Fan Fiction / Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Toorima Nitotte Karichin (Volume 1) ❯ The Beginning ( Chapter 1 )

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The Beginning (Chapter 1)

(Between Classes)

Kirei is walking in the hallway from math class and she sees Shinka, her boyfriend, at his locker. "Hey Shinka!" Says Kirei. Shinka looks around nervously trying to see who called his name. Seeing his girlfriend he says, "Oh! Kirei it's just you! I thought a monster was after me!!" Kirei glares at Shinka. "What did you just call me?" she screeches. "So what did you call me for?" Shinka questions lazily while backing up very slowly against his locker. Still burning off her anger she looks away and 'hns' ignoring his question. "Kirei cut this shit out and please tell me. I know you love me!!" he says innocently while looking at his girlfriend. "Well, we got a message from someone." answered Kirei. "Oh...I thought I did something wrong!" says Shinka, relieved he didn't do anything to piss Kirei off. "No you big dummy! Why would I be mad at you for something, unless you did something you never told me about. "Kirei says with a threat laced in her voice. "Soo... what was the message about?" Shinka says trying to get off the subject. Succeeding in doing so Kirei answered lovingly, "Some guy who called himself the Youkai Shukun." "Who would want to be called the Demon Lord?" asked Shinka. "I don't know, but he wants us to kill some guy named Yoko." answered Kirei. "So... Do we have a picture of this Kiyo guy?" he asked. "Yeah, actually, we do for a change!" says Kirei while pulling out the picture. "Wow! He's hot!" says someone behind Shinka. "Oh! Hey Rue!" says Kirei. "So... Who is he?" Rue questioned. "Umm... Uhhh..." Kirei stutters. "He's Kirei's long lost brother!" Shinka blurts out randomly. "Oh! Wow! I didn't know that the Kurosaki sisters have a brother!” says Rue. "That's because they don't have a brother." says Secret. "What? But Shinka said that the guy in the picture is Kirei's long lost brother!?!" Rue says confusingly. "Well, now that you mention it, they do have a long lost brother!" says Secret while seeing Kirei's glare at her. "Oh! Ok! I got to go!" says Rue. "Bye Rue! See you later!” says Kirei. " Secret! I'm going to kill you!" screamed Kirei. "Uh Oh!" Secret said nervously. " You almost gave us away, Secret!" yelled Kirei while turning red in the face from so much anger. "I'm soo sorry, Kirei." Says Secret apologetically. "Ok, I'm sorry for yelling at you, but next time think before you say something, or it'll be your tongue!" Kirei says jokingly. "I forgive you Kirei!" Secret says laughing a bit. " Hello!?!" says Shinka, feeling left out of the conversation. “So, Kirei, who is that guy in the picture, really?" asks Secret. "Well, he's the guy we're supposed to kill. "Kirei answered. "Oh..." Secret says disappointingly.

(At Lunch)

Walking into the cafeteria Tanrei, Kirei's twin sister, is causing a scene. "HELLO LINDSEY, REBECCA, KIREI, SECRET, SHINKA, RISA, KISA, YOSHI, DICE, AND THE PEOPLE OF THE CAFETIREA! I, TANREI, HAVE COME TO EAT THE LUNCH OF THE CAFETIREA, FOR I AM HUNGRY!!!! SO NOW I WILL WAIT IN A LINE BY MY SISTER AND FRIENDS, SO TOGETHER WE CAN BUY LUNCH AND EAT, FOR WHEN WE EAT IT OUR STOMACH'S HUNGER WILL BE SATISFIED!!!!" yelled Tanrei happily. All of the people who knew Tanrei had their hands over their faces and shaking their heads, and acting like they didn't know Tanrei. Tanrei walked over to her friends and her sister slapped her over the head while yelling, " Why in hell's name did you make such a scene!" Everyone says 'hi' back cautiously, afraid Tanrei would create another scene. "So, Secret told us we have a new client!" says Tanrei happily. "Yeah," said Kirei, "we'll talk about it after school at Shinka's place."

