Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Internal Darkness ❯ Prologue ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: Vegetaprinceofdarkness 
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 01.22.2005 | Updated On: 01.22.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.1K | Visits: 277 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 01.22.2005 | Updated On: 01.22.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.1K | Visits: 277 | Status: Completed
Disclaimer: I do not own DBZ or any of the characters in this story apart from the ones I make up.
This is an alternate universe, so no complaining how something doesn't coincide with DBZ, besides, this is my first fic ever so it probably won't be as good anyways. Please R&R, constructive criticism and other comments are welcome, but NO FLAMES please.
"IMPORTANT" Since I can only get on the Internet during the weekends, I won't be able to update as often as I'd like to, so at the earliest I'll be able to update every Friday-Sunday. Though I probably won't be able to update every week, I'll do so as often as I can. Enough babbling on my part, it's time to start the fic.
Internal Darkness Prolog
Ten thousand years ago when the universe was still young, there existed only seven sentient beings. These beings wanted to have companionship with beings other than just each other, so they decided to create different species of people and put them all on one planet. The beings decided to put the new people on a planet they dubbed "Earth". These people were very diverse, some were physically weak, but had strong minds. These were called Humans. Others were farmers, with the ability to plant any crop anywhere and make it flourish. They were called Nameks. Still others were very strong physically, being able to perform many physically grueling tasks easily that would be impossible for the Nameks or the Humans. These people were called Saiyajins. The original seven watched over the people of Earth and came down to fellowship with them every day. Eventually, they decided that the Earth people needed to have names for them, so they decided to call themselves Kais. Each Kai had a number ranging from one to seven (They didn't use names before this time since there were only seven of them.) which they responded to whenever the people would call them. Peace reigned for four thousand years, during which time tensions began to grow and build between the different peoples of Earth. The Saiyajins became overconfident in their physical strength, which caused them to bully around the other species. The humans became prideful of their superior knowledge and mental capabilities and so poked fun at the Saiyajins and the Nameks. The Nameks just wanted to be left alone, so they began to keep to themselves. Finally, at the end of the four thousand years, the Humans and the Saiyajins went to war with each other, catching the Nameks right in the middle of it. The war was catastrophic, the losses were in the millions on all three sides. Eventually, after a few years, all but one of the Kais decided to scatter the species' to different planets to quell the violence. The Saiyajins were moved to a barren planet which they immediately dubbed "Vegetasei", the Nameks were moved to a planet they decided to call "Namek", and the Humans remained on planet Earth. To keep the different species' from finding and annihilating one another, the Kais created thousands of other species' and scattered them throughout the universe. Then, they proceeded to wipe the memories of everyone but themselves. They then divided the universe into four quadrants, north; south; east; and west. Four of the Kais decided to watch over the quadrants, one Kai to each quadrant. To watch over them was the Grand Kai, and above him were two Supreme Kais. One of the supreme Kais had been the one that didn't want to scatter the different species'. He thought that they should either find a way to get the species' back together, or just wipe them out and start anew. Still the other Kais disagreed with him so he decided to take things into his own hands. He decided to go down to the Saiyajins, Nameks, and Humans and told them about the other species and that the other species' were going to try and destroy them. The Kai was hoping that life would just destroy itself through war so that it could be recreated and perfected. The other Kais quickly caught on to his plan and decided to punish him. They stripped him of his immortality (Which all seven Kais had at the time.) and many of his powers. They then banished him to the mortal world and told him that if he tried anything like that again he would be executed. The Kais then proceeded to clear the species' memories of each other and bring back those that died in the wars that came about as a result of the Supreme Kai's meddling. The six remaining Kais made a law that no Kai could ever intervene in mortal affairs again unless it was absolutely necessary. As the years passed, the banished Kai continued to try and wipe out all the people that had been created by the Kais. Eventually the remaining Kais grew tired of this and brought him up to heaven with them where they formally charged him with breaking their law. He was sentenced to be executed, but he would not have final judgment as he would be reincarnated into another mortal every time he died. When the time came and he gave his last words he said:
"You will regret not listening to me. The mortals will eventually be too much for even you to handle." As they began firing energy blasts into him, he uttered his final words:
"I'll have my revenge on you fools. Eventually I will be born into a body strong enough and I'll recover my power, and when I do, the universe will be mine!" With those words he breathed his last and was immediately born into a mortal body. The Kais immediately decreed that Kais would no longer have immortality or unlimited power. They hoped that what the fallen Kai, (Whom they decided to call Diablo, the lord of terror and destruction) had said wasn't true, that he would be forever stuck in the bodies of mortals. That's what they hoped.....
