Final Fantasy - All Series Fan Fiction ❯ Abducted Love ❯ The Taken of an Innocence ( Chapter 4 )
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Thank you all reviewers.
I warn you, this chapter is pretty intense. I warn you now. You do not need to read this chapter to actually get this story, I decided.
This Story(idea) is Copyrighted (c) 2002 FloralBlackMoon. All rights reserved.
Disclaimer: Disclaimer: I do not own or in any way is afflicted with Final Fantasy 8, I take no claim over it, I am merely using it to entertain others. I am not making profit off this. It is cop-written to its respective owners.
I'm going to get my ass flamed for this chapter......
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Abducted Love
inspired by
Trixie-chan - http://www.dbzromance.com - dbzromance@hotmail.com -
Orginal author's story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=378100
I was granted permission to use the original author's Idea.
NOT MY ORGINAL IDEA
*WARNING: This is going to be VERY graphical! Do Not Read of Easily OFFENDED! So don't flame! You've been warned!*
Quistis POV
Quistis soon started backing to the wall, Seifer following her hungrily. She knew what was going to happen...what she was here for...
*God damn this forsaken lousy son of a gun! I will fight for my honor!*
Quistis turned to run to the right, but Seifer quickly stuck his foot out, tripping her. She felt the pain run through her bosoms on impact.
*Damn! My breasts hurt!*
She clenched her teeth and turned around so her back was on the ground. Seifer was looming over her, smiling victoriously. Like he'd just won a prize, the uncouth bastard. He threw one leg over her side and sat on her stomach.
"Oh!" She let out a breath of air. She closed one eye when she saw his hand lift up as if to slap her.
"I'm not going to hit you, Quistis..."
"Do not call me Quistis..." She struggled for air, Seifer's weight pressing against her stomach. His eyes flashed anger.
"Do I look like your bitch, lady?"
"...do I look like yours?" She countered tartly, even knowing she would be punished for the remark. Quistis felt her head get whipped to the side.
He'd slapped her. He'd *slapped* her. The motherfucker had slapped her.
She turned her head, slowly, in time to see his face descend over hers, capturing her in a ruthless kiss. No emotions...just lust. He slowly ascended off of her, pulling her up along with him. She soon put her hand to his chest and started pushing him away. Finally, with all other attempts failed, she slammed her heel down on his toe.
He pulled back and grabbed his toe. "OH shit! Woman!"
Quistis quickly started heading toward the door, but again he yanked her back by the hair. While he was pulling her back to him, she grabbed a wine bottle that was on a chair.
Finally when she reached him, she placed her foot on the back of his legs, tripping him.
"Shit! I'm going to get--" Seifer cursed and started getting up, his back to her.
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Seifer POV
He then felt a sharp, intense pain in the back of his skull, leaving a throbbing headache from hell.
"Oh fuck!" He turned around to see broken pieces of glass. She hit him with the damn wine bottle. She hit him with the fucking bottle! Who knows the damage this...this...bitch had done to him. He would have to bring her down. He was done playing games.
Seifer got up, with his eyes blood shot red. "So you hit me with a wine bottle...heh...heh...you hit me with the wine bottle." With that, he quickly charged toward her, bringing both of them crashing toward the floor with a loud 'thud.'
He quickly slapped her again and started undoing her skirt.
"No!" She shrieked. In slow motion, he saw her reach toward a broken piece of glass from the wine bottle and watch her hand snap towards his forehead, a blind aim. He felt the sharp pain. The stinging...burning. Sensation as the glass guided by her hand ripped across his face. (A/N: Yes! The scar he has in the game)
"Ah!" He screamed in shock and pain, staggering up to his feet and backing away, hands on his face.
Blood...
He soon heard footsteps and grunts of confusion as the guys come out.
"Eh! What's happen'n here?" Nida called out.
"Can't you guys calm down?" Irvine complained, appearing in the doorway.
