Fan Fiction ❯ Omni Excell: The Second Revival ❯ The First Second Revival ( Chapter 1 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

Introduction

 

Billions of years ago, a great threat, threaten the very existence of life. At the time, only gods lived and fought over territory. This threat appears from a rip of time and space from another dimension, which should never happen. Once this threat is loose it starts exterminating every single god that goes against it.

After losing half of the population the divine god plans to counter this evil being. Every single god that is alive and the divine god use most of their power for a technique. This technique creates another rip in time and space and another being comes out. This being calls itself OMNI the balancer of life.

The two strange beings fought over HEAVEN universe and their power breaks it apart. These pieces are scattered out in space creating multiple universes instead of one big universe. After years of fighting the OMNI the evil being vanish without a trace. Soon after, the balance of life return to normal and the OMNI also vanishes.

The divine god knows that the evil being will come back and terminate all life. They will never obtain the energy that they lost in order to summon that creature. So the divine god transfer it's power to the rest of the gods to know the powerful technique. But this technique allows a mortal to become OMNI but starts extremely weak. And in order for this technique to work they most sacrifice their spiritual energy, life energy, immortality and regeneration.

The gods are now in competition to create the most powerful mortal OMNI. Soon OMNI fights other gods' OMNI to see who is more powerful and worthy to have OMNI. Hundreds of OMNI fought each other to be the strongest OMNI, but power soon went to their mind. In order for OMNI to get stronger they most fight a stronger opponent and face death to get to the next level. The other way, kill as many as you can to get experience of the already existing level. These OMNI who chooses to kill innocents or kill their own god are prison at OMNI universe where there is no out.

Because of the renegade OMNI, the technique is forbidden and OMNI becomes rare and forgotten. Until one god named Gaia breaks the oath and use the OMNI technique on eleven mortals. Gaia's brother Galantis use this disadvantage and deliver a fatal blow to Gaia. The eleven seal Galantis away but he created demons powerful enough to take on the eleven and succeed in killing them.

What nobody knows depending on how powerful the god who uses the technique it can revive into different mortal. When the OMNI first revive, the OMNI is now called OMNI FIRST REVIVAL and this OMNI haves the power of the first eleven OMNI.

During the life of the second OMNI, he unlocks 90 levels and become powerful as a god. He wants to unlock the last 10 levels but his heart is too corrupted to handle the power. As he trains for three years in a row he somehow vanish and never seen again.

Now the OMNIs' gets revive a second time going into it's third mortal. These new eleven OMNIs are now referred as OMNI THE SECOND REVIVAL. The difference of these new eleven is that they have the combine power of the first and the second eleven. With combine power of all three generation these are sometimes thought as the true balancer of life.

The Second revival is the most powerful power and being in life. Not only because they have the combine power of all three, the OMNI evolves into a higher form. This form haves unpredictable power increase and also the levels are easier and more powerful then the previous.

A several billion years process but the Second Revival of Gaia eleven OMNI is finally born. The eleven are not in one place no more but scatter in billion universes

 

THIS STORY USES THE "VERSUS CONCEPT" AND OTHER NEW FEATURES

 

Chapter 1

Before Galantis was sealed away he use most of his powers to create a creation he called son. The named of Galantis son is the ageless Greno, who also shares the same mind with his father. It had been two billions years since the battle of Omni against Greno and the mortal clone Galantis Diablo.

Omni haves the first revival omni and unlock the 90 levels but couldn't get the last ten. Omni was too weak to beat Greno but vanquish the clone. Omni vanish three years after the battle and never seen again. Greno spent several billion years off of Gaia conquering the dimension to free Galantis Diablo.

To do that, he must go to HEAVEN Universe and use the power of the eleven OMNI. Not just any OMNI, but a fully evolve OMNI at the highest level. Now the only hope is the confidence and courage the eleven most face alone and together.

 

PLANET VEON (GAIA YEAR- 1,999,999,000) (EARTH YEAR- 1,000)

"This is it, Turbine," someone said.

"Gegine, is going down, sir," Turbine said.

Turbine Veo, a nineteen year old soldier from the planet Veon. An orphan since birth born with ancient powers that nobody knows existed. Somebody name Cyriszero took him under his wing and took care of him. At the age of five General Cyriszero recruits him in the military and train him to his limits. Turbine proves to be a fierce fighter even without discovering his inner power.

