Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Internal Darkness ❯ Chapter 4 ( Chapter 5 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: Vegetaprinceofdarkness 
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 01.22.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 217 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 01.22.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.9K | Visits: 217 | Status: Completed
Wow! Eight reviews and counting. I didn't expect to get this much positive input. Anyways, this chapter takes place at the same time as the previous chapter, so no time has passed. Thanks to Vegetazgurl for the idea for this chapter. I've always wondered how bad things got in hell when Vegeta first learned about Goku's ascension to ssj3, so I've decided to write about it. I haven't really decided if this chapter is going to be of any importance, but . Enough of my talk, let's start the chapter.
Vegeta was angry, no, beyond angry, he was seething with rage. He had just learned that Kakarrot had reached a new level of super saiyajin during his time in other world and had deduced that he had been not fighting at full power during their fight. At the moment, he felt a very strong urge to kill and/or maim anything he could get his hands on. An anticipatory smirk appeared on his face as thoughts of his first victims came to mind. He knew where to go since this wasn't his first time in hell and took off with his blood boiling from rage and excitement about getting some revenge. When he arrived at his destination, he quickly found the ogres guarding the area for especially strong villains who had committed mass genocide. With a bit of quick "talk" (which consisted of him pinning them to a wall and threatening them with eternal torture if they didn't do exactly as he say) Vegeta convinced the blue and red ogres that it was in their best interests to let all the villains out. When he finally saw the many figures emerging from the cell, Vegeta decided to go and greet some of them.
"Well if it isn't Frieza and the loser force. Don't they have a separate area for women like you?"
"Well hello there prince Vegeta." said Frieza. "To what do we owe this "honor?" he asked with mock politeness.
"I just learned of something that upsets me very much." he said. "And I've decided that I need a few playthings to relieve some stress on and I've picked you as my first victim." he said with a predatory smirk. "And don't bother trying to say no, I've already made up my mind that in just a few short minutes, you're going to wish that you've never even heard of the saiyajins."
"Oh really?" Frieza asked with a chuckle. "You were never a match for me in life, what makes you think that you're somehow closer to my power now that you're dead?" Vegeta smirked.
"Apparently, you haven't been keeping very good tabs on me eh Frieza? If you'd been watching me the last few years, you would've seen that I've become a super saiyajin since you've been dead." Suddenly, a bright golden aura burst into life around Vegeta as his hair flashed from black to gold in mere seconds. Frieza's eyes widened in astonishment. "Heh, that's nothing." with that, Vegeta let out a yell and began powering up. The ground began to shake and boulders and other loose rocks flew up into the air around them as Vegeta's muscles bulged to three times their original size. Frieza looked as though he wanted to crawl into a hole and die as he saw Vegeta's new physical appearance. "This is what we like to call ultimate super saiyajin, how do you like it?"
"Feh! That's nothing." came a voice from out of nowhere. Cell suddenly landed behind Frieza. "I see that you've become stronger than we last fought." he commented. "But you're still nowhere near as strong as I was before that brat killed me." Vegeta once again smirked as he powered down to regular super saiyajin.
"Apparently you haven't been watching us either. You'll just have to watch and find out just how strong I've become." Vegeta once again let out a yell and began powering up. The ground trembled even more violently than last time and rocks that had fallen back into place were being blown around by the fierce wind that now accompanied the quaking. "Myself and Kakarrot have also reached the level of ascended super saiyajin and are much stronger than Gohan was when he beat you."
"What's the difference between that and super saiyajin besides the extra spiky hair and little lightning bolts flying around everywhere?"
"Only you would ask such a moronic question Nappa. Obviously this form is much stronger than that of the super saiyajin. I thought I smelled your stupidity in the shadows somewhere, or was that just the toenails smell? Sometimes I can't tell the difference with you." Nappa stepped out of the shadows and growled at Vegeta.
"At least I've been watching you all this time unlike these fools. Besides, you're the one who took out the only partner you had left when all he needed was some time in the tank."
