Fan Fiction ❯ The other side of the coin ❯ Chapter 1

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

If you could creat a person and it would be in Avatar who would it be and what bending skills would she or he have and how would he or she meet Aang, Kartara,sokka.
Like this is mine.
Name: Tayla
Bending power: Water
Hair color: Brown
eye color:Purple
skin color: tan
This is how she meet them:
Tayla is lost and she is stuck an then she runs into Aang .she talk to Aang andhe brings her back to the camp. when Sokka meets her. He thinks she's pretty. and then all Sokka wents to is hang out with Tayla. But Kartara has a bad feeling about her. Its Kartara right?

Ok my the wired thing is that Im makining a manga like this (based on the Avatar show. Using Zuko and Katara as the main character)

Here it goes People
its a girl 'cause im a girl no dip.
any wayss--
her name- Malaya (MY NAME IS MALAYA LOL and im luvin it..babababa LOL)
ok here the interesting part.

++SHES MIXED half Fire /\ And Half water cool right!
she has Dark black hair with a streak of red hair in the front that is like in a seperate section, i have ani. Pics here... On my site u wont get it till then.
++Eye color: Purple (blu and red makes=purple my favorite color)

++skin color Zukos skin color

Ok her Story. She was raised by her Firebending mother, her father had "Dissapered" when she was five.
Wanna here sumtin COOL her father is actually Katara and Sokkas UNCLE!! She wanted revenage on her father because she felt her father betrayed her and her mother by leaving- 3 years after he left her mother died by getting involed in "sticky bussiness" The sticky business was that she was in a gang, her mother wanted to make money that was one of the only ways,her gang members turned on her and wanted her mother to be sold as a slave for extra $$ but instead she forced them to kill her so she wouldnt have to become a slave.The people from the gang that her mother belonged to before was upset that Malayas mother died because they had no one elese
to sell, they wanted to capture Malaya. So she had to go away and though she could protect herslef aginst them now, when she was young her bending skills were not devlepoed and she couldn't use them properly.She always had to defend herself Feels that she never had anyone to depend on except herself, she protected herself by using her Fire and water bending skills(some times even STEAM). Her powers are well devolped(shes not as good as zuko but probly same stage as Katara).
The only thing shes mastered, is fighting martial arts. She uses a scarf (that her late mother had given her), and a Knife that her father gave her(she forgot who gave it to her but it definently dosent look like its from a fire bender, its a water tribe knife.) She keeps it tided around her wiast. She can be pretty tough, but she has a split personality. Needs some one who is strong because sh eneeds guidence, she is confused and dosnt know wat to do w/ her life other then to avenge her mother. Even tho she can take care of herself some times but is lonely for someone to share herself with because she only had defined herself and had no siblings or faimly to take care of
and has no Real close friends now, but had a few before. She lived in the city, when she was with her mother. Before she died.

She left to find her father and escape the gang that was after her. She Moved around alot she had to be care ful ware she went.Then, reached the harbor of Genarl Zahos and she was discovered by pirates. shes really pretty. (like ME *wink,wink*lol) and they disiced to make a deal w/ her.
to work hard and fight for them and they would keep her as if whe was one of them.She thought it was another oppertunity to find her father. But soon she became strong and a very good fighter, and knew all about fighting and different lands. Then Soon she was one of the best fighter on the ship and wanted something more then being a pirate, scince she wasnt the captin she couldnt chose ware to go. And felt that the pirate life
wasnt getting her anyware closer to finding her father.Then her captin was offered alot of $$$ for the Avatar Prince Zuko is the one whom offered the deal, her captin took it (pirates love $$$ thats mostly wat there bout) When she saw Prince Zuko (she new he was looking for the Avatar) and heard she news that the Avatar was alive with water bender from the SOUTHPOLE. She found it a chance to
go and find her father. She herd that Prince Zuko had fought Genral Zaho in the (amazing) fire bending fight. Zuko had won. She dicsied That the best way to finsh her revenage was
to go with someone strong.Felt that he was the prince that it also might be easier. When Zuko and His uncle Iroh, bored she snuck on to the Fire ship.

