Fan Fiction ❯ Love ❯ The Unsuspected Surprise ( Chapter 11 )
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By: HiKaRiKu 
Riku asks for a date and got his wish..But will she return the final question...?
Does she...Love Riku?
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Drama / Comedy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 05.19.2005 | Updated On: 05.19.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 787 | Visits: 239 | Status: Completed
Riku asks for a date and got his wish..But will she return the final question...?
Does she...Love Riku?
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Drama / Comedy | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 05.19.2005 | Updated On: 05.19.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 787 | Visits: 239 | Status: Completed
Love:The Unsuspected Surprise
Disclaimer : Hello,as you can see, the name says that I don't own........anything. Except this!*shows Kingdom Hearts game* Riku is soooo mine!!*glomps Riku plush doll* ^-^
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The Unsuspected Surprise
Yuuki's POV
"Soo..Where are you taking me?"I asked as I romed freely blind-folded.
"I can't tell you y-WATCH-"*CRASH*,"out!"A hand reached out and held on to me as I embarrassedly laughed."You ok??"The male voice worriedly asked.
I started to take off the blindfold."Y-yeah..."
"NOO!!" Screamed the voice." Don't!!"
"Nani?!"I quickly stopped and felt worried." What happened?"
"We're not there yet. Don't worry. We're close. Very close. "He and I walked a couple steps.
"Ok,we're here."
*animed fall* "NANI?!!"I yelled.
He laughed.”Just take off the blindfold..”
With anticipation,she pulled off the blindfold and only to see the beach.
“Ehh?”Yuuki raised an eyebrow. What the hell?!! She really wanted to say.
All she saw was the Paopu fruit tree.
“Isn’t it beautiful?” Riku smiled. “But…Isn’t this what we see everyday?” Yuuki pouted,as she was disappointed in what she saw…everyday..
“But look at the beautiful sky and the Paopu fruits are ripe now.Only the best on one day,and that’s today.”Riku held on Yuuki’s hand and pulled her up on the tree. Actually,I don’t have that much money to have a real romantic dinner…He nervously laughed.
Yuuki stared at him. “…What?” “Nothing,my dear…”
“Ehh?? My dear?? When was I ever your dear? And when was I ever yours at all?”Yuuki confusingly asked. Riku raised his head and closed his eyes.”Oh,nothing..”
“Come on,tell me!!” Yuuki whined,not noticing she was scooting closer to him.
Riku layed his whole back on the tree and put his hands behind his head. “Oh,it’s nothing you need to know right now..”
“C’mon,Riku!” She moved a bit closer.
“Nope.”
“Rikkkkkkkuuuu!” She whined.
“No way.”
Yuuki pouted. ”Fine then. I’ll force you!” She pinned him on the tree.
Riku grinned. Ehh?Don’t tell me…Yuuki thought,but saw Riku’s plan. Before she could do anything,she was too late. Riku moved only a inch and set her falling,only to land on Riku. “Ahh!!” Yuuki screamed,and held on something tight to keep her from falling. She opened her eyes,to see only aqua colored eyes. Before she could do stand,she was held closer to her one and only,to feel his heartbeat against hers.Riku hugged her tightly.
“Riku…I-“
“Yuuki,donR 17;t say anything.” Riku softly said in her ear, ”Let me saver this moment..”
Somehow,her arms swept across Riku’s back to hug him.She had no control of them.
"Yuuki.." Riku softly pulled her away and looked into her blue eyes. "I...I love you.." He pulled out a ripe Paopu fruit and held it infront of her.
Yuuki froze. There,in Riku's arms,feeling his heart beat,he told her his feelings. She knew he liked her,but... She never expected him to tell her..that-that he loved her.Love... It's a strong word.. The real question was...Did she love him back?
Riku's face sadded a bit. "Do...you have the same feelings..for me?"
"I..." Yuuki started, "I...don't have time for this!" Yuuki sat up and jumped off the Paopu tree. She ran..ran as fast as she could,almost tripping.
Why?? Why ,Riku?! I can't take love!!! I don't need this feelings now!! Not now!! Tears streamed as she came to her door. She tries to wiggle the doorknob,but it was locked,so she rang to doorbell.
A couple of whispers she heard,but everything else was quiet. Then there was a click. It was the lock. "Come on innnn!!!" a voice said,sounding like a gamehost. "Shut up Sora!" another said,followed by hushes.
