Fan Fiction ❯ Feeling Is Believing ❯ Makin' Good Love ( One-Shot )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
By: Nirvana Renegade Seiga 
Lemony goodnesss.....
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai / Romance | Type: Songfic | Uploaded On: 04.21.2005 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 1.3K | Status: Completed
Lemony goodnesss.....
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai / Romance | Type: Songfic | Uploaded On: 04.21.2005 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 1.3K | Status: Completed
A Songfic
Jak/Torn (DUH!)
This is being done to “Makin’ Good Love” By Avant. The song will be altered to fit the two men.
WARNING: YAOI!! Heavy YAOI! LEMON!
(*&^%$#@!*&^%$#@!*&^%$#@!~*&^%$#@!~*&^% $#@!~*&^%$#@!~*&^%$*)
“Jak, the Shadow wants us to go check out a Metal Head movement in Haven Forest. A two-day trip. The rat can stay with Tess if he likes.” Daxter nodded enthusiastically.
“I’ll go to Tess’. When are you two leaving?” Torn picked up a duffel bag behind him.
“Right now. Come on Jak.” Jak sighed and grabbed his gun and his own bag.
“Take your time boys!” Daxter yelled as the ex-commander grabbed a two-seat zoomer for them.
“Why does Samos want us to go scope out Metal Heads, I did kill most of them in the forest.” Jak asked.
“He said it would be shown in later times. Damn old man.” Torn growled as Jak laughed quietly and they stopped outside the entrance to the forest.
It was exactly two moths after Jak had defeated Erol and the Dark Makers and the sludge filled cornfields were actually gaining grass and ground. Torn stopped the zoomer and they jumped out walking into the much greener Haven Forest.
“Hmm, glad to see it’s looking more like it used to.” Jak commented, remembering how when he had first been back into the city after he was thrown out, the forest was dead and hardly green or alive.
“Whatever, come on.” Torn started walking as it thundered.
“Damn.”
*Three Hours Later*
“He knew about this, didn’t he?!” Jak complained as the rain continued to pour over them.
“I bet he did.” Torn growled and started to look for shelter.
A light bulb appeared over Jak’s head and he pushed Torn back. “You might want to move out of the way for this.” He raised an eyebrow as the renegade changed into his Dark Form and walked to the stone cliff.
Torn had only heard about the creature that lurked with the deep recess of Jak’s mind, but he had never seen the pale, creature. His breath caught in his throat as Dark Jak slammed a fist into the wall, creating a deep cave in the wall.
“That should do.” Dark Jak’s voice was deep and gravely as he changed back into the blonde outlaw.
“Hmm, there is use for that thing after all.” Jak said as he admired his work. Torn shrugged and brushed past him to walk into the tiny cave. He sat down in the far corner and rubbed his arms.
“I’ll get some wood, there was some that wasn’t too wet.” Jak ran out into the rain and a few minutes later he walked in a set the pile of wood in front of Torn. “Do you have anything that could be used to catch this on fire?” He started to shiver as he said this and something pulled at Torn’s heart.
“Yeah, here.” He tossed Jak a lighter.
“Thanks.” He lifted his blue eyes to connect with the older elf’s icy ones.
“Just get the fire started, Jak.” Jak smiled slightly and soon there was a crackling fire in the room. Torn looked at Jak as he removed his tunic. The ex-commander’s eyes widened as he saw the chiseled body of the young elf.
Torn quickly, looked away, bashing his head against the wall repeatedly.
“Hey, Torn, you okay?” Jak came to where Torn was still hitting his head against the stone concrete. He looked up and seemed to lose himself in Jak’s bright blue eyes.
“I doubt it.” Jak rested his hand on his shoulder and his other hand traced the tattoos adorning the commander’s face.
“Anything I can do?” He asked as Torn’s eye widened considerably. But, that was nothing compared to the size when Jak leaned down to gently kiss him.
I got your legs spread all over the bed
Hands clenched in the sheets…
Immediately the red head responded, leaning up and deepening the kiss, allowing Jak’s tongue access. He moved his hand to Torn’s neck as he tilted his head for better access.
Hair wild as hell…
Torn suddenly pulled back. “Jak.” The renegade looked at him, his blonde and green locks messy from Torn’s wandering hands. “Once you pass this point, it’ll be harsh for me to stop.” Jak nodded, understanding what he meant.
“What if I don’t want you to stop?” And he leaned foreword, this time his hand going for the buckle that held Torn’s armor on.