"What the hell is goin' on here?" Zell hollered.
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Then they all looked at the scene...blood.... practically naked girl...and an injured Seifer, looking angry as a bull, face red in rage.
Pieces of glass were scattered on the floor. One shard had a red tint to it. There was blood on the floor as well. Quistis too was on the floor, top open and skirt...well, working its way there.
Finally Seifer. His face was gashed and bleeding, and so was the back of his head.
"What...the hell...sir...?" Zell uttered.
"Take her to the room and lock her there!" Seifer pointed at Quistis in a hoarse voice. The guys nodded and each started grabbing her. Quistis started kicking and screaming.
"Let me go!"
They continued carrying her and stopped in front of Seifer. He walked to her, blood dripping from his face. He lowered to her and whispered something inaudible to his comrades. She soon quieted down. They then pushed her to the room; she'd get acquainted with it.
A chill running down her spine, Quistis recalled what Seifer had said.
"You will regret you did that. I will break you and take you without
mercy. For once in your spoiled life, you will feel pain and get
no support. Just you wait...your time WILL come...very soon."
*****
Seifer POV
*Shit...* Seifer cursed in his mind. *God damn it! This woman is so fucking resistant....!*
He dabbed the back of his head with his fingers gingerly to feel a moist sensation. He touched his face.... blood. Not to mention the burning, hurting sensations on his face. He could feel the blood dripping from his face and onto the ground.
"God damn, sure got yourself a feisty one..." Irvine muttered, leading Seifer to a chair. He heard in the background one of the guys shuffle through stuff. He saw Nida come out with the supplies.
"Ah shit, man! You're ripped up...!" He exclaim as he started cleaning his wounds, "Would have never thought a woman would do this....just make the sex all the better, hey?"
Seifer rolled his eyes, "That whore is going to get what's coming to her."
Once done cleaning the cuts, he took out a bandage to cover Seifer's face. But Seifer held up his hand. "No, no bandages. I want her to see 'exactly' what she done."
"But It'll mostly likely leave a scar and you'll get an infection!"
"Yeah...guess so, but I always wanted a scar..."
"You're messed up. Now turn around so I can work on the back of your head."
Seifer nodded and complied. He clenched his fist as the pain surged through his head - enought to make him feel like passing out. Oh...that bitch would get her day...tonight. No interruptions.
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Quistis POV
She bit her lip. This...this was going to be the last night she would be a maiden. This man would take her; it was the reason he had brought her here. She kind of hoped he was spare her, wait till she was ready like she read in the romance novels. But life was never anything like a romance novel - in real life would the guy have waited?
She was a girl he wanted for his personal use. He was in charge...would he wait for her? No...this was real life. She would face up to it. She wouldn't cower. She would fight and if she ended up losing, she would shed not one tear...because she was stronger than that...much stronger.
She closed the flap of her top and smoothed down her skirt. She looked around her surroundings. They had thrown her on a beautiful king-size bed. It had a nightstand and a desk, a drawer and a mirror. All wooden...probably stolen.
"Guess it's alright to lose my virginity here...wait! I can't believe I said that. I will NEVER give in so easily. No....never. Best time to ever lose my innocence is with my husband in our marriage bed..." Quistis cried, the tears sliding down her cheeks.
She was here for her father, the man that she loved. She wouldn't try to harm him in anyway. But her father must've known. Why hadn't he sent for her...?
Did he not love her? Did he want her to lose herself to Seifer? This man...would break her spirit. She knew.
"Why.." She hissed through clench teeth. Anger started to build. Her temper was overcoming her. That was what happened if she was pushed enough. Everyone in town knew better then to mess with Quistis when she was angry. People used to say her eyes could flash this dazed blue and then all hell went lose for the person or thing her anger was pointed at. This time...her anger was pointed at Mr. Almasy.
"Might as well call him Seifer...since we're going to be soooo close." She grinned evilly to herself. She looked around.