By age 9 he been recognize by the Royal Family and is giving honors of a Royal Elite. This gave him reputation as the second youngest soldier to be given this opportunity. At his nineteenth birthday the King gives him the status as Second In Command and his ex general Cyriszero First In Command.

"Turbine, I want you to stay here and protect the planet," Cyriszero said.

"But I want to go to Gegine too," Turbine said.

"No, you have other responsibility to take care of and you have a lot to live for so you can protect the people you care for," Cyriszero said.

"Then come back alive," Turbine said.

"Don't worry young sir, we always come back," one of Cyriszero soldiers said.

"Yeah, but every time you come back you're always badly injured," Turbine said.

"Dream on, young sir," the soldier said, "this time it's different."

Cyriszero and the soldier walk up the ramp to the space transporter. Cyriszero turns around halfway and smile giving a thumb up as the door closes. Turbine walks back as the ship blast off and he watches it disappear in the sky. Millions more ships are going to outer space but suddenly lasers from space shot down destroying some ships instantly. This is the sign of another invasion of Gegine soldiers that they have landed.

"It's up to me now," Turbine said running through the streets.

Some buildings exploded then suddenly the building right next to Turbine explodes forcing him into a wall across the street. He struggle to get up but he then hears laughter surrounding him. A group of Gegine soldiers is walking toward him with high velocity plasma rifle aiming at him. Turbine takes his sword out standing up but the soldiers begin firing. He then vanishes on the spot by his incredible speed, dodging the bullets, and appearing behind them.

"Hey, where were you firing at, I'm right here," Turbine said smiling.

The soldiers' turns around trying to aim at him but Turbine dash towards them swinging his sword. Everything went black with four bright flashes going pass the soldiers as Turbine is behind them again. He swing his sword down, letting the blade slightly hit the ground triggering a chain reaction which the soldiers' body begins squirting out blood and falling apart.

"There must be more, I better hurry to the palace," Turbine said running.

Turbine runs through the deserted streets with fire and hover cars flip over. He sees dead Veon and Gegine soldiers laying on the ground lifeless colored with blood. Turbine reaches the palace gates jumping over it and lands seeing Gegine soldiers slaughtering the Royal Army.

He walks forward getting his sword out as he stops and whistle. The soldiers' stops and turns toward Turbine who is smiling as he walks sliding the blade tip across the ground. He then stops smiling as he runs toward them raising his sword and begin attacking. With in minutes all 200 soldiers are dead, lying on the ground in pieces.

"Damn, you leave no choice," Turbine said running to the palace eyes close.

Turbine kills scout teams around the palace and finally reach the stairs to the front door. He then see Gegine soldier's trying to get in as their general is standing few feet away. The soldiers' suddenly stops of what they doing and everyone turns around.

"I see that I have no worries for you to get inside," Turbine said laughing.

"Are you trying to mock me, boy," the general said.

"I'm going to do a lot more worse then that."

Turbine walks up the rest of the stairs as four elites run down toward them with their plasma sword. He swiftly slashes vertically up, then a side slash, spins a complete circle and finish off with two quick diagonal slashes. The five stands still but the four elites body begins squirting blood out and falls dead before hitting the ground.

More elites runs toward him as he now heads toward the general. He slashes each and every soldier that tries to take him on and soon dozen of elites is piled behind him. Turbine and the general are now standing alone in a wide-open circle.

"By the skills you just showed you must be Turbine Veo. I finally meet Veon's Ace General Cyriszero student. Killing you will bring so much pleasure and I might get promoted."

"Keep on talking, it makes you an easy target," Turbine said walking as his blade scarps the ground.

"Show me what you got kid."

Turbine runs toward the general and swing his sword but the general blocks with his spear. Turbine moves his sword across the spear and push off knocking the general back couple steps quickly. Turbine swings his sword downward extremely fast piercing through the general's chest plate. The general steps back quick enough that the blade barely misses his body. The chest plate slowly slide open to the sides and then slip off hitting the ground.

"Better then I thought," the general said.

"Give up, if you want to live."

"You are the one who is going to die."