I know the only thing on your mind is sexin’ me…
Torn helped removing his own armor and when he pulled it off, he pushed Jak against the wall and trailed a row of kisses to his pale neck. A small sound escaped the younger elf as Torn pressed himself flush against him, sucking on Jak’s neck, leaving small red marks that would eventually turn into small bruises.
I can fell your temperature risin’…
Jak pulled the taller elf up to kiss him; their tongues fiercely moving within each other’s mouth as a small whimper escaped Jak. Torn grinned and started to remove the pistols and small knives that adorned Jak’s waist, before undoing the belt and sliding his hand into his trousers.
You can feel my nature, can’t you…
Jak threw his head back and moaned as Torn slowly encircled the younger elf’s semi-hard member. Humph, that didn’t last long.
Come on, you should, it’s gonna be a bumpy ride…
Torn kissed him again as Jak finally removed the older elf’s shirt and let his hands wander, pausing at his nipples to gently rub them as Torn only continued his ministrations.
“Torn…” Jak moaned.
Let’s do what we came to do…
“What?” Torn asked, kissing Jak’s neck as he pulled his out of Jak’s pants and licked the precum off.
Oddly enough, the sight turned on Jak and he just leaned foreword to kiss him to erase whatever thoughts he was thinking.
When we make love all night…
Torn kicked his and Jak’s boots off before finally pulling the younger elf’s pants all the way down and off to the side. Jak suddenly flipped the sides so Torn was pressed against the stonewall and Jak’s kisses grew bolder.
We really make love…
“Jak…” Torn groaned quietly as Jak kissed down his chest, nipping his nipples as he did so.
“What?” He said his earlier words as his deft hands undid the belt and pulled Torn’s pants down, showing the large male pride.
On the balcony, ripping the rails…
“What the hell are you…oh…” Torn quieted down as Jak slowly slipped one hand around the base of his length, and he slowly, but harshly formed his lips around it and slowly sucked as Torn’s eyes rolled behind his eyelids and his hands clenched in Jak’s blonde hair.
Slowly, I’m pulling you near…
Jak smiled as Torn tried to pull him up, but he just let his tongue to the work as Torn continued to groan and struggle under his sexual hold.
Jak eventually pulled back and Torn pulled him up, kissing him roughly and tasting himself on his tongue.
Saying, ‘shhh, don’t make too much noise’…
Torn growled and laid the younger elf onto the floor, situating himself between Jak’s legs and gently sliding into him.
A raged moan tore itself from Jak’s throat as Torn leaned down to roughly kiss him, biting his lip in the process. Though, that only served to turn them on more.
There’s a lot of people who live around here…
Torn held back until he was sure Jak was completely adjusted, and when he was Torn grinned and leaned down.
“You’re in for the time of your life.”
My hands gripping your thighs…
Jak moaned and Torn moved his hair out of the way so he could kiss him, their tongue fighting for dominance.
You feel me going up and down…
Torn continued his deep and slow thrusts as his free hand wrapped around Jak’s length and pumped it in time with his thrusts.
“Torn, I…” Jak cut himself off as he thought about the actions of his words.
“What?”
and round and round and round…
“Nothing… just…harder…” He breathed out as Torn gave a small smirk. He, too, was nearing his climax as the younger elf was experiencing his first sexual experience and had no idea what the hell was going on.
“As you wish…”
Boy your drive waits in the back seat…
Jak moaned deeply and Torn grunted as he continued to pump Jak’s length and thrust inside the younger elf.
He leaned down once again and kissed him as Jak let his hands wander across the fine and muscled abs of Torn.
Windows tinted, it’s getting deep…
Jak stopped for a moment and just let the feel of Torn sliding in and out of him completely fill his senses, his breathing heavily.
Fog all over the glass…
Torn groaned as he came inside Jak and the younger elf came onto his hand and stomach, the stickiness immediately there.
Torn fell on Jak and the younger elf immediately pushed his off and onto his back, his length sliding out of him.
I don’t know how long I can last…
“What the- Jak?”
“Shut up Torn.”
With you moaning crazily…
Jak said and leaned down between Torn’s thighs,
“I’m just finishing what you never let me finish.” And his lips descended on him.
Boy, keep on calling me…
“Oh hell.” Torn let his head fall back and his hands tangled themselves in Jak’s hair, moaning as the pressure of pleasure slowly built up once again.
I’ll take you to ecstasy…
Jak smiled around Torn’s length and moved further down, taking more of Torn into his sinfully hot mouth.