++When the night came and it was Really Dark (LOL) She snuck into Prince Zukos Dorm or watever the hell its called, and confronted him.
She locked the doors and woke him.
Malaya: Wake up Prince Zuko we need to talk (its still REALLY DARK)
Zuko:Wha?? *sits up surprized* WHO R U!?!? (not angry just VERY surprised ) lights up his fights for light (no duh)
Zuko: Whoa!! *stares in disbelife like Who the hell let u in. and who r U.*
Malaya: Im Malaya.
Malaya:*Looks him over.*
Zuko: Who let you IN? *stands upright* I dont think we've met. Tell me why you are here!! R u somekind of spy! for the Earth Nation no doubt.*Starts to light up fits agin*
Malaya: *Lets out fire from her arm sweeping moition to light all candles in room*
Zuko:*Backs up surprised* Do you want to compete with me! To bad i dont fight gurls,..I-
Malaya: (She Interupts Him)So the Bad-Boy has Morals. *smriks leans in stepping closer to him* I do not want to compete with you.But dont think me un worthy opponette.Im a pirate.Tho, im not stupid you took down Genral Zaho.
Zuko:*shrugs* He had wat was comin to him. Pirate hmm? You must be from the crew of Ryu's ship......*shifts uncomfortably*.. Wat are you here for?
Malaya: *Changes attitude* I NEED your help!
Zuko: Wat?! I dont even kno you. *truns back on her.*
Malaya: I need your help. *looks despreate* I kno you probly dont have time for something small like me,, *looks up hopefully*
But- But, , I kno you havent had a easy life, you dont kno your own mother.
Zuko: Enough! Get out! *Back still turned the flames from the candles in the room go all wired and big*
Malaya: NO I will NEVER give UP!! U just listen to ME. Dont help me then but just listen ok!
Zuko: *Silent- backturened looks down*
Malaya: My father Aboned me and my mother, he left us to DIE! I will never forgive him! I NEED to avenge my mother.
He is in the south pole I think or is also searching for that Avatar....Ur father aboned u 2..
Zuko: o___>
Malaya: He abandoned you by__ Not being there making u LIVE up to HIS expectations, Imagen the one who gave u life, making U use your life to please him! But u dont have to imagine. Do u.
Zuko: how how do U kno these things? Its like. U kno me.
Malaya: Our problems are close, enough to the same. Both of our fathers aboned us but are still living, and were mother less__
Zuko: I'll help you. Sleep here *turns around pulls open a drawer and pulls out a mat and thin sheet* sleep on my bed. I'll sleep on the floor.
Malaya:Thank you Prince!! I will help you catch the Avatar. Any thing u ask ill be right here. I will never betray you got my trust.*Bows twice*
Zuko: no problem. Well u better not betray my trust..cause;-
Malaya:U've never had a friend? had you?
Zuko:*looks at her surpried*.....
Malaya: Thats ok. I'll be your friend ight? No worries!
Zuko: You, Call me Zuko scince were friends i guess.*looks strait at her.*.yea No worries. *smilies at her*
Malaya:*shly smilies back*
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Zuko:*starts to lay out his mat on the floor.* Well (says this while doing his task.) My uncle is going to ask about you. Youll have to prove ur self to him, but if he gives u a hard time
*looks over his soilder at her* Tell me.
Malaya: Cant we keep this a secret?
Zuko: No hes my family. And he'll find out eventually. Hey im doing my best already accept it.
Malaya: Oh i dint mean to ofened you, You r doing your best. I'll sleep on the floor. Im used to it.
Zuko:Malaya, just do wat i say. U sleep on the bed. I cant let u sleep on the floor, it's dishonorable.
Malaya: Ok thank you. Your kind really,I think so other ppl might not but they dont matter.
Zuko: I agree they dont matter, unless i say so. *winks*
Malaya: Wat ever you say, Good-night
Zuko: G'night. if u wake first wake me.
++They sleep..etc...sleep____
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Ok Next MORining.
At the sunrise Zuko was awake. Training before Breakfast as usal. Impressive scence ware hes traing sa the sun rises good colors. Hes doing basic traing, Horese stance, Tai-chi like slow fire bending and Dain-tien breathing(A.K.A.-res Endurance Triaining).
Malaya, was sleeping like a baby,Zuko was real quite not to wake her up....