Turbine runs toward the general swinging his sword as the general uses his spear to block them all. Turbine fakes a swing and spin around the general moving and swing at the general's back. The sword easily pierces the armor and slice through his back cutting his spine in half. Turbine jumps back a second before the blood begins squirting out as the general falls dead.

He looks away and runs to the palace front doors, which opens automatically. Shadows' appears running on the wall following Turbine through the corridors. He reaches the grand hall that is an open space enough for special occasions for all high ranks. As soon he gets in the center, five people drop down from the shadows surrounding him.

"About time you drop time," Turbine said moving his sword slowly.

He sharply turns 180 degrees stepping forward and slicing one of them who leap at him. He then rolls to the side barely dodging another one who leaps at him. As he gets up, he swiftly swings his sword cutting the solider then spins his sword around thrusting it back. He takes out his sword and spins another 180 degrees slicing everyone's head off. Turbine put his sword away and once it click in the body gush out blood and fall as he walks off.

Turbine walks out of the grand hall and begin running through more long corridors. He kills each Gegine soldiers that somehow got inside. He reaches the throne room where the Emperor, his wife, daughter, and son are hiding in a corner.

A female, who looks 20 years old, is fighting a group of soldiers using her daggers. Turbine throws his sword that pierce through a soldier's back that was sneaking up on her. Turbine pulls the string that is attached to the sword and it comes to him. The female then notice that Turbine is there as she is surrounded.

"Turbine!? Took you long enough," the female said.

"Never mind how long I took, I'm here."

Turbine runs to the group surrounding the female but stop as he feels something strange. He looks up and sees more soldiers coming through the window from above. Turbine holds his sword straight out moving it to the left and then to the right. He smiles as he uses his left hand to provoke them to attack him.

Two of the elites charge him, one from behind and the other in front. Turbine turns 180 degrees swinging his sword to slice the one behind him. As he spins his left hand reaches for his second sword handle on his right side him.

When he is about to slice the solider that was behind him he takes out the second sword swinging it around him. Turbine is standing with both arms straight out from the sides each hand holding a sword. He went from facing 12-o-clock, turning counter clockwise and between 11 and 7-o-clock taking out his. He ends it, facing 3-o-clock with the sword pointing at 6 and 12-o-clock.

Four others charge at him in which he easily slices each one three times. The four gushes out blood, dropping to the ground and surrounding him with one drop of blood on him. He looks up to see his female companion killing the last soldier. Turbine jogs to her and pats her on the back to congratulate her.

"Good job Dacia."

Dacia is a 20 years old female major who is five feet and eight inches high. She haves long black hair that she always haves it up. She is wearing casual clothing that she wears as a civilian except she haves arms and chins guards. Her small and young yet innocent face will brighten up even the situation is not right. To top it off is that her brown eyes sparkle all the time.

"I'm sorry I yelled at you, it's that I am glad that you are here."

"It's alright, as long you are safe."

Suddenly the sound of glass shattering went through their ears. The two looks up to see somebody, with tons of armor drop down. Turbine push Dacia behind him holding out both of his sword as the armor soldier wave his mace at him.

"Turbine Veo, your death shall end the war for Veon."

"Bring it."

The armor soldier runs to Turbine, arching his mace back ready to swing it at any moment. Turbine also runs toward the soldier with both swords straight out to the sides. The soldier swings his mace down but Turbine uses his speed to vanish as the mace crash onto the ground. Turbine appears dropping down from behind using his swords to slice the armor open. The soldier turns around unexpectedly using his face to hit Turbine.

Turbine gets knock back, sliding on the floor and his swords' slides away from him. He looks up seeing the armor soldier swinging his mace down to him but at the last second Turbine roll to the side. He then push off of the ground to spin upwards onto his feet and begin doing flips still dodging the mace.

The mace swiftly hit Turbine knocking him down again extremely dizzy. The armor soldier begins to swing his mace but at the same time Turbine eyes narrow and everything slows down. Turbine makes a fist with both hands but then open his left hand and move it forward catching the soldier's right wrist. Turbine tightens his right fist as the air around begins to heat up with energy gathering there.

Soon, Turbine hand is glowing with tremendous energy buildup as he then swings it under arm launching it toward the sky. He impacts the bottom of the soldier's chin, which release the energy, blasting the soldier up. The energy soon swallows the soldier and vaporizing him in the air. The energy release overloads and causes a chain reaction explosion with a thick smoke screen.