And saw a wooden stick.
She walked slowly to it, smiling.. She picked up the thick wooden rod. That man was about to go to a world of hell. He would pay...oh yes, most definitely...
She crept to the door and waited for when the door would open. She would slap him with the stick...and hoped to break his nose, at the least.
She smiled even more as she heard the lock from outside start to be messed with and the door open....
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Rinoa's POV
She sat on the seat, looking ahead. The kidnapping of the dear Quistis distressed everyone in town. She could not express the anger she felt when she saw the guy carry Quistis away.
*The girl's strong...she'll get away..* Rinoa tried to calm herself. She knew Quistis would not make it. All she was, was a female with a bad temper trapped with criminals wanted in the system for the lord knows how long.
She turned to the man next to her. "Oh Squall, what happens if she doesn't make it?! What happens if she can't survive? What happens if---"
"If you keep saying what might happen, it probably will happen." He interrupted, "Stop worrying.. Right now we have to think of a plan..."
"I'm just...worried. This is my sugar. My flesh and blood in a way," She whispered. "and we have to find a way to help her!"
"Now all you men better find a way to bring Quisty back to us...I'm not kidding." She said in a dazed voice. She turned to Quistis' father.
"You have to think to get her back...and we HAVE to get her back...we have to..."
******
Seifer POV
Seifer walked inside the room. He looked around.
*Shit...where is she?*
Then he felt something hard smack his face. Excruciating agony registered from his nose. His now forming scar screamed in pain. The bottom of his eyes was sore. Then felt the object hit him hard, again. Seifer fell.
"Ah!"
He felt it hit his back...not breaking anything. The assaulter went easy. He felt the object hit him all over. He felt sore and hurt. Only person doing this was Quistis.
He immediantly turned to where the blows were and headed toward her. She than slapped the stick at the side of his head.
"Oh shit!"
Again, he didn't hear a crack. The girl was going soft...thank God. He continued to charge and brought her on the floor.
He than slapped her.. It was the littlest he could do compared to all the damage she done. Broke a wine bottle on his head took a glass and fucked his face up. Now took a wooden spoon and beat him with it...yes a slap would do little.
But then her nails went to his eyes. He close his eyes and felt her start to scratch his eyelids.
"Shit! Fuckin' bitch! Stop messin' with my eyes!" He yelled in frustration and pulled her dangerous fingers away from his face. His whole body ached because of this bitch!
He then pulled her to him, throwing her on the bed. He would have his way with her. Once put on this bed she quickly started trying to kick his groin. It was almost as if he had to jump off the bed for her not to have a direct hit.
He then spread her legs open and lay between them. She automatically shrieked. He bent down and kissed her roughly, stealing her breath.
She started punching his sides...as if they weren't numb already. Then he ripped off the rest of her top. She quickly took her hands from his sides to cover him self. His hand went down to her skirt and tore that off roughly, tossing it to the side.
"You know...for a bitch you sure are perty,"
"You mother fucking asshole! Get the hell away! Get!" She screamed, tears glistening from the corners of her eyes. He than touched her garments.
"These have to go..."
He then continued his mission...
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A/N: Do I need to tell you what happened?
Quistis POV
Quistis laid on the bed covering herself...
For some reason she wasn't sad. She was furious! ...Yet, she kind of felt relieved. The worst was over.
She fought him to no end. But not once during the whole abusing she did to him, did he actually punch her, or physically harm her in anyway. He only slapped her twice, and that was not during their...experience. She had girls who where taken as whores come to her salon.
They told her, when they fought, the man would beat them...without mercy. And yet after all the things she put him through. He did nothing. And....it kind of felt good. Not once did she moan, because she was too proud. But she was mad...because her first time was with...him. She hated him now...because he took something she could never get back.
But in her mind...she felt like it was an experience to do again. She sure knew he enjoyed himself. It had happened and....she didn't regret it...in a way. But she was furious that she actually liked it.
