Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ The Eleventh Commandment ❯ One-Shot

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The Eleventh Commandment
The song is by Collin Raye
I always thought that this song goes well with this story; it’s about Vegita’s life before he came to earth. This is my first song fic so here it GOES!
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As I stand here and watch my childeren sleep, I wonder what my life would have been if not for Freeza and my Father. Would I have grown up to be like Goku? Or would I still be like I am? My little girl stirs, while old memories started to stir also.

*~Opening Music~*

(Flaskback)

Looking up at a monster for the first time, seeing all the white and purple shine. Wondering what I’m I doing here with only Nappa and Radize. I look up at the monster being only three, asking 'Were is my father?' and getting backed handed from the monster. I curled up in a ball. But the monster picked me up and tossed me out of the room. ‘Your father left you in my care.’ The monster said in a high-pinched female voice ‘While you are here you will call me Lord Freeza or sir. And you just might live long enough to see another year.” He said as he passed me to leave, not before he kicked me in the ribs.


*~She hears his heavy breathing in the dark
His footsteps coming closer down the hall
She's so ashamed, she's daddy's secret love
She wants to cry, she wants to die, but he can't get enough~*


As the years go... from then on there were numbers of beatings like that with in the first year. After that the breathings kept getting more and more horrendous as the years would go by. Once Freeza and his brother Cooler almost killed me because I would not decimate a planet that they wanted. I was in the regreation tank for about 2 days. But I learned the hard way, that they would not kill Freeza’s favorite toy.


*~The bruises on his face will go away
Mom keeps him home from school till they fade
She's sorry he was born and tells him so
He takes it in, he hangs his chin, he ducks another blow~*


One night about 3 years after I was given to Freeza as a warror/slave, I woke up in the middle of the night for no reason, at least not as far as I could tell. Then someone jumped on me, before I could get up and defend my self, someone had a strong hold upon my throught. I looked at who it was and there kneeling over me was Jace’s brother. He looked down at me with contempt. With his hands that were around my throught, they tightening slowly. I got out what do you want. He just gave me a sick smirk that I would never be able to copy (that is if I ever wanted to), and reached for the pants I was wearing that night. I knew was he wanted, I struggled like it was for my life. For all I knew then and now it was for my life. I shot a ki blast at the him but he batted it away. I knew that I had to get away; I used Final Flash, for the first time.


*~Did God overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children~*


After I woke up I found out that Jace’s brother had died. But Freeza the day later had me ties up in his room with a ki restraint on. ‘You brat, Jace’s brother was suppose to do this but looks like I must.’ That night he rapped me. As soon as I was able to fight my way out of his room, I spent the next 2 missions curled up in my space ship, to scared to do anything.

*~He cries for hours, cries and never stops
He shakes so hard his little cradle rocks
He'll never have the chance to be brand new
He'll never walk, he'll never talk, he's addicted too~*


But the last night that I was on the mission, I had a dream, my father was in it. ‘My son, you have done nothing that is your fault. I wish I didn’t give you to Freeza. But know that I’m watching over you. But to survival Freeza’s ship, you must build a hard outer cover and let no one in your heart.’

*~Did God overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children~*


But I learned that even with a hard shell, I wished that everything could have been different. That my father never gave me to Freeza. Or that the onna never made me feel like this.

*~Thou shalt not kill
Thou shalt not steal
Thou shalt not take the Lord's name in vain
Thou shalt not cause thy children pain~*


After I got back from the mission Freeza notice the difference in me as I just got harder and harder on the outside. After a while I was able to make my heart cold. But after about a week that I was back I yet again found my self in Freeza’s room. I just stood there think about how I could get this bastard back.


*~God does not overlook it
What ought have been written
The eleventh commandment
Honor thy children
Honor thy children~*

(Present)
As the rest we all know is history, with Goku killing Freeza. I turn from my little girl sleeping with a teddy bear, and look in my son’s room, thinking how much no matter how much I act, I must thank Goku, for giving me my family. I go into my room and there is laying Bulma, thinking how much I love her and I would not know what I would do if I didn’t have her. I crawl in bed next to her. “Thank You Goku.” Hopping he heard that because that would be the only time that he will ever hear that pass my lips.

Then I hear “Your Welcome.” Just be for I go to sleep.
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Here it is I hope that you’ll will love it. I could not keep from crying when I wrote this