Fan Fiction ❯ Evolutia: Gate of Omninite ❯ Dark Raiders ( Chapter 1 )

Chapter 1: Dark Raiders

Evo, a term people use to categorizes humans with super unnatural powers base on the theory of evolution. Evolutia, a species of humanoids life form that was from a distance planet that came to Earth which triggered the evolution process of Evos. Evolutia is also a term to referred people who are descendents of the original Evolutia that can unlock the Gate of Omninite. The Gate of Omninite is the ultimate relic of over and beyond power in which the user can change the whole universe.

“I am an Evolutia!”
“Yes, don’t be afraid that you’re an Evolutia. Your destiny is greater then you ever dreamed of.”
“Why choose me?”
“You are a descendent of a powerful Evolutia and the time for you to step forth has almost arrived.”
“How do I know when the time came?”
“You will know when it is time for you to know.”


“Good night,” a young girl said to me smiling and her eyes close.

I blink my eyes coming out of a daydream and surprising looking at the young girl who is standing in front of me. We are both nine years old but she treats me as a little brother since I get in trouble a lot and never pays attention to her. She has dark black hair down to her skinny shoulder with wide and big innocent eyes that sparkle beauty. Also, she has a cute little mouth that I rarely seen close but I sometimes laugh whenever she smiles or gets angry. She is a little bit shorter then me probably because she has a young skinner and fragile body then me.

“Well?” she said again trying to get my attention.

I on the other hand have a short black hair that spikes forward and have a nice, caring face, which older females find adorable. I have a pair of sharp narrow eyes adding to my complexion and sometimes my mysteriousness. My mouth is small but I can fit tons of food at the same time and I also use it to talk a lot, which doesn’t goes with the meaning of my name. I am rather tall for my age and I also have stronger and denser muscles mass then most guys older then me.

“Kiyo!” she yells moving her right arm and waving her hand towards the left.

The door on my left suddenly open by itself and it slams in my face in one quick second. The girl eyes widen as she quickly uses both of her hands to cup her mouth with the door closing. I appear with my eyes looking up but sigh softly and expectedly fall backwards landing on my back. She then suddenly begins laughing loudly as kids are appearing around us laughing with her.

I sit up cross-legged using my right hand to rub my face, which was stricken with a quick second pain. The girl walks to me using her right soft palm to pushy my forehead back. I steadily get up shaking my head while looking down at the girl who is smiling at me.

“Good night,” I finally reply as she laughs and skips away while I quickly sigh.

I look around seeing the kids are now leaving the hallway. Some are still smiling of what happened while others bust out laughing just by the sight of me. I move to my room down the hallway towards the wooden door at the end. I use my right hand to lightly grab and grip the golden brass handle of the door and twist it open. I lazily move through the open doorway and close the door behind me moving slowly to my small bed. My room is quite small which only consist of a small bed, a window on the west side of the room and a bookshelf on the east side of the room.

I am now lying completely still on the soft feathered comfortable bed with my head sink down in the white cushion pillow face down. My breathing is calm as my body finally relaxes from a day’s hard work trying to drift in a deep sleep. I am in a hidden school away from sociality in a dark eerie forest with mountains trapping it in. The isolated school teaches us how to adapt and master the supernatural abilities that we were born with. To me, it is like we are in a prison that is keeping “us” in one place for something that is beyond my understanding.

When I said “us” it means that we are different then most humans that are considered “normal”. We are called Evos, which are people born with powers based on evolution. The reasons why people despise “us” is that some of “us” used their power for the wrong purpose like evil. The school is set up to keep “us” in one place and in check so we wouldn’t use our powers for “evil”.

I turn over onto my back lazily keeping my eyes shut, trying to get into a comfortable position. Bang! My eyes forcefully open wide with fear and curiosity of what causes the loud bang. Bang! My eyes twitch at the sound of the bang as I then cautiously tilt my head to the right seeing the big window. Bang! I look closely seeing tree branches hitting the window by the powerful wind from a storm that just hit the school recently. My ear now focus at the window hearing the rain being pour down like all the ocean is release here at the same time.

I quietly appear standing in front of the window looking out the spotted glass and seeing the foggy world outside. I turn around yawning feeling tired since we did intense training today that put stress on my body like it just begging to sleep for eternality. I take several slow steps that softly drag on the ground. Bang! The ground shakes as it forces me to drive forward and land on the ground but I stand up on my feet extremely confuse of what just happened.

