Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Fantasy Meetings ❯ The Secret Storm ( Chapter 4 )

Hi!!Well I guess wat??I checked my reviews 2day and this person called `Satan' said that my fic sucks goat dick.that I should go back to grade school.well I don't see any fics that he's every written so why is he critizing me??argh sometimes I just hate pple like this.pleez give me more reviews.and if u see any errors, other than how am writing rite now, pleez don't flame me for it.oh and for those of you who don't kno wat Shop Rite is, it's a supermarket found northeast where I live in, New Jersey.

Beware!!Warning: This chapter is a lemon. So any of you people out there who don't like these kinds of things, then press the back button now. If you are reading it, enjoy!!

(My thoughts)

*Tiffany's thoughts*

~Rebecca's thoughts~

`Trunks thoughts'

^Goten's thoughts^

Title: Fantasy Meetings

Chapter 4: The Secret Storm

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"Oh and over there is where we found you and Trunks, that's the local supermarket, Shop Rite." Tiffany pointed to the building.

"Oh.Hey why don't we stop a bit? I'm getting a little tired." Goten took a breath of air.

"Sure." Tiffany said, as they landed nearby a hotel.

They had been flying around the town since 1:00,after they left the house.

"Oh shit. Hey Goten, look over there at the sky. It's really dark. Maybe we should stay somewhere for now." she pointed to the horizon.

"Then lets stay at that motel over there." he said.

It was an ordinary motel. It was a tan-colored, two level building that looked fairly sanitary for them to stay at. It was called `The Summer Inn'.

"But Goten we have to pay to rent a room." said Tiffany.

"We'll sneak in. No one wil ever know. Please? Just until the storm stops." Goten begged with pleading eyes.

"Ok.I guess it won't do any harm." she gave in.

Goten first looked through all of the windows to make sure they wouldn't find an occupied room. Tiffany had so much fun flying around with Goten.She had got to know him better than she already did. *I hope Becca doesn't get mad at me or worried that I didn't come home. *

"Come on, T-Chan.I found a room." he was still floating in the air, looking inside through the window. He picked her and let Tiffany try and open the window. She managed to pry it open. It wasn't really big but big enough for both to crawl in. The room had a queen size bed, a TV, closet, and telephone on an end table.

"Maybe I should call the house just to tell them where we are." Tiffany said about to pickup the phone.

"No."

Tiffany turned to him. She looked in his eyes. She could tell he had something up his sleeve. He had a mischievous glint in his eye.

"They're fine." he paused."You know I've been thinking about you. Tiffany, you are very different from all the other girls that I have met before. You are beautiful; you're sweet, and fun to be around with. And your eyes…. there's something about them." Goten took a strand of hair away from her face. He held her cheek in his hand."Even though I've only known for a day, it seems like I can trust you. I think…I…. I think I love you." he said looking deeply into her brown eyes.

"Oh Goten!!"she cried."You don't know how long I have wanted you to say that. Goten, I love more than you will ever know. I have loved you ever since I first saw you." she began to cry on his shoulder.

He embraced her tightly."I love you too, Tiffany." He brought her face up to his. He leaned toward her a softly kissed her lips. His hands still holding her face cleared away a tear away from her cheek. At that moment, Tiffany wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him fiercely. While still kissing, Gotten laid Tiffany on the bed carefully, as if she were a fragile diamond. He continued kissing her. He moved down her neck, lightly kissing her. Tiffany then lifted her tube top off, leaving only a strapless bra. Goten but his hands behind her back and unhooked the bra, then tossed it aside. Now, her breasts exposed, Goten began kissing around her left breast, while the other hand was softly kneading her right breast. As he got closer to her erect nipple, Tiffany had begun to get shivers down her spine. Then he enclosed her left nipple with his mouth. Tiffany began to moan."Oh, Goten." she said softly. Goten could tell she was enjoying every moment of this. He started to swirl his tongue around her nipple, making her moan louder."Goten", she whispered his name. This was starting get him hard. He loved how she said his name like that. It sounded seductive. He stopped.

"Hey, why did you stop?" Tiffany demanded.

"I was saving it." Goten said.

