Fan Fiction ❯ Love Powers All: Love Choice? ❯ This is the End...or is it? ( Chapter 11 )

Love Powers All

A/N- I think we all agreed I made a bad ending, so I'm going to try making a chapter 11 and hopefully 12. You all saved me from writing an epilogue. It would have been sad to end it at Chapter 10.

To Reviewers-

@Marva- Actually, at the wedding I was going to have them go against each other, but I totally forgot.

@seventhHeaven4ever- Thanks for the idea. I had that idea with Jeremy, but I thought I wouldn't use it since I used Jake in an earlier chapter. I think I'll use your idea again and change what I was going to do a little bit.

Thanks to all the reviewers for inspiring me in writing more to this story.

Chapter 11- This is the End…or is it?

It was Friday morning and Kevin had just left the day for work. Lucy was sitting at the coffee table studying for her test when the phone rang. She picked the phone up and turned it on.

"Kinkirk Residence, Lucy speaking."

"Hello, Lucy. This is Detective Michael's."

"Oh. Hi," Lucy paused, "Is there anything wrong?"

"No, I just wanted to inform you that Jake Anderson is in jail now."

"Alright, thank you!" She said smiling. She was relieved that Jake Anderson was now in jail.

Lucy went back to the table and got back to studying.

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Jeremy was now parked on the side of the road next to the Camden's house and it front of the garage apartment. He hesitated, but slowly got out of the car and walked up to where Lucy was. He was planning to surprise Lucy. He didn't want Kevin having Lucy and definitely didn't want Jake to, even if he was in jail.

As Jeremy walked closer and closer to the garage apartment, someone was watching him from the Camden's house and disappeared as soon as he walked into Lucy and Kevin's home.

He knocked on the door.

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Ruthie ran into to the kitchen to where her mother was breathlessly.

"What wrong, Ruthie?"

"Lucy," Ruthie took a breath between each word, "Jeremy is at the garage apartment!"

Annie looked at Ruthie for a minute, "Don't worry, I'm sure he's only saying sorry for everything that's happened."

Ruthie walked up to her room mumbling, "Yeah, I'm sure."

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Lucy stood up and opened the door under her and looked down to see Jeremy below her. She suddenly felt cold and shivers were going up and down her spine, "Hi…" Before she could finish Jeremy pushed Lucy against the wall and kicked the door closed while kissing her. Lucy's eyes were wide open and she pushed him away.

"What do you think you're doing?!"

"I love you, Luce…please divorce…"

"No! Because I love Kevin and if you loved me you would be doing this!"

Jeremy got out his gun and kissed Lucy again. Lucy was about to scream, but then Jeremy aimed the gun at Lucy and tears filled her eyes.

Not again! She thought.

"Scream and I shoot, got it?!"

Lucy stood there silently wondering what Jeremy would do. He had the gun held up to her head and kissed her a few more times. She knew it wasn't worse then what Jake did. And she also knew that Jeremy would never hurt her, the way Jake did.

"You better come to your senses, Lucy." Lucy was starting to think Jeremy was going to rape her, "Kevin's not the one for you! I am!"

"Kevin…Kevin is who I love! So get out! GET OUT NOW!!!' She yelled at Jeremy.

Jeremy then punched the wall next to Lucy's head. In the wall there was a hole the size of his fist and she was more frightened then ever, "That's what's going to happen to you if you're not careful." He hissed in her ear and pushed her to the ground.

Lucy finally did what she should have done a few minutes ago. She screamed at the top of her lungs making sure the Camden's could hear her. Then Jeremy suddenly aimed the gun at her forehead.

"Did you not hear what I just said?" He said hitting her a few times, "You're so stupid!" He hit her again.

"No, I'm not stupid! You are." She yelled.

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Ruthie was still in her room when she heard Lucy scream. She automatically knew it was Lucy because she had been suspicious about Jeremy. She ran back to the kitchen.

"Did you hear that?"

"Hear what?"

"Didn't you hear the scream?"

"Yes. It sounded like Lucy."

"It WAS Lucy!" Ruthie exclaimed. The two ran up to the garage apartment.

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They pushed the door open and saw the most horrific site. Lucy was covered with bruises on her arms and face and Jeremy was holding a gun to Lucy's head.

Jeremy suddenly looked up not expecting anyone to come and started to press the trigger, "You little…" but before he could finish and shoot Ruthie kicked the gun out of Jeremy's reach, while Annie called the police.

"What do you think you're doing to my daughter?!" Jeremy quickly got up when he heard Annie's angry voice.

Lucy quickly got up and went as far away from Jeremy as possible.

"I…I…" Jeremy was stuttering not knowing how to reply, "I just came by…to…to visit."

"It looked like more then that." Annie glared at Jeremy.

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A few minutes later the police walked in. One in which was Kevin. Lucy ran over to Kevin and hugged him tightly.

"Luce, are you alright?" Lucy shook her head and looked up at Kevin. She was starting to cry and when he saw her face and arms he was in disbelief and, like Annie, he glared at Jeremy, "Never do that again! Especially to Lucy! Can't you understand that you and Lucy are over and that she's happily married?!" He snapped. He continued holding and kissed her on the forehead.

Jeremy slowly walked up to wear his gun was, but before he could get it Ruthie stepped on him hand. His eyes were filled with pain, but he didn't care. He then grabbed another gun from his other pocket that he had just in case this would happen. Then he slowly aimed it towards Kevin.

A police man that came with Kevin dashed towards Jeremy and pushed him to the ground and then grabbed his gun and threw it across the room. Finally he handcuffed Jeremy and forced him out of the apartment and into the police car with a gun at his back.

Everyone gathered into a hug to comfort Lucy. A few minutes later after everyone was gone Kevin let go of Lucy and kissed her. Then he sat her down.

"Besides hitting you, what did he do to you?" Kevin asked curiously.

"He…He threatened to kill me if I screamed. Then a few minutes later I screamed and he almost pulled the trigger, but Mom and Ruthie came running in. He also punched a hole in the wall," Lucy pointed to the hole, "And when he had walked in he pushed me against the wall and wouldn't stop kissing me, but that's about it. There was nothing worse then that." Kevin pulled her into a hug again.

"Luce, I'm glad nothing worse happened, but I have to tell you something." At the sound of Kevin's voice, Lucy became more worried than she already was.

A/N- I'm SO happy I could think of a new idea for Jeremy, so now I can use seventhHeaven4ever's idea, which I will give her credit for. And like I said before, if it wasn't for all of you, I wouldn't be continuing this. I'm really happy I can continue it. I like this fanfic a lot better than my others. Also I hope this chapter was good! Please tell me what you think.

What should the genres be?

Should I make a sequel?