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Raven's Revenge

Disclaimer: I do not own Zoids or any of it's characters, but I do own Emily, Nat, the three girls and the two punk boys and The Evil Spray Cans of Doom.

*Thoughts*

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Hi, this is my sequel to A!MGS!(Ahhhhhhhhhhh! My Geno Saurer), it's about Raven and Shadow after the events of the last fic, I tried to make this as good as the original, but I doubt it is, but I'll wait and see what everyone says, read review and enjoy

Shadow was walking in town, he was going to get some black paint so he could paint himself back to his normal colour

Suddenly 3 girls started rushing to him

"Wow, a pink Dinosaur, how cute, I wanna keep him!" one of the girls said

"HE'S MINE!!! HE'S MINE!!! HE'S MINE!!!" one of the other girls said hugging the organoid like it was her most prized possession

"ARRRHHHHHHH" Shadow screamed and tried to scramble away

but the girls stopped him by grabbing on to him and held him back with surprising strength

"No, He's MINE!!!! The third girl said grabbing his tail

The girls argued like this for a while, eventually they let go of Shadow ,

He sneaked away while they where still arguing, luckily for him no one noticed him sneak away

As soon as he was out of sight he started to run away as fast as his feet could carry him

…Somewhere Else…

Two Girls were walking in the desert and talking about Beyblade.

"Beyblade is sooo cool" Nat said.

"I guess it's alright" Emily said.

"and Kai's sooo cute!!, I wanna marry him when I'm older!!" said Nat.

"in your dreams Nat, how could you marry a cartoon character" Emily said.

"what's wrong with liking a cartoon character?" asked Nat.

"never mind" Emily mumbled.

then suddenly Pinkie…… er…… I mean Shadow was running past , he looked terrified.

"hey, isn't that the dinosaur we painted earlier!?" asked Nat pointing to Shadow.

"yeah, it sure looks like it, let's go get him!!!" Cried Emily then the girls started to chase Shadow, he turned around and noticed them chasing him, looking even more terrified he ran even faster

"aw, he's getting away!" Nat said

"He's… way… too… fast for… us.." said Emily getting tired

"lets… take… a… break.." said Nat exhausted

"yeah… we… can't keep up… with him" Emily said equally as exhausted

after that they sat down on the sand and started talking about stuff.

…Out somewhere in the desert…

Raven was standing infront of his pinkly painted Geno Saurer thinking about recent events

*Well at least I could replace the guns and Particle charge Cannon, Shadow had better be back soon with that black paint, it's way too embarrassing to fight in a pink Geno Saurer like this, no one will ever take me seriously, and Van, he's sooo dead, as soon as my Geno Saurer is back to normal, he's gonna go down* thought Raven while waiting for Shadow to return

…back to Shadow…

he was running like the wind trying to get away from the girls, after a while he decided to check behind him, no signs of them, he looked very relieved, then he slowed to a walk

…an hour later…

Shadow spotted a big building ahead of him, probably an abandoned factory, he decided to investigate.

When he got closer he saw huge graffiti on the side of the building, but he couldn't see what he said, but he didn't really care anyways.

But when he got closer still he realized it said 'RAVEN IS A LOSER!' in big black writing (A/N no offence to Raven fans, anyway I'm a Raven fan myself, so don't think that I hate him or anything, ok now on with the fic)

Grrrrrrrrrrr *No one, and I mean NO ONE! Talks of my master like that!* Shadow thought angrily.

Suddenly two punk-like boys walked out from the side of the building

"Wow! What in the world is this? A pink organoid? Now I've seen everything" one of them said

"hey wher'd you come from Pinkie? Playschool? you sure look like you did" he said then they burst into hysterical laughter

"Grrrrrrrr!" Shadow Growled and then charged at them, knocking them against the wall, they fell unconscious.

*hmph, that should teach them not to say bad stuff about my master* thought Shadow angrily

then suddenly he noticed a spray can on the ground, a BLACK spray can.

*finally found some Black paint, now me and the Geno Saurer will be back to normal* thought Shadow happily then he grabbed the spray paint and ran to Raven as fast as he could, humming Barbie Girl by Aqua while running.

…when he reached Raven's campsite…

It was dark and Raven was sitting in front of the fire cooking dinner, then he saw a pink organoid running towards him

*heh, must be Shadow, he's probably got the spray paint*

Raven was right as shadow came closer you could see him holding a spray can in his mouth.

