Fan Fiction ❯ Starfire's Surprise Party ❯ The Replies ( Chapter 3 )
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Starfire's Surprise Party
Chapter 3: The replies
After Starfire went to bed...
"Hey Robin!" said Cyborg. "You got some new e-mail!"
"Maybe it's some of the replies!" said BeastBoy.
"I'll go check." said Robin. "You guys put up the decorations."
"Where do they go?" asked Raven.
"I'll show you." answered Cyborg. "Ok. These go over here and these..."
Back to Robin...
"I hope almost everyone makes it." said Robin to himself.
Robin's Replies:
Dear BatmanSidekick,
Love to, can't. Naraku's back on the move and I can't miss a second of it. Plus I've got a premire that night.
Inuyasha
Dear BatmanSidekick,
I'll be there!
Kita
Ditto,
I can't wait!
Fry
Ditto,
If Jackie can go, I can go!
You'll have to wait for his e-mail.
Jade
Ditto,
Jade and I will be there for sure!
Jackie
Ditto,
You know we have premires on Saturdays!
But I totolly wish I could make it.
Kagome
Ditto,
Sure I'll come!
Leela
Ditto,
I can make It!
So can I!
Me too!
The PPG
Ditto,
I have a game of Mahjong with Dao Long Wong.
Sorry!
Uncle
Ditto,
Can't wait!
Dee Dee
Ditto,
Sorry.
I have to baby-sit the twins again.
Tell Starfire I said Happy Birthday!
Penny
Ditto,
I don't know if I can or can't.
I'll be there if I can though!
Kim Possible
Ditto,
Sorry.
Peter Griffin
Ditto,
If you guys can pick me up,
I'll be ther for sure!
Brandy
Ditto,
Abluadabluadablu!(You'll see me there!)
Courage The Cowardly Dog
Ditto,
Yusuke, Hiei, Kurama, Botan, Me, and Keiko can make it!
Kurama has something to say: I will give the lovely lady an extreamly nice presant.
Kuwabara
"PRESANTS!" screamed Cyborg. "How could we forget to buy Star some presants!"
"Already taken care of." said Raven.
"But, how?" asked Cyborg.
"I went to the mall!" answered Raven. "What did you think girls did at the mall!"
"Shop. I know." said Cyborg. "But how did you sneak them past Starfire?"
"I didn't." answered Raven. "I told her they were presants for Robin's parents."
"Ok." said Cyborg. "Now let's get back to work."
Ditto,
Joey, Mai, Tristen, and i can make it.
But no one else could.
Yugi
"Wow." said Robin. "20 people can make it for sure! Kim and Brandy don't no for sure if they can make it. Do you think you could pick up Brandy Cy?"
"Sure." Cyborg said while putting up a decorated banner.
"I'll go next."
Cyborg's Replies:
Dear TechnoDude,
Be there if I can.
Somebody might rob a bank or something then.
Virgel
Dear TechnoDude,
Dude! I'll totolly be there!
Ozzy
Ditto,
Starfire's my best friend!
Of course I'll be there!
Misty
Ditto,
I'll be there Cy!
Ash
Ditto,
I'd love to,
but I need to buy a generator for the pokemon center in case theres a black-out again!
Nurse joy
Ditto,
I'll be there,
or my name is not Jenny!
Officer Jenny
"Cool! 4 people could make it and i have one not sure! Anyways, Ok BB." said Cyborg. "Your turn!"
"I love e-mail!" said BeastBoy.
BeastBoy's Replies:
Dear PartyAnimal,
Cosmo, Timmy and I will be there!
Wanda
Dear PartyAnimal,
Duuuuuuhhhhhh, sure.
pAtrICK
Ditto,
I'll be there faster then you can find a hog swimming in mud.
Sandy
Ditto,
I wish i could,
But mom has to upgrade my eyes again!:(
Jenny ("Excuse but her name is XJ9." MOM!!!!)
Ditto,
School Talent show.
Danny
Ditto,
I'll be there!
Gotta Blast!
Jimmy
Ditto,
Cool! I'll totolly be there!
Teenage Tommy
Ditto,
I'll definitly be there!
Teenage Chuckie
Ditto,
Sorry, but we can't make it.
Yeah! Cat says you guys are too wimpy!
DOGGGG!!!! Sorry about that. He's lying you know.
I never lie!
Catdog
Ditto,
Penny, Snap and I will be there!
Rudy
Ditto,
I'm sorry,
but I can't be there.
Helga
"All done." said BeastBoy. "11 more people."
"Which makes a total of 40 people who can come."said Raven.
"Including us." said Cyborg.
"Now what should we do?" asked BB.
"We go to bed, and wait.(Scratch Scratch)" answered Robin.
"This is going to be AWSOME!" screamed BeastBoy.
"Is there something wrong?" asked Starfire sleepily.
"EE! Raven, put the presants away!" said Robin quietly.
"Why is everyone awake at 3:57 in the mourning?" asked Starfire.