The house, the boat, and the jeep babe…
“Jak…” Torn groaned out as he felt himself about to tip over the edge. Jak pulled back, his length resting on his lower lip.
“What?”
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Jak/Torn (DUH!)
This is being done to “Makin’ Good Love” By Avant. The song will be altered to fit the two men.
WARNING: YAOI!! Heavy YAOI! LEMON!
(*&^%$#@!*&^%$#@!*&^%$#@!~*&^%$#@!~*&^% $#@!~*&^%$#@!~*&^%$*)
“Jak, the Shadow wants us to go check out a Metal Head movement in Haven Forest. A two-day trip. The rat can stay with Tess if he likes.” Daxter nodded enthusiastically.
“I’ll go to Tess’. When are you two leaving?” Torn picked up a duffel bag behind him.
“Right now. Come on Jak.” Jak sighed and grabbed his gun and his own bag.
“Take your time boys!” Daxter yelled as the ex-commander grabbed a two-seat zoomer for them.
“Why does Samos want us to go scope out Metal Heads, I did kill most of them in the forest.” Jak asked.
“He said it would be shown in later times. Damn old man.” Torn growled as Jak laughed quietly and they stopped outside the entrance to the forest.
It was exactly two moths after Jak had defeated Erol and the Dark Makers and the sludge filled cornfields were actually gaining grass and ground. Torn stopped the zoomer and they jumped out walking into the much greener Haven Forest.
“Hmm, glad to see it’s looking more like it used to.” Jak commented, remembering how when he had first been back into the city after he was thrown out, the forest was dead and hardly green or alive.
“Whatever, come on.” Torn started walking as it thundered.
“Damn.”
*Three Hours Later*
“He knew about this, didn’t he?!” Jak complained as the rain continued to pour over them.
“I bet he did.” Torn growled and started to look for shelter.
A light bulb appeared over Jak’s head and he pushed Torn back. “You might want to move out of the way for this.” He raised an eyebrow as the renegade changed into his Dark Form and walked to the stone cliff.
Torn had only heard about the creature that lurked with the deep recess of Jak’s mind, but he had never seen the pale, creature. His breath caught in his throat as Dark Jak slammed a fist into the wall, creating a deep cave in the wall.
“That should do.” Dark Jak’s voice was deep and gravely as he changed back into the blonde outlaw.
“Hmm, there is use for that thing after all.” Jak said as he admired his work. Torn shrugged and brushed past him to walk into the tiny cave. He sat down in the far corner and rubbed his arms.
“I’ll get some wood, there was some that wasn’t too wet.” Jak ran out into the rain and a few minutes later he walked in a set the pile of wood in front of Torn. “Do you have anything that could be used to catch this on fire?” He started to shiver as he said this and something pulled at Torn’s heart.
“Yeah, here.” He tossed Jak a lighter.
“Thanks.” He lifted his blue eyes to connect with the older elf’s icy ones.
“Just get the fire started, Jak.” Jak smiled slightly and soon there was a crackling fire in the room. Torn looked at Jak as he removed his tunic. The ex-commander’s eyes widened as he saw the chiseled body of the young elf.
Torn quickly, looked away, bashing his head against the wall repeatedly.
“Hey, Torn, you okay?” Jak came to where Torn was still hitting his head against the stone concrete. He looked up and seemed to lose himself in Jak’s bright blue eyes.
“I doubt it.” Jak rested his hand on his shoulder and his other hand traced the tattoos adorning the commander’s face.
“Anything I can do?” He asked as Torn’s eye widened considerably. But, that was nothing compared to the size when Jak leaned down to gently kiss him.
I got your legs spread all over the bed
Hands clenched in the sheets…
Immediately the red head responded, leaning up and deepening the kiss, allowing Jak’s tongue access. He moved his hand to Torn’s neck as he tilted his head for better access.
Hair wild as hell…
Torn suddenly pulled back. “Jak.” The renegade looked at him, his blonde and green locks messy from Torn’s wandering hands. “Once you pass this point, it’ll be harsh for me to stop.” Jak nodded, understanding what he meant.
“What if I don’t want you to stop?” And he leaned foreword, this time his hand going for the buckle that held Torn’s armor on.
I know the only thing on your mind is sexin’ me…
Torn helped removing his own armor and when he pulled it off, he pushed Jak against the wall and trailed a row of kisses to his pale neck. A small sound escaped the younger elf as Torn pressed himself flush against him, sucking on Jak’s neck, leaving small red marks that would eventually turn into small bruises.