I slowly walk toward the window out of curiosity because the loud noise came from outside beyond the window. I cup my hands on the window as I try to look outside and barely seen an object with a smoky tail is heading towards me. My eyes narrow as I jump back landing in the center of the room while the west wall explodes in front me.

I duck my head down and cover my upper body using both arms as the force blows me back hitting the wall. I fall down from hitting the wall landing on the ground getting cover by large pieces of wood. Fire begins to spread in the room eating the wood like super termites. I am lucky to still be conscious but feel dizzy while my mind is somewhere in the distant space. Several long seconds later, I finally shake my head to get back in reality.

I use most of my strength to slide the huge pieces of wood off of me. Once I flip the last wood of me it reveals several woods sticking out of my body with bloody trails going down my body. I grab one of them with my small hands and I close my eyes tightly pulling it out while I yell in pain. After I pull the last one out of my body, I just lie there between conscious and unconscious.

The fire already spread throughout the room getting closure to me as the temperature is skyrocketing. I push my back against the wall and slowly trying to stand up with my legs shaking and my body sweating. I look around seeing the area around the hole is still on fire but I am able to dive through and jump out to safety. I look ahead of me seeing the raging fires and is about to go but suddenly a scream broke out from within the facility.

“Damn, there are people still in here,” I quickly whisper painfully limping toward the door without worrying about my own safety.

I grab the handle slowly twisting it counterclockwise and then lean my weight onto the door to open it. The door swing outward roughly hitting the wall in the hallway as I try to keep balance. I take in several deep breaths and slowly step away from the door continuing down the hallway. I can barely hear the screams of help from the people who are trap in their rooms.

Several meters away, the door on the right abruptly burst open with flames escaping into the hallway. Immediately after the door opens, a human fireball dashes out of the room screaming at the top of its lungs. The flaming child runs around, then goes down the hallway and accidentally runs into the wall causing it to collapse backwards. The child didn’t get up after it got knock down being burned to death. Bang! The room behind me explodes sending me across the hallway landing close to the burning corpse with my back smoking.

“Help!” a soft faint voice yells through the raging flames.

“Kumi!” I yell back coughing by the smoke barely standing up with cuts on my back by the pieces of wood hitting his back.

I hastily move through multiple hallways, limping, to get to the female said of the dorm rooms. During the way, my eyes begin to lose sight from the lost of blood and sometimes stagger as I begin to use the walls to keep me balance. I finally reach the door to Kumi’s room reaching for the handle but once I tough it, it burns my hand snapping my hand back.

I stand back thinking that no matter what, I have to save her even if I have to do the impossible. I narrow my eyes using my left hand to grab the handle, twisting it the instant I grab it and use my body to ram the door open. The door violently opens all the way colliding with the wall as I lose balance and roll through the flames in the room. I roll into the wall, stopping me in a suddenly halt with my head spinning in a daze. I shake my head a little as I notice that my sleeve got caught on fire and I hastily put it out.

I look around the blazing room seeing Kumi on the floor passed out from breathing too much smoke. I crawl to her despite the injuries all over my body creating a trail of blood to her. Once I reach her, I pick her up and hold her close against my body to protect her no matter what. I stare at the door seeing fire raging and is quickly spreading through out the room.

I look up giving up hope until seeing the open window above me blowing in wind that is making fire to spread quicker. I pick up Kumi as I try to stand up and walk away several feet turning towards the window. I kneel down feeling tired and weak as most of my blood is not in my body anymore. I stand up with my legs shaking from exhaustion and I then sprint towards the window diving through. I free fall two stories down while I spin through the air to land on the ground with my back with Kumi on top of me safe.

In a few seconds, she wakes up moving to the side to sit up noticing that I am unconscious and we’re outside of the burning school. She shakes me violently to wake me up which I crack my left eye out of irritation seeing tears coming down from her eyes. She helps me to stand up as we suddenly hear screaming back inside the school. I look up at one of the second story windows spotting two children banging on the glass.

While I try to figure out how to save them, the wall explodes in front of us sending chunks of rock toward us but it created an opening. I begin to run to the hole but Kumi grabs my left arm afraid that I might now come back. I turn to her with my eyes lock with hers smiling as I then rub her cheek to make her believe that I’ll return. I turn around running toward the hole but suddenly the whole building explodes blowing me back by the force while it just knock Kumi down.

I immediately stand up seeing the flaming ruin of what used to be a two story building that I spent most of my life in. Kumi runs pass me not believing what she seeing until she turns around and runs to me leaning her body on me, sobbing. With my eyes glazing at the ruins, I put my arms around her as tears are forming in my eyes. We stand there for what seems like hour but were only minutes, trap between dream and reality. Several dark figures appear in the distance walking to us in a fancy black suit with dark sunglasses.

