Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Shadows Of The Past ❯ Bonnie and Clyde: Part 2 ( Chapter 2 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: raccly er 17 
Vegeta and Velvet have just been cornered by the guards and there doesn't seem to be any hope for their future. But things arn't always what they seem...
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Cyberpunk / Comedy | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 12.23.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 176 | Status: Work In Progress
Vegeta and Velvet have just been cornered by the guards and there doesn't seem to be any hope for their future. But things arn't always what they seem...
Anime/Manga: Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Cyberpunk / Comedy | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 12.23.2005 | Pages: 2 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 176 | Status: Work In Progress
Shadows Of The Past
Disclaimer: I really hope you guys don't think I own anything huge. well, sept maybe, this fic! lol. It seems to be doing more then great so fare!
Summary: There where only 7 saiyans in all that where left when Vegeta went to earth, But what about before? A saiyan female that Vegeta had grown up with as a family friend was taken from Vegeta by Frieza at the same time as Prince Vegeta was, but didn't spent much time together anymore because Frieza mad sure to have them separated. This is about Vegeta's relationship before Bulma, and what came out of it evil grins. Yeah, I know, a LOT of People have done stuff like this, But I've never seen any of them take the turn that im taking...So, I hope you stick around with the fic long enough to see what im talking about.
Raccly: Im...SPEECHLESS! I just can't believe that this fic was such a hit! I've got like, 15 reviews and only 2 chap's! Thank you, thank you all sooooooo VERY much! You have no idea how much it means to me to have created something so successful!
oh. and im very sorry for not up-dating this in hella long! I'm in 7th grade now which means im still getting use to so many classes and homework from everyone of my teachers AND homework every weekend. But don't worry, this Thursday is the start of Christmas break! So, I'll have more time to write, type out, and spell check( even though I hate the very thought of that) my fic.
SPECIAL THANKS TO: scorpion29, for thinking up The title, sportschickVLVR , and Darkestdestiny06, for idea's for the plot. Check out these great authors work some time! And thanks guys! Couldn't have done it with out you!
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(yes, I know there's a reviewer answer whatever button now, but there wasn't when these people, or you, commented. lol, dang, I really haven't up-dated in a long time, huh?)
Katrina - thanks, and yeah, I noticed the spelling errors... It's just...I HATE spell check. I don't like being corrected to much, and it's even worse from a computer that only says: "what's 'Tha'? Humm...well, ya got me buddy! I've got all the words in the dictionary right here and that's not in here! so, can't help you there!"( a.k.a:' no suggestions').
Ahem...so, I fear knowing Im ganna need to use spell check... I try to prof read, but Im very forgetful, so...And, as for the editor, I've been getting what ever help I can get my hands on..But im looking for 'one', I had someone for the job, but she hasn't talked to me in....a while. And I need someone who will be on a lil more often to help me out, so, yeah.
sportschickVLVR - LOL! Well, to be honest, yes, I do like to make cliff hangers, it keeps the reviewers wondering, thinking of the possibilities, and on the edge.
Yeah, im considering there idea. Lol, no it's not Dark. After that idea, I was ganna start looking, but then you offered, sooo... I would love for you to be my editor! But...you haven't exactly been on or actually talked to me in a while...so...im ganna re-look unless you re-show up. lol. sorry, I love ya, but I need someone that will be ...reachable.
DarkestDestiny2006 - Lol, sorry bout the cliff hanger, I just wanted to post it before I lost reviewers,( like im sure I have now) and I had writers block at the end of that chap( like I have for the past few months). Damn.....schools ruining my life! ^^;
Yeah, you weren't the first ta review, but not the last. Don't feel bad though, you couldn't of been first, cuz of the fact that I had posted once before and only one person got to it then.
I wasn't expecting to get so many reviews so quickly! And even anonymous ones! Don't worry, I plan to give this fic my all.
Scorpion29 - Ah man, I missed MORE words? Damnit! I thought I got em all! *stops and hears pokemon theme in head* hehe! ...Er...ahem..anyway, Sorry about the cliff hanger, I was out of idea's, and I wanted to up-date before I lose my reviewers! So, I posted what I had. Yeah, I plan ta get an editor before I post it, you've been taking part in that though. Lol.
Clarobell - You're a great guesser! Lol. Well, I'll only tell ya that your guess(s) are correct.
And, yes, it WILL get to the present. Sorry that it's taking so long to, it's just that some reviewers want more info on the past, and some want to rush it...But, have no worries, it WILL get there, and there WILL be the rest of the story happening there.