I can fell your temperature risin’…
Jak pulled the taller elf up to kiss him; their tongues fiercely moving within each other’s mouth as a small whimper escaped Jak. Torn grinned and started to remove the pistols and small knives that adorned Jak’s waist, before undoing the belt and sliding his hand into his trousers.
You can feel my nature, can’t you…
Jak threw his head back and moaned as Torn slowly encircled the younger elf’s semi-hard member. Humph, that didn’t last long.
Come on, you should, it’s gonna be a bumpy ride…
Torn kissed him again as Jak finally removed the older elf’s shirt and let his hands wander, pausing at his nipples to gently rub them as Torn only continued his ministrations.
“Torn…” Jak moaned.
Let’s do what we came to do…
“What?” Torn asked, kissing Jak’s neck as he pulled his out of Jak’s pants and licked the precum off.
Oddly enough, the sight turned on Jak and he just leaned foreword to kiss him to erase whatever thoughts he was thinking.
When we make love all night…
Torn kicked his and Jak’s boots off before finally pulling the younger elf’s pants all the way down and off to the side. Jak suddenly flipped the sides so Torn was pressed against the stonewall and Jak’s kisses grew bolder.
We really make love…
“Jak…” Torn groaned quietly as Jak kissed down his chest, nipping his nipples as he did so.
“What?” He said his earlier words as his deft hands undid the belt and pulled Torn’s pants down, showing the large male pride.
On the balcony, ripping the rails…
“What the hell are you…oh…” Torn quieted down as Jak slowly slipped one hand around the base of his length, and he slowly, but harshly formed his lips around it and slowly sucked as Torn’s eyes rolled behind his eyelids and his hands clenched in Jak’s blonde hair.
Slowly, I’m pulling you near…
Jak smiled as Torn tried to pull him up, but he just let his tongue to the work as Torn continued to groan and struggle under his sexual hold.
Jak eventually pulled back and Torn pulled him up, kissing him roughly and tasting himself on his tongue.
Saying, ‘shhh, don’t make too much noise’…
Torn growled and laid the younger elf onto the floor, situating himself between Jak’s legs and gently sliding into him.
A raged moan tore itself from Jak’s throat as Torn leaned down to roughly kiss him, biting his lip in the process. Though, that only served to turn them on more.
There’s a lot of people who live around here…
Torn held back until he was sure Jak was completely adjusted, and when he was Torn grinned and leaned down.
“You’re in for the time of your life.”
My hands gripping your thighs…
Jak moaned and Torn moved his hair out of the way so he could kiss him, their tongue fighting for dominance.
You feel me going up and down…
Torn continued his deep and slow thrusts as his free hand wrapped around Jak’s length and pumped it in time with his thrusts.
“Torn, I…” Jak cut himself off as he thought about the actions of his words.
“What?”
and round and round and round…
“Nothing… just…harder…” He breathed out as Torn gave a small smirk. He, too, was nearing his climax as the younger elf was experiencing his first sexual experience and had no idea what the hell was going on.
“As you wish…”
Boy your drive waits in the back seat…
Jak moaned deeply and Torn grunted as he continued to pump Jak’s length and thrust inside the younger elf.
He leaned down once again and kissed him as Jak let his hands wander across the fine and muscled abs of Torn.
Windows tinted, it’s getting deep…
Jak stopped for a moment and just let the feel of Torn sliding in and out of him completely fill his senses, his breathing heavily.
Fog all over the glass…
Torn groaned as he came inside Jak and the younger elf came onto his hand and stomach, the stickiness immediately there.
Torn fell on Jak and the younger elf immediately pushed his off and onto his back, his length sliding out of him.
I don’t know how long I can last…
“What the- Jak?”
“Shut up Torn.”
With you moaning crazily…
Jak said and leaned down between Torn’s thighs,
“I’m just finishing what you never let me finish.” And his lips descended on him.
Boy, keep on calling me…
“Oh hell.” Torn let his head fall back and his hands tangled themselves in Jak’s hair, moaning as the pressure of pleasure slowly built up once again.
I’ll take you to ecstasy…
Jak smiled around Torn’s length and moved further down, taking more of Torn into his sinfully hot mouth.
The house, the boat, and the jeep babe…
“Jak…” Torn groaned out as he felt himself about to tip over the edge. Jak pulled back, his length resting on his lower lip.
“What?”
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