“That’s the Evolutia, get her,” the tall one said pointing at us.

Two out of five walks up to us and one of them hits me to the ground with Kumi falling with me. As I got knock down flat on my back almost blacking out, they grab her and I couldn’t do anything about it. She begins screaming for help, especially for me, and begins struggling by kicking. They stab her with a needle and inject her with it that instantly knocks her completely.

As the pain resides, I get up to my feet seeing them leaving them with Kumi over one of their shoulder. I use my sleeve to wipe the blood coming down from my mouth and then runs toward them lifting my right arm up to strike. The tall one turns around and suddenly punches me in the stomach unleashing little bit of energy that sends shockwaves through the ground. The impact knocks me back through the air like a bullet and land on the ground sliding to a stop. I grab my stomach with my right hand while I stand up coughing up blood.

I straighten up letting go of my stomach and then run toward him again until the one who punch me pulls out a gun. My eyes widen seeing the gun as he pulls the trigger while he quickly aims it at me, which nothing matters anymore. Bang! I stop in my track as the force of the bullet pierces my right chest and I collapse forward onto my knees. I begin to fall forward as then another group of people appears from behind me exchanging bullets at each other.

A bullet pierces through one of the people who have the girl causing him to fall down with the girl. More bullets are being fired as the second group of people passes me heading towards the girl and grab her. Once they have the girl, they retreat back to where they came from disappearing from sight. I lie there half dead and half alive with a bullet in my chest causing more blood to come out of my body.

The first group of people, who first took the girl, walks towards me and gather around my dying corpse. They discuss something among themselves for a while but I couldn’t hear anything except my fading heartbeat. The tall one finally bends down and grabs my collar to lift me up, which soon after I blacken out.

Year 4004
Tokyo, Japan
Age of Evolution

It is the year and age where life is built around technology. Technology is essential to every single person’s daily life, which is run by computers A.I. For most, it made life easier to live in but it also took valuable skills that people used to specialize in that are now lost arts.

With computers running the city, there are only few human jobs, which most people in high standards can have. With that said, the most common jobs are maintenance that are always open to low and middle class can get. The popular jobs are entertainment; shop keeping and law enforcement, which are only opened to mid-high and high class.

Majority of the people in the low and middle class also turns to the life of crime. As a result, the crime rate skyrocketed through the charts and the employment of Law Enforcement also increased dramatically. The most ruthless crime organization ever existed is the Nexius Legion consisting of the top crime lords in the galaxy. The Nexius Legion also has small branches that do the dirty work and one well known is called the Dark Raiders, which is station on Moonjestic, the moon’s capital.

Even though people go to the life of crime, the most talented people turned to more realistic jobs like entertainment that does dancing, acting, and singing, which are only opened to high class. Out of the three the most popular job even by spectators is singing, due to the fact that any computer can’t take over the soul of the voice. Recently, the most famous singer on Earth and probably the galaxy can also excel at dancing and acting.

The singer is the young, beautiful, multi-talented Kumiko, the youngest female teen idol of the galaxy. Even though her past is a mystery, she grew up to have the most talented voice ever heard that comes from the soul and among other things. She travels all over Earth, the Moon, the space stations and some other human civilization on different planets to do concerts and other special events.

Her upcoming concert of the New Year is now in Tokyo; Japan, her home, to premiere her newest songs. Literally millions of people from all over are gathering at the largest stadium called Senjiko Stadium, where the concert is being held. This is the biggest up-to-date that everybody doesn’t want to miss or skip out on. I am part of the Dark Raiders and my mission is to…

I suddenly throw my body up from the bed with my right arm stretching out for something. I then begin blinking my eyes bringing my right arm back using it to rub the sweat off of my forehead. I then put both hands on my head and rub it through my black hair back as it then spike back forward like I didn’t do anything. I swing the blankets off of me swinging my legs to the side and onto the floor to sit at the edge of the bed.

I stand up barefoot looking around in my small apartment, supposedly be my home located on Earth in Tokyo. The bed slowly moves back into the wall where it will be at until I go back to bed and need it. In reaching distance is a button, which I just push that activates a system that the blinds on the whole entire south wall move up letting in the mourning sunlight.

“Ring-ring!” a screen on the west wall turns on with a phone going back and forth ringing.

“Receive call,” I slowly said in a distinct low calm voice walking towards the bathroom directly in front of the screen but off by several inches.