Why? Because it was the most pleasurable thing to do. But she couldn't let just one night of pleasure take away her freedom. She had to try and start over.
She had to like the sex...but it was just that she couldn't stand that it was *Seifer* giving this to her. She had heard sex was very pleasurable.
She got up and walked around the room. He had been almost gentle with her...not once did he laugh in her face.
*Probably laughing with his friends,* She thought bitterly.
But she had to act like she hated it, despised him. She had to act that way so she could leave. She didn't hate him. But she wouldn't regret leaving him. Why...did it have to be him?
She saw a huge shirt and put it on and headed toward the door. It was unlocked; Seifer had left earlier and left the door open. She walked out. She couldn't try to go now. She was practically naked and any horny fat guy could try and take her.
So Quistis traveled down the hall and saw several doors.
*Must belong to his friends...*
She saw that the door was slightly open, and so she peeked inside.
She saw a woman.
She knocked slightly and walked in. The woman had dark hair and, upon seeing Quistis, donned a smile.
"Quistis, right?"
"Yes..."
"I never would have thought Seifer would be into blondes...so how was last night?"
Quistis arched an eyebrow. "Excuse me? I don't even know you, much less your name,"
"Name's Xu. Now tell me what happened last night?"
Quistis sighed. Obviously the woman would keep asking. Anyhow, it wasn't even really special, who cared if someone knew?
She blushed furiously, nevertheless aggrevated by the woman's lack of modesty. "I lost my maidenhood. Hurt a lot. That's it..."
"Come on...give me a colorful version!"
"What's so colorful to say? We had sex..."
"How'd it feel? I know it wasn't bad. This is Seifer Almasy. This is the only guy who would actually go slow on virgins."
"...Fine, it felt...good...I guess..."
"Good?"
Quistis rolled her eyes. "Why don't you go fuck him and tell me how it was?"
Xu shook her head. "You like him..."
"Me? Like a guy who took my virginity? Took me from my home to make me his whore...yeah right!"
Xu smiled. "You'll see."
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That's it. I hope you enjoyed that. I tried to make Quistis' response as real as possible. Come On, in real life would a man who took a woman to make her his whore wait till she's ready? No! I try to make my fic as real as possible... I hope you understood that.
Thank you all reviewers.
So really what happened is that Seifer gained the scar and he and Quistis got together. I know most people don't support forced sex, I don't. But I have it all planned out. Yes I do, yes I do.
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Lindsey: No, I promise you that this story will continue till the end. Which will not be for a while. Thank you for your thoughts
Quitsi88: So did what happen, happened? If so, then you have good prediction. Men are lustful creatures as say my beta-reader.
fire and ice monkey: Zell? I could see him. He seem to have that rowdy attitude! Honestly, what happen I did Squall and Zell, that would be unimaginable. Especially since he's going to be bossed by Seifer. Now I don't want the characters to be OOC!
SayainGodess:
Thank you so much. And yes to the question. The idea but as you can see the events taking place is different from what of the orginal author. Because of you I'm going to make it clearer, that another inspired me. I'll update as soon as I can
Sasha: LOL, tell me, how does it look like now? Does it look like they going to get together now? She does hate him, don't she? But it just makes it all the while. Yup! I didn't want Squall there. Just seems so...unreal.
aznchika: I'm a different author. I don't like writing the usual. Seiftis, nope you will never find another like this!
Quistis Twin sister Sunny: Thanx! I like to change point of views so the reader can get more insight of the characters. Like they did for Squall in the game, we had more insight of him because it was from his point of view. We don't know what the others think or how they are inside because we never saw their thoughts. So I want my readers to get to know the characters. Thanx! I try my best!
Fujin: Wind Goddess: Oh yes! We can't have Quistis such a weak girl. She has to put up a fight and I will try to make her feistier in future chapters. But I don't know how far because the girl just ripped his face! LOL. So..how was this chapter? Do you honestly think I still should have warned people...