SSJ Naomi - heh, yes, they are! Mwahahaha!!!! er...yes, their 17. ^_^; Lol, What role will Velvet play closer to the saiyan saga...hum...well, I wasn't really planing for this fic ta take that approach, since that could slightly mess up my main idea( which you won't know of for a long time!!!)
But, if I get reviews saying people would like the fic to take that approach, I can do that.
Star0307 - Heh, thanks! well, I guess I should have said I'VE read a lot of fics like this, or close to some parts in this. LOL! Heh, all fic ideas are great, it just needs the right readers. lol, and sorry this hasn't been up-dated in a long time, I've just been over flowed with stuff!
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LAST TIME IN Shadows Of The Past: Velvet looked ahead to see why they where stopping, and got the answer she had been praying it not to be.
There was a another one of Frieza's men floating right in front of them, smirking coldly.
"Good Job. Now lets take em back to lord Frieza for punishment." The one that was chasing them from the back said with a chuckle.
Vegeta ground his teeth in frustration and anger.' GREAT! What do we do now? ' He screamed in his head as he began to think as quickly as possible.
Started: Saturday, July 23, 2005
Chap 3: Bonnie and Clyde: Part 2
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Normal POV:
Time wasn't on there side...
The guards had hesitated for a small amount of time, but that time was over.
The guards charged. one from the rear, and one from front.
Vegeta and Velvet where looking from side to side, from guard to guard, from tree to tree, trying to find a way to escape.
Vegeta was the first to have his brain kick back into action.
He quickly grabbed Velvet's hand again, and jumped into the air just in time to miss the guards. Though, the same could not be said for the guards. Mainly for the fact that they smacked into each other, face first, and ended up grabbing hold of each other, thinking they had one of the two saiyan's.
They both yelled in pain, and then in 'victory'.
" I got you, you dirt saiyan!" "No! I got you!" Argued the two seemingly retarded guards, as the rolled a round trying to over power the other, still not realizing that it wasn't a saiyan that they grabbed hold of.
Vegeta chuckled as he floated and watched the scene a few feet above. Velvet just raised a brow, and shook her head at there stupidity.
"They get dumber every year..." She stated.
Vegeta just smirked and slowly took off higher into the air, to make sure they went un-noticed, for now.
But until they did come looking again, he needed to find a place to hide, and to be safe from being captured.
A few minutes later, after searching for the perfect hiding place, he spotted a medium sized waterfall. ' That will do nicely. It's hidden, and fare from where we left them'. He thought to himself.
He slowly began to drop from the sky, still holding on to Velvet's hand.
" Nice choice. They won't find us so easily here." Velvet said approvingly as she inspected the area.
"come on. we need to hide out in the cave behind that waterfall! This place IS fare from the gay guards, but they can still find us." Vegeta stated as he turned from the direction of the waterfall to look at her. She nodded in agreement, and followed him.
They both quickly jumped over the lake and into the waterfall.
"Good, it's not to small." Vegeta stated as he slowly walked while looking around the cave with has hands on his hips.
Velvet was doing the same, but stood still with her arms crossed.
"Yeah, it's just so beautiful. Caves make me so happy inside..." She said with a plan voice and disgusted face. Vegeta chuckled and turned to look at her. She looked back at him and he smirked, and shortly turned to examine the cave again. She smirked after he looked away and followed his lead at examining the cave.
He turned and looked at her from the corner of his eye. "Hey, get over here, they may be able to see you if your just standing there right in front of the waterfall entrance." Vegeta stated with a scrawl, and slowly walked closer to the front of the waterfall, still looking around.
Turned half way to look at him, she glared at him. He stopped walking when he was a little over a foot in front of her and raised one eye brow.
"Hey, it'll be your death, do what ever the hell ya want. But you know I'm right." He stated again, as he slightly tilted his head to the side. She huffed and continued scanning the cave with her eye as Vegeta did the same to her.
" Like you would care, you just don't wanna get caught. And besides, your rarely right about anything" She said arrogantly and began to walk around the cave looking around trying to get her mind off him so she didn't kill him.
Vegeta's eyes began to twice in annoyance from her unitensional circling him.
He uncrossed his arms, scowl deepening( if that's possible ^_^;).
"I think you should have gotten this whole cave memorized by n-"
Before he could finish, Velvet hade finely stopped moving, and started walking toward him to smack him for being such an impatient jerk, but, tripped over her own foot.
She quickly attempted to fixed her mistake proudly and before Vegeta would notice since he was busy talking to her, but, failed at that too, since she then tripped over miniature bolder.
There was no hope in Vegeta not seeing her mistake that time! Since, she fell on him.