Within several seconds the smoke begins to fade away as Dacia is trying to find Turbine. The smoke finally clears enough for Dacia to see him lying on the floor unconscious. She runs to him and collapse to her knees and puts him on her lap with his head leaning on her left arm.

"You did a great job, I'm proud of you Turbine," Dacia said slowly.

"Dacia," Turbine slowly said, struggling to get the word out.

 

IN OUTER SPACE BETWEEN VEON AND GEGINE

Cyriszero sits in the back of a Veon's Archdragon jet with his squad. He is 34 years old and was the youngest to make general. His knowledge in military operation is superb with experience in ground and air combat. Whoever is in the military, looks up to him as the next leader of Veon.

"General, Gegine is in view," the pilot said.

"How is the space defense on the planet," Cyriszero said.

"The first and second wave disabled it and most of the primary goals but at the cost of everyone."

"As long we finish them off, they wont die in vein."

The Archdragon makes it's way through the rubble of giant space battle. The soldiers' looks through the windows and sees all of the destruction and some signs of cold dead bodies. Cyriszero stands up and walk to the front of the jet and turns around seeing his squad.

"This is it, we are heading toward the grand fortress of our arch enemy Greno. Most of their forces have been destroyed at the cost of our fellow comrades. Today is the day when we the people of Veon defeats Gegine once and for all. A decade ago people said it is impossible to defeat Gegine but a decade later we will prove them wrong.

"The bad news is that some of you and/or me will not return, but remember, your families will stay alive. You are not doing this because you have to. You are doing this because there are people you want to protect. Now, even that you might not come back, who is with me," Cyriszero said watching his squad cheers, "now lets do this."

The Archdragon makes it way through the atmosphere towards the grand fortress. Suddenly a laser shot out from the ground to the vast numbers of ships. Whoever was in it or several yards from it instantly explodes as more lasers shoots out and now moving destroying even more. The Archdragon is almost to the ground but a laser swiftly destroys one of its wings.

"We're hit, we going down."

"Pilot, this ship is not going return please join us to the battlefield," Cyriszero said putting his right hand on the pilot left shoulder.

"I'm sorry General Cyriszero but my pride wants me to stay and die with my ship. In my dreams I knew that I will die for my planet in the air," the pilot said.

"I understand soldier, we will always remember you," Cyriszero said turning around, "squad, we're going aerial."

"Yes sir!"

All twenty including Cyriszero is sitting on their sit and suddenly went down below. Their went inside a emergency mini jet glider and is release in the air. As Cyriszero the last person out he looks back seeing the laser hit the Archdragon and destroys it completely.

The twenty-one peoples lands safely on the ground in a trench taking cover from enemy fire. Cyriszero looks up seeing the mini gliders filling the sky. Some didn't make it to the ground but most of them did. Cyriszero looks at everyone, who is looking back at him, he then nods and everyone gets out of the trench charging.

About millions of Veon's soldier is running toward the grand fortress. Gegine soldiers are running out of the fortress front doors and bankers. The two armies clash and battle it out killing each other like ants. Cyriszero and his squad, with some missing, appears at the front door steps of the fortress. They turn around seeing a massive ground war with thousands of explosion and a light show in the air.

As thousands of both armies is dying it seem it haves no end. Cyriszero and his squad turn away from the battle and then runs inside the fortress. They run into extremely powerful elite and lost someone each time. After minutes of searching the throne room only Cyriszero is still alive. He gets inside seeing somebody sitting the throne having a wine glass in his left hand.

"You must be Greno the leader of Gegine," Cyriszero said walking in.

"So you are Veon's first commander Cyriszero," Greno said tossing his wine glass away.

"You die now Greno, your reign of terror ends now."

"Ha, ha, ha, ha. Foolish mortal, how humorist can you possibly get, do you ever believe that you can defeat a god."

"Ha! You are no god, but your days of torture is over."

"Over? You who is so fragile speaks such nonsense, my ruling is just the beginning."

"Then I will have to see about that, now die."

"Pitiful mortals!"

 

ONE WEEK LATER

"We got a call sir," an officer said sitting down on his desk at a police station.

"What is it?" the chief said.