"Are you still whining about that? I told you last time that I ended up regretting that decision, or wasn't that good enough for you? Now enough distractions, I've come to beat on Frieza and Cell, now stay out of my way." Vegeta launched himself at Cell, but was stopped by another voice.
"Vegeta, stop!" Vegeta landed and looked to find Radditz with a palm out ready to fire at him if necessary. Standing next to him was a saiyajin that looked remarkably like Kakarrot or his brat Goten, except he had a scar on his left cheek and wore saiyajin armor and a scouter. "We can't allow you to go around causing trouble like that. Though I would love to see that albino lizard and that overgrown grasshopper get the tar beat out of them, I must ask you to stop."
"And who are you to stop me?" Vegeta asked with his eyebrows raised.
"We are Hell's guards of course." said Radditz. "We keep losers like them locked up and people like you from starting trouble."
"How did you earn a title like that?"
"It wasn't hard." said the other saiyajin. "King Yemma didn't want to deal with a bunch of saiyajins that were bored and irate so he gave us a job that we could enjoy."
"You must be Bardock." Vegeta said more as a question than a statement. His only reply was a slight nod. "You were quite infamous among the royal family back on planet Vegeta. You were only a low level soldier, yet you were more powerful than even most of Frieza's elites. Rumor was that you might even eventually become stronger than my father and begin a new lineage of kings."
"Hn!" snorted Bardock. "The last thing I ever wanted was to become king. I'm a warrior, not a diplomat. Besides, the king never goes on missions off planet because he's too busy threatening this planet or that planet or dealing with some terrorist group. That seems like the most boring thing anyone could ever do."
"Not that I'm trying to change the subject or anything, but how is my brother? We haven't the time to check on anything in the living world as there's always a problem somewhere down here. The last thing we've heard about him was that he'd become a super saiyajin and defeated Frieza. After that, we know nothing." Before anyone could say anything else, Frieza, not liking to be ignored by anyone, especially monkies, spoke up.
"Hey, I'm still here you morons! I......" Frieza suddenly found himself, Cell, and the Ginyu force back in their cell. "Blasted monkies." he mumbled. Once Bardock and Radditz had taken care of the villains, they went back over to Vegeta to hear about Kakarrot. Vegeta decided that since he had nothing else to do, and he had forgotten about his anger, he'd tell them about what happened after everyone was back on earth.
"So there are multiple levels of super saiyajin?" asked Nappa after Vegeta finished his tale.
"You can be such a nimrod sometimes Nappa." said Vegeta. "That's what I just said isn't it?"
Choosing to ignore Nappa for the moment, Vegeta decided to add something he had missed before. "I've heard that Kakarrot has reached a third level of super saiyajin while in other world and that he used it on Majin Buu."
"That's amazing!" exclaimed Bardock. "I doubt I could even begin to fathom the depths of such a power! And my son is the first one to achieve it, just like being the first super saiyajin in over a thousand years! I wish I could meet him and his mate and sons." suddenly, Bardock looked as if he just remembered something and reached into a pocket inside his armor and pulled out some kind of device and gave it to Vegeta. "Here, give this to my son if you see him again. It's got a message from Radditz and myself on it." Bardock's face turned grim. "You must beware when you go to Earth again Vegeta. I have the gift/curse of getting visions of the future and I have seen some very disturbing things."
"What have you seen?" asked Vegeta.
"I have seen your son in some strange super saiyajin form and he is destroying everything. I saw him destroying planets and slaughtering everyone in his path. At the end of the vision he looked right at me, and I saw his eyes. His eyes were the most horrible things I have ever seen. They were a deep crimson red and I saw evil beyond words in them and they seemed to absorb all light into them as he created some kind of vortex and everything ceased to exist." Vegeta pondered for a minute, then decided.
"Very well, I will keep a look out for this super saiyajin form, but I need to know what it looks like."
"Besides the crimson eyes, it has black fur on its arms, hair just like Radditz's, only darker, and an aura darker than night." Just then everyone heard a voice come from out of nowhere.
"Vegeta, this is king Yemma, please come to the check in station, I'd like to talk to you about something."
Vegeta grunted but complied.
