Fan Fiction ❯ Never says Goodbye ❯ One-Shot
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: The_Mad_Hatter 
Of everything I've written, I love this one the most. Sorry about the Genre's and stuff, I wasn't really sure so I guessed a bit. I ask that you review but if you don't at least read it. Its yaoi or shonen-ai, whichever you all it. All original characters and copyrighted to me. The main character has been named Twilight. This is angst, its first person and I'm proud of it. So please, read it.
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Drama / / Psychological / Romance | Type: One Shot | Uploaded On: 04.15.2003 | Pages: 1 | Words: 754 | Visits: 384 | Status: Completed
Of everything I've written, I love this one the most. Sorry about the Genre's and stuff, I wasn't really sure so I guessed a bit. I ask that you review but if you don't at least read it. Its yaoi or shonen-ai, whichever you all it. All original characters and copyrighted to me. The main character has been named Twilight. This is angst, its first person and I'm proud of it. So please, read it.
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Drama / / Psychological / Romance | Type: One Shot | Uploaded On: 04.15.2003 | Pages: 1 | Words: 754 | Visits: 384 | Status: Completed
This is my first original fiction. This was written at night in the damn dark...or not so damn...anyway it was written on a palm pilot - so if there's spelling or grammar issues it's because pilots are a pain in the ass to write on. Damn graffiti.... Anyway - on to usual.
Disclaimer: The nonexistent characters (Aries, the girl, and the guy who's POV this is in)
Belong to me, if you steal them I shall be angry, do not diss the chipmunks. Okies?
Warning: Will contain shonen-ai, or boy's love, which means boy x boy. No like, No
read, and get on with your life, damn you!... On second thought, if you wanna
read and flame that's fine too because I need a good laugh.
Apology: Sorry I'm swearing so much. I've had a really bad week and it's really hard not
too. I hope you enjoy the fic even though my mood's not so good. Thanks for
understanding
Please review...I'm begging you. Okies? B-E-G-G-I-N-G! A human's utmost want is to feel appreciated, and I'm only human...so please review okay?
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Never says Goodbye.
By Sora
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*I never cried, never showed the betrayal that stung at my heart.
Do you realize? Do you even care? *
I hold myself confidently, although inside I am shaking. For once in my life I question my motives, question my heart. What good is one-way love? It is neither sacred or beautiful, but unfair and painful.
It uses us till we're spent, giving us hope until it finally drops us down, broken and weak.
But I never cried...not once, never yelled or cursed...why should I?
I knew I could never have you... But of course every time I'd convince myself of that fact, you'd do something that would bring me new hope... Damn you. I want to hate you for it, and if I allow myself I will. The only thought stopping me is that you never knew - never knew how much I loved you, and still love you. I won't stop you, you seem so happy. I swore I'd never prevent your happiness, but I will always remember what could have been.
I saw you today, a few minutes ago actually, walking down the street, hand in hand. You didn't see me; I'm surprised you can see anything else when you're with Her. Maybe I'm bitter, but I've loved you for so long only to have you taken away by an acquaintance. She's pretty though. I can't deny it, much as I'd like for her to have the horns I envision her with. Smart too, but that's to be expected. You would never date a complete Bimbo. And talented...I also have all these qualities, but she has one thing I don't. She's female.
So I've decided to leave you alone, a sorry excuse to stay away. But staying as close as I used too would be too painful. Silently I finish my cappuccino, slide out of my seat, and walk in the opposite direction.
Who am I to ruin your day? It used to be just you and me, but I've been replaced. You won't see me round as much, but then again, they say three's a crowd.
* I'll never cry, never show the betrayal that stings my heart.
