower.' Broly chuckles in his head. He barely fits though as he is tall and still huge even without the increadably bulky muscles of Legendary, which makes it hard to wash himself. Thankfully sayjins had tails so he can wash his back and his backside. It's hard enough for him to get one of his arms to touch his back let alone wash it. He slumps down in the stall letting the water relax him. Slowly his eyes close as he rests his head back against the stall and soon falls into a well deserved sleep.

The sayjin inside still lives and the need to be a man is there inside of Broly but it only acts slightly through instincts as Broly could never understand them even if he tried. He couldn't change even as he peacefully slept against the shower as the demons inside of him worked to further Broly's destructive appetite to see those die before his feet.

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Broly awakes opening his eyes slowly and stands up in the shower. He can tell the water stopped awhile ago because he's am dry. Thankfully he programed the computer to turn off the water after 15 minutes in the shower. Slowly he gets out and head out into his living area where his clothes have been washed and dried. He slips them on and sits back in his throne looking at the monitor. He can still see that he still has another 15 hours until he arrives at his next planet.

" Computer Bed." Broly says simply. He hears the computer beep and a bed comes out from the side of the room. He walk overs and flop on the bed devoid of sheets or pillows. He stares into the metal celeling. " Computer lights off." Instantly the lights are off as he commands it and soon he falls into a enjoyable dream of death and destruction at his hands.

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He stands on the first planet he had ever purged of life. It was right after he sent his father into oblivion. ' That fool thought he could use my awesome power for his own gain and rule the universe with me as his pawn.' He built a control collar and forced it on him so that he was under his control only able to use Broly's strength when he saw fit. He was nothing more than a mindless slave under his control. He told him to kill and he did. He told him to destroy he did. He told Broly to kill everything and he was helpless and obeyed. Luckily his rage finally errupted giving him the form of legendary super-sayjin shattering the collar into bits and his father's control over him. He tried to escape him but Broly caught him as he tried to fly away in an emergency escape pod.

" Where do you think your going! DAD?" Broly grounds out the last part as he doesn't consider him his father for much longer. Let alone breathing much longer. The pure fury is written across Broly's white eyes as he narrows them as his vein begins to bulge on his forehead.

" Im preparing the rocket so we can escape. " He lied trembling in fear of Broly. Broly can see the sweat pour from his face as he is terrified that he is free of his control and he is the one who is helpless. No more is he in charge of Broly, Broly is in charge and going to finish the pain and suffering caused by this old washed up fool!

" In a rocket built for one person?" Broly says and grabs it between his hands and crushes it. He hears his father's tortured screams as he is crushed to death inside it. A steel coffin of wire and metal. Broly laughs as he hear his bones snap and contort in disgusting ways but it only makes Broly's need to see him suffer greater! He listens as the squish of his heart as his fists smash comptetely inside the pod and with a hurl of his arm sends it to the sun. " Did he really think I would be so foolish to let him escape after controlling me for all those years?" Broly chuckles inside knowing that the fool thought that he would ever forgive him.

But he soon turns his attention to the remainig inhabitants of the planet. He obliterated them all with a blast from his arm. He floated above the planet inside his spaceship and opened the hatch. He aimed his one arm at the planet and laughed evilly as the blast errupted from the palam of his hand " GIGANTIC METEOR!" Broly screamed turning the planet into dust. Soon he was destroying world's left and right with out anyone to control him. He was free! Free to do what he wanted! Free to destroy anything he wanted and everything!

But as he blasted his way across the universe he caught the attention of the Kai's, the imperial overseer's of the universe and the one's in charge of the afterlife and the universe's balance and protection.

He was busy anhilating the planet of Frost a glacier in the middle of the universe which had a large population on it despite the climate of constant -30 degrees below zero. After slaughtering an entire city he was struck from behind with a energy blast. He turned his head to see a young woman with gray hair longer than his own and wearing a very strange uniform aiming another blast at his back.

" That was foolish woman! I AM THE LEGENDARY SUPER-SAYJIN!" He roars charging her and throwing his arm back and launches a world shattering punch at her. She materilazes out of sight and behind him delivery a shot to his back which mearly causes Broly to grunt. He spins around quickly and grabs her leg and slam her into the icy ground. He flys over to the wall with her leg still clenched tightly in his hand and throws her into a wall. He hears her cough and spit up blood and pull herself from the hole she left in the wall.

" You Freak! You kill innocents and those who have nothing to do with you! You shall pay for your crimes!" She yells at Broly but Broly only throws his head back laughing.