As Zuko was in the middle of training, Malaya woke, and was wondering were Zuko was, she opened the door a little and saw him, training, Impressed she was thinking to herself that maybe he could help her develop her fire bending> But who would teach her water bending?< Well see later,,,_______
She flaged him down silently not wanting to wake his uncle (dont worry he a HEAVY sleeper).
Once she got him to get in the room agin...
Zuko: Finaly The lilttle lady woke up! Hmph i thought u'd never get up.
Malaya: Hey you wake up early. Oh did you tell your uncle about u kno me?
Zuko: No.
Malaya: O,,,, um well? when is this happin?
Zuko: When it happens,...... *smirks* when he wakes up. Um ill wait out there till ur done dressing__met me.
Malaya: Ok..
Zuko: *Leaves room, shuts door waits out side*
Malaya:ok (Talks to herself) who sould i tell him im only HALF fire.>>>hmm.. hes seems preety nice but humph, that attidude.. o well its not like i dont have one *smiles to her self*.....
*changes clothes thinks to herslef*
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////////////////In the chambers of Zukos Uncle Irohs.. He is gonna tell him about Malaya. His very very nervous but is really good at hiding it no one can tell, tho. he thinks to himself
Zuko:(Thoughts only) 'Wat happens if he dosnt except her.. she seems nice i mean trust worthy.... She preety to an- wait wat the hell an I thinkin! i mean, ugh im confused.. argh....' *shakes head in confusion..*(LOL thought this part was funny )...^_^
___NOW ENTERS HIS UNCLES ROOM/CHAMBER W/E____
Uncle Iroh: ohh hello prince Zuko. (seems slpeely content as usal) had a nice sleep? I did it was wonderful i had a dream about this little squirrle and amaz-
Zuko: Uncle, arugh.. (looks frustared), uncle.. (pauses) i need to tell u somthing.
UncleIroh: What? Ohh wat kind of dream did u have?
Zuko: No its not a DREAM!! Its about a girl she-
Uncle Iroh: Wat a girl! ahh surprise i thought this Ship had only men on it? Well, how could i be surpirsed ur handsome u could get any girl. Or do u like this girl? Is she on this ship? Let me speak to her! I must kno who has finally calmed u. She mus-
Zuko: Will u be quite already! Uncle Iroh this girl i- i mean its not LIKE THAT!! she will help me capture the Avatar. She is also a fire bender. And-
uNCLE: Its that avatar agin..*sighs* oh welll....
Zuko: She understands me as well..*galances toward his uncle.. who is smirking*
Uncle: Ohh... i see *smiles* he,he. Let me see who she is
Zuko:*already walkin out the door * U kno wat uncle, Wat ever.
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Zuko thinks to himself and his Uncle Iroh is slowly waking behind him....
He knocks on the door.

Malaya: (dressed and every thing looking out the window) thinks to her self%This my be my chance to finally avenge My mother! I know that Zuko is trust worthy i can tell he seems frustared tho.. I dont know how ill break it to him, that im also a half water bender..But if he really trusts me he'll Accept it and use my powers for wat there worth...
I will avenge my mother and her death my hard life, Father I'm coming for you. This time I will NOT fail i will not let you go. I'll kill you. Then I can finnally live in peace..Bu-%>>>Her thoughts are cut of by<<<
She heres all this::: +++++KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK+++++||||Uncle Iroh: Is any one there?? Zuko is this some kind of trick?|||Zuko: Aruhg...*sighs.*NO.
Hurries and opens the door.The door is open....
Malaya:Oh um HI!! Zuko, I was waiting for u.. How was your um..Breakfast
Uncle Iroh: He didnt have Breakfast.
+++Malaya and Zuko Turn ther attention to Him+++++
Zuko: This is my Uncle Iroh.. Uncle this is Malaya, From the Fire Nation...Um...
Uncle Iroh: Nice to meet You i didnt kno the fire nation had such a pretty girl in its borders! AH-HAHAHA-
Zuko: *Looks Horrifided..*
Malaya: O thak You. *Bows Twice then Bows her head.*. I promise to work hard if you allow me to help capture the Avatar. Im honered to finally meet the brother of the Fire Lord. *Lifts up head.*
Uncle Iroh: Y thank you young girl. Malaya.
Zuko: Well I see that youve meet each other.Now. Uncle I must insist that she is allowed to stay on the ship. *Stares at His uncle*
Zuko:(To himself in his head) Please Uncle.U better go through w/ this. Im counting on u. After i saved ur ass when u were captured.U OWE me....Danm...He better..I swear If he dosent do this..
Malaya:Please Sir. *Bows agin really low.* I have importantt reasons to go. I will not get in ur way i promise.
Uncle:U seem like such a sweet young girl. I wouldnt want such a nice girl to be hardened by the hard ships that the sea and our such life style can bring.\\Thinks of Zuko... //
Zuko:Uncle!!! (is 91.1% About to blow (agin).)
Malaya:>>>Cuts him off<<< Zuko, [Says directly to Zuko so only he can hear shs not wisphering tho..] *Taps him his shoulder*
Zuko:*Looks up VERY Surpirsed (Yet he stops his tantrum )*
Uncle Iroh:hmmmm...>>> %Wow this young girl was able to calm him down, Even i havent been able to something like that so quickly. I never knew.....She has passed my test.% She can stay.
Malaya and Zuko: *Looks up very surprised.*
Zuko:Unlce.... I, thank you.*Looks down* %I knew he would pull through in the end.%
Malaya: *Throws her slef on the ground* O Thank you so much. I will work hard to keep my place.
Unlce Iroh: No thank you.*smiles to himself* Zuko, would you like to invite your new Ahem... Friend to Break fast? I hear were haveing Arescaldo.
Zuko: U go ahead.
Uncle Iroh: Okee wat ever u say. I hope u enjoy your stay.*goes out side and shuts door behind him*
Malaya: Oh im sooo happy!!*Shes Smiling ALOT*
Zuko: hmmm....%thats strange i thought he would put her thruogh a test..% Lets go to breakfast.I'll tell u more about wats planned there.*walks out the door and metions her to fallow him holds door for her..*
Malaya: Thanks * when passing him puts her head down Walks to fallow him.*
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Now they're getting breakfast in the ship. Down staires of the ship, the kitchen. Food: warm rice and hard boiled eggs.(wow im soo creatative.*I roll my eyes and say this sarcasticly.*) There close to the Fire Nation, so its sort of warm, but still in the Earth Nation i guess.After they get their food they go back up to the deck and eat up there
On the Deck they just eating food. At the side of the deck looking over the water, Leaning agnist the edge of the Boat. I drew this scence...It makes more sense if I show you. The water looks pretty the morning mist is at the edge on the top of the water, and the sky is pretty and Deep blue and the sun is slightly covered by the mist so a small bit of the sun rays show throuh the sun isnt directrly over head becuase it is still
Morining. The water refelcts the sun rays and mist. Its a nice scene.
None but A few gaurds Zuko, and Malaya. The a slight breezz.
Theres a quite moment for like 2 minutes.