Vegeta sat on the ground for a moment, wide-eyed, then recovered and finished his sentence with a 'ow'.
He placed his hands on her hips, with all intentions in throwing her off of himself, But...for some reason he couldn't...he just couldn't bring himself to do so...Especially when he looked up into her eyes. It was the look in her eyes...
Slowly, she placed her arms on his chest, propping herself up.
Vegeta watched her as he began to get the same look in his eyes as she had.
He didn't know quit what he was doing or why it seemed to be right, but he couldn't stop himself....Before he could even think, he had pressed his lips to hers.
He supposed it felt right to her too since she didn't push away, but instead wrapped her arms around his neck.
And at that moment he remembered what she had said to comfort him when they were kids...
flash Back:
"Vegeta?" She asked, with her eyes still closed.
I turn again to look at her. "Y-yes?" I ask, still on the verge of tears.
"Are you scared?” she asks, now opening her eyes.
I stay silent and look down, which answers her with all that she needs to know.
"Don't worry, I'll be here for you..." she says, looking me in the eyes.
Flash Back Ended:
As these memories and other moments flashed through his mind, he knew that he loved her.
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Raccly: Well, I hope you liked it, it took me FOREVER to get this done. I do best when I depressed and up-set. It took my comp dying, losing everything on my comp, grounded with nothing to do 3 times, my grandpa and mom evictced, and friend probs that really got me thinking, to start working on this again. And, like I said, Christmas break started today for me, so I should have more time ta up-date and live. ^_^;
oh, and I must know what you guys think: would you want this fic to go on through the series like Dbz but with Velvet and see how she handles and fits into things? OR would you want the fic to go as I planed from the start and skip some sagas so reveal my main part sooner? Honestly, I think the first idea is great, but it's the readers choice, so, PLEEEEASE CHOOSE!!!
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(I'll give you a clip of the next chap as a sorry for this being so short and late)
Next chap: ["Damnit! How could we lose them?!"
"I don't know, but I do know that they've been out of our reach for almost 3 hours! And if you recall, lord Frieza only gave us 4 to hunt them down and bring em to him!" The first and leader of the guards shouted back.
"Wait! im getting a reading...two of them! Its them!!" Shouted the second.
"Lets move out! And call for back-up! Im NOT letting them get away again." The leading guard bellowed with a burst of energy and flew off with the second following close behind.]
That's it for this chap! oh, and incase I don't get it in as soon as I hope, Marry Christmas every buddy!!
*grabs CD player and listens to 'Check On It' by Byonce while hurrying to fully type out next chap*
Spell checked/typed out: 12/22/05
Posted: 12/23/05, Midnight
Disclaimer: I really hope you guys don't think I own anything huge. well, sept maybe, this fic! lol. It seems to be doing more then great so fare!
Summary: There where only 7 saiyans in all that where left when Vegeta went to earth, But what about before? A saiyan female that Vegeta had grown up with as a family friend was taken from Vegeta by Frieza at the same time as Prince Vegeta was, but didn't spent much time together anymore because Frieza mad sure to have them separated. This is about Vegeta's relationship before Bulma, and what came out of it evil grins. Yeah, I know, a LOT of People have done stuff like this, But I've never seen any of them take the turn that im taking...So, I hope you stick around with the fic long enough to see what im talking about.
Raccly: Im...SPEECHLESS! I just can't believe that this fic was such a hit! I've got like, 15 reviews and only 2 chap's! Thank you, thank you all sooooooo VERY much! You have no idea how much it means to me to have created something so successful!
oh. and im very sorry for not up-dating this in hella long! I'm in 7th grade now which means im still getting use to so many classes and homework from everyone of my teachers AND homework every weekend. But don't worry, this Thursday is the start of Christmas break! So, I'll have more time to write, type out, and spell check( even though I hate the very thought of that) my fic.
SPECIAL THANKS TO: scorpion29, for thinking up The title, sportschickVLVR , and Darkestdestiny06, for idea's for the plot. Check out these great authors work some time! And thanks guys! Couldn't have done it with out you!
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(yes, I know there's a reviewer answer whatever button now, but there wasn't when these people, or you, commented. lol, dang, I really haven't up-dated in a long time, huh?)
Katrina - thanks, and yeah, I noticed the spelling errors... It's just...I HATE spell check. I don't like being corrected to much, and it's even worse from a computer that only says: "what's 'Tha'? Humm...well, ya got me buddy! I've got all the words in the dictionary right here and that's not in here! so, can't help you there!"( a.k.a:' no suggestions').