" Well what do you expect from a true Freak!" Broly laughed and charging her again. He throws a kick to her head which she ducks and aims a powerful blast at his stomach. She fires it sending him into the wall. He growls in irritation because that actually hurt him! He busts out though and goes for another kick to her head and she ducks again. 'Bad move!' He drops elbow right on top of her skull sending her into the ice below. He doesn't give her a chance to recover this time as he slams his foot into her back causing her to scream out in pain. He grabs her head and lifts it out of the ice and he takes his other fist and use her body as a punching bag.

Broly is having a fun time but he senses something coming at his head and jumps out of the way as an old man swings a sword with suprising speed and skill right where his head was. Broly notices that this man is old and dressed in the same outfit as the woman, which he was helping out. " West Kai are you alright?" He asks her flipping her battered form over and she dosen't respond.

" Your a little late old man." Broly chuckles and pointing at her. " She died minutes ago as I bashed her senseless! Although for a weakling she did better than I thought!" He throws his head back laughing as the old man crys as he checks her pulse feeling none. He growls at Broly and raises his sword and charges him.

" Die you monster!" He yells and swings the sword down with power to cut him in two. Broly snaps up an arm up to block as it lands on the armband breaking the sword in two. The old man gasps as he stares at his broken sword.

" Humph Weakling!" Broly forms a blast in his hand and throws it at him. " BLASTER SHELL!" He yells as the blast nails him in the stomach and sends him into a glacier screaming. The blast explodes as he hits the glacier turning him into ash. Broly laugh's striumphantly and fly back to his ship and head off to the next world not knowing that 3 more of them were still around and they were even more powerful than those weaklings he left to die.

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Broly is awakened as he slips from the bed and lands face first in the floor. Growling angrily he yells curses. " Computer what is the problem!?" He yells as his fist grind against the other in irriation from being disturbed by something so pitiful!

" Entering asteroid field! Taking evasive manuvers lord Broly." The computer says and then beeps. " We'll be clear in 10 minutes."

Growling Broly forces himself to his throne to wait out the next ten minutes until he can go back and sleep. Nothing gets him in a rage as being disturbed when he is in slumber. He loves to feel the destruction in his dreams for if he wasn't sleeping he would be destroying and killing.

After ten agonizing minutes of tapping his foot in his throne he hears the 'all clear' sound and goes back to his bed to sleep, which does not come. So he tosses and turns on the mattress trying to go back to sleep. He gaze up at the celeing just waiting to fall asleep from sheer bordem but it doesn't happen. Growling he gets back up and head to the control panel. " Computer Clear the room I am training!" The room is instantly cleared and he uses his fathers Gravity simulation program and he hits it up to 1000 times normal gravity. He feels the gravity immediatly and his arms fall to the floor as well as his feet. " Damit I left my clothes on!" Broly yells and using what little strength he has under this gravity and he slips off the armbands and boots. He is drenched in sweat just from that as he begins training. A series of punches and kicks fill the room as Broly jumps and flys around image trains with himself. He uses his mind to create an imaginary opponenet and he fights against that image. Broly punches he ducks, He counters Broly dodges. This process goes on for about 2 hours until he is exhausted. " Computer terminate gravity and begin quick rinse shower!" He snaps. The gravity lifts and he is hosed off by water getting rid of his sweat and with a quick burst of energy drys himself.

" Computer Bed!" The bed reappers in front of him as he lays back down. There are not many things Broly understands about himself but then again no one could ever hope to try. He does know he was born with great power, his mother was killed early in his life, his old man was crazed and demented for ever thinking to control him. Why he can't feel anything except rage and anger has passed through his head many of times but never dwelled on it. He never knew what love was except when he was young but without ever feeling it for many years he lost hope with ever feeling it again. But then some had tried when he was bound by his father's control but that never worked as they would only be killed. " I dosen't matter anyway.... If I can't then so be it." Broly mutters as he slowly falls back asleep.

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He is fighting the third member of the kai's which is much stronger than the other two. With what he lacks in speed and technique makes up with power something Broly has alot of. This Kai is one foot shorter than Broly as a normal sayjin and as big as he is but he is much more powerful than the others. He is enraged with Broly killing the other two kai's and vows to make him pay but Broly only laughs in his face.