But... Did you realize I've disappeared? Have you even noticed? *
~Owari~
Authors Rant...err.... Note: Umm...I'm not going to comment on it much. It could work for any pairing really, well any pairing that doesn't work out. I have the whole thing in my head like a movie. I based the setting (the place and stuffs) on a downtown area near my house, which is where I, technically speaking, base a lot of free form stuff I write. I fell in love with the streets and shops when I was little...but you probably don't want to hear me blabber about how I love the place. Since this was original fiction I should probably say what the pairing was, the pairing was two of my characters (copyrighted to me, mind you), one who has not been named (he is known as 'My little mafia boy'...he's so kawaii! ^^) and the other is Aries. Aries is the one with the girlfriend; her name is yet to be determined...
^^ Soooo yeah.
Hope you liked it. If you didn't and want to flame, please do. As I said before, I need a good laugh. Anyhow, Thanks for reading and if you review I'll be forever thankful.
Disclaimer: The nonexistent characters (Aries, the girl, and the guy who's POV this is in)
Belong to me, if you steal them I shall be angry, do not diss the chipmunks. Okies?
Warning: Will contain shonen-ai, or boy's love, which means boy x boy. No like, No
read, and get on with your life, damn you!... On second thought, if you wanna
read and flame that's fine too because I need a good laugh.
Apology: Sorry I'm swearing so much. I've had a really bad week and it's really hard not
too. I hope you enjoy the fic even though my mood's not so good. Thanks for
understanding
Please review...I'm begging you. Okies? B-E-G-G-I-N-G! A human's utmost want is to feel appreciated, and I'm only human...so please review okay?
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Never says Goodbye.
By Sora
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*I never cried, never showed the betrayal that stung at my heart.
Do you realize? Do you even care? *
I hold myself confidently, although inside I am shaking. For once in my life I question my motives, question my heart. What good is one-way love? It is neither sacred or beautiful, but unfair and painful.
It uses us till we're spent, giving us hope until it finally drops us down, broken and weak.
But I never cried...not once, never yelled or cursed...why should I?
I knew I could never have you... But of course every time I'd convince myself of that fact, you'd do something that would bring me new hope... Damn you. I want to hate you for it, and if I allow myself I will. The only thought stopping me is that you never knew - never knew how much I loved you, and still love you. I won't stop you, you seem so happy. I swore I'd never prevent your happiness, but I will always remember what could have been.
I saw you today, a few minutes ago actually, walking down the street, hand in hand. You didn't see me; I'm surprised you can see anything else when you're with Her. Maybe I'm bitter, but I've loved you for so long only to have you taken away by an acquaintance. She's pretty though. I can't deny it, much as I'd like for her to have the horns I envision her with. Smart too, but that's to be expected. You would never date a complete Bimbo. And talented...I also have all these qualities, but she has one thing I don't. She's female.
So I've decided to leave you alone, a sorry excuse to stay away. But staying as close as I used too would be too painful. Silently I finish my cappuccino, slide out of my seat, and walk in the opposite direction.
Who am I to ruin your day? It used to be just you and me, but I've been replaced. You won't see me round as much, but then again, they say three's a crowd.
* I'll never cry, never show the betrayal that stings my heart.
But... Did you realize I've disappeared? Have you even noticed? *
~Owari~
Authors Rant...err.... Note: Umm...I'm not going to comment on it much. It could work for any pairing really, well any pairing that doesn't work out. I have the whole thing in my head like a movie. I based the setting (the place and stuffs) on a downtown area near my house, which is where I, technically speaking, base a lot of free form stuff I write. I fell in love with the streets and shops when I was little...but you probably don't want to hear me blabber about how I love the place. Since this was original fiction I should probably say what the pairing was, the pairing was two of my characters (copyrighted to me, mind you), one who has not been named (he is known as 'My little mafia boy'...he's so kawaii! ^^) and the other is Aries. Aries is the one with the girlfriend; her name is yet to be determined...
^^ Soooo yeah.
Hope you liked it. If you didn't and want to flame, please do. As I said before, I need a good laugh. Anyhow, Thanks for reading and if you review I'll be forever thankful.