"Shadow, give me the spray paint!" Raven commanded

Shadow nodded and dropped the can, but one thing that was unexpected was that as soon as the can hit the ground it exploded spraying Black paint everywhere, even Raven was covered in black and he looked very ticked off

"SHADOW!!! CLEAN UP THIS MESS RIGHT NOW!!!" Raven yelled furious

Shadow obeyed, looking down and ashamed he started to clean up the mess

*I shouldn't of dropped the can, I should of put it carefully down, I was so stupid, well at least me and the Geno Saurer are back to normal* Shadow thought

after that Shadow cleaned the black paint from Raven with a pink sponge with little red hearts on it

"Shadow! Where did you get this!?" Raven asked referring to the pink sponge shadow was holding

"I found it in the ruins of a Republican Military base" shadow said

"why did you have to get a girly one!? Why not a black one?! Raven asked

"um, it was the only one there" Shadow said nervously

"never mind, it's not important" Raven mumbled

*phew, that was close, if Raven found out that I like pink sponges with little hearts on them he'd kill me* thought Shadow relieved while cleaning the black paint off Raven

…Out in who knows where…

Emily and Nat where Exploring the Desert yet again when they spotted the Blade Liger, Command Wolf, and Gustave(A/N is that spelled right?),

Van, Fiona, Moonbay and Irvine were off somewhere.

"hey lookie, there's giant animals!!" Nat said pointing to the Zoids.

"yeah, let's give them a makeover" Emily said

"we'll paint the blue one first, blue's a boy colour, yuck!" Nat said referring to the Blade Liger

"yeah, let's paint it pink" Emily said then they got the out The Evil Spray Cans of Doom and started to paint it.

…A bit Later…

"Now that's much better" Emily said proudly

"yeah, it looks really neat now"

The Blade Liger was completely painted pink, and it said cute lil kitty in light blue writing on the side, it was painted in a very girly way.

"let's paint the others too" Nat said

"no, we can't, it looks like the owners are coming back" said Nat

Nat was right, Van, Fiona, Moonbay, Irvine and Zeke where walking back.

"aww, but I wanted to paint the wolfie" Nat complained

"maybe next time, but now we have to home, it is kinda late" Emily said

"yeah, ok" Nat said then the girls ran in the dirction to their home

…meanwhile Van and co….

"hey, doesn't the Blade Liger look a little strange to you" Moonbay asked

"yeah it does, but it's probably a trick of the light" Irvine said

but they realized what was wrong when they got closer

"Ahhhhhhhhhh! My… my Blade Liger, what happened to it" Van said.

"hehehe, it lookes like it got painted like the Geno Saurer did the other day" Irvine said

"I think it looks kinda cute" said Fiona

"this is soo embarrassing" Van complained "A Zoid isn't supposed to look cute"

"hey I think I see the Geno Saurer coming this way" Moonbay said.

"I see it too" Fiona said.

yes the Geno Saurer was coming their way, except this time it was completely black instead of pink with ribbons and stuff on it.

"It's Raven, his Zoid is back to normal by the looks of it" said Irvine.

"alright, lets get in our Zoids and fight him" Van said

everyone entered their Zoids and got themselves ready, when Raven got closer he saw that the Blade Liger was repainted and smirked in amusement

"hehehe, hey Van, it looks like your Zoid got painted too" Raven said while snickering

"It's not funny" Van said "let's settle this with a Zoid Battle, Zeke Mobilize" at that Zeke when in Van's Beyblade… um… I mean Zoid.

"Shadow!" Raven commanded and Shadow went in the Geno Saurer.

"alright, I'll do the blade attack and slice him in half" Van said confidently.

When he got the blades out they turned out to be painted pink with ribbons tied to them, and they where no longer sharp, so they couldn't cut thought the Geno Sauer.

"what the!?What happened to my blades?!?!" Van yelled

"hehehe, well, it looks like you'll be much easier to beat" Raven said snickering then he pushed the button for the particle beam.

The beam shot out. "I'll have to use the shield!" Van said but when he pushed the switch for the shield but instead of a shield a big bubble whent around the Blade Liger.

"huh, what just happened!?" Van said then the particle beam hit the shield… err bubble, it popped and the air suddenly whooshed out, the Blade Liger stated to fly through the air.

"AHHHHHHHH!!!! WHAT"S HAPPENING!?!?!?!" Van screamed as his Blade Liger flew out of sight.

"Van!" Fiona yelled and ran after him.

"well it looks like we'll have to go after him" Moonbay said

"yeah" replied Irvine them they also went after Van.

"hehehe, well that should take care of Van for a while, but next Van, I'm not going to go so easy on you, you are going down for sure" Raven said, then left the area and went back to his campsite, Shadow running beside him.

-End-

Alright, I'm finished, I don't think the fic had much to do with the title, but I couldn't think of a better title, I hope you liked it, I'm sorry if it isn't as funny as the first but I tried, please Review and tell me what you think, I would really like to know, bye

~ShadowDragon22~