Final Fantasy - All Series Fan Fiction ❯ Love Conquers All ❯ Destinies Combined ( Chapter 3 )
Love Conquers All
By: Dottie
Chapter 3: Destinies Combined
2:10 a.m. In Gippals Chambers
Gippal carried Rikku into his bedroom while continuing to kiss her on the lips. He close to door and locked it. His room was beautiful, it had sheets made of real silk white. He laid her on the bed, while he climbed on top of her. He began unbuttoning her tank top shirt showing her bra while throwing it to the side of the room. "I love you so much Rikku he said as he began taking her skirt off revealing her panties. "Hey no fair you need some striping too," Rikku said as she started unzipping his pants, showing his blue cotton boxers. "So how long did you have a crush on me?" Rikku asked with a sly look on her face. "Since the first time I met you sexy mama" he said with a smirk. She blushed a little "Now lets get back to our business" he said with a sexy voice. He took her bra off revealing her breasts, he was looking at them with wide satisfaction, she blushed as she tried to cover them but he moved her hands away "You don't have to hide from me anymore Rikku" he said as he took one in his mouth and started suckling on one while he caressed the other, as they got hard. Rikku gave a soft moan as he went to the other.
He went lower kissing her stomach, he tickled her a little, as he heard her laugh a little "Stop teasing Gippal" she said with he eyes closed. He went lower to her most private area on her body. He pulled her underwear off revealing her womanhood. He went back up and kissed her again, as he pulled the rest of his clothes off revealing his manhood. Rikku became worried because he was very very big, and t looked like it was in an erection state. Gippal saw the look in her face by reassuring her with comforting words in her ear. "Are you ready?" he looked at her. "Uh yeah she sad a little worried still. "Don't worry I will be very gentle" he said with one more kiss before he thrusted inside of her. Rikku shot up in pain because as he went in and out it was giving her lots of pain. He stop as soon as he heard her scream with tears in her eyes. "Are you okay, I'll stop if I'm hurting you too much" he said with concern. She looked at him with teary eyes "Keep going Gippal I will be fine, I just got to get use to it" she said kissing him on the lips. He began thrusting into her again this time going slower, as Rikku gotten use to the pain and soon turned pain to pleasure. She begged him to go faster, he went faster making her moan and beg for more, she tried to hold her screams in. "Rikku scream baby scream my name" he ordered going faster. She couldn't hold it any longer so she just screamed as she can "GIIIPPPAAALLL!!! They both went up and down enjoying each other's moans and pleasure spots. Minutes later Gippal rolled off of her laying on the side of her, they were trying to catch their breaths. "He grabbed Rikku and brought her into his strong arms, he once more kissed her passionately before he pulled the covers on both of them. "I love you Gippal" "I love you too," they both said as they went to sleep for the night.
Yuna woke up minutes later after she heard screams from downstairs "I wonder where that came from" she ask looking very sleepy in the eyes. "Better go check" Paine said in her sleep. Yuna rolled her eyes "I wonder where Rikku is? She asked while going down the stairs. Barkeep was cleaning til Yuna came to him "Have you seen Rikku Barkeep" she asked the Hypello. "Lash time I sheen her she was with that Alsh Bhed guy" he said looking the other way. "Hesh and her went to that room over thersh" he said pointing to the door beside the elevator. "Gippal's room, I have an idea of what happened in there," she said going to the door.
Dottie:) I'm usually a person who gets right to the action of things thank you for the reviews everybody they really encouraged me except for the review I got from a person named SakuyaXHaru and this is the ignorant thing he wrote about my story, And as for SakuyaXHara I don't care what you think about my stories they are from my imagination so live with it and give someone else a flame and not mines
Too Bad...This is a FLAME.Just Wondering..Did you beat the whole Game? Got the perfect ending and got all of those Rikku and Gippal signs? have you finished FFX? Have You got the hints of Baralai and Paine? What about Nooj and Leblanc? guess not. Well Listen up! Gippal has known Rikku for his whole life! If u finished FFX then u would know about kekkah. (how u spell it..) Tidus does return from the farplane. He does see yuna, You Probley weren't paying attention to the game. You don't put in too much info on them. You can't assume that anyone that reads you're story is gonna know every charater and every detail. Geez. Also if You have noticed, Yuna's love for Tidus is Unconditional, whether he is back or not she will always love him. he protected her from the final aeon. so, she is deep for him. And paine and baralai you can just tell that Baralai has always had a crush on her, like how he would always call her name. Gippal is also too cocky and too shy to admitt his feelings. you made the chacaters sound as a OCC that's sad. Also your story is rated R and it's a love story. That's fine I'll give you that. Still, Even tho my stories aren't the greatest because 1. it's not my stories that i wrote. 2. I write longer stories and fill them with detail. I have been on this site soo long to write better stories then your's. but they can't compare to pinkstarz or Elf's work, anyways your story has bad grammar, also Yuna is always shy around Baralai was because she was to marry the prateor but she found out it wasn't him. Also, Final Fantasy is based on animation and real life. Which means you can't say that they blush blush blush all the time and stop making those crazy emo. example: something like that. Also add words to make it sound more better. Also just because it's a fantasy doesn't mean you can say something that's not true. love doesn't conquer all, because love happens when someone you feel comftable with makes you happy. just knowing,Love also has to have sadness. and how gippal gave rikku that flower and letter wasn't like him to do so, and it wasn't nessisary to add on and on how paine has a diffrent side. Paine did wake up to her old self but she doesn't have pride unless she has done something amazing and she still is a lil cruel and she wouldn't even say " let them get to know eachother more" Better read all of this. Keh. and don't flame the stories on my profile because they aren't mine.