Duel Masters Fan Fiction ❯ Unwanted Betrothal ❯ Part I: Prologue ( Prologue )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: Kosgurl
I wrote this for Fanfiction.net, but I reposted it here. It's mostly about Yin-Yang meeting Shobu in Darkness CIvilization Land. I rewrote the first two chapters, which I will post quickly, and I really want some reviews! I haven't been getting any from Fanfiction.net on this and it's driving me crazy that people read it, but they don't review! So plz don't be rude and review me!!

Anime/Manga: Duel Masters Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Hentai / Drama | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 10.06.2005 | Updated On: 10.06.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 719 | Visits: 281 | Status: Work In Progress

A/N: Ihad another idea of how Shobu andthe others would meet Yin-Yang andthis is just the prologueso please read it andtell me what u think of it! Thanks!
Love,
Battygirl!
P.S:I'd like 2 give a thanks2Star AJT 84at Fanfiction.net for an insult that shall b used on Jamira somewhere along the line in this story! So Thanks!
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN DUEL MASTERS(like you guys didn't know that)

Unwanted Betrothal
By Battygirl
Summary
This is another way for Shobu and the others to meet Yin-Yang. I really wanted to change it a little and I kinda made a big boo-boo on the Prince's name so I had to change it best I could...anywho, if you like the changes please tell me k? Anyway...this is pretty much a story about my character Yin-Yang who is trying to get out of a betrothal to Prince Irving. Jamira is her servant, Shobu won't shut the Hell up, and she owns a plushie of Kokujo. You need to read to find out...I also edited it from the original version on Fanfiction.net so the first two chapters after will be a little different. If you want to read the original, tell me and I'll post the first two original chappies!! Remember; review me!!
Prologue
This is my version of what happened after Shobu had dueled and had beaten the princes of each civilization except Darkness and in my version; they follow him to the realm of Darkness to see him get killed by its ruler. When he arrives in the Darkness civilization, however, Shobu finds something (or should I say, someone) that really surprises him.

A/N: I know... (Sarcasm) Real Long Chapter! Anyway pleasereview so I'll know if I should continue!