Fan Fiction ❯ The Lonely One ❯ The Young Girl ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: GoldenEyedGirl 
It is only the beginning. Those words have never been more true then now. Lets find out how it all started.
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Horror / Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 09.15.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 173 | Status: Work In Progress
It is only the beginning. Those words have never been more true then now. Lets find out how it all started.
Anime/Manga: Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Horror / Hentai | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 09.15.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 173 | Status: Work In Progress
Hello Everyone. This is my first work of art other then fanfiction. I thought I would like to try this out. My friend got me into this and she just told me to try and see. I told her that I am not a writer but she insisted that I try. So here goes. Okay, my friend said that I should do a disclaimer thing so I will try to.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything. It is just a story. A work of fiction.
Chapter One: The Young Girl
She was around 20 years of age. She was so lonely for a girl her age. She just wishes that she had someone around. Someone to talk to and someone that wouldn't make fun of her. Someone she can relate to and for them to know how it feels to have no father. Having no father bites the dust. For a girl to have no father and just a mother that is never around is a pain. They make fun of her and call her names. She just sits there quietly, waiting for them to stop or for the world to open up and swallow her.
This is her story.
It all started when her mother got married to her father. They thought it would last and they thought they would be happy. Well thats what you get for taking it all for granted. About a year and a half after their marriage they found out that she was pregnant. She was so happy to be able to have a child. She was hoping for a little boy. Her husband was also hoping for a little boy.
Over a small amount of time the wife found out that her husband was abusive. Things got worse as she grew more and more round with child. One day Lae went to the doctor to get her ultrasound done to see what sex the child would be. They got the best news that day. They found out that their child would be a boy. They couldn't wait for him to be born. He would be loved and cherished. A boy to carry on the family name. Jerod couldn't wait for his son to be born. He would teach him to trow a baseball and play football with him and teach him all about 'guy' stuff.
One afternoon Lae came into the livingroom to find Jerod drinking beer again, and not just one or two, no less then six. She said that he shouldn't be doing that. She noticed that he started to drink more and more, so that basically he was drunk every hour of the day. He would drink so much he would pass out and then when he woke up the first thing he would do is grab another beer. It got so bad that once he picked her up and threw her across the room. She hit the wall with a sickening thud. She put her hand up to her head and felt around. When she pulled her hand back she found blood staining her fingers.
She couldn't believe what he did. She got up and yelled at him for hurting her. He thought she was making to much noise so he took an unopened beer can and chucked it at her head, hitting its mark. She got so pissed she walked over to him and punched him square in the jaw. She smirked at the satisfying sound of bone breaking. She had just broken his jaw. She then packed a few things and drove away. She went to her mothers house and stayed there for awhile to wait things out.
He eventually came by to apologize for what he has done to her, and begging for her to forgive him and go back to him. She, being in love with him and thinking he will change, went back to him. Only to have him change his ways for a few months and then get back to the old ways of drinking and hitting. Well Lae put up with this for the childs sake. Their son should have a father around to do stuff with. She hoped their son would change him to the man he used to be. She could hope and pray.
Then came the day where she got up to use the bathroom and instead of going, her water broke. She couldn't believe it. Her son would be here today! She was so happy. She waddled over to Jerod and woke him up saying his son would be born. They were both happy that they would be parents of a wonderful, happy, bouncing baby boy. They got into their car and drove to the hospital, the whole way the contractions getting worse. The baby would be here soon. They pulled into the ER and got out. ( I won't gross you out with the details)
Well they were in the delivery room and the baby was almost all the way out. The doctor and everyone else got a big suprise when instead of a boy being born, there was a girl in his place. Jerod and Lae were a little disappointed but oh well, it was a child. Now to think of a name for her. Jerod, was actually a little more then disappointed. They decided to name the child, Melony.
Shortly after that Jerod got really bad about his drinking. So Lae left Jerod and moved in with her parents. Time flew by and as Melony grew, she grew lonely. Wanting attention from her mother and wishing for a father. It was time for her to go to school. The students all found out that she was fatherless. They called her names and picked on her. As she grew older she started fighting back and lost all emotion. They called her mother her grandmother and they called her names just because she was different. She liked being alone and quiet.
