Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ PLAYTIME ❯ Chapter One ( Chapter 1 )

I started this just to know if I was capable of writting smut, but I think it isn't very good. Then I decided to add more chapters to develop a more complex story. So,please,tell me what you think. I will use all the topics you have seen in many dbz yaoi fanfics, but I hope to make it interesting. English isn't my native language, so there will be many mistakes. At least,I hope that you can understand it

Disclaimer:I don't own dragonball/Z/GT.They're property of Akira Toriyama,TOEI yFUNimation.

PLAYTIME

Chapter One

The wind was carrying the most wonderful scents: rain, forest and something musky and sweet.
"That scent...must follow that scent". Vegeta muttered, unable of restraining himself.
After flying for some minutes, he found the most beautiful sight. Near the lake, bathed by the sunbeams, Goku was laying on his stomach, sprawled on the grass, completely naked. And his tail was swaying seductively, spreading that irresistible musk.
"Wait...tail? When has Kakarot regrown his tail? Ummm...that scent...that body...Shit! The bastard's in heat. That's why I've been so restless lately, my body itching." Vegeta glared down angrily at his nether regions, where a stubborn erection was very evident.
"Damn, Kakarot. It's all your fault." Vegeta looked again at the younger saiyan, enjoying immensely the display.
"My, my, Kakarot. It seems that you've been a naughty boy. Look what you've done to your prince. You deserve a punishment." And he smirked evily, flying to his oblivious prey.

Goku was breathing raggedly, his skin burning. He had come to the lake to cool off his body with the fresh water, but to no avail. So he was laying on the grass trying to rest. He was so dizzy, almost unconscious to his surroundings. But suddenly, he was very aware of two hot hands roaming all over his skin; caressing, groping and pinching all the right places. Yes, this was all he had been craving for since all this madness began. Vegeta kissed his neck tenderly, rubbing one of Goku's nipples, as his other hand grabbed the younger saiyan's erection. “You're so sweet, Kakarot.” Whispered huskily Vegeta, before nipping Goku's earlobe. Then, that talented tongue went all the way down, licking the delicious neck, the collarbone and stopped at that sculpted chest to suck the other nipple, while pumping vigorously Goku's length. Goku screamed in bliss as he spilled his cum all over Vegeta's hand. The prince licked said hand clean, enjoying the taste of Goku's essence, as he undressed, never keeping his eyes apart from the younger saiyan. Then, he laid atop Goku, kissing him furiously. Tongues wrestling restlessly, both delighted in the other's exotic flavor, until they were breathless. After breaking the kiss, Vegeta positioned his head between Goku's thighs and began to suck his weeping cock. Goku panted and groaned, the suction beeing too much. When he was near the edge, that wonderful mouth stopped and he cried at the loss. “Ssshhh, my love.” Whispered the prince, lifting and spreading Goku's legs, as the tip of his cock rubbed Goku's entrance, making the younger saiyan go crazy. Then, the prince pushed forward forcefully, till he was compleately sheathed inside of Goku's tight heat. Both saiyans scream at the overwhelming sensation, then remained still for a while. When Goku was relaxed enough , the prince began to move. Slowly at first, then increasing the rhythm whith every thrust. Making the younger saiyam scream in ecstasy, as he touched Goku's pleasure spot, over and over again. After a long time of pounding the younger saiyan senseless, Vegeta ascended stretching more that hot channel with his now larger cock. At the same time, he was pumping frantically Goku's erection, until the younger saiyan released his seed for the second time, clenching his inner walls painfuly over Vegeta's cock. With one last thrust, the prince came, screaming his lover's name. Vegeta collapsed atop the younger saiyan, remaining inside of him. When the prince recovered his breath, he looked up at his partner. Goku's face was shining all covered with sweat, eyes closed, lips parted, cheeks reddened. “Gods, Kakarot. You're beautiful.” He whispered, caressing tenderly that lovely face. Then he groaned, feeling that he was hard again. “Time to play again, Kakarot”

AN:I'm new at this, so I would appreciatte that you would tell me what I do wrong and give me advices to improve my writting.