Malaya: Zuko, Thank you for taking me in. I kno i mean it must be so hard, for you. But I u still took mi in...
Zuko: *Looks at her surprised* o... Well..
Malaya: Heh, *still looking over the water* I dont know how u feel about this whole thing. With Avatar out, You have to capture him. Then u have me...I hope im not another responsiablity that you must look after.
Zuko: I like looking over you *turns over to her* your speacial.
Malaya: Really? How so. *smiles*
Zuko: U understand, me. No one does. I understand you to.,... arugh.. I dont even kno wat im sayin any more. *still leaning aginst the side of the ship, both hands on the side of the ship, then he places his head on top his hands (which are on the side of the ship) his eyes are closed and he looks frustraded his head is now down on top of his hands* i dont even kno wat to do any more..
Malaya: *Looks at him places her hand on his back* Dont worry, I trust you more then anyone. Please I kno u kno wat to do. There is a Great Leader deep in side of you, U are THE HIER of the fire Nation the Prince the ONLY heir....*Looks at him stares actually* Its hard for me to. Be strong
Zuko: *Has been listinging to her.Looks up finally.* I am strong.- (Gets cut off)
Malaya: Grow Stronger.*stops leaning on th side of the ship.* I kno it may be hard.-(stops when Zuko ... stands)
Zuko: *Gets up off the side of the ship and stands up straight close to her* I kno, its hard, u dont have to remind me. I live for it. To become stronger, to grow strong *looks over the water edge* be strong. I kno, u were right i kno all along,but....
Malaya: I kno,,, *looks down* Its hard its very hard...To except it. The challage that I face.. *Looks up at him* That u face.
Zuko: *Meets his eyes w/ hers.* The journey we both face. The Journey of strength to test us..At least,,,,,,I-I , dont have to face it alone...
Malaya: No. Niether am i alone any more.*also her eyes are meet w/ his*
Zuko: *breaks eye contact Looks over water.*
Malaya: I guess,, This is the point of our journy were...We must...Move away from our past. To begin a new feauture....to learn from our pasts.*starts to pick up the blows on the ground..* I'll bring these*moitions to the bowls* back to the kitchen.
>>The breezz blows agin Zuko is lookin over the water his hands tight on the side of the ship Hes standing stright w/ a serious and determined look on his face. LOOKS like he took no notice of anything that Malaya had just said. <<
Malaya leaves to go to the kitchen, when she did..
Zuko says (To him self): Move away from the past..... To do this I will capture the Avatar. My journey, is not alone any more..Im glad *smiles and blushes* I always felt like in my life i had to live for some thing or some one... I think maybe she is the thing i will fight for.Defend and keep safe from any harm...Any one touches her...I'll kill them.I promise *Looks over his shoulder* no one will take anything away frm me agin..
esspiacily her...i will not lose-........never....agin.<<<<
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As you ppl can already tell This tells a percective of the Fire Benders or Prince Zuko. The "Bad guys".... But actually as you can tell they're not all "bad".Ight. They're well u deisde 4 ur self ok. Im to lazy 2 read ur mind (^_^)..LOL ok Ill write after my nap.LOL thats wat Uncle Iroh would say!..LOL
Ok...ill come back w/ more do u like it so Far???I do!!!