Fan Fiction ❯ Confession ❯ Chapter 3: Feelings Revealed ( Chapter 3 )
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By: Crissy crissy 
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 03.24.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 704 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 03.24.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 704 | Status: Completed
Chapter 3: Feelings Revealed
Nightfall had arrived and the night sky was clear. The waves of the ocean were unruffled. It was a nice night for anything to happen. As the 3 small crew disembarked from their ship they arrived into a small town into India. India was very crowded at night because the best taverns were open, and people were everywhere. As the 3 walked, Maxi saw a tavern suitable for his taste. He motioned Kilik to follow him inside. The thought of being at taverns was not suitable for a young lady like her. She decides to wait outside and let them go have their drinks. Kilik soon followed behind Maxi. When the two walked in they made some eye catching attention by the people. The two sat down at the bar looking around the tavern as everybody watched them. Kilik stared at Maxi waiting for him to say something. The bar tender approached the bar and greeted them politely.
Before the tender could ask them what they wanted to drink they both replied Sake. The tender handed them 2 full bottles of Sake. Quickly Kilik began opening the bottle and chugging down its contents. A dizzy feeling shook inside his head.
Maxi: wow are you an alcoholic? You donft chug it down like its water sip it ok.
Kilik: Whatever. You have to help me she is waiting outside. I think now is the right time to tell her how I feel.
Maxi: *he takes a sip of his sake* Yeah yeah I will help you with your love problem. First off take your time because you will screw up and not know what to say. *Kilik shook his head in agreement to this*
Kilik: Yeah, but thatfs the thing.. I.
Maxi: Shut up and let me finish, see if you would just listen. Ok now this is what you should do. Talk to her and ask her if you two can go talk or hang out somewhere privately. If she asks you why, just tell her something like this eI just want to spend time with you. We are friends and thatfs what friends dof Make sure she is smiling, that means you have her approval. Or you can do it my way if you just want her so bad. Get her drunk and when she passes out take her right then and there *Maxi has a wicked grin on his face, he takes another sip of his sake*
Kilik: Wellc I donft like that last suggestion. I think I will just talk to her and actually try to get all of this out. Itfs bothering me so badly and I am anxious. Maxi you have to show me the way! Show me the way!!
Maxi: Ok ok, then after that you may want to start walking and talking to her as you find a good place. Then once you get to that spot start talking serious. Just donft get too serious where you would scare the hell out of her. And thenc..*Maxi is interrupted, as a young pretty Indian girl gets in between their conversation. She smiles and winks at the hot and sexy pirate.*
Maxi: well well what do we have here. Hey gorgeous.
Kilik: (ugh!! Everytime!! Dammit!) Excuse me miss but do you mind? You arenft desperate as I am. *Kilik politely pushes her out of the way*
Maxi: *he mumbles in a low voice* dammit Kilik donft ruin it for me now! Shefs foxy and hot.
Kilik: You are not helping. So then where should I take her, if we go somewhere privately.
Maxi: You two should get an Inn, but I donft want her to suspect that you want to get laid or something. But then you can tell her itfs for all 3 of us. Yeah she will buy that excuse. Waitc are you trying to get laid or do you seriously like her? *He takes another sip of sake, Maxi is slowly getting intoxicated*
Kilik: Uh, I told you that I really like her. Yeah I know she turns me on but I donft want to take that step and ruin her. She might be a virgin! I canft do that.
Maxi: Are you a virgin?
Kilik: *He nods and blushes*
Maxi: *Maxi roars with laughter, everyone stares at him to see what was so funny*
Kilik: Hey shut up!!! I like being this way, since I am saving it for somebody special. If I just had my rod with me I would smack you with it right now. You are pissing me off. But continue *again they are interrupted by the pretty Indian girl*
Maxi: Hey sexy, wait until Ifm done here then me and you can hit the bed. But right now Ifm handling some business. *Maxi starts fondling with her breast*
Kilik: OK! So what do I do when we are at the inn?
Maxi: Have a small conversation to start off with. Donft come out and say OH XIANGHUA I LOVE YOU LETS DO IT NOW> Say something like, nice night huh or yeah India is great what do you think or ya know some lame stuff to kill some time off your hands.
Kilik: Ok I am trusting you ok, if I screw up itfs your ass and I am not joking. I will challenge you to a duel and I will seriouslyc.
Maxi: Ok I get your point. *the young pretty Indian girl starts licking on Maxifs face*
As Kilik got up from the bar he turned to Maxi. His gentle eyes were no more than a stone cold stare. He was very serious about this and didnft want to mess up. Kilik watched in disgust as the Indian girl was being groped and as she licked Maxies face. Maxi smirked and wished him good luck.