Yuuki opened the door and nearly jumped at the very loud,
"SURPRISE!! Happy Birthda-Oh my god! What happened??"They asked,seeing tears staining her cheeks.
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HikaRiku: Thank you for Reading my Fanfiction!Please R+R!!
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Disclaimer : Hello,as you can see, the name says that I don't own........anything. Except this!*shows Kingdom Hearts game* Riku is soooo mine!!*glomps Riku plush doll* ^-^
~
The Unsuspected Surprise
Yuuki's POV
"Soo..Where are you taking me?"I asked as I romed freely blind-folded.
"I can't tell you y-WATCH-"*CRASH*,"out!"A hand reached out and held on to me as I embarrassedly laughed."You ok??"The male voice worriedly asked.
I started to take off the blindfold."Y-yeah..."
"NOO!!" Screamed the voice." Don't!!"
"Nani?!"I quickly stopped and felt worried." What happened?"
"We're not there yet. Don't worry. We're close. Very close. "He and I walked a couple steps.
"Ok,we're here."
*animed fall* "NANI?!!"I yelled.
He laughed.”Just take off the blindfold..”
With anticipation,she pulled off the blindfold and only to see the beach.
“Ehh?”Yuuki raised an eyebrow. What the hell?!! She really wanted to say.
All she saw was the Paopu fruit tree.
“Isn’t it beautiful?” Riku smiled. “But…Isn’t this what we see everyday?” Yuuki pouted,as she was disappointed in what she saw…everyday..
“But look at the beautiful sky and the Paopu fruits are ripe now.Only the best on one day,and that’s today.”Riku held on Yuuki’s hand and pulled her up on the tree. Actually,I don’t have that much money to have a real romantic dinner…He nervously laughed.
Yuuki stared at him. “…What?” “Nothing,my dear…”
“Ehh?? My dear?? When was I ever your dear? And when was I ever yours at all?”Yuuki confusingly asked. Riku raised his head and closed his eyes.”Oh,nothing..”
“Come on,tell me!!” Yuuki whined,not noticing she was scooting closer to him.
Riku layed his whole back on the tree and put his hands behind his head. “Oh,it’s nothing you need to know right now..”
“C’mon,Riku!” She moved a bit closer.
“Nope.”
“Rikkkkkkkuuuu!” She whined.
“No way.”
Yuuki pouted. ”Fine then. I’ll force you!” She pinned him on the tree.
Riku grinned. Ehh?Don’t tell me…Yuuki thought,but saw Riku’s plan. Before she could do anything,she was too late. Riku moved only a inch and set her falling,only to land on Riku. “Ahh!!” Yuuki screamed,and held on something tight to keep her from falling. She opened her eyes,to see only aqua colored eyes. Before she could do stand,she was held closer to her one and only,to feel his heartbeat against hers.Riku hugged her tightly.
“Riku…I-“
“Yuuki,donR 17;t say anything.” Riku softly said in her ear, ”Let me saver this moment..”
Somehow,her arms swept across Riku’s back to hug him.She had no control of them.
"Yuuki.." Riku softly pulled her away and looked into her blue eyes. "I...I love you.." He pulled out a ripe Paopu fruit and held it infront of her.
Yuuki froze. There,in Riku's arms,feeling his heart beat,he told her his feelings. She knew he liked her,but... She never expected him to tell her..that-that he loved her.Love... It's a strong word.. The real question was...Did she love him back?
Riku's face sadded a bit. "Do...you have the same feelings..for me?"
"I..." Yuuki started, "I...don't have time for this!" Yuuki sat up and jumped off the Paopu tree. She ran..ran as fast as she could,almost tripping.
Why?? Why ,Riku?! I can't take love!!! I don't need this feelings now!! Not now!! Tears streamed as she came to her door. She tries to wiggle the doorknob,but it was locked,so she rang to doorbell.
A couple of whispers she heard,but everything else was quiet. Then there was a click. It was the lock. "Come on innnn!!!" a voice said,sounding like a gamehost. "Shut up Sora!" another said,followed by hushes.
Yuuki opened the door and nearly jumped at the very loud,
"SURPRISE!! Happy Birthda-Oh my god! What happened??"They asked,seeing tears staining her cheeks.
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HikaRiku: Thank you for Reading my Fanfiction!Please R+R!!
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