"The mayor of Yulin said that their neighboring city is completely destroyed."

"What!" the chief yells out loud.

"What shall we do?" the officer said.

"It's too dangerous for anyone to get out there if a city is destroyed just like that. Get our first commander Turbine to investigate that city."

 

GEROY -SEVERAL HOURS LATER

Turbine is walking through ruins of once a prosper city, that haves one of most population. He sees no signs any life forms and every object is vanish only remains of a building remains. He then see a half broken sign saying `children care" he looks at with sadness. He then sees a shadow on the ground coming from behind. He turns around with his sword out ready and sees somebody in a cloak hovering in the air.

"Who are you?" Turbine commands.

"A Veon soldier," it says in a half robotic tone.

"I'm not saying it again," Turbine commands again.

"That voice, so you are still alive kid," the same voice said.

"What? How do you know me?" Turbine said piss off.

"It only been a week and you can't recognize my voice," the mysterious person said taking off his hood.

"No, it can't be," Turbine, said dropping his sword.

"Yes, it is I, Cyriszero," Cyriszero said

"What happen to you?" Turbine asks.

"It doesn't concern you, but I want you to kill me."

"Why?"

"If you don't then the whole planet will be destroyed."

"Veon is your home you will destroy it."

"That is where you wrong, I can and I will destroy this planet. I lost against Greno and he made me into a cyborg following his every command. The first thing he orders me is to destroy this planet and I have no choice."

"Don't worry I will help you, you can destroy this planet. We share too many memories, you are like a father to me."

"Destroy me now, or I will kill you."

"I will never kill you."

"So beat it."

Cyriszero arms begin to glow with energy increasing and fires the energy into an energy beam. The beam went towards Turbine and on impact it explodes destroying the city again turning it into a crater.

 

THE NEXT DAY

"Sir, the person who destroyed the city is the missing general Cyriszero," Turbine said to the Emperor.

"How can Cyriszero destroys a city, he is the most trusted general that we ever had," the Emperor responds.

"Sir, Greno change Cyriszero into a cyborg and order him to destroy the planet. We got to prevent that but we have to help him to change back."

"Even you are right, we don't have the technology to change a cyborg into a person again."

"We got to try or Veon will be destroyed."

"I am sorry, he is like a brother to me, and a father to you, but if he is going to destroy Veon. I am ordering you to destroy him, we have no choice."

"That's bullshit, he is the most trusted general and great leader and you are going to kill him just like that. I bet you don't want him to come back because he might get the throne from you. You are jealous of him that's why you want me to kill him."

"Enough! Never talk to me in that manner or I will strip the 1st commandment from you. You will destroy Cyriszero or you will go to prison for life."

"Go ahead and take my commandment I don't want to work with somebody so cold. I will never kill Cyriszero and fuck you."

"Guards!"

Turbine turns around and runs out of the throne room with the royal guards chasing him. He is already out of the palace before the guards make any progress. He knows that they will be at his house so he haves to stay low for right now.

He walks the streets with a hooded jacket on hiding his identity. He then stops in front of a window displaying televisions with it on viewing the news.

"Earlier this mourning Ex 1st Commander General Turbine went rouge on the Emperor and acting as a spy for Gegine. If anybody see this traitor please apprehend him with much force necessary," the newscaster said.

He walks the straight seeing the police and military patrolling the streets. He also spots group of mobs walking around trying to find him because of the Emperor jealously. He haves no place to hide but notice he is in front of Dacia's apartment.

"BUZZ!" the doorbell buzzes.

"I'm coming," Dacia said walking toward the door in her bathrobe drying her hair and then open it.

"I'm sorry for intruding your privacy but I need a place to hide," Turbine said walking in.

"I heard the news did you really went rouge and a spy for the Gegine," Dacia said closing the door and locking it.

"You got to be kidding if I want to be part of Gegine and of course not I'm not a rouge. That stupid jackass Emperor wants me to kill Cyriszero because he is jealous Cyriszero make take power from him."

"Oh, I was worry that all that nonsense is true, I never believe it," Dacia said hugging Turbine.

"Wait," Turbine said as the doors bust open with soldiers swarming in.

"I'm sorry Turbine," Dacia said as Turbine pushes her lightly into the wall crying.

