Fan Fiction ❯ Forbidden ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

My first original work of fiction. I hope you guys like it. This story will be a bit risque so kiddies leave…NOW! Enjoy ^_^

 

Chapter 1

 

Gabriel lay naked from the waist up on the goose-down bed waiting for his latest feed to get ready. She came out from the bathroom in a sheer robe her eyes empty and dull. She was whore and was only doing this for the money. At least, he had hypnotized her into thinking that. He hadn't feed in 2 weeks and he the hunger was gnawing at his gut and consuming his thoughts. She straddled his waist and unbuttoned his breeches taking out his man part. She slowly impaled herself, moaning as her inner muscles clenched and unclenched in her woman's joy. She rode him harder and faster bringing him closer to his own completion. As he felt it nearinghe pulled her down. As he came he impaled his fangs into her jugular sucking her life's blood as she screamed in pain and finally crumpled on top of him as he sucked her dry. He heard someone clearing his throat by the door and looked up, his lips still attached to the woman's neck.

 

His fraternal twin brother, Rapheal, stood in his doorway his trademark smirk in place. Raphael was tall, leanly muscled with long blonde hair tied back in a leather thong. His chin was hard cut with a slight cleft in his chin. He had high cheekbones and dark brown eyes. The only difference between the two of them was that while Raphael was lean, Gabriel was heavily muscled from years of fighting in many wars. And while Raphael had blonde hair, Gabriel's hair was was dark brown. While Raphael was personable, Gabriel preferred to keep to himself. But other than that, they were identical. They even sound the same.

 

Gabriel grunted. “What do you want, Raphael”?

 

Raphael brushed off his brother's surly tone, used to his brother's mood. “I came to see if you were alright. Obviously,” he gestured to the lifeless body Gabriel was now moving off him, “you waited to long to feed. Again.”

 

Gabriel sighed, he knew where this conversation was going. “I don't need your patronizing right now, Raphael.” Gabriel got up and dressed in black breeches and a white linen shirt. “I can take care of myself.”

 

“The hell you don't, Gabriel. Without feeding, we can't go out in daylight. Without feeding, we loose control and turn into monsters more dangerous than we already are. Without feeding we die.” Raphael grabbed Gabriel's arm and pulled him to face him. He knew Gabriel had lost the will live a long time ago and was only living now because he had to much pride to kill himself or to let himself die in battle. “You seen it happen before. Look what happened to father. Do want to become like him? Do want to have to be hunted and killed. When vampires like us loose control we kill without remorse-”

 

“Leave, Rapheal.” Gabriel couldn't stand to hear another one of his brother's lectures. “I have a job to do and I need to get ready.” He brushed past his brother left the room.

 

Rapheal looked sadly after his brother. Gabriel was the strongest of them all. They both had been alive for hundreds of years and to see someone like Gabriel loose his will was heart wrenching. He also knew that when the time came for Gabriel's execution that the counsel would come to him, Gabriel's own brother, to kill him.

 

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