Ahem...so, I fear knowing Im ganna need to use spell check... I try to prof read, but Im very forgetful, so...And, as for the editor, I've been getting what ever help I can get my hands on..But im looking for 'one', I had someone for the job, but she hasn't talked to me in....a while. And I need someone who will be on a lil more often to help me out, so, yeah.
sportschickVLVR - LOL! Well, to be honest, yes, I do like to make cliff hangers, it keeps the reviewers wondering, thinking of the possibilities, and on the edge.
Yeah, im considering there idea. Lol, no it's not Dark. After that idea, I was ganna start looking, but then you offered, sooo... I would love for you to be my editor! But...you haven't exactly been on or actually talked to me in a while...so...im ganna re-look unless you re-show up. lol. sorry, I love ya, but I need someone that will be ...reachable.
DarkestDestiny2006 - Lol, sorry bout the cliff hanger, I just wanted to post it before I lost reviewers,( like im sure I have now) and I had writers block at the end of that chap( like I have for the past few months). Damn.....schools ruining my life! ^^;
Yeah, you weren't the first ta review, but not the last. Don't feel bad though, you couldn't of been first, cuz of the fact that I had posted once before and only one person got to it then.
I wasn't expecting to get so many reviews so quickly! And even anonymous ones! Don't worry, I plan to give this fic my all.
Scorpion29 - Ah man, I missed MORE words? Damnit! I thought I got em all! *stops and hears pokemon theme in head* hehe! ...Er...ahem..anyway, Sorry about the cliff hanger, I was out of idea's, and I wanted to up-date before I lose my reviewers! So, I posted what I had. Yeah, I plan ta get an editor before I post it, you've been taking part in that though. Lol.
Clarobell - You're a great guesser! Lol. Well, I'll only tell ya that your guess(s) are correct.
And, yes, it WILL get to the present. Sorry that it's taking so long to, it's just that some reviewers want more info on the past, and some want to rush it...But, have no worries, it WILL get there, and there WILL be the rest of the story happening there.
SSJ Naomi - heh, yes, they are! Mwahahaha!!!! er...yes, their 17. ^_^; Lol, What role will Velvet play closer to the saiyan saga...hum...well, I wasn't really planing for this fic ta take that approach, since that could slightly mess up my main idea( which you won't know of for a long time!!!)
But, if I get reviews saying people would like the fic to take that approach, I can do that.
Star0307 - Heh, thanks! well, I guess I should have said I'VE read a lot of fics like this, or close to some parts in this. LOL! Heh, all fic ideas are great, it just needs the right readers. lol, and sorry this hasn't been up-dated in a long time, I've just been over flowed with stuff!
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LAST TIME IN Shadows Of The Past: Velvet looked ahead to see why they where stopping, and got the answer she had been praying it not to be.
There was a another one of Frieza's men floating right in front of them, smirking coldly.
"Good Job. Now lets take em back to lord Frieza for punishment." The one that was chasing them from the back said with a chuckle.
Vegeta ground his teeth in frustration and anger.' GREAT! What do we do now? ' He screamed in his head as he began to think as quickly as possible.
Started: Saturday, July 23, 2005
Chap 3: Bonnie and Clyde: Part 2
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Normal POV:
Time wasn't on there side...
The guards had hesitated for a small amount of time, but that time was over.
The guards charged. one from the rear, and one from front.
Vegeta and Velvet where looking from side to side, from guard to guard, from tree to tree, trying to find a way to escape.
Vegeta was the first to have his brain kick back into action.
He quickly grabbed Velvet's hand again, and jumped into the air just in time to miss the guards. Though, the same could not be said for the guards. Mainly for the fact that they smacked into each other, face first, and ended up grabbing hold of each other, thinking they had one of the two saiyan's.
They both yelled in pain, and then in 'victory'.
" I got you, you dirt saiyan!" "No! I got you!" Argued the two seemingly retarded guards, as the rolled a round trying to over power the other, still not realizing that it wasn't a saiyan that they grabbed hold of.
Vegeta chuckled as he floated and watched the scene a few feet above. Velvet just raised a brow, and shook her head at there stupidity.
"They get dumber every year..." She stated.
Vegeta just smirked and slowly took off higher into the air, to make sure they went un-noticed, for now.
But until they did come looking again, he needed to find a place to hide, and to be safe from being captured.
A few minutes later, after searching for the perfect hiding place, he spotted a medium sized waterfall. ' That will do nicely. It's hidden, and fare from where we left them'. He thought to himself.
He slowly began to drop from the sky, still holding on to Velvet's hand.
" Nice choice. They won't find us so easily here." Velvet said approvingly as she inspected the area.