I warn you, this chapter is pretty intense. I warn you now. You do not need to read this chapter to actually get this story, I decided.
This Story(idea) is Copyrighted (c) 2002 FloralBlackMoon. All rights reserved.
Disclaimer: Disclaimer: I do not own or in any way is afflicted with Final Fantasy 8, I take no claim over it, I am merely using it to entertain others. I am not making profit off this. It is cop-written to its respective owners.
I'm going to get my ass flamed for this chapter......
*******
Abducted Love
inspired by
Trixie-chan - http://www.dbzromance.com - dbzromance@hotmail.com -
Orginal author's story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=378100
I was granted permission to use the original author's Idea.
NOT MY ORGINAL IDEA
*WARNING: This is going to be VERY graphical! Do Not Read of Easily OFFENDED! So don't flame! You've been warned!*
Quistis POV
Quistis soon started backing to the wall, Seifer following her hungrily. She knew what was going to happen...what she was here for...
*God damn this forsaken lousy son of a gun! I will fight for my honor!*
Quistis turned to run to the right, but Seifer quickly stuck his foot out, tripping her. She felt the pain run through her bosoms on impact.
*Damn! My breasts hurt!*
She clenched her teeth and turned around so her back was on the ground. Seifer was looming over her, smiling victoriously. Like he'd just won a prize, the uncouth bastard. He threw one leg over her side and sat on her stomach.
"Oh!" She let out a breath of air. She closed one eye when she saw his hand lift up as if to slap her.
"I'm not going to hit you, Quistis..."
"Do not call me Quistis..." She struggled for air, Seifer's weight pressing against her stomach. His eyes flashed anger.
"Do I look like your bitch, lady?"
"...do I look like yours?" She countered tartly, even knowing she would be punished for the remark. Quistis felt her head get whipped to the side.
He'd slapped her. He'd *slapped* her. The motherfucker had slapped her.
She turned her head, slowly, in time to see his face descend over hers, capturing her in a ruthless kiss. No emotions...just lust. He slowly ascended off of her, pulling her up along with him. She soon put her hand to his chest and started pushing him away. Finally, with all other attempts failed, she slammed her heel down on his toe.
He pulled back and grabbed his toe. "OH shit! Woman!"
Quistis quickly started heading toward the door, but again he yanked her back by the hair. While he was pulling her back to him, she grabbed a wine bottle that was on a chair.
Finally when she reached him, she placed her foot on the back of his legs, tripping him.
"Shit! I'm going to get--" Seifer cursed and started getting up, his back to her.
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Seifer POV
He then felt a sharp, intense pain in the back of his skull, leaving a throbbing headache from hell.
"Oh fuck!" He turned around to see broken pieces of glass. She hit him with the damn wine bottle. She hit him with the fucking bottle! Who knows the damage this...this...bitch had done to him. He would have to bring her down. He was done playing games.
Seifer got up, with his eyes blood shot red. "So you hit me with a wine bottle...heh...heh...you hit me with the wine bottle." With that, he quickly charged toward her, bringing both of them crashing toward the floor with a loud 'thud.'
He quickly slapped her again and started undoing her skirt.
"No!" She shrieked. In slow motion, he saw her reach toward a broken piece of glass from the wine bottle and watch her hand snap towards his forehead, a blind aim. He felt the sharp pain. The stinging...burning. Sensation as the glass guided by her hand ripped across his face. (A/N: Yes! The scar he has in the game)
"Ah!" He screamed in shock and pain, staggering up to his feet and backing away, hands on his face.
Blood...
He soon heard footsteps and grunts of confusion as the guys come out.
"Eh! What's happen'n here?" Nida called out.
"Can't you guys calm down?" Irvine complained, appearing in the doorway.
"What the hell is goin' on here?" Zell hollered.