“Good morning Kiyoshi,” a innocent looking female with long red wavy hair said in a semi happy tone.

“…” I ignore her greetings as I am in the bathroom with the water running in the sink and staring in the mirror.

“This is just a reminder of the mission you just received couple days ago that today is the day it needs to get done.”

“Tell me something I don’t know,” I said coming out of the bathroom heading toward the closet right next to the screen.

“Alright mister meanie,” she said shock and stun but blushing that she is embarrass. She breathes in and out slowly to gain control and says, “You are to get her and bring her back here until further notice.”

“Here?” I whisper in surprise putting on my clothes.

“Yes?” she question it with more surprise then me.

“Babysitting was not my intentions before taking on this assignment and if this gets me what I deserved then I’ll be hearing from you later,” I said getting out of the closet.

I appear with a black jump suit with black shoes, black baggy pants, a black vest, and a black sleeveless trench coat over it. I slowly put on my dark-tinted sunglasses and then put my weapon in the holster in the black vest behind the trench coat.

“This is a kidnap mission so you aren’t going to start a mini war with the security guards that are there,” she said worrying.

“Don’t worry Kimi; they won’t even know that I was there, End Call.”

Nexius Legion Headquarters
“Are you sure that is the same girl from the failed mission ten years ago,” the leader of the Nexius Legion said.

“Yes, she is. As we speak, we are sending one of ours to kidnap her and this time we won’t fail,” the tall one said.

“You better not fail me again Nanashi.”

“Don’t worry sir, the gate will be ours.”

Senjiko Stadium
“30 minutes until you are up Miss Kumiko,” Kumiko’s manager calls out.

“Okay,” Kumiko replies in her dressing room sitting down on the chair staring at the mirror in front of her.

“Are you sure you are okay Kumiko?” a female said sitting on the couch.

“Thank you for being such a good friend Naomi for being here with me but I am okay like I said,” Kumiko said turning around smiling at Naomi.

“If you say so, I believe you.”

“Don’t say that, you make it sound like I am hiding something.”

“If you have that kind of thinking then something must be up.”

“Alright, today just doesn’t feel right today. It feel like something is going to happen and it is going to happen soon.”

“I know what is going to happen.”

“You do?”

“Less then 30 minutes you are going to sing and dance in front of so many people that the concerts you did already seem like kiddy shows. You are just a little nervous that’s all.”

“You must be right.”

“Miss Kumiko, do you need anything?” a loud male voice said behind the door.

“No thank you Ronin, but I must be lucky to have you as a bodyguard,” Kumiko responds.

“Not problems at all, miss, I will always be happy to serve under you. You have no idea how many people will try to do stuff to celebrities like yourself.”

“Yeah I know but I am never worry because I got you to protect me.”

“Uh, I gotta go and patrol the area,” the male voice said getting distant.

“I should have seen his face when you said that to him. He must be blushing so hard that his face is all red,” Naomi said laughing.


“Well, it is not my fault that I am young, beautiful and talented,” Kumiko replies.

“You should get going now if you don’t want to be late for your own concert.”

“I am never late to my own concert,” Kumiko said getting up from her seat and walking towards the door.

“Give them the best show they ever seen,” Naomi calls out.

“Don’t worry, I got a few surprises.”

Kumiko walks out from her dressing room and heads down the hallway to the backstage. I appeared on the catwalk right above her making sure that no one is around. I jump over the railing landing several stories below without making a noise but she stops and turns around looking. Her eyes scan the area of precaution and then turn back around spotting me standing in front of her several meters away.

“Who are you and what do you want?” she commands.

“I’m here to kidnap you,” I reply.

“Kidnap, what do you want with me?” she commands again in shock.

“It is none of your concern.”

“What makes you think that I am going to miss my concert?”

“We can do this the hard way or the easy way.”

“Are you serious? The hard way sounds better.”

Kumiko surprisingly runs toward me raising her right arm with a close fist to strike me. She swings her right arm in a hook toward my face but I raise my left hand index finger and her fist collides into my finger. She looks at her fist touching my finger in disarray as she then narrows her eyes and swings her left leg. I duck while her legs pass overhead making her spin but once her back is toward me she does a back kick. I swing my legs forward and bend my back backwards as I fall on the ground flat while her leg misses me.

I try to get up but she rushes toward me trying to kick me again but I roll out of the way. I finally gotten on my feet as she suddenly appear in front of me throwing punches at my face but I move my head to the side dodging her attempts. She then does a quick spin counterclockwise using her right leg to launch a kick but I duck again. She continues the spin as she then bends down doing a low sweep attack that hits my leg and I fall down on my back. She gets back up using her right leg to bringing down her heel at me, which I use quickly, grab her foot and push her back.