"UHHHHHHH..." stammered everyone else.
End Chapter
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Chapter 3: The replies
After Starfire went to bed...
"Hey Robin!" said Cyborg. "You got some new e-mail!"
"Maybe it's some of the replies!" said BeastBoy.
"I'll go check." said Robin. "You guys put up the decorations."
"Where do they go?" asked Raven.
"I'll show you." answered Cyborg. "Ok. These go over here and these..."
Back to Robin...
"I hope almost everyone makes it." said Robin to himself.
Robin's Replies:
Dear BatmanSidekick,
Love to, can't. Naraku's back on the move and I can't miss a second of it. Plus I've got a premire that night.
Inuyasha
Dear BatmanSidekick,
I'll be there!
Kita
Ditto,
I can't wait!
Fry
Ditto,
If Jackie can go, I can go!
You'll have to wait for his e-mail.
Jade
Ditto,
Jade and I will be there for sure!
Jackie
Ditto,
You know we have premires on Saturdays!
But I totolly wish I could make it.
Kagome
Ditto,
Sure I'll come!
Leela
Ditto,
I can make It!
So can I!
Me too!
The PPG
Ditto,
I have a game of Mahjong with Dao Long Wong.
Sorry!
Uncle
Ditto,
Can't wait!
Dee Dee
Ditto,
Sorry.
I have to baby-sit the twins again.
Tell Starfire I said Happy Birthday!
Penny
Ditto,
I don't know if I can or can't.
I'll be there if I can though!
Kim Possible
Ditto,
Sorry.
Peter Griffin
Ditto,
If you guys can pick me up,
I'll be ther for sure!
Brandy
Ditto,
Abluadabluadablu!(You'll see me there!)
Courage The Cowardly Dog
Ditto,
Yusuke, Hiei, Kurama, Botan, Me, and Keiko can make it!
Kurama has something to say: I will give the lovely lady an extreamly nice presant.
Kuwabara
"PRESANTS!" screamed Cyborg. "How could we forget to buy Star some presants!"
"Already taken care of." said Raven.
"But, how?" asked Cyborg.
"I went to the mall!" answered Raven. "What did you think girls did at the mall!"
"Shop. I know." said Cyborg. "But how did you sneak them past Starfire?"
"I didn't." answered Raven. "I told her they were presants for Robin's parents."
"Ok." said Cyborg. "Now let's get back to work."
Ditto,
Joey, Mai, Tristen, and i can make it.
But no one else could.
Yugi
"Wow." said Robin. "20 people can make it for sure! Kim and Brandy don't no for sure if they can make it. Do you think you could pick up Brandy Cy?"
"Sure." Cyborg said while putting up a decorated banner.
"I'll go next."
Cyborg's Replies:
Dear TechnoDude,
Be there if I can.
Somebody might rob a bank or something then.
Virgel
Dear TechnoDude,
Dude! I'll totolly be there!
Ozzy
Ditto,
Starfire's my best friend!
Of course I'll be there!
Misty
Ditto,
I'll be there Cy!
Ash
Ditto,
I'd love to,
but I need to buy a generator for the pokemon center in case theres a black-out again!
Nurse joy
Ditto,
I'll be there,
or my name is not Jenny!
Officer Jenny
"Cool! 4 people could make it and i have one not sure! Anyways, Ok BB." said Cyborg. "Your turn!"
"I love e-mail!" said BeastBoy.
BeastBoy's Replies:
Dear PartyAnimal,
Cosmo, Timmy and I will be there!
Wanda
Dear PartyAnimal,
Duuuuuuhhhhhh, sure.
pAtrICK
Ditto,
I'll be there faster then you can find a hog swimming in mud.
Sandy
Ditto,
I wish i could,
But mom has to upgrade my eyes again!:(
Jenny ("Excuse but her name is XJ9." MOM!!!!)
Ditto,
School Talent show.
Danny
Ditto,
I'll be there!
Gotta Blast!
Jimmy
Ditto,
Cool! I'll totolly be there!
Teenage Tommy
Ditto,
I'll definitly be there!
Teenage Chuckie
Ditto,
Sorry, but we can't make it.
Yeah! Cat says you guys are too wimpy!
DOGGGG!!!! Sorry about that. He's lying you know.
I never lie!
Catdog
Ditto,
Penny, Snap and I will be there!
Rudy
Ditto,
I'm sorry,
but I can't be there.
Helga
"All done." said BeastBoy. "11 more people."
"Which makes a total of 40 people who can come."said Raven.
"Including us." said Cyborg.
"Now what should we do?" asked BB.
"We go to bed, and wait.(Scratch Scratch)" answered Robin.
"This is going to be AWSOME!" screamed BeastBoy.
"Is there something wrong?" asked Starfire sleepily.
"EE! Raven, put the presants away!" said Robin quietly.
"Why is everyone awake at 3:57 in the mourning?" asked Starfire.
"UHHHHHHH..." stammered everyone else.
End Chapter
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