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Then they all looked at the scene...blood.... practically naked girl...and an injured Seifer, looking angry as a bull, face red in rage.
Pieces of glass were scattered on the floor. One shard had a red tint to it. There was blood on the floor as well. Quistis too was on the floor, top open and skirt...well, working its way there.
Finally Seifer. His face was gashed and bleeding, and so was the back of his head.
"What...the hell...sir...?" Zell uttered.
"Take her to the room and lock her there!" Seifer pointed at Quistis in a hoarse voice. The guys nodded and each started grabbing her. Quistis started kicking and screaming.
"Let me go!"
They continued carrying her and stopped in front of Seifer. He walked to her, blood dripping from his face. He lowered to her and whispered something inaudible to his comrades. She soon quieted down. They then pushed her to the room; she'd get acquainted with it.
A chill running down her spine, Quistis recalled what Seifer had said.
"You will regret you did that. I will break you and take you without
mercy. For once in your spoiled life, you will feel pain and get
no support. Just you wait...your time WILL come...very soon."
*****
Seifer POV
*Shit...* Seifer cursed in his mind. *God damn it! This woman is so fucking resistant....!*
He dabbed the back of his head with his fingers gingerly to feel a moist sensation. He touched his face.... blood. Not to mention the burning, hurting sensations on his face. He could feel the blood dripping from his face and onto the ground.
"God damn, sure got yourself a feisty one..." Irvine muttered, leading Seifer to a chair. He heard in the background one of the guys shuffle through stuff. He saw Nida come out with the supplies.
"Ah shit, man! You're ripped up...!" He exclaim as he started cleaning his wounds, "Would have never thought a woman would do this....just make the sex all the better, hey?"
Seifer rolled his eyes, "That whore is going to get what's coming to her."
Once done cleaning the cuts, he took out a bandage to cover Seifer's face. But Seifer held up his hand. "No, no bandages. I want her to see 'exactly' what she done."
"But It'll mostly likely leave a scar and you'll get an infection!"
"Yeah...guess so, but I always wanted a scar..."
"You're messed up. Now turn around so I can work on the back of your head."
Seifer nodded and complied. He clenched his fist as the pain surged through his head - enought to make him feel like passing out. Oh...that bitch would get her day...tonight. No interruptions.
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Quistis POV
She bit her lip. This...this was going to be the last night she would be a maiden. This man would take her; it was the reason he had brought her here. She kind of hoped he was spare her, wait till she was ready like she read in the romance novels. But life was never anything like a romance novel - in real life would the guy have waited?
She was a girl he wanted for his personal use. He was in charge...would he wait for her? No...this was real life. She would face up to it. She wouldn't cower. She would fight and if she ended up losing, she would shed not one tear...because she was stronger than that...much stronger.
She closed the flap of her top and smoothed down her skirt. She looked around her surroundings. They had thrown her on a beautiful king-size bed. It had a nightstand and a desk, a drawer and a mirror. All wooden...probably stolen.
"Guess it's alright to lose my virginity here...wait! I can't believe I said that. I will NEVER give in so easily. No....never. Best time to ever lose my innocence is with my husband in our marriage bed..." Quistis cried, the tears sliding down her cheeks.
She was here for her father, the man that she loved. She wouldn't try to harm him in anyway. But her father must've known. Why hadn't he sent for her...?
Did he not love her? Did he want her to lose herself to Seifer? This man...would break her spirit. She knew.
"Why.." She hissed through clench teeth. Anger started to build. Her temper was overcoming her. That was what happened if she was pushed enough. Everyone in town knew better then to mess with Quistis when she was angry. People used to say her eyes could flash this dazed blue and then all hell went lose for the person or thing her anger was pointed at. This time...her anger was pointed at Mr. Almasy.
"Might as well call him Seifer...since we're going to be soooo close." She grinned evilly to herself. She looked around.
And saw a wooden stick.
