Fan Fiction ❯ Of Living Hell ❯ in the beging there was three ( Chapter 1 )
I'm a little new at this so please bear with me. This is I hope the beginning of a good story so please tell me what you think
"We gotta go faster, Z!" yelled a woman in the back seat of the red Porsche. She was dressed in black baggy cargo pants, a black spaghetti strap shirt and combat boots. The driver whom she was yelling at had on cameo pants, combat boots and a tight black tank top (wife beater).
"You know I think I agree with SY. Go faster!" yelled the passenger in the front seat. His voice held and inhuman quality, that was because he was an A.I. unit. Though if you looked at him you wouldn't have known it. He wore leather jeans with a black top and boots to match. His short blue-purple hair and gold eyes were a slight contrast with the driver and a great contrast with the girl. The girl had black knee length hair with streaks of blue, while the driver silver-blue waist length hair. She had deep blue-green eyes and the driver had a gray slate color that reflected all and at the same time nothing.
" Will you to shut the fuck up, I'm going so fast I'd give Miss Daisy a heart attack." Yelled an agitated driver. "If it wasn't for that hunk of rusted metal this won't have happened." The driver never once took his eyes of the road or the car behind him. The girl suppressed a giggle and said, "Go though there you'll lose them," she said as she pointed to a tunnel to his left. "Hold on" was the only thing he said as he took a hard left into the tunnel. The turn threw the girl to the other side of the car with a thud.
"You all right back there?" asked the driver. The only reply was a soft female groan. "Wiz check on her will you?" the A.I unit, Wiz, nodded and calmly turned around in the seat. He softly shook her trying to wake her. He suddenly pulled his hand back when he felt something warm and sticky touch his hand.
The best thing about being an A.I system was the extras you received. Super-strength, unlimited knowledge capabilities, was a few, but the best was the abundances of sensors. Suddenly he turned to the driver and said, " We need to end this now she's bleeding and I can't tell from where in till we stop." He said with urgency in his voice.
The driver nodded before replying, " Use your self-defense and block the tunnel." Wiz rolled the window down and with one shoot from his "self-defense" he blew up the tunnel behind them allowing them to get to safety.
Once they had gotten out of the tunnel and back to a safe place did they check the girls, Sy, wounds. The driver, Z, picked her up and carefully laid her on the table in the hide out. Wiz could tell that his, Z's, senses were going haywire. Especially since he was a demon. " Z, why don't you go sit down and rest while I try to tend to her wounds." Said Wiz motioning to the only comfortable chair in the whole place.
Once Wiz had gotten Z out of the way, he started assessing Sy's wounds. She had a deep gash that went from her right hip to just below her left breast, undoubtedly caused when the whole thing started, her other wounds consisted of a few deep cuts on her legs and arms, a bump on the head, sprang wrist, and a cut on her left side that ran about a 15 cm in length and 20-29cm in depth.
Z knew she had been hurt when the whole thing started that was the whole reason he couldn't tell if she was hurt even worst when he took the turn hard. Now he felt extremely bad for doing it. Unlike him or the Wiz, she was pretty much human. She was an imperfect.
She had been "created". Yet something went wrong. She had excelled speed, thinking, learning, healing abilities, but her personality was wrong. Among other things she had inhuman powers, black hair blue-green eyes and a slightly lighter skin than most. Her personality was also a problem; her DNA had been tweaked so that she would be "helpless", quiet, nerdy, a hidden gem for who ever married her.
Yeah right, Sy would never play the "helpless" role, she was quite at times, and she was far from being nerdy. She knew she had beauty and she flaunted it some but she was still a very humble person. Her inhuman powers were a mistake too. A Perfect didn't have psychic, electrical, elemental, (earth, wind, water, fire) abilities.
Since she had all these "imperfections" she was cast aside and a replacement was made. He didn't really care that she was an imperfect because he was in the same boat as she and so was Wiz. All demons and most if not all, A.I. units were treated badly and sometimes killed for being different.
Z had been thinking so much that he didn't even notice that he had fallen asleep. Wiz could only chuckle as he looked at the sight. Though he was actually quite glad Z had contemplated himself to sleep because he was no longer in the way.
Wiz quietly moved over to where Sy lay. He gracefully picked her up and dispersed her on the small cot in the corner. He looked slightly worried when she started to shiver since there was no cover on her. He knew he couldn't give her heat because his body temp remained the same as the air around him, unless it was 80 degrees or higher.
Suddenly he got an idea. He carefully picked her up and walked over to where Z was sleeping. Wiz carefully sat Sy in his lap and let nature do the rest. As soon as Sy felt the warmth she snuggled closer moving slightly to find a more comfortable position. Once Z felt her settle down he wrapped his arms around her possessively.
After he saw that they were both okay, wiz walked over to the cot and lay down. He didn't really need it but it would allow him rest more quickly if he was in a comfortable position and since his friends took his chair he would take the cot.
So tell me what you think and hopefully I'll have an update soon