"It had better be good." he thought to himself, still not having noticed Bardock's earlier comment about going back to Earth.
Well, how was it? I'm thinking about bringing either Bardock or Radditz or both back to life in this story. What do you think? Should I? I'll probably make the next chapter longer since this one was a little short compared to my other chapters. Please R&R.
Vegeta was angry, no, beyond angry, he was seething with rage. He had just learned that Kakarrot had reached a new level of super saiyajin during his time in other world and had deduced that he had been not fighting at full power during their fight. At the moment, he felt a very strong urge to kill and/or maim anything he could get his hands on. An anticipatory smirk appeared on his face as thoughts of his first victims came to mind. He knew where to go since this wasn't his first time in hell and took off with his blood boiling from rage and excitement about getting some revenge. When he arrived at his destination, he quickly found the ogres guarding the area for especially strong villains who had committed mass genocide. With a bit of quick "talk" (which consisted of him pinning them to a wall and threatening them with eternal torture if they didn't do exactly as he say) Vegeta convinced the blue and red ogres that it was in their best interests to let all the villains out. When he finally saw the many figures emerging from the cell, Vegeta decided to go and greet some of them.
"Well if it isn't Frieza and the loser force. Don't they have a separate area for women like you?"
"Well hello there prince Vegeta." said Frieza. "To what do we owe this "honor?" he asked with mock politeness.
"I just learned of something that upsets me very much." he said. "And I've decided that I need a few playthings to relieve some stress on and I've picked you as my first victim." he said with a predatory smirk. "And don't bother trying to say no, I've already made up my mind that in just a few short minutes, you're going to wish that you've never even heard of the saiyajins."
"Oh really?" Frieza asked with a chuckle. "You were never a match for me in life, what makes you think that you're somehow closer to my power now that you're dead?" Vegeta smirked.
"Apparently, you haven't been keeping very good tabs on me eh Frieza? If you'd been watching me the last few years, you would've seen that I've become a super saiyajin since you've been dead." Suddenly, a bright golden aura burst into life around Vegeta as his hair flashed from black to gold in mere seconds. Frieza's eyes widened in astonishment. "Heh, that's nothing." with that, Vegeta let out a yell and began powering up. The ground began to shake and boulders and other loose rocks flew up into the air around them as Vegeta's muscles bulged to three times their original size. Frieza looked as though he wanted to crawl into a hole and die as he saw Vegeta's new physical appearance. "This is what we like to call ultimate super saiyajin, how do you like it?"
"Feh! That's nothing." came a voice from out of nowhere. Cell suddenly landed behind Frieza. "I see that you've become stronger than we last fought." he commented. "But you're still nowhere near as strong as I was before that brat killed me." Vegeta once again smirked as he powered down to regular super saiyajin.
"Apparently you haven't been watching us either. You'll just have to watch and find out just how strong I've become." Vegeta once again let out a yell and began powering up. The ground trembled even more violently than last time and rocks that had fallen back into place were being blown around by the fierce wind that now accompanied the quaking. "Myself and Kakarrot have also reached the level of ascended super saiyajin and are much stronger than Gohan was when he beat you."
"What's the difference between that and super saiyajin besides the extra spiky hair and little lightning bolts flying around everywhere?"
"Only you would ask such a moronic question Nappa. Obviously this form is much stronger than that of the super saiyajin. I thought I smelled your stupidity in the shadows somewhere, or was that just the toenails smell? Sometimes I can't tell the difference with you." Nappa stepped out of the shadows and growled at Vegeta.
"At least I've been watching you all this time unlike these fools. Besides, you're the one who took out the only partner you had left when all he needed was some time in the tank."
"Are you still whining about that? I told you last time that I ended up regretting that decision, or wasn't that good enough for you? Now enough distractions, I've come to beat on Frieza and Cell, now stay out of my way." Vegeta launched himself at Cell, but was stopped by another voice.