She walked slowly to it, smiling.. She picked up the thick wooden rod. That man was about to go to a world of hell. He would pay...oh yes, most definitely...
She crept to the door and waited for when the door would open. She would slap him with the stick...and hoped to break his nose, at the least.
She smiled even more as she heard the lock from outside start to be messed with and the door open....
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Rinoa's POV
She sat on the seat, looking ahead. The kidnapping of the dear Quistis distressed everyone in town. She could not express the anger she felt when she saw the guy carry Quistis away.
*The girl's strong...she'll get away..* Rinoa tried to calm herself. She knew Quistis would not make it. All she was, was a female with a bad temper trapped with criminals wanted in the system for the lord knows how long.
She turned to the man next to her. "Oh Squall, what happens if she doesn't make it?! What happens if she can't survive? What happens if---"
"If you keep saying what might happen, it probably will happen." He interrupted, "Stop worrying.. Right now we have to think of a plan..."
"I'm just...worried. This is my sugar. My flesh and blood in a way," She whispered. "and we have to find a way to help her!"
"Now all you men better find a way to bring Quisty back to us...I'm not kidding." She said in a dazed voice. She turned to Quistis' father.
"You have to think to get her back...and we HAVE to get her back...we have to..."
******
Seifer POV
Seifer walked inside the room. He looked around.
*Shit...where is she?*
Then he felt something hard smack his face. Excruciating agony registered from his nose. His now forming scar screamed in pain. The bottom of his eyes was sore. Then felt the object hit him hard, again. Seifer fell.
"Ah!"
He felt it hit his back...not breaking anything. The assaulter went easy. He felt the object hit him all over. He felt sore and hurt. Only person doing this was Quistis.
He immediantly turned to where the blows were and headed toward her. She than slapped the stick at the side of his head.
"Oh shit!"
Again, he didn't hear a crack. The girl was going soft...thank God. He continued to charge and brought her on the floor.
He than slapped her.. It was the littlest he could do compared to all the damage she done. Broke a wine bottle on his head took a glass and fucked his face up. Now took a wooden spoon and beat him with it...yes a slap would do little.
But then her nails went to his eyes. He close his eyes and felt her start to scratch his eyelids.
"Shit! Fuckin' bitch! Stop messin' with my eyes!" He yelled in frustration and pulled her dangerous fingers away from his face. His whole body ached because of this bitch!
He then pulled her to him, throwing her on the bed. He would have his way with her. Once put on this bed she quickly started trying to kick his groin. It was almost as if he had to jump off the bed for her not to have a direct hit.
He then spread her legs open and lay between them. She automatically shrieked. He bent down and kissed her roughly, stealing her breath.
She started punching his sides...as if they weren't numb already. Then he ripped off the rest of her top. She quickly took her hands from his sides to cover him self. His hand went down to her skirt and tore that off roughly, tossing it to the side.
"You know...for a bitch you sure are perty,"
"You mother fucking asshole! Get the hell away! Get!" She screamed, tears glistening from the corners of her eyes. He than touched her garments.
"These have to go..."
He then continued his mission...
******
A/N: Do I need to tell you what happened?
Quistis POV
Quistis laid on the bed covering herself...
For some reason she wasn't sad. She was furious! ...Yet, she kind of felt relieved. The worst was over.
She fought him to no end. But not once during the whole abusing she did to him, did he actually punch her, or physically harm her in anyway. He only slapped her twice, and that was not during their...experience. She had girls who where taken as whores come to her salon.
They told her, when they fought, the man would beat them...without mercy. And yet after all the things she put him through. He did nothing. And....it kind of felt good. Not once did she moan, because she was too proud. But she was mad...because her first time was with...him. She hated him now...because he took something she could never get back.
But in her mind...she felt like it was an experience to do again. She sure knew he enjoyed himself. It had happened and....she didn't regret it...in a way. But she was furious that she actually liked it.