Well, what do you think, was it Good? Bad? Awesome? Terrible? Once again, please R&R and also once again NO FLAMES. BTW, don't expect a whole bunch of Japanese words out of me, I don't know that many, though some may appear once in awhile.
This is an alternate universe, so no complaining how something doesn't coincide with DBZ, besides, this is my first fic ever so it probably won't be as good anyways. Please R&R, constructive criticism and other comments are welcome, but NO FLAMES please.
"IMPORTANT" Since I can only get on the Internet during the weekends, I won't be able to update as often as I'd like to, so at the earliest I'll be able to update every Friday-Sunday. Though I probably won't be able to update every week, I'll do so as often as I can. Enough babbling on my part, it's time to start the fic.
Internal Darkness Prolog
Ten thousand years ago when the universe was still young, there existed only seven sentient beings. These beings wanted to have companionship with beings other than just each other, so they decided to create different species of people and put them all on one planet. The beings decided to put the new people on a planet they dubbed "Earth". These people were very diverse, some were physically weak, but had strong minds. These were called Humans. Others were farmers, with the ability to plant any crop anywhere and make it flourish. They were called Nameks. Still others were very strong physically, being able to perform many physically grueling tasks easily that would be impossible for the Nameks or the Humans. These people were called Saiyajins. The original seven watched over the people of Earth and came down to fellowship with them every day. Eventually, they decided that the Earth people needed to have names for them, so they decided to call themselves Kais. Each Kai had a number ranging from one to seven (They didn't use names before this time since there were only seven of them.) which they responded to whenever the people would call them. Peace reigned for four thousand years, during which time tensions began to grow and build between the different peoples of Earth. The Saiyajins became overconfident in their physical strength, which caused them to bully around the other species. The humans became prideful of their superior knowledge and mental capabilities and so poked fun at the Saiyajins and the Nameks. The Nameks just wanted to be left alone, so they began to keep to themselves. Finally, at the end of the four thousand years, the Humans and the Saiyajins went to war with each other, catching the Nameks right in the middle of it. The war was catastrophic, the losses were in the millions on all three sides. Eventually, after a few years, all but one of the Kais decided to scatter the species' to different planets to quell the violence. The Saiyajins were moved to a barren planet which they immediately dubbed "Vegetasei", the Nameks were moved to a planet they decided to call "Namek", and the Humans remained on planet Earth. To keep the different species' from finding and annihilating one another, the Kais created thousands of other species' and scattered them throughout the universe. Then, they proceeded to wipe the memories of everyone but themselves. They then divided the universe into four quadrants, north; south; east; and west. Four of the Kais decided to watch over the quadrants, one Kai to each quadrant. To watch over them was the Grand Kai, and above him were two Supreme Kais. One of the supreme Kais had been the one that didn't want to scatter the different species'. He thought that they should either find a way to get the species' back together, or just wipe them out and start anew. Still the other Kais disagreed with him so he decided to take things into his own hands. He decided to go down to the Saiyajins, Nameks, and Humans and told them about the other species and that the other species' were going to try and destroy them. The Kai was hoping that life would just destroy itself through war so that it could be recreated and perfected. The other Kais quickly caught on to his plan and decided to punish him. They stripped him of his immortality (Which all seven Kais had at the time.) and many of his powers. They then banished him to the mortal world and told him that if he tried anything like that again he would be executed. The Kais then proceeded to clear the species' memories of each other and bring back those that died in the wars that came about as a result of the Supreme Kai's meddling. The six remaining Kais made a law that no Kai could ever intervene in mortal affairs again unless it was absolutely necessary. As the years passed, the banished Kai continued to try and wipe out all the people that had been created by the Kais. Eventually the remaining Kais grew tired of this and brought him up to heaven with them where they formally charged him with breaking their law. He was sentenced to be executed, but he would not have final judgment as he would be reincarnated into another mortal every time he died. When the time came and he gave his last words he said:
"You will regret not listening to me. The mortals will eventually be too much for even you to handle." As they began firing energy blasts into him, he uttered his final words:
"I'll have my revenge on you fools. Eventually I will be born into a body strong enough and I'll recover my power, and when I do, the universe will be mine!" With those words he breathed his last and was immediately born into a mortal body. The Kais immediately decreed that Kais would no longer have immortality or unlimited power. They hoped that what the fallen Kai, (Whom they decided to call Diablo, the lord of terror and destruction) had said wasn't true, that he would be forever stuck in the bodies of mortals. That's what they hoped.....
Well, what do you think, was it Good? Bad? Awesome? Terrible? Once again, please R&R and also once again NO FLAMES. BTW, don't expect a whole bunch of Japanese words out of me, I don't know that many, though some may appear once in awhile.