"Vegeta, stop!" Vegeta landed and looked to find Radditz with a palm out ready to fire at him if necessary. Standing next to him was a saiyajin that looked remarkably like Kakarrot or his brat Goten, except he had a scar on his left cheek and wore saiyajin armor and a scouter. "We can't allow you to go around causing trouble like that. Though I would love to see that albino lizard and that overgrown grasshopper get the tar beat out of them, I must ask you to stop."
"And who are you to stop me?" Vegeta asked with his eyebrows raised.
"We are Hell's guards of course." said Radditz. "We keep losers like them locked up and people like you from starting trouble."
"How did you earn a title like that?"
"It wasn't hard." said the other saiyajin. "King Yemma didn't want to deal with a bunch of saiyajins that were bored and irate so he gave us a job that we could enjoy."
"You must be Bardock." Vegeta said more as a question than a statement. His only reply was a slight nod. "You were quite infamous among the royal family back on planet Vegeta. You were only a low level soldier, yet you were more powerful than even most of Frieza's elites. Rumor was that you might even eventually become stronger than my father and begin a new lineage of kings."
"Hn!" snorted Bardock. "The last thing I ever wanted was to become king. I'm a warrior, not a diplomat. Besides, the king never goes on missions off planet because he's too busy threatening this planet or that planet or dealing with some terrorist group. That seems like the most boring thing anyone could ever do."
"Not that I'm trying to change the subject or anything, but how is my brother? We haven't the time to check on anything in the living world as there's always a problem somewhere down here. The last thing we've heard about him was that he'd become a super saiyajin and defeated Frieza. After that, we know nothing." Before anyone could say anything else, Frieza, not liking to be ignored by anyone, especially monkies, spoke up.
"Hey, I'm still here you morons! I......" Frieza suddenly found himself, Cell, and the Ginyu force back in their cell. "Blasted monkies." he mumbled. Once Bardock and Radditz had taken care of the villains, they went back over to Vegeta to hear about Kakarrot. Vegeta decided that since he had nothing else to do, and he had forgotten about his anger, he'd tell them about what happened after everyone was back on earth.
"So there are multiple levels of super saiyajin?" asked Nappa after Vegeta finished his tale.
"You can be such a nimrod sometimes Nappa." said Vegeta. "That's what I just said isn't it?"
Choosing to ignore Nappa for the moment, Vegeta decided to add something he had missed before. "I've heard that Kakarrot has reached a third level of super saiyajin while in other world and that he used it on Majin Buu."
"That's amazing!" exclaimed Bardock. "I doubt I could even begin to fathom the depths of such a power! And my son is the first one to achieve it, just like being the first super saiyajin in over a thousand years! I wish I could meet him and his mate and sons." suddenly, Bardock looked as if he just remembered something and reached into a pocket inside his armor and pulled out some kind of device and gave it to Vegeta. "Here, give this to my son if you see him again. It's got a message from Radditz and myself on it." Bardock's face turned grim. "You must beware when you go to Earth again Vegeta. I have the gift/curse of getting visions of the future and I have seen some very disturbing things."
"What have you seen?" asked Vegeta.
"I have seen your son in some strange super saiyajin form and he is destroying everything. I saw him destroying planets and slaughtering everyone in his path. At the end of the vision he looked right at me, and I saw his eyes. His eyes were the most horrible things I have ever seen. They were a deep crimson red and I saw evil beyond words in them and they seemed to absorb all light into them as he created some kind of vortex and everything ceased to exist." Vegeta pondered for a minute, then decided.
"Very well, I will keep a look out for this super saiyajin form, but I need to know what it looks like."
"Besides the crimson eyes, it has black fur on its arms, hair just like Radditz's, only darker, and an aura darker than night." Just then everyone heard a voice come from out of nowhere.
"Vegeta, this is king Yemma, please come to the check in station, I'd like to talk to you about something."
Vegeta grunted but complied.
"It had better be good." he thought to himself, still not having noticed Bardock's earlier comment about going back to Earth.
Well, how was it? I'm thinking about bringing either Bardock or Radditz or both back to life in this story. What do you think? Should I? I'll probably make the next chapter longer since this one was a little short compared to my other chapters. Please R&R.