School went on till it was over...(a/n: sorry to lazy to write school scenes.)

(After School)

(At Shinka's Place)

The group of friends all went to Shinka's house to discuss what to do about the message.

"Ok, Kirei," says Dice, Secret's boyfriend, "who do we have to kill this time?" "His name is Yoko," answered Kirei, "We are supposed to go meet the person who sent the message to us tonight. "Kirei told the group. "So we all have to get ready for tonight, right sis?" says Tanrei. "Yes," says Kirei, "now. Kawaii, you stay close to me and Tanrei tonight, ok?" "Ok big sis." says Kawaii. (a/n: Kawaii is Tanrei and Kirei's adopted sister)

(At the Meeting Place)

You meet with the strange guy, who calls himself Youkai Shukun, on a pier two hours away from Shinka's house. "So Kirei, what does this guy look like?" asked Yoshi. "Well, he looks just like that guy who is coming straight for us." answered Kirei. "Are you the group that calls themselves the 'Toorima Nitotte Karichin'?" the mysterious guy by the name of Youkai Shukun asked. "Who's asking?" questioned Kisa. "Yeah, who are you?" asked Lindsey. "I am the one who sent you that message. I am Youkai Shukun." answered the strange man. "Oh. Ok." Said Shinka stupidly. "So why do we have to kill this Yoko person anyways?" asked Tanrei. "Because he knows who I really am and he can use that information to destroy me and my plans." answered Youkai Shukun. "Ok, we got it!" says Kawaii. "Good luck, Toorima Nitotte Karichin. Oh! and for payment, just name your price and you'll get it." says Youkai Shukun. "How 'bout a million for this guy so we can split it up between us?" said Kirei. "I said anything. So you'll get it," answered Youkai Shukun, "just meet me here at this pier when you are finished, and I'll be here." Youkai Lord said while turning around to leave. Looking over his shoulder he said, "His full name is Yoko Kurama and he is a pure blooded silver kitsune. One of the last of his kind" With that he turned around and left, disappearing into the night. "Ok... now that was weird." said Tanrei. "Yeah," replied Kirei, "lets all go back to Shinka's house to figure out a plan to kill this guy."

(Back at Shinka's House)

"Big sis?" says Kawaii. "Yes?" answer both Tanrei and Kirei at the same time. "I don't trust that creepy guy. There's just something about him I don't like, it creeps me out.” says Kawaii. "I don't trust him either." says Lindsey. "Yeah me two!" says Rebecca. "Me three!” says Kisa. "Me four!" says Risa. "Me five!" says Shinka. "Me six" says Dice. "Me seven" says Secret. "Me eight" says Yoshi. "Ok we get it! We all don't trust him but we have a job to do" says Kirei. "We need to make a plan." says Tanrei for once acting serious. You hear a round of 'oks' and 'sure' in the room. "If Yoko is innocent we fake his death. So Kirei you can transform in to Kurama and Tanrei you can use your powers to transform Yoko into Kirei" says Shinka. "Sure" says Tanrei. "Ok" replied Kirei. "Since we all know that Kirei can heal herself within hours we can hurt her when she looks like Yoko. So it looks like we are doing our job. While the real Yoko disguised as Kirei gets away unharmed." "I forgot you could do that big sister!' said Kawaii. "SO Shinka will hit me when I'm under disguise so it looks like Yoko. Ok got it!" "Alright now we have a plan that might work! Well what are we waiting for! Let's go hunting!" yells Tanrei.

A/N: Sorry to end it at such a bad place but my fingers hurt really bad from typing all this since I'm used to writing with pencil instead of typing! And also when I write Yoko or Kurama I mean they are the same person, Kurama can transform into Yoko at will in my story. Well please review and tell me what you think about it and what I need to change! Until next time!

Ja Ne!

-- demonfromhell --

My Lil' Japanese Dictionary

Kawaii- Cute

Kitsune- fox

Youkai- demon

Shukun- lord

Tanrei- grace, beauty, elegance

Kirei- pretty, nice, beautiful, fair