I roll back on my upper back and then use the force to jump up onto my feet also seeing her getting back on her feet. She gets down in a stance indicating that she knows how to fight and is not afraid to go all out. I look around and then back to her raising my right hand moving my fingers back and forth signaling her to come. She does a quick battle cry while heading towards me and then begins swinging her fists at me also using kicks. I dodge most of her attacks sometimes blocking the ones that I find impressive to almost hit me.

I catch her right fist using my left hand and then catch her left fist using my right hand and we then walk in circles. My mind went blank as I then looks up seeing somebody coming down at me so I push her out of the way. He lands on the ground where we were at with him kneeling down and my sunglasses are on the ground broken. He stands up taking off his Universal Police jacket and then throws it to the side standing in front of Kumiko.

“The name is Ronin, a Universal Police and Kumiko’s bodyguard and if you want her then you have to get pass me.”

“I don’t have time for this.”

“You better make time if you think you can get away with this.”

“Damn goodie, goodie.”

I move my right arm to my left side underneath my trench coat pulling out my weapon out of its holster. I then bring it out aiming it out Ronin who isn’t surprise that I have this kind of weapon on me. He smirks as he runs to me in a zigzag so I won’t be able to get a good shot on him. Once he reaches me, he jumps up in the air doing a roundhouse kick using his right leg that hits the weapon out of my hand. He continues to spin in the air doing a back thrust kick that hits me in my chest causing me to get knock back onto the ground sliding till I stop.

“Shit, an Evo.”

I take my time to stand up as he runs up to me and does a low jump kick toward my face. I bend my back while I am on my knees with him barely flying pass me with his leg stretch out almost hitting me. Right after he passes me, I swing my back down hitting the ground swinging my legs from underneath me and kick Ronin’s back making him crash on the ground roughly. I roll onto my upper back and the jump up onto my feet at Ronin swings his legs in the air and then using it to jump back on his feet.

“Impressive maneuver to able to dodge and counter like that close to the ground.”

“You’re not bad yourself.”

“I’m just getting warm up.”

We both charge each other while I clutch my right hand and swing a right hook toward Ronin. Ronin narrow his eyes looking at my fist as he quickly moves dodging my attack. Right after he dodges my attack, he uses his left hand to launch a swift jab in my stomach, which the force exits my body from behind. Ronin then clutch his right hand as it glows white from energy build up and swings it toward my face. The fist impacts my face causing a burst of light which the force also blows me back and land on my back rolling to a stop.

“That really hurts,” I said standing up.

“You’re not leaving here with Kumiko,” Ronin said getting into a stance.

“I will complete my mission.”

Ronin charges me with inhuman speed that he looks like a speeding blur. Once he reaches me, he begins punching rapidly at my stomach and finish off with a strong right hook. The force of the right hook to my face sends me back fast sliding several yards till it slows down to a stop. Once I get my balance, he appears running to me and his body begins to give off a white aura.

He does a quick jump and then follows up with a double front snap kick doing the right then right. While Ronin does the kick, I move to the left dodging the right and left kick that I counter doing a left side snap kick to his stomach. When he arches forward from the force, I jump up and use my right elbow to jab him in the back. The strength of my jab attack at his back causes Ronin to collapse onto the ground causing minor cracks.

I walk backwards-watching Ronin struggle to get up and after a while, I turn around walking to Kumiko. Once I reach her, she does a quick right jab to my face but I quickly use my left hand to grab her wrist, with her fist a centimeter away from my face. Ronin finally manages to stand up with his white aura still glowing around his body. He focuses his aura into his right hand and within seconds his hand is the only part giving off an aura.

Ronin tightens "his right fist so it begins to sweat between his fingers. He launches his right foot off the ground forward and does a follow up with his left. He begins running faster then before making everything around him to stop and passing them like a blur. He swings his right first toward the back of my head but suddenly somebody drops down between Ronin and me. He stands up straight and swings his right first that it instantly glows white and impacts Ronin’s right fist.

The two energy fists impacts and causes an extremely bright flash that blinds Kumiko with my back towards it. I use this opportunity to grab Kumiko and jump up onto the catwalk while the two stands still with their right first still touching. Once the flash fades away, Ronin is there alone and the new mysterious guy is gone. He looks around trying to find Kumiko but no luck.

“Damn, this can’t be happening!” Ronin yells out loud.
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