"come on. we need to hide out in the cave behind that waterfall! This place IS fare from the gay guards, but they can still find us." Vegeta stated as he turned from the direction of the waterfall to look at her. She nodded in agreement, and followed him.
They both quickly jumped over the lake and into the waterfall.
"Good, it's not to small." Vegeta stated as he slowly walked while looking around the cave with has hands on his hips.
Velvet was doing the same, but stood still with her arms crossed.
"Yeah, it's just so beautiful. Caves make me so happy inside..." She said with a plan voice and disgusted face. Vegeta chuckled and turned to look at her. She looked back at him and he smirked, and shortly turned to examine the cave again. She smirked after he looked away and followed his lead at examining the cave.
He turned and looked at her from the corner of his eye. "Hey, get over here, they may be able to see you if your just standing there right in front of the waterfall entrance." Vegeta stated with a scrawl, and slowly walked closer to the front of the waterfall, still looking around.
Turned half way to look at him, she glared at him. He stopped walking when he was a little over a foot in front of her and raised one eye brow.
"Hey, it'll be your death, do what ever the hell ya want. But you know I'm right." He stated again, as he slightly tilted his head to the side. She huffed and continued scanning the cave with her eye as Vegeta did the same to her.
" Like you would care, you just don't wanna get caught. And besides, your rarely right about anything" She said arrogantly and began to walk around the cave looking around trying to get her mind off him so she didn't kill him.
Vegeta's eyes began to twice in annoyance from her unitensional circling him.
He uncrossed his arms, scowl deepening( if that's possible ^_^;).
"I think you should have gotten this whole cave memorized by n-"
Before he could finish, Velvet hade finely stopped moving, and started walking toward him to smack him for being such an impatient jerk, but, tripped over her own foot.
She quickly attempted to fixed her mistake proudly and before Vegeta would notice since he was busy talking to her, but, failed at that too, since she then tripped over miniature bolder.
There was no hope in Vegeta not seeing her mistake that time! Since, she fell on him.
Vegeta sat on the ground for a moment, wide-eyed, then recovered and finished his sentence with a 'ow'.
He placed his hands on her hips, with all intentions in throwing her off of himself, But...for some reason he couldn't...he just couldn't bring himself to do so...Especially when he looked up into her eyes. It was the look in her eyes...
Slowly, she placed her arms on his chest, propping herself up.
Vegeta watched her as he began to get the same look in his eyes as she had.
He didn't know quit what he was doing or why it seemed to be right, but he couldn't stop himself....Before he could even think, he had pressed his lips to hers.
He supposed it felt right to her too since she didn't push away, but instead wrapped her arms around his neck.
And at that moment he remembered what she had said to comfort him when they were kids...
flash Back:
"Vegeta?" She asked, with her eyes still closed.
I turn again to look at her. "Y-yes?" I ask, still on the verge of tears.
"Are you scared?” she asks, now opening her eyes.
I stay silent and look down, which answers her with all that she needs to know.
"Don't worry, I'll be here for you..." she says, looking me in the eyes.
Flash Back Ended:
As these memories and other moments flashed through his mind, he knew that he loved her.
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Raccly: Well, I hope you liked it, it took me FOREVER to get this done. I do best when I depressed and up-set. It took my comp dying, losing everything on my comp, grounded with nothing to do 3 times, my grandpa and mom evictced, and friend probs that really got me thinking, to start working on this again. And, like I said, Christmas break started today for me, so I should have more time ta up-date and live. ^_^;
oh, and I must know what you guys think: would you want this fic to go on through the series like Dbz but with Velvet and see how she handles and fits into things? OR would you want the fic to go as I planed from the start and skip some sagas so reveal my main part sooner? Honestly, I think the first idea is great, but it's the readers choice, so, PLEEEEASE CHOOSE!!!
XXXXXXX
(I'll give you a clip of the next chap as a sorry for this being so short and late)
Next chap: ["Damnit! How could we lose them?!"
"I don't know, but I do know that they've been out of our reach for almost 3 hours! And if you recall, lord Frieza only gave us 4 to hunt them down and bring em to him!" The first and leader of the guards shouted back.
"Wait! im getting a reading...two of them! Its them!!" Shouted the second.
"Lets move out! And call for back-up! Im NOT letting them get away again." The leading guard bellowed with a burst of energy and flew off with the second following close behind.]
That's it for this chap! oh, and incase I don't get it in as soon as I hope, Marry Christmas every buddy!!
*grabs CD player and listens to 'Check On It' by Byonce while hurrying to fully type out next chap*
Spell checked/typed out: 12/22/05
Posted: 12/23/05, Midnight