When Kilik walked outside the tavern he found Xianghua talking to Talim and a group of men that heard rumors of Soul Edge and Soul Calibur. Talim smiled and walked off with the group of elderly men. Xianghuafs gaze looked at Kilik. Her smile gave him a warm feeling. An uneasy feeling came over Kilik and he felt butterflies in his stomach.
Kilik: Hey, sorry to keep you waiting. So I see you were having a good conversation with some people. How was that coming along?
Xianghua: It was great. They were interesting. You donft mind if we walked and talked?
Kilik (Wow this is going swell, glad I didnft need to ask her that.) Sure. Isnft that what friends do?
Xianghua: You know what, maybe this journey isnft going to be fast but at least I know I can get it done and it will be over with soon. What about you Kilik? Do you think everything will go well so far?
Kilik: You are a strong brave girl. Of course it will, I believe in you.
Xianghua: Finally somebody understands where Ifm coming from. You seem like the type to know that.
Kilik: Yes once you been thru so much itfs pretty much ordinary stuff (Wow this is going swell.. Maybe I donft have to beat Maxi into bloody pulp. This is going great, shefs the one doing all the talking)
Xianghua letfs out a deep yawn and shakes her head wildly. Her hair is in a mess now.
Kilik: Are you tired?
Xianghua: Yeah, I didnft get any sleep because Maxi kept me up. He rambled on and on about the story of his crew and how they were slaughtered. Then he got drunk and then told me some weird stuff like how he use to have this girlfriend who was his stalker. I have no clue so he kept me up for so long I couldnft concentrate on sleep. Sometimes he can be a loser. But hey, what do ya know hefs our friend now.
Kilik: Thatfs interesting yet amusing in so many ways. *Kilik laughs a bit* Well if you are tired we can get an Inn.
Xianghua: Thatfs sweet of you. Sure letfs do that.
Kilik: Ok
The two walk down the street. Xianghua makes an unexpected move. Slowly she grabs his hand making sure she didnft get a bad reaction from him. Kilik smiled with joy and was content at the situation. The two walked slowly down the dirt street hand in hand. Kilik scopes around for a good Inn. The two continue to walk.
Xianghua: So what did you and Maxi talk about back at the tavern? I saw this one girl all over Maxi.
Kilik: oh you know the typical guy stuff that guys talk about.
Xianghua: Men, hehe I donft get you. You 2 probably talking about ya knowc nookie!
Kilik: Do what!!?
Xianghua: Just kidding!!
The two smile and laugh, finally Kilik spots a good Inn, they walk inside and exotic plants surround the place.
The owner was too tired to talk or do anything really.
Owner: upstairs to your right 3 beds available, bathroom all that good stuff.
Kilik shrugged and walked up the stairs as Xianghua followed. When they walked inside they got the best cleanest room. The walls were fresh and white, and the room smelled of jasmine as candles lit the room with their soft glow. Everything in the mood set the mood totally. The beds had satin red sheets. This was all too good for Kilik.
Kilik: (hmmm nice and sexy this is going to be perfect. As long as it isnft ruined) This is nice, can I have the bed by the window?
Xianghua: sure! It sure does smell nice in here.
Kilik: So how do you like it here so far? Is it getting good yet?
Xianghua: I love it all.
Kilik shifts uncomfortable on his bed. His eyes roam all over her body. Small drops of sweat cover his forehead.
Kilik: I love it so far, I never really traveled like this since we met Maxi. India is nice.
Xianghua: It sure is. I wouldnft mind staying here for a couple of days.
Kilik: *he yawns a bit getting tired* (Ahhh!! I have to stay awake for her! Im not done yet)
Xianghua: Soc. I guess I am going to take a nap now.
Kilik: Wait, I need to tell you something. Now this is serious and I donft want you to freak out ok. ( Oh no I hope I donft make it seem so odd)
Xianghua: Yes?
Kilik: Xianghua I donft know how to put this butc. You are a very attractive and, I have been holding this in for a long time since we met. Butc. I like you a lot. No no no no *Kilik shakes his head* let me rephrase that. I love you so much and I hope you can accept that.
Xianghua: *she is stunned and flattered by his affectionate words* Umc I know what I want to say.. Speechless!!
Kilik: Itfs ok if you donft like me back. I can accept that if you do feel that way.
Xianghua: no no that would be wrong of me but, why didnft you tell me sooner?
Kilik: You donft know how difficult it was for me.
Xianghua: But, I do like you back but as a good friend, I donft want you to take a step into a relationship and get hurt. Letfs start out as friends and see where this takes us.