Why? Because it was the most pleasurable thing to do. But she couldn't let just one night of pleasure take away her freedom. She had to try and start over.
She had to like the sex...but it was just that she couldn't stand that it was *Seifer* giving this to her. She had heard sex was very pleasurable.
She got up and walked around the room. He had been almost gentle with her...not once did he laugh in her face.
*Probably laughing with his friends,* She thought bitterly.
But she had to act like she hated it, despised him. She had to act that way so she could leave. She didn't hate him. But she wouldn't regret leaving him. Why...did it have to be him?
She saw a huge shirt and put it on and headed toward the door. It was unlocked; Seifer had left earlier and left the door open. She walked out. She couldn't try to go now. She was practically naked and any horny fat guy could try and take her.
So Quistis traveled down the hall and saw several doors.
*Must belong to his friends...*
She saw that the door was slightly open, and so she peeked inside.
She saw a woman.
She knocked slightly and walked in. The woman had dark hair and, upon seeing Quistis, donned a smile.
"Quistis, right?"
"Yes..."
"I never would have thought Seifer would be into blondes...so how was last night?"
Quistis arched an eyebrow. "Excuse me? I don't even know you, much less your name,"
"Name's Xu. Now tell me what happened last night?"
Quistis sighed. Obviously the woman would keep asking. Anyhow, it wasn't even really special, who cared if someone knew?
She blushed furiously, nevertheless aggrevated by the woman's lack of modesty. "I lost my maidenhood. Hurt a lot. That's it..."
"Come on...give me a colorful version!"
"What's so colorful to say? We had sex..."
"How'd it feel? I know it wasn't bad. This is Seifer Almasy. This is the only guy who would actually go slow on virgins."
"...Fine, it felt...good...I guess..."
"Good?"
Quistis rolled her eyes. "Why don't you go fuck him and tell me how it was?"
Xu shook her head. "You like him..."
"Me? Like a guy who took my virginity? Took me from my home to make me his whore...yeah right!"
Xu smiled. "You'll see."
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That's it. I hope you enjoyed that. I tried to make Quistis' response as real as possible. Come On, in real life would a man who took a woman to make her his whore wait till she's ready? No! I try to make my fic as real as possible... I hope you understood that.
Thank you all reviewers.
So really what happened is that Seifer gained the scar and he and Quistis got together. I know most people don't support forced sex, I don't. But I have it all planned out. Yes I do, yes I do.
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Lindsey: No, I promise you that this story will continue till the end. Which will not be for a while. Thank you for your thoughts
Quitsi88: So did what happen, happened? If so, then you have good prediction. Men are lustful creatures as say my beta-reader.
fire and ice monkey: Zell? I could see him. He seem to have that rowdy attitude! Honestly, what happen I did Squall and Zell, that would be unimaginable. Especially since he's going to be bossed by Seifer. Now I don't want the characters to be OOC!
SayainGodess:
Thank you so much. And yes to the question. The idea but as you can see the events taking place is different from what of the orginal author. Because of you I'm going to make it clearer, that another inspired me. I'll update as soon as I can
Sasha: LOL, tell me, how does it look like now? Does it look like they going to get together now? She does hate him, don't she? But it just makes it all the while. Yup! I didn't want Squall there. Just seems so...unreal.
aznchika: I'm a different author. I don't like writing the usual. Seiftis, nope you will never find another like this!
Quistis Twin sister Sunny: Thanx! I like to change point of views so the reader can get more insight of the characters. Like they did for Squall in the game, we had more insight of him because it was from his point of view. We don't know what the others think or how they are inside because we never saw their thoughts. So I want my readers to get to know the characters. Thanx! I try my best!
Fujin: Wind Goddess: Oh yes! We can't have Quistis such a weak girl. She has to put up a fight and I will try to make her feistier in future chapters. But I don't know how far because the girl just ripped his face! LOL. So..how was this chapter? Do you honestly think I still should have warned people...