He transforms into super-sayjin not legendary he wants to make this fight last. The lower part of his hair shoots up to his head and sprays out in a dark blue color. The bangs of his forehead shoot to the side's of his face taking the same blue coloration. His eyebrows follow suit and his black eyes turn teal. He moves into my fighting stance and the Kai does as well and they charge. They both throw bone shattering punches which collide with the other creating a massive shockwaves in there wakes, knocking them both back. The planet they are on is taking a beating from the battle. Mountains, hills, rivers, and plains are torn apart by the feroctity of the battle. After a quick breather the Kai charges again yelling and Broly smiles wickdly and charges as he fires an energy blast from his mouth. Broly is caught off guard with that and he moves his hands to block. When Broly goes to block the kai kicks him in the stomach and deals a large amount of punches as well. He tries to slam Broly into the ground with his elbow but Broly moves and instead knocks him into a cliff. Broly rips the cliff apart exploding out from the rubble and roars in rage. " YOU HURT ME! I'LL KILL YOU!" He screams and goes Legendary! The Kai trembles in fear as Broly's muscles explode and his eyes roll back and his hair goes gold and stands on edge. Broly lets a deep breath out from his transformation .As he chuckles he see the shocked look on the Kai's face.

" Don't worry you'll be joining your friends shortly!" Broly says blasting at him and kicks him square in the stomach sending him flying. Broly teleports behind him as he flys backwards and knocks him into the air with a punch to his face. Broly teleports again above him and claspes his hands together and when he gets close Broly slams them down on his back sending him rocketing to the ground. Broly points a finger down at him. " RAPID FIRE!" Quickly dozens of green energy blasts shoot down from Broly's finger hitting the battered Kai. Broly hears his screams of pain he just laughs in delight. But soon he stops and dives down at him and with a deveistating blow he slams into his neck with his knee at full force snapping it like a twig. Broly lets out a sick chuckle as hears the last of his breath escape the Kai's body.

But again Broly is awakened but by the arriving signal. He gets his clothes that were re-washed last night and throw thems on waiting for landing.

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The planet Broly arrives on was a jungle just like he saw from space it is filled with thick vegitation which only gets in his way as he leaves a trail of destruction. The place goes up in flames as everything is ignited by the sparks of energy that encircle his body. He is hungry after awhile of destruction and finding no city's with food he searches for some. After a quick glance around he sees a creature and immediatly roasts it with his energy. He eats it quickly and despite the lack of taste it fills him up and he sets off again burning the planet. He then spots a village as his eyes view a clearing. Although his stomach grumbles a little bit as if that meal upset him he doesn't let it bother him.

Broly can see it is very ancient with stick houses and stone buildings. 'No real fun here.' He flies to the middle of the village and lands in the center of it. The inhabitants are disgusting insect creatures. They are dressed in skin's of animals and have sick features which make Broly even more disgusted. They gather around him as he stand sthere not really moving that much but soon his head is hit from behind. Broly turns around slowly and looks down seeing a rock at his back. He reachs down and pick it up and rolls it around in his hands. He looks up at the frightened looks of the inhabitants. He can see easily the difference between the genders as there are two different colored types. He figures the blue ones are males and the pink ones are females. He tosses the rock up in the air and catchs it back in his hand and when it hits in a flash he launches it into the crowd killing a good dozen as it rips through them. In a second they have the blue males jumping at Broly barring two large rows of teeth. Broly jumps into the air and laughs as they crash into each other. But soon the pink ones are surrounding him in the air. 'So they can fly?' It's no real threat they to Broly. They don't have teeth like the males only spears and rocks. They throw them at Broly and he only grunts as they break and splinter as they hit. He raises a hand above his head and forms a massive energy blast that grows. Broly laughs evilly as they run away from him and with a roar he throw it down at the village. The blast engulfs it and with a explosion turns it into a massive crater but Broly notices the blast was a little to strong.

" SHHIHIIIIITTTTTT!" He yells and blasts back to his spaceship. He flys inside the open hatch and skid to a halt. " COMPUTER EMERGENCY LIFT OFF NOW!" He yells and the ship's hatch closes quickly and it blasts off to into space. Mere seconds after Broly reachs space he feels the shockwaves of the planet exploding behind him. He strips off his clothes and flops onto the bed a little tired. But as he lays down his stomach aches badly. He feels it churning and bubbling painfully. He growls in pain as he falls to the floor.

" DAMNIT!" He screams as his stomach feels like it's going to explode. He whips around wildly trying to dull the pain but he ends up vomitting uncontrolably. He coughs up blood and spit up pieces of something. The pain increases like a knife twisting around in his stomach but soon after a few hours he slips into unconciousness from the pain becoming to great to bare.

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Well thanks to Nova Otaku again. It was foolish to do it in first person your input was appreciated.

Continue on you will enjoy this story. Maybe not so much the next chapter but if you go on it will get much much better. ( And please if you don't like it or find problems with it please tell me. I am writing it for fun and too make it a great story for everyone who reads so leave a review if you have problems or like it.)