As the years passed she became more reserved and less likely to talk to anyone. She got in with the wrong crouds and started doing drugs and drinking alcohol. She did this for years and years. Eventually someone helped her. Her only friend in the world. It was her cousin, Magan. Magan and Melony were as good as sisters. They did everything together. They cooked, cleaned, talked, walked, did everything sisters would. Acted like sisters and loved eachother like sisters.
When Melony turned 16 she moved away. She missed her 'sis' so much she didn't know what to do without her. So she did the only thing that made her happy. Read books and take long walks. Well one night she felt so alone and just so depressed she went out into the night and took a long walk. She was walking down one of the long dirt roads she lived on and had her hands in her pockets. When all of a sudden she got this feeling she was being watched. She couldn't shake the feeling she was being follow. She did the only thing she could think of and ran home.
She stumbled into her room and fell on her bed. She then looked around because she still felt watched. She went into the bathroom and got ready for bed. She crawled into bed and shut off the lights. She then fell into a frightful sleep. She dreampt of stalkers and murderers.
2 years later
" So you still feel like you are being watched, sis?" asked Magan.
" Yes I do, and its starting to freak ma out." Melony said.
" I bet it is, but you know what. I think you should come and live with me in New York."
" Aww, Magan. I would love to. I have my savings and everything so I will buy a plane ticket and be there in 3 days. Is that ok?"
" Yeah, sure."
" Okay, well let me go talk to ma, and I will see you then sis."
" Okays, loves ya."
" You to."
They both hung up the phone and Melony went downstairs to talk to her mother and tell her that they could go to New York. She went into the kitchen were her mother was sitting at the table, smoking a cigarette, and waiting for supper to be done. She told her mother of her plans and Lae figured it would be better then where they were now, so she said its about time for change anyway. They packed up everything they could carry and set it in the living room. All ready to go.
The three days have passed and they are already landing in New York. They come out of the terrminal and was found by Magan. They did what any normal family would do if they missed each other. They hugged and cried and couldn't believe they were together again. All the lovey dovey stuff was done and over with in a coulple of days. Magan and Melony were back to being sisters again and loving it. But still Melony was lonely.
Melony went for a walk in the streets of New York City. She still couldn't shake the feeling of being followed and it scared her. When all of a sudden there was a noise behind her and all she saw was black before everything went dark and she passed out.
Well everyone I hope you liked it. It will be all for now. Please let me know what you think. Be kind. This is my first. Thank you all. Review this story please. Flames are welcome.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything. It is just a story. A work of fiction.
Chapter One: The Young Girl
She was around 20 years of age. She was so lonely for a girl her age. She just wishes that she had someone around. Someone to talk to and someone that wouldn't make fun of her. Someone she can relate to and for them to know how it feels to have no father. Having no father bites the dust. For a girl to have no father and just a mother that is never around is a pain. They make fun of her and call her names. She just sits there quietly, waiting for them to stop or for the world to open up and swallow her.
This is her story.
It all started when her mother got married to her father. They thought it would last and they thought they would be happy. Well thats what you get for taking it all for granted. About a year and a half after their marriage they found out that she was pregnant. She was so happy to be able to have a child. She was hoping for a little boy. Her husband was also hoping for a little boy.
Over a small amount of time the wife found out that her husband was abusive. Things got worse as she grew more and more round with child. One day Lae went to the doctor to get her ultrasound done to see what sex the child would be. They got the best news that day. They found out that their child would be a boy. They couldn't wait for him to be born. He would be loved and cherished. A boy to carry on the family name. Jerod couldn't wait for his son to be born. He would teach him to trow a baseball and play football with him and teach him all about 'guy' stuff.
One afternoon Lae came into the livingroom to find Jerod drinking beer again, and not just one or two, no less then six. She said that he shouldn't be doing that. She noticed that he started to drink more and more, so that basically he was drunk every hour of the day. He would drink so much he would pass out and then when he woke up the first thing he would do is grab another beer. It got so bad that once he picked her up and threw her across the room. She hit the wall with a sickening thud. She put her hand up to her head and felt around. When she pulled her hand back she found blood staining her fingers.