He reached up to her face and gave her a deep, passionate kiss. Tiffany willingly let Goten slip his tongue in her mouth. As their's tongues fought, Goten began to take of her skort. He tossed those aside also. He discovered that she was wearing a white cotton thong. He chuckled.

"What?" she asked.

"Don't worry." was all he said."May I?" he refered to taking off her thong.

"Of course." Tiffany giggled.

"Am I tickling you?"

"Yes.Stop please!" she started to giggle uncontrollably.

He continued to softly caress her thigh. She gave a loud laugh.

"Ah! Stop or else we'll get caught." Tiffany begged.

He finally took off her thong and threw that to floor.

"Take off your clothes first." she told him.

Goten took off all of his clothing, only leaving his boxers on. They had pictures of Dragonballs on them. *How cute*He could tell that he had got her wet from teasing her before. He ran his fingers light down her shaven womanhood. This gave Tiffany goosebumps and made her gasp. He continued playing with her until she begged him to stop fooling around.

"Goten, I'm serious. Please, your making me beg."

He didn't want to torture her so badly but he loved the way she spoke like that to him. He obeyed her and lowered his head down and breathed on her private area. He barely touched her clit. He had no clue how much Tiffany loved this. This was her dream come true. Tiffany began to whimper and moan when Goten inserted his tongue in womanhood. He moved his tongue all around, trying to find her jewel. Just then, she gave a scream.

"Goten! Don't stop!"she cried.

He had found it. He began to suck and swirl his tongue around it. Tiffany bucked her hips and he began to feel her tremble at his touch. Her breathing became irregular as she grabbed on to his hair and started to yank it. Goten didn't mind.

"I'm gonna cum!!"Tiffany yelped.

Her sweet juices let themselves out while Goten lapped it all up. He could still feel her tremble and shake.

"Now it's my turn."Tiffany gave him a sexy look.

She grabbed the heam of his boxers and started to pull them down. As she pulled down his last article of clothing, she gasped. Goten noticed her reaction. His cock was huge. It looked to be around 6 inches. *I guess he probably got it from Goku.Imagine his and Gohan's!! *A devilish smirk crept upon her lips. She enveloped her mouth on his package and started to suck on it. Goten threw his head back from the pleasure he was getting. He grabbed the back of her head and made her head bob up and down. Tiffany was trying to suck his cock as best as she could without choking herself. She began to do the same with her tongue as Goten did to her before. Soon, Goten was closer to his climax. He pushed Tiffany's head even faster.

"Wait.Stop." Goten said.

He laid Tiffany back down on the bed and slowly inserted his manhood in her.

"Tell me if it starts to hurt, alright? I don't want to hurt you."he said looking into her deep, brown eyes.

Goten knew that he was too much for her and that all of it wouldn't fit. He wouldn't it to be that bad for her.

He continued to insert himself in her. Just then, a little `pop' was heard.

"Are you a virgin?"he asked her.

She nodded as tears silently rolled down her cheeks.

At first, Goten began to thrust himself in her slowly, and then quickened the pace a bit. Tiffany let a moan escape her lips as he thrust in her harder this time. Then Goten bent down and gave his new love a kiss. While their tongue's wrestled once more, Goten kept on pushing himself in her tight passage. As they kissed, Tiffany moaned louder as her climax got higher. She wrapped her legs around his waist, and Goten held on Tiffany's shoulders for support. He began pumping in her much faster.

"YES!!!Oh, yes, don't stop!" Tiffany screamed.

She began to thrash out uncontrollably.She Clenched Goten's back as hard as she could.Goten felt a sting behind his shoulders.He ignored it and went back to pumping into Tiffany.

"Harder,Goten,faster!" she yelled.

Both were so close to their climax's,that Goten put all of his cock in her tight passage.Then he started to thrust even harder and more faster.Goten threw his head back and let a grunt escape his lips and Tiffany screamed as Goten let his seed out and she let her juices out once more.Exhausted,Goten collapsed onto his mate.He took his manhood out of her passage and got into the hotel bed.They both kissed with their tongues battling while Goten roamed his hands all over Tiffany's body.Afterwards,they called it a night.They snuggled up to each other,and slept,both bodies naked next to each other.They had even forgot about the storm,that had just right now.

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