Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Vertical Limitations Of The Heart ❯ The Deadly T-Rex ( Chapter 1 )

Hi. this is my first story so reviews are appreciated. I have had this idea for awhile but only just found out that i could actually write it. I thought that you needed a word processor, but thanks to Darkheart81 for telling me that i could use wordpad. this is a story about what i think wouldve happened if Gohan met Videl while he was living in the wilderness(being trained by Piccollo). I am sorry if this idea has already been used. i dont know if it has or not but i am hoping it will be origanal. Enough of my ranting, I have kept you waiting long enough. On with the show.

USSJ1000000BlackpoolBoy

(A.K.A. Scott G.A. McDougall)

P.S. Might be different from the show at 1st, major A.U.

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"HHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAA"

Gohan was threw against a wall, sword in hand. He was trying to save hi friend. The berrys he had collected earlier were rolling about next to him. He came back with them to feed his injured dinosaur friend. When he got back there was a T-Rex advancing on his friend. He tried to fight him but he was being thrown about like a ragdoll. He kept trying to use his anger like Piccollo told him to do when he was in trouble, but when he was feeling power surging through him, the T-Rex smashed him into near unconsciousness(that even a word?). At least the anger was doing something. It was stopping him being knocked unconscious.

"DAAAAAAAAAAAAAADYYYYYYYYYYYYYY"

There was a voice. From what Gohan could tell, it was a female voice. A raven haired girl stepped through bushes and stopped dead in her tracks when she saw the T-Rex.

"MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. COME QUICK. A BOYS ABOUT TO BE EATEN."

A black haired woman with silver highlights came running through the bush that videl came through.

"Stop your games sweetpea. We`ve gotta find your fathAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"

She noticed the dinosaur.

"COME ON VIDEL. WE GOTTA RUN AWAY" She yelled this while getting a capsule out of her pocket and throwing it at the ground. A jet-coper appeared out of the smoke, but before they could get in it, the T-Rex was walking up to them. The girl`s, now introduced as Videl, mother was about to shut the door when the T-Rex`s jaws clamped on the coptor.

"MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY" Videls shreak could be heard for miles around.

"n...nn...nnoo"Gohan whispered.

The coptor got swallowed whole, if the lady screamed then the tight hold the dinosaurs lips had on the coptor didn`t let the sound through.

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Hi above them, in a medatative(sp?)state, Piccollo stirred when he felt Gohans energy(ki?)start to fluctuate.He flew to where the disturbance was when he saw a girl frozen with fear, looking at the dinosaur who had a coptor in his mouth. He reached out his sences and found a small energy inside the coptor. At first he was going to intervene, but then he saw a bloody Gohan stand up from a slumped position against a rock. His power was going haywire. His power doubled from the last time he sensed it. Triple.........Quadrouple......Piccollo lost count of how many times it went up like this, but he could have sworn that he saw a flash of gold in his aura a couple of times. When the T-Rex swallowed the coptor whole and then hit the young girl with it tale, Gohan`s power went up once more as he attacked, his eyes now lacking pupils.

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'Why am i getting so angry. I dont even know theses people. I know the girls name is Videl but i dont know why i am getting so angry over her and her mother. i must have control. I must'"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Videl was knocked into a tree by the dinosaur after he ate her mother.

Gohan lunged.

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Sorry to leave you hanging, but hopefully the next chapter will be out tonight.

whadya think????tell me in a review, e-mail me at blackpoolboy@mail.com or chat with me on yahoo. username ussj1000000blackpoolboy.

bye for now

ussj1000000blackpoolboy

(aka scott g.a. mcdougall)

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