She couldn't believe what he did. She got up and yelled at him for hurting her. He thought she was making to much noise so he took an unopened beer can and chucked it at her head, hitting its mark. She got so pissed she walked over to him and punched him square in the jaw. She smirked at the satisfying sound of bone breaking. She had just broken his jaw. She then packed a few things and drove away. She went to her mothers house and stayed there for awhile to wait things out.
He eventually came by to apologize for what he has done to her, and begging for her to forgive him and go back to him. She, being in love with him and thinking he will change, went back to him. Only to have him change his ways for a few months and then get back to the old ways of drinking and hitting. Well Lae put up with this for the childs sake. Their son should have a father around to do stuff with. She hoped their son would change him to the man he used to be. She could hope and pray.
Then came the day where she got up to use the bathroom and instead of going, her water broke. She couldn't believe it. Her son would be here today! She was so happy. She waddled over to Jerod and woke him up saying his son would be born. They were both happy that they would be parents of a wonderful, happy, bouncing baby boy. They got into their car and drove to the hospital, the whole way the contractions getting worse. The baby would be here soon. They pulled into the ER and got out. ( I won't gross you out with the details)
Well they were in the delivery room and the baby was almost all the way out. The doctor and everyone else got a big suprise when instead of a boy being born, there was a girl in his place. Jerod and Lae were a little disappointed but oh well, it was a child. Now to think of a name for her. Jerod, was actually a little more then disappointed. They decided to name the child, Melony.
Shortly after that Jerod got really bad about his drinking. So Lae left Jerod and moved in with her parents. Time flew by and as Melony grew, she grew lonely. Wanting attention from her mother and wishing for a father. It was time for her to go to school. The students all found out that she was fatherless. They called her names and picked on her. As she grew older she started fighting back and lost all emotion. They called her mother her grandmother and they called her names just because she was different. She liked being alone and quiet.
As the years passed she became more reserved and less likely to talk to anyone. She got in with the wrong crouds and started doing drugs and drinking alcohol. She did this for years and years. Eventually someone helped her. Her only friend in the world. It was her cousin, Magan. Magan and Melony were as good as sisters. They did everything together. They cooked, cleaned, talked, walked, did everything sisters would. Acted like sisters and loved eachother like sisters.
When Melony turned 16 she moved away. She missed her 'sis' so much she didn't know what to do without her. So she did the only thing that made her happy. Read books and take long walks. Well one night she felt so alone and just so depressed she went out into the night and took a long walk. She was walking down one of the long dirt roads she lived on and had her hands in her pockets. When all of a sudden she got this feeling she was being watched. She couldn't shake the feeling she was being follow. She did the only thing she could think of and ran home.
She stumbled into her room and fell on her bed. She then looked around because she still felt watched. She went into the bathroom and got ready for bed. She crawled into bed and shut off the lights. She then fell into a frightful sleep. She dreampt of stalkers and murderers.
2 years later
" So you still feel like you are being watched, sis?" asked Magan.
" Yes I do, and its starting to freak ma out." Melony said.
" I bet it is, but you know what. I think you should come and live with me in New York."
" Aww, Magan. I would love to. I have my savings and everything so I will buy a plane ticket and be there in 3 days. Is that ok?"
" Yeah, sure."
" Okay, well let me go talk to ma, and I will see you then sis."
" Okays, loves ya."
" You to."
They both hung up the phone and Melony went downstairs to talk to her mother and tell her that they could go to New York. She went into the kitchen were her mother was sitting at the table, smoking a cigarette, and waiting for supper to be done. She told her mother of her plans and Lae figured it would be better then where they were now, so she said its about time for change anyway. They packed up everything they could carry and set it in the living room. All ready to go.
The three days have passed and they are already landing in New York. They come out of the terrminal and was found by Magan. They did what any normal family would do if they missed each other. They hugged and cried and couldn't believe they were together again. All the lovey dovey stuff was done and over with in a coulple of days. Magan and Melony were back to being sisters again and loving it. But still Melony was lonely.
Melony went for a walk in the streets of New York City. She still couldn't shake the feeling of being followed and it scared her. When all of a sudden there was a noise behind her and all she saw was black before everything went dark and she passed out.
Well everyone I hope you liked it. It will be all for now. Please let me know what you think. Be kind. This is my first. Thank you all. Review this story please. Flames are welcome.