Without words they start beating him up with electric rods. They shock him until he is unconscious and drag him out as they hold Dacia still.

Turbine opens his eyes and sees a scientist injecting something in his arm with a needle. He is still feeling the effect of the electric shock that he had. The Emperor appears walking down the steps and smile as he sees Turbine.

"You are awake."

"Fuck you," Turbine said weakly.

"Dacia is a loyal soldier unlike you, she was willing to capture you."

"You fucking bastard."

"I was going to let you be in prison for about a year or two and give you back the 1st commandment badge. But I change my mind and you are going to prison for life on the prison planet Nirus. We inject you with a formula that stops your aging process and you will never die unless something else kills you."

"I will escape."

"Don't count it, you either return by being prove innocent or escape yourself. Since you can't be proven innocent and also you can't escape you stuck there for all of eternality."

"Don't worry Emperor I'm not escaping to here because there won't anything here."

"Cyriszero is dead and I knew you wanted the throne so this is the only way."

"Cyriszero is still alive and you will all be dead."

"Get this fucking kid out of my sight immediately."

"Yes Emperor," the scientist said.

The scientist begins working on their computer and Turbine is put into a small ship. Right next to the ship a warp hole open to the universe where NIRUS is. The ship launches through the warp gate and heads toward the black planet.

 

NIRUS

The ship crashes onto the surface of the barren wasteland planet. He appears on the ground, free of the restraints on his body. He barely stands up bleeding from the crash and he slowly walks to a nearby cave. He leans on the wall and slowly went down sitting as he stretch out his legs.

He closes his eyes to sleep but open his eyes to the sound of movement outside of the cave. He turns his head at the sight of the burning crash and sees monsters and demons. He can see that they are searching for something until he hears breathing behind him.

He runs out of the cave being chase by a deform demon. He runs toward the fire to actually see what those creatures look like. He falls down onto his back with his eyes widen with pure fear. A large demon walks into the light with only its legs showing in the light. The demon then thrust his claws toward Turbine who is scared stiff.

The claws hit the ground as Turbine rolls back dodging the demon attack. Suddenly more demons appear in the light too big for the light to reveal. The demons' begins attacking Turbine who is fully lit up by the light of the fire. Within seconds Turbine is feeling tired as the demons near scratching Turbine arms and legs. Soon blood soaks his clothes from the cuts on his body and is feeling weak.

"I hate demons," Turbine coldly said.

Turbine stands still as his body begins to glow with black energy appears around him. He then swings his arms toward the side yelling as the energy extends out disintegrating all of the demons. Turbine hair is now bronze with black as his body slowly powers down

The fire blows out from the energy and Turbine is left alone in the dark planet. The sun begins to rise at the south side gong up slow but a moon is going to block it in one hour. He walks back to the cave, sits down and went to sleep.

 

ONE WEEK LATER

Cyriszero appears with the cloak on walking to the Veon's palace. The royal soldiers tries to step him but he kills each one stupid enough to stop him. He reaches the throne room where the Emperor is sitting on his throne leisurely.

"Who are you? What do you want? I have no time for this, leave or I arrest you."

"I bet you told Turbine to leave or go to prison, right," Cyriszero said.

"What do you know?"

"You should know who I am, my dear friend," Cyriszero said taking his hood off.

"Cyriszero."

"Turbine warned all of you that I would come back and destroy this planet. He knows that you have the technology to save me but choose not to. You thought he is telling the truth but you don't want to give up your throne to me. You are so weak, killing you will bring so much pleasure."

"Don't do this, we're best friends right, we are like brothers. I will get Turbine back and we will change you back to your normal self."

"You are one stupid son of a bitch, how did you ever become Emperor. It doesn't matter, Turbine is safe on Nirus so destroying the planet is the only way to go."

"NO!"

Cyriszero fires a blast toward the Emperor and it swallowing him vaporizing him on the spot. He then fly up shooting the glass ceiling and hover above the planet. He sees something flying up to space and his mechanical eye zoom in. He sees Dacia in cryogenic stasis in that capsule. He then fires a blast toward the planet and it went through the planet easily.

Within seconds the planet starts to shake violently with lava erupting from underneath. Soon the planet begins to breaks apart and more eruptions. Soon the core collapse, the whole planet explodes and Cyriszero recovers the capsule.