Kilik: I understand. I knew this would happen. Ifm sorry. I donft want to be just friends! You donft know how much I feel for you. You have to understand it all.
Xianghua: I do! I understand. We can be friends but with special qualities. We can be intimate friends. *Xianghua gets up and sits by him, she puts her arms around him and embraces him tightly*
Kilik: Yes now I see.
Suddenly something caught their attention. Loud moans of pleasure and screaming came from the room next door. It echoed into their room, making the sound even louder. The walls were shaking and the bed next door was squeaking. Kilik raised an eyebrow.
Kilik: What the hell!?
Xianghua: Sounds like someone is getting nookie! Hhehe
The two listen careful to who it is.
Maxi: oh yes!! This is so fucking great. Youfre my bitch now. Make me cum!! Oh yes!!!
Girl from tavern: Oohh oh yes!!!
Kilik: Oh god! Itfs Maxi.
Xianghua: Well thatfs Maxi for ya. Hefs a perv. When we do that we wont be like animals.
Kilik: Say what!!?
Xianghua: Nothing just kidding!!
Xianghua sits on the bed next to Kilik, and embraces him. Kilik felt happy that all his strong feelings were let out and the wait was over. He couldnft believe she would actually return the feelings for him. Kilik slowly leans in to give her a kiss on the lips. Xianghuafs hands reach up to his hair and her fingers playfully run thru his hair. The two fell back on the bed, and held each other while their were lips were locked together. Now that Kilik got what he wanted he wanted to take it a step further now.
Kilik: Ready for that next step?
Xianghua: *she giggles without replying back*
~THE END~
Maxi: Hold on what about the lemony sex scene? Arenft they going to get laid? Hello thatfs what the people want at aff.net duh!! And what about my sex scene! It was short and pointless all you did was put down the sounds we were making! You got to raise the level and go for it!
Me: Chill ok. I donft have time I have school in the morning and I am tired right now! Itfs late.
Maxi: Well at least add one after this chapter will ya.
Me: Yeah yeah I will do it tomorrow ok
~THE END NOT QUITE YET~~
Maxi: thatfs more like it.
Seriously I will since everything came out perfect but, without a sex scene! I need some time to get into my perverted mind and come up with something explicit! I promise! Chapter 4 is nothing but sex! I swear! Oh yes and I swear I wasnft trying to make this funny but its just the way it came out and because I am getting tired and the screen on my computer looks like shit right now! UGH! Im going to bed. Chapter 4 tomorrow!
Nightfall had arrived and the night sky was clear. The waves of the ocean were unruffled. It was a nice night for anything to happen. As the 3 small crew disembarked from their ship they arrived into a small town into India. India was very crowded at night because the best taverns were open, and people were everywhere. As the 3 walked, Maxi saw a tavern suitable for his taste. He motioned Kilik to follow him inside. The thought of being at taverns was not suitable for a young lady like her. She decides to wait outside and let them go have their drinks. Kilik soon followed behind Maxi. When the two walked in they made some eye catching attention by the people. The two sat down at the bar looking around the tavern as everybody watched them. Kilik stared at Maxi waiting for him to say something. The bar tender approached the bar and greeted them politely.
Before the tender could ask them what they wanted to drink they both replied Sake. The tender handed them 2 full bottles of Sake. Quickly Kilik began opening the bottle and chugging down its contents. A dizzy feeling shook inside his head.
Maxi: wow are you an alcoholic? You donft chug it down like its water sip it ok.
Kilik: Whatever. You have to help me she is waiting outside. I think now is the right time to tell her how I feel.
Maxi: *he takes a sip of his sake* Yeah yeah I will help you with your love problem. First off take your time because you will screw up and not know what to say. *Kilik shook his head in agreement to this*
Kilik: Yeah, but thatfs the thing.. I.
Maxi: Shut up and let me finish, see if you would just listen. Ok now this is what you should do. Talk to her and ask her if you two can go talk or hang out somewhere privately. If she asks you why, just tell her something like this eI just want to spend time with you. We are friends and thatfs what friends dof Make sure she is smiling, that means you have her approval. Or you can do it my way if you just want her so bad. Get her drunk and when she passes out take her right then and there *Maxi has a wicked grin on his face, he takes another sip of his sake*
Kilik: Wellc I donft like that last suggestion. I think I will just talk to her and actually try to get all of this out. Itfs bothering me so badly and I am anxious. Maxi you have to show me the way! Show me the way!!
Maxi: Ok ok, then after that you may want to start walking and talking to her as you find a good place. Then once you get to that spot start talking serious. Just donft get too serious where you would scare the hell out of her. And thenc..*Maxi is interrupted, as a young pretty Indian girl gets in between their conversation. She smiles and winks at the hot and sexy pirate.*
Maxi: well well what do we have here. Hey gorgeous.
Kilik: (ugh!! Everytime!! Dammit!) Excuse me miss but do you mind? You arenft desperate as I am. *Kilik politely pushes her out of the way*
Maxi: *he mumbles in a low voice* dammit Kilik donft ruin it for me now! Shefs foxy and hot.
Kilik: You are not helping. So then where should I take her, if we go somewhere privately.
Maxi: You two should get an Inn, but I donft want her to suspect that you want to get laid or something. But then you can tell her itfs for all 3 of us. Yeah she will buy that excuse. Waitc are you trying to get laid or do you seriously like her? *He takes another sip of sake, Maxi is slowly getting intoxicated*
Kilik: Uh, I told you that I really like her. Yeah I know she turns me on but I donft want to take that step and ruin her. She might be a virgin! I canft do that.
Maxi: Are you a virgin?
Kilik: *He nods and blushes*
Maxi: *Maxi roars with laughter, everyone stares at him to see what was so funny*
Kilik: Hey shut up!!! I like being this way, since I am saving it for somebody special. If I just had my rod with me I would smack you with it right now. You are pissing me off. But continue *again they are interrupted by the pretty Indian girl*
Maxi: Hey sexy, wait until Ifm done here then me and you can hit the bed. But right now Ifm handling some business. *Maxi starts fondling with her breast*
Kilik: OK! So what do I do when we are at the inn?
Maxi: Have a small conversation to start off with. Donft come out and say OH XIANGHUA I LOVE YOU LETS DO IT NOW> Say something like, nice night huh or yeah India is great what do you think or ya know some lame stuff to kill some time off your hands.
Kilik: Ok I am trusting you ok, if I screw up itfs your ass and I am not joking. I will challenge you to a duel and I will seriouslyc.
Maxi: Ok I get your point. *the young pretty Indian girl starts licking on Maxifs face*
As Kilik got up from the bar he turned to Maxi. His gentle eyes were no more than a stone cold stare. He was very serious about this and didnft want to mess up. Kilik watched in disgust as the Indian girl was being groped and as she licked Maxies face. Maxi smirked and wished him good luck.
When Kilik walked outside the tavern he found Xianghua talking to Talim and a group of men that heard rumors of Soul Edge and Soul Calibur. Talim smiled and walked off with the group of elderly men. Xianghuafs gaze looked at Kilik. Her smile gave him a warm feeling. An uneasy feeling came over Kilik and he felt butterflies in his stomach.
Kilik: Hey, sorry to keep you waiting. So I see you were having a good conversation with some people. How was that coming along?
Xianghua: It was great. They were interesting. You donft mind if we walked and talked?
Kilik (Wow this is going swell, glad I didnft need to ask her that.) Sure. Isnft that what friends do?
Xianghua: You know what, maybe this journey isnft going to be fast but at least I know I can get it done and it will be over with soon. What about you Kilik? Do you think everything will go well so far?
Kilik: You are a strong brave girl. Of course it will, I believe in you.
Xianghua: Finally somebody understands where Ifm coming from. You seem like the type to know that.
Kilik: Yes once you been thru so much itfs pretty much ordinary stuff (Wow this is going swell.. Maybe I donft have to beat Maxi into bloody pulp. This is going great, shefs the one doing all the talking)
Xianghua letfs out a deep yawn and shakes her head wildly. Her hair is in a mess now.
Kilik: Are you tired?
Xianghua: Yeah, I didnft get any sleep because Maxi kept me up. He rambled on and on about the story of his crew and how they were slaughtered. Then he got drunk and then told me some weird stuff like how he use to have this girlfriend who was his stalker. I have no clue so he kept me up for so long I couldnft concentrate on sleep. Sometimes he can be a loser. But hey, what do ya know hefs our friend now.
Kilik: Thatfs interesting yet amusing in so many ways. *Kilik laughs a bit* Well if you are tired we can get an Inn.
Xianghua: Thatfs sweet of you. Sure letfs do that.
Kilik: Ok
The two walk down the street. Xianghua makes an unexpected move. Slowly she grabs his hand making sure she didnft get a bad reaction from him. Kilik smiled with joy and was content at the situation. The two walked slowly down the dirt street hand in hand. Kilik scopes around for a good Inn. The two continue to walk.
Xianghua: So what did you and Maxi talk about back at the tavern? I saw this one girl all over Maxi.
Kilik: oh you know the typical guy stuff that guys talk about.
Xianghua: Men, hehe I donft get you. You 2 probably talking about ya knowc nookie!
Kilik: Do what!!?
Xianghua: Just kidding!!
The two smile and laugh, finally Kilik spots a good Inn, they walk inside and exotic plants surround the place.
The owner was too tired to talk or do anything really.
Owner: upstairs to your right 3 beds available, bathroom all that good stuff.
Kilik shrugged and walked up the stairs as Xianghua followed. When they walked inside they got the best cleanest room. The walls were fresh and white, and the room smelled of jasmine as candles lit the room with their soft glow. Everything in the mood set the mood totally. The beds had satin red sheets. This was all too good for Kilik.
Kilik: (hmmm nice and sexy this is going to be perfect. As long as it isnft ruined) This is nice, can I have the bed by the window?
Xianghua: sure! It sure does smell nice in here.
Kilik: So how do you like it here so far? Is it getting good yet?
Xianghua: I love it all.
Kilik shifts uncomfortable on his bed. His eyes roam all over her body. Small drops of sweat cover his forehead.
Kilik: I love it so far, I never really traveled like this since we met Maxi. India is nice.
Xianghua: It sure is. I wouldnft mind staying here for a couple of days.
Kilik: *he yawns a bit getting tired* (Ahhh!! I have to stay awake for her! Im not done yet)
Xianghua: Soc. I guess I am going to take a nap now.
Kilik: Wait, I need to tell you something. Now this is serious and I donft want you to freak out ok. ( Oh no I hope I donft make it seem so odd)
Xianghua: Yes?
Kilik: Xianghua I donft know how to put this butc. You are a very attractive and, I have been holding this in for a long time since we met. Butc. I like you a lot. No no no no *Kilik shakes his head* let me rephrase that. I love you so much and I hope you can accept that.
Xianghua: *she is stunned and flattered by his affectionate words* Umc I know what I want to say.. Speechless!!
Kilik: Itfs ok if you donft like me back. I can accept that if you do feel that way.
Xianghua: no no that would be wrong of me but, why didnft you tell me sooner?
Kilik: You donft know how difficult it was for me.
Xianghua: But, I do like you back but as a good friend, I donft want you to take a step into a relationship and get hurt. Letfs start out as friends and see where this takes us.
Kilik: I understand. I knew this would happen. Ifm sorry. I donft want to be just friends! You donft know how much I feel for you. You have to understand it all.
Xianghua: I do! I understand. We can be friends but with special qualities. We can be intimate friends. *Xianghua gets up and sits by him, she puts her arms around him and embraces him tightly*
Kilik: Yes now I see.
Suddenly something caught their attention. Loud moans of pleasure and screaming came from the room next door. It echoed into their room, making the sound even louder. The walls were shaking and the bed next door was squeaking. Kilik raised an eyebrow.
Kilik: What the hell!?
Xianghua: Sounds like someone is getting nookie! Hhehe
The two listen careful to who it is.
Maxi: oh yes!! This is so fucking great. Youfre my bitch now. Make me cum!! Oh yes!!!
Girl from tavern: Oohh oh yes!!!
Kilik: Oh god! Itfs Maxi.
Xianghua: Well thatfs Maxi for ya. Hefs a perv. When we do that we wont be like animals.
Kilik: Say what!!?
Xianghua: Nothing just kidding!!
Xianghua sits on the bed next to Kilik, and embraces him. Kilik felt happy that all his strong feelings were let out and the wait was over. He couldnft believe she would actually return the feelings for him. Kilik slowly leans in to give her a kiss on the lips. Xianghuafs hands reach up to his hair and her fingers playfully run thru his hair. The two fell back on the bed, and held each other while their were lips were locked together. Now that Kilik got what he wanted he wanted to take it a step further now.
Kilik: Ready for that next step?
Xianghua: *she giggles without replying back*
~THE END~
Maxi: Hold on what about the lemony sex scene? Arenft they going to get laid? Hello thatfs what the people want at aff.net duh!! And what about my sex scene! It was short and pointless all you did was put down the sounds we were making! You got to raise the level and go for it!
Me: Chill ok. I donft have time I have school in the morning and I am tired right now! Itfs late.
Maxi: Well at least add one after this chapter will ya.
Me: Yeah yeah I will do it tomorrow ok
~THE END NOT QUITE YET~~
Maxi: thatfs more like it.
Seriously I will since everything came out perfect but, without a sex scene! I need some time to get into my perverted mind and come up with something explicit! I promise! Chapter 4 is nothing but sex! I swear! Oh yes and I swear I wasnft trying to make this funny but its just the way it came out and because I am getting tired and the screen on my computer looks like shit right now! UGH! Im going